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1、高考英语复习之作文得分解【作文书写总纲】高中作文虽大约在100-120词左右，但也需要在书写前安排好文章结构，理清书写思路后再下笔写作，才能保证逻辑清楚，承接自然，首尾呼应。称为“五确定”，一般可以按照以下几步：1、 确定文章体裁。是书信，还是议论文、说明文等。即使是书信，也需要按照不同的书信类别进行分析准备，例如是否要写自我介绍；是否需要寒暄；是否需要时间落款2、 确定文章段落。一般段落在3-5段比较合适，段落太多会有冗余繁杂之感。但有些文章也可以两段，例如通知或者是演讲稿，也可以满足要求。3、 确当各段内容和段落之间的过渡。第一段往往起到引出话题的作用，安排2-3句话较为合适；二段为主要内

2、容，在分层和衔接上要求较高，文章的主要句子主要在这里体现；三段一般为呼应和总结，安排2-3句话，这样的结构较为紧密完整，主次分明，逻辑清楚。4、 确定人称和时态。人称使用一二人称难度较小，时态使用一般现在或者一般过去失分风险会更小，但也需要根据文章的具体要求对应调整。5、 确定提分拔高点。主要是指从句复合句数量和书写位置，特殊句型应用，词组代替单词，谚语使用等。第一讲 建议信段落安排第一段：开门见山，点名问题和意图第二段：分层次提出建议，并且适当地描述出所提建议的效果或原因第三段：首尾呼应，表达鼓励或者会持续关注常用句式首段：寒暄并且引出话题1、Ihavereceivedyourletters

3、ayingyouhavedifficulty(in)soImwritingtoofferyousomesuggestions which are following.2、I am sorry to hear that you have troubles inafter reading your letter.So I am writing in reply to3、Knowing that you have troubles inafter reading your letter ，I am writing in reply to4、I have received your letter sa

4、ying that5、I am writing with my suggestion proposal about6、I am writing to express my views concerning7、You have asked me for my advice with regard toand I will try to make some conducive suggestions.二段：表达我认为1、I feel that it would be beneficial if2、I would like to suggest that3、I would recommend tha

5、t4、If I were you, I would5、You may consider doing6、It would seem to me that you could7、As you may agree that二段内分层可以选择：首先：Firstly,.Atfirst,Aboveall,Firstofall，Tobeginwith,Tostartwith,然后：Besides,Furthermore,Inaddition,Moreover,Afterthat,Meanwhile,Atthesametime，Whatsmore,最后：atlast,atlength,finally,last

6、ly,ultimately,intheend，Lastbutbutleast末段：首尾呼应1、I hope you will find these suggestions/proposals/recommendations helpful/practical/ useful.2、I trust you will take my suggestion into account.3、I hope you can take good consideration of my advice.4、I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.5、I woul

7、d be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.6、I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.7、If there is more I can do to help,please let me know.应用举例假定你叫李华，最近，你的好友林浩来信说他升入高中以后感到不太适应，不知道如何结交新朋友。请你用英语给他回一封信，提出一些建议。提示：1、与人接触时要面带微笑、对别人又好。2、关心同学、乐于助人。3、学会倾听很重要，这样别人乐于和你相处。4、积极参加

8、班级活动并展示自己才能。5、（你的建议）Dear Lin Hao,How is it going? Ihavereceivedyourlettersayingyouhavedifficulty(in) making new friends in high school,such problems are normal,soImwritingtoofferyousomesuggestions which are following.Tobeginwith, I feel that it would be beneficial if you could smile and try to be fr

9、iendly when you meet people. You should also care about your schoolmates. If you are always ready to help them, they will understand you better. Inaddition, I would like to suggest that it is important for you to be a good listener. That way, when people are with you, they will feel comfortable and

10、happy. Lastbutbutleast, If I were you, I would take an active part in class activities where I can show my talent.I hope my advice will be helpful to you,and I would be ready to discuss this matter to further details.May you be happy in your new school.YoursLi Hua解析:这是一封书信，保证书信体格式。文章开头简单寒暄后即引出话题，同时二段采用Tobeginwith,、Inaddition、Lastbutbutleast进行分层，逻辑清楚；同时，使用I feel that it would be beneficial I would like to suggest thatIf I were you, I would等复合句式，句型丰富；而且也使用了时间状语从句和条件状语从句，以及像take an active in等词组，显示出学生的英语积累，最后进行首尾呼应并且表达祝愿。文章结构清晰，句型丰富，表意准确，不失为一篇得分之作。学科网（北京）股份有限公司