2023年高考英语复习讲练测第21讲 书面表达（练）（全国通用解析版）.docx

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1、2023年高考英语复习讲练测第21讲书面表达（练）假设你是明启中学高三学生王磊，最近在学校英语报“Advice Column”中看到一那么启示，关于征询同学们“提高在线学习有效性”的建议。请给该报的编辑写一封邮件，内容须包括：1）你的建议2）你的理由【答案】Dear editor:Im WangLei, a senior 3 student of Mingqi middle school. Recently, I saw a message in the advice columnof the school English newspaper and it asked students for

2、 suggestions on improving the effectiveness of online learning. Tm writing to give my advice.First of all, you should find a quiet room and put your phone outside the room. The reason is that you should concentrate all your attention on the study and make sure you are not disturbed during your study

3、. Whafs more, you should communicate with teachers and students actively in the discussion boards. By doing this, you can not only share your thoughts and experiences but also remember the knowledge well.I hope my suggestions useful. Looking forward to your reply.WangLei【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英语报的编辑写邮

4、件，对于“提高在线学习有效性”提出建 议，并且给出理由。【高分句型 1 The reason is that you should concentrate all your attention on the study and make sure you are not disturbed during your study.（that 引导表语从句）【高分句型 21 By doing this, you can not only share your thoughts and experiences but also remember the knowledge well.（not only

5、.but also引导的并列句）假定你是李华，你的英国网友James邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短视频，介绍你的高中校园生活。请 用英语写一封回信。内容包括：1 .表示同意；.计划拍摄的内容（12点）；2 .邀请对方提建议。注意：1.词数80左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;2 .开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear James,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear James,How is everything going? Its my great privilege to record a short video about my campus life for your cl

6、assmates. Tm writing to tell you what will be included in the video.First of all, as a student, taking different classes is my daily routine, so I would like to record a scene focusing on one of my Chinese classes to show my academic life and Chinese culture. In addition, a wide variety of extra-cur

7、ricular activities are held every day in my school and therefore showing my after-school activities is also in my plan, from which your classmates can learn the diversity of Chinese high school life.I wish such a video could live up to your expectations. If there is anything that needs improving, pl

8、ease dont hesitate to tell me. Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定考生是李华，你的英国网友James邀请你为他的同学拍摄一条短 视频，介绍你的高中校园生活。请用英语写一封回信。【高分句型 1 First of all, as a student, taking different classes is my daily routine, so I would like to record a scene focusing on one of my Chinese classes

9、to show my academic life and Chinese culture.（使用 了 动名词短语 作主语和现在分词短语作定语）【高分句型 2 In addition, a wide variety of extra-curricular activities are held every day in my school and therefore showing my after-school activities is also in my plan, from which your classmates can learn the diversity of Chinese

10、 high school life.（使用了动名词短语做主语和from which引导的非限制性定语从句。） 三、假设你是李华，刚刚得知自己被某大学录取了。你打算给英国好友Jack发一封邮件，告诉他这个好消 息。内容包括：1 .你的大学生活计划；.征求对方建议。注意：1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Jack,Looking forward to your reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jack,Im very excited to tell you that I have been ad

11、mitted to Beijing University, which has been my dream since I was a kid. I cant wait to share my plan for university with you.First, Ell definitely devote myself to studying professional knowledge, which will equip me with knowledge and competence for the future. Moreover, it is a must for me to lea

12、rn how to be kind and responsible. Only by doing so can I become an accepted person and fit in well with society. Additionally, getting involved in various positive activities can not only enrich my life but help me improve in every aspect.Do you have any suggestion for me?Looking forward to your re

13、ply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Jack告知自己被大学录取的消息，同时想对方征 求读过大学生活的建议，最后对他给予你的帮助的感谢。【高分句型 11 First, ril definitely devote myself to studying professional knowledge, which will equip me with knowledge and competence for the future.（运用了 which 引导的定语从句）【高分句型 2】Only by doing so can I beco

14、me an accepted person and fit in well with society.（运用 了 only+ 状语置于句首引起的倒装句）四、你校传统中国画社团正打算向外籍留学生招募新成员，请你以社团的名义写一那么招聘启事，内容如下: 1.启事目的；.加入社团的好处；2 .如何加入。注意：1,词数100词左右；2.开头和落款已经为你写好。New Members WantedTraditional Chinese Painting Club【答案 The traditional Chinese painting club is looking for new members.By

15、participating in our activities, you will benefit a lot. Not only can you cultivate your patience and imagination, but also you can reach a higher level of artistic thinking. Learning traditional Chinese painting, you will get easier access to our history and culture.Foreign students of all grades a

16、re welcome. If you are interested, please fill in the application form and send it to the email address at TraditionalChinesePainting 163 before May 7, 2022. Dont hesitate to join us!Traditional Chinese Painting Club【解析】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生以社团的名义写一那么招聘启事。【高级句式 1 Not only can you cultivate your patience

17、 and imagination, but also you can reach a higher level of artistic thinking.（运用了 Not only. but also引导的两个并列分句，且Not only位于句首，句子使用半倒装）【高级句式 2 If you are interested, please fill in the application form and send it to the email address at TraditionalChinesePainting 163 before May 7, 2022.（运用 了 If 引导条件状语

18、从句）五、你校正在举行“回家不背书包”运动，请用英文写一篇建议书，内容包括：1 .睡眠的重要性；.提高学习效率；2 .呼吁大家响应。注意：1 .词数80左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Going Home Without Schoolbags【答案】In order to draw our attention to the concern that high school students dont have enough sleep,our school is holding a campaign of “Go home without a schoolbag. The impo

19、rtance of a good sleep can never be emphasized too much. It can help us stay focused in class and improve the study efficiency, furthermore, serves as a basic foundation for good health. Therefore, it is suggested that we should work out an efficient plan for our school life, striking a balance betw

20、een work and study. Only by keeping a healthy life-style can we have a strong body to deal with future challenges.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你校正在举行“回家不背书包”运动。要求考生用英语写一封建议书, 呼吁大家响应。高分句型 1 In order to draw our attention to the concern that high school students dont have enough sleep, our school is holding a camp

21、aign of “Go home without a schoolbag”.（运用 了 that 弓| 导的同位语从句）高分句型 2 Therefore, it is suggested that we should work out an efficient plan for our school life, striking a balance between work and study.（运用了 it做形式主语的句型，that从句为真正的主语）六、假定你是李华，你们学校正在举办以环保为主题的英语作文大赛，请你写篇作文参赛。内容包括：1 .地球面临的问题；.我们应如何保护地球；2 .呼吁

22、人们采取行动。注意：1.词数80左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【答案】In recent years, the environment is worsening with the development of economy. If we dont take action now, the earth will be unfit to live on.Actually, there are many things we can do to make a difference. For example, we can recycle used items so that we can

23、save natural resources. We can choose public transport instead of private cars to fight the greenhouse effect. More importantly, we should turn off the electrical appliances when we dont use them.It is everyones responsibility to protect the environment. If we work together, the earth will become greener and more beautiful.【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以环保为主题，写篇作文参加英语作文大赛。内容包括：L 地球面临的问题；2我们应如何保护地球；3.呼吁人们采取行动。高分句型 1 】Actually, there are many things we can do to make a difference.（运用 了省略关系代词引导的限 制性定语从句）【高分句型 2 For example, we can recycle used items so that we can save natural resources.