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1、Howtoaddreasonabledetailstoyourarticle第一页，共19页。假定你是李华。上周日在地铁站捡到了英国人假定你是李华。上周日在地铁站捡到了英国人Steven 的护照。请你用英语给你市某英文报社编的护照。请你用英语给你市某英文报社编辑写一封信，内容包括：辑写一封信，内容包括：1.简述简述(jin sh)时间过程时间过程;2.交代护照相关信交代护照相关信息息;3.委托报社刊登招领启事委托报社刊登招领启事.注意注意:1.词数词数100左右左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。广东广东(gungdng)一模书面表达一模书面表达第二页，共19

2、页。一个一个(y)问题问题主体信息(xnx)写完往往只有60-70个字，不足100词，怎么弥补词数？需要“适当增加细节(xji)，以使行文连贯”。第三页，共19页。Deareditor,ImLiHua,ahighschoolstudentinourcity.Imwritingtotellyouapieceofurgentinformation.IpickedupapassportlastSundayinthesubwaystationwhenIwastakingaridehome.TherewasnobodyaroundwhenIfounditonawaitingbench.Theownero

3、fitisStevenwhocomesfromEngland.Havinglostthepassport,hemustbeveryanxious,butIhavenoideahowtoreturnittohim.SoIneedyourhelp.Iwishyoucouldpostanoticeonyournewspapertotellhimaboutthemissingpassport,sothathecangetitback.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucoulddomethefavor.Imlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua结果结果(

4、ji gu)交际交际(ji oj)语语心理心理(x nl)感受感受具体化具体化同位语同位语原因原因第四页，共19页。如何如何(rh)适当增加细节适当增加细节1.增加同位语增加同位语2.补全前因后果补全前因后果(hugu)或目的或目的3.适当将写作内容具体化适当将写作内容具体化4.写出个人感受、评价或后果写出个人感受、评价或后果(hugu)5.补充功能性（交际性）语言补充功能性（交际性）语言第五页，共19页。Whatkindofinformationcanoftenbeaddedtoyourarticle?1增加增加(zngji)同位语同位语1IamLiHua,_(我们学校的学生会主席)./_(

5、来自中国的一位交换(jiohun)生).2.Iwanttohaveapenfriend,_(希望是一位跟我有相同兴趣的女孩).Chairman of the Students Union of my school.an exchange student from China.hopefully a girl with interests similar to mine.第六页，共19页。2.补充补充(bchng)前因后果或目的前因后果或目的_(因为(ynwi)知道你对中国传统文化很感兴趣），Iamwritingtoinviteyoutoparticipateinthisactivity._(为

6、了(wile)获得一些实践经验)Implanningtotakeapart-timejobinaforeigncompany.(1)KnowingthatyoushowgreatinterestinChinesetraditionalculture,(2)Inordertogetsomepracticalexperience,_(由于我有过丢身份证的经历），IcanfeelhowanxiousMrStevenwillbenow.(3)SinceIhavetheexperienceoflosingmyIDcard,第七页，共19页。（1)Theactivitywillbeheld_(具体具体时间

7、、地点）时间、地点）(2)IknowtheownerisSteven_(相关身份信息相关身份信息(xnx)3WhenIreceivedthedictionary,Ifoundthat_(具体存在问具体存在问题题如错印、缺页等如错印、缺页等)3.适当适当(shdng)将写作内容具体将写作内容具体化化from9a.m.to10a.m.onApril11inClassroom501.fromEngland,aged38,married.thereweresomemisprintsandpagesfrom23-45weremissing.第八页，共19页。4增加(zngji)结果或者是效果(1)Ith

8、inkitisagoodchancetoappreciatelocaloperas,_(这必将(bjin)有助于你学到更多的中国文化）(2)Wecansetoutearly,_(以便我们有更多的时间阅读和挑选图书）(3)Therearequiteafewmissingpages,_(变得无法使用)sothatwecanhavemoretimetoreadandselectbookswhichwillsurelyhelpyoulearnmoreaboutChineseculture.makingitimpossibletouse.第九页，共19页。1_（如果（如果(rgu)你能帮我这个你能帮我这

9、个忙，我将不胜感激忙，我将不胜感激（2）_（期待着你（期待着你的早日回复）的早日回复）5.补充补充(bchng)功能性（交际性）功能性（交际性）语言语言(3)_(如果有什么能帮到你的，请不要犹豫如果有什么能帮到你的，请不要犹豫(yuy)告告诉我）诉我）Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucoulddomethefavour.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.IfthereisanythingIcandoforyou,pleasedonthesitatetoletmeknow.第十页，共19页。practice(addreasonabledet

10、ails）1.ImLiHua,_.(同位语)2.Imwritingtoaskyoutohelpmefindtheownerofapassport,_.(具体来源(liyun)等)3Withcaution,Iopenedtheplasticbag,_.（结果）4Lastweek,IboughtanEnglishdictionaryfromyouronlinebookstore_(目的/原因)5_(若你能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激).第十一页，共19页。假如你是李华，你的英国朋友假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根据下列要点写咨询如何才能学好中文。请你根

11、据下列要点写封回信。封回信。要点：要点：1、参加中文学习班。、参加中文学习班。2、看中文书刊、电视。、看中文书刊、电视。3、学唱中文歌曲。、学唱中文歌曲。4、交中国朋友。、交中国朋友。注意注意(zhy)：1.词数：词数：100左右。左右。2.可适可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语已为开头语已为你写好你写好.DearPeter,ImgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.第十二页，共19页。Here are a few suggestions.First,it is impor

12、tant to take a Chinese course.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers,and magazines in Chinese.Besides,it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs.In addition,You can also make more Chinese friends.第十三页，共19页。Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice

13、 on how to learn Chinese well.Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers,and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides,it sh

14、ould be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.In addition,You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes Li Hua第十四页，

15、共19页。(2016(2016全国课标卷全国课标卷)假定假定(jidng)(jidng)你是李华，你是李华，暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和暑假想去一家外贸公司兼职，已写好申请书和个人简历（个人简历（resumeresume）。给外教）。给外教Ms JenkinsMs Jenkins写信，写信，请她修改所附材料的文字和格式（请她修改所附材料的文字和格式（formatformat）。）。注意：注意：1.1.词数词数100100左右；左右；2.2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。第十五页，共19页。Im your student Li Hua.Im applyi

16、ng for a part-time job at a foreign company in my city during the summer vacation.Could you correct the language and the format of the application letter and resume I have written?They are in the attachment.第十六页，共19页。Dear Peter,Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chin

17、ese well.Here are a few suggestions.First,it is important to take a Chinese course,as youll be able to learn from the teachers and practice with your fellow students.Then,it also helps to watch TV and read books,newspapers,and magazines in Chinese whenever possible.Besides,it should be a good idea t

18、o learn and sing Chinese songs,because by doing so youll learn and remember Chinese words more easily.In addition,You can also make more Chinese friends.They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try writing to me in Chinese next time.Best wishes Li Hua第十七页，共19页。并不是每篇文章都需要使用到这并不是每篇文章都需要使用到这5种增加细种增加细节的方法节的方法(fngf)根据实际，进行合理的、适当的增加根据实际，进行合理的、适当的增加第十八页，共19页。第十九页，共19页。