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1、2021年12月英语四级写作思路和冲刺范文指导(2)作文话题：Advantages and Disadvantages of Cell Phone 手机的利与弊手机的好处。手机的弊端。我的看法。作文类型：提纲式各抒己见对比论文。考点分析p ：“手机的利与弊”属提纲式各抒己见类议论文。也有书把此类写作模式的作文归类于匹配对比类或比较对比类作文。写作的套路是“一些人认为 ;而另一些人认为 。我的看法是 。”本文恰符合这一写作套路：一些人认为手机有许多好处;另一些人却认为手机也有许多弊端。我的看法是：随着中国入世，手机费用会随之大大下降，最终手机的利将远远大于弊。应当指出的是各抒己见类作文与对比比较

2、分析p 类作文极其相似，其主要差别在于：前者最后一段是阐述我的看法，而后者只是得出一般性的结论。各抒己见类与对比比较分析p 类写作套路是四、六级作文类型中最常见的，因此应重点掌握。审题构思：这是篇提纲式议论文。根据提纲提示，文章可采用三段式行文，也可开篇引出导言段后，再采用四段式行文。经分析p ，文中所给的三个汉语提示均可视为该段的主题句。全文框架如下，第一段主题句为：Cell phones are getting more and more important;二段主题句提纲点为：advantages of he cell phone;第三段的主题句提纲点为：disadvantages of

3、 the cell phone;结尾段的主题句应为：My view is。其全文及各段落框架具体构思如下：全文构思The cell phones are getting more and more popular and important.Advantages of the cell phoneDisadvantages of the cell phoneMy view is段落构思第一段：Topic SentenceThe cell phone plays a more and more important role.Developing SentenceIt has both advan

4、tages and disadvantages.第二段：Topic Sentence advantages of the cell phoneDeveloping sentence 1 facilitate peoples lifeDeveloping sentence 2 convenient for both callers and calleesDeveloping sentence 3 can be used as a tool to get on Inter第三段：Topic Sentence disadvantages of the cell phoneDeveloping sen

5、tence 1 e_pensive to buy and use itDeveloping sentence 2 might be harmful to peoples health第四段：Topic sentence My view is its positive aspects outweigh its negative aspectsDeveloping sentence It has a bright future in development新词拾贝IT(information Technology)信息技术cell phone手机cellular phone users手机用户e-

6、merce电子商务get on Inter上网wireless mobile telephone无绳移动电话词汇caller打电话者callee受话人via Inter通过因特网conduct e-merce从事电子商务工作 multifunction多功能around the globe service全球通讯服务 pocket puter袖珍电脑绝妙衔接Nowadaysbut like everything else,.First,Second,Most important of all,However, To make matters worse, worst of all, Last

7、but not least,In my opinion, And良好开端Nowadays, with the rapid development of IT, cell phones play a more and more important role in peoples life.Nowadays, cellular phones are getting more and more popular in China.However, it has both advantages and disadvantages.With the development of information i

8、ndustry and its service levels being improved, more and more people nowadays use cellular phones.As a useful munication tool and a good panion in modern life , cellular phones have both positive and negative points.As is well known, everything has two sides.Likewise, cell phones have both positive a

9、nd negative aspects.成功收口It will be developed into Inter-enabled mobile phones, which will be as useful as pocket puters in the future.In a word, the advantages of the cell phone greatly outweigh its disadvantages.With the rapid development of Chinas telemunications, the e_penses of the cell phone wi

10、ll be greatly reduced, so that everyone will be able to afford one.组段成篇读读范文，看范文的篇章结构，先用引言段引出手机既有利也有弊，接着对其利与弊进行对比分析p ，最后提出自己对手机利与弊的看法。范文：Nowadays, with the rapid development of IT, cell phones play a more and more important role in peoples life.But, like everything else, they have both favorable and

11、unfavorable aspects.First ,its useful.As a wireless mobile telephone ,its easy and handy to carry it wherever one goes and call the callee however far away he is.Therefore, it greatly facilitates peoples life.Second, its convenient.Whenever one meets trouble or something urgent, one can make a call

12、immediately.Most important of all, its a very helpful panion.With a multifunction cell phone in hand, one can easily get on the , browsing the useful information, conducting e-merce and doing whatever one can do via Inter.However, just as everything has two sides, the cell phone also has many disadv

13、antages,.To begin with, its e_pensive to buy and costly to pay the bills, esp.that of global service.To make matter worse, its also easy to lose and costly to get it repaired.Worst of all, its not as clear as a family telephone and sometimes the number dialed is often not available.Last but not leas

14、t, its alleged the micro-waves in it might do harm to peoples health.In my opinion, with its e_penses greatly reduced after Chinas entry into the WTO,.Someday most of them will be developed into new Inter-enabled mobile phones, which will be as useful as pocket puters.And I believe its advantages wi

15、ll not only offset its disadvantages, but also far outweigh them.范文赏析：这是篇议论文，文章开篇入题，一步到位。先由手机的重要性直接引入议题，手机虽在人们生活中越来越重要，但也是利弊掺半，并以此承上启下，自然过渡。接着在第二段文章论述了手机的益处：方便、快捷、便于携带，可以用它上网等等。随后，作者用“世上任何事物都是一分为二的”完成段落的过渡，进而引出手机的弊端，如自身价格昂贵、费用难以承受、易于丢失、有时因音量过小不清楚等等。最后，权衡利弊，通过“In my opinion”作者亮出自己的观点：随着中国入世手机费用的下降，“利”会远远超过“弊“，且手机未来的趋势会向掌上电脑型发展。第 8 页 共 8 页