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1、欢迎您阅读并下载本文档，本文档来源于互联网整理，如有侵权请联系删除!我们将竭诚为您提供优质的文档！1 2011 年上海高考英语作文解析 一、2011 年上海高考英语写作中关于联合国基金会组织背景 联合国儿童基金会（United Nations International Childrens Emergency Fund,简称 UNICEF），原名联合国国际儿童紧急救助基金会，于 1946 年 12 月 11日创建，其目的是满足战后欧洲与中国儿童的紧急需求。1950 年起，它的工作扩展到满足全球所有发展中国家儿童和母亲的长期需求。1953 年，UNICEF 成为联合国系统的永久成员，隶属联合国系

2、统，受联合国大会的委托，致力于实现全球各国儿童的生存、发展、受保护和参与的权利。United Nations Childrens Fund was created by the United Nations General Assemblyon December 11,1946,to provide emergency food and healthcare to children in countries that had been devastated by World War II.In 1953,UNICEF became a permanent part of the United

3、Nations System and its name was shortened from the original United Nations International Childrens Emergency Fund but it has continued to be known by the popular acronym based on this old name.Headquartered in New York City,UNICEF provides long-term humanitarian and developmental assistance to child

4、ren and mothers in developing countries.It is one of the members of the United Nations Development Group and its Executive Committee.UNICEF relies on contributions from governments and private donors and UNICEFs total income for 2006 was$2,781,000,000.Governments contribute two thirds of the organiz

5、ations resources;private groups and some 6 million individuals contribute the rest through the National Committees.UNICEFs programs emphasize developing community-level services to promote the health and well-being of children.UNICEF was awarded the Nobel Peace Prize in 1965 and the Prince of Asturi

6、as Award of Concord in 2006.二、2011 年上海高考英语作文申请信件一些经典句式 本次 2011 年高考上海英语卷作文体裁是写一封申请信，这里给大家补充一些写申请信常用的句式（一）开头常用句式 1.Your advertisement made me unable to wait to write this application for the post because I think I have the qualifications you are seeking.2.I am writing to apply for the advertised post

7、of 欢迎您阅读并下载本文档，本文档来源于互联网整理，如有侵权请联系删除!我们将竭诚为您提供优质的文档！2 3.I would like to apply for admission to your college.4.I would like to further my studies in department of your honored university.5.I would like to apply for the graduate program of in your university.6.I would like to apply for the scholarship

8、 that your department offers to students from other countries.7.I am writing to you in the hope that I may obtain an opportunity to further my study in towards a masters degree in your university.8.I would like to apply for admission to your graduate school of.（二）结尾常用句式 1.Looking forward to your fav

9、orable reply.2.I hope you will kindly send me an application form.3.Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you.4.I greatly appreciate any of your favorable consideration of my application.5.I would be very grateful if you would consider my application and c

10、ould send me some information about the scholarship.6.Thank you for your consideration.I look forward to your reply.7.I would be grateful if you can grant me an early reply about the result of my application.8.If any scholarships are available,I would appreciate it if you would send me the necessary

11、 application forms.9.I hope my academic background will meet your general entrance requirements for graduate study.（三）其他常用句式 1.I have obtained my BA in from University.2.I am a senior student now and expect my graduation next summer from University.3.I major in and did some research work during my u

12、ndergraduate years.4Since graduation I have been working in which specializes in 5.Now I am particularly interested in 欢迎您阅读并下载本文档，本文档来源于互联网整理，如有侵权请联系删除!我们将竭诚为您提供优质的文档！3 6.Would you please send me the necessary application forms and any further details about 7.I hope to further continue my research

13、on 8.Enclosed内部附有 please find two letters of recommendation and my transcript 成绩单.9.I am interested in your MA programs in,and wish to enter this program.My background is as follows:（四）求职申请信常用句型 1.In reply to your advertisement in,I respectfully offer my services for the situation.2.With reference t

14、o your advertisement in for a/an,I offer myself for the post.3.Please consider me an applicant for the position which you advertised in.4.Having noticed the enclosed advertisement in,I wish to apply for the position referred to.5.In answer to your advertisement in for a,I wish to tender my services.

15、6.Your advertisement for a in has interested me.I feel I can fill that position.7.Shall you need an experienced for your next summer？8.I have been for over five years in the employment of a/an company 9.I have been in the business for the last years,and worked as the director of thedepartment.10.Ive

16、 had years experience with a company as a.11.For the last years,I have been and still am a/an.12.Im years of age,female/male,and have had years experience in a limited companys office 13.I should be very glad to have a personal interview and can furnish references if desired.14.If you desire an inte

17、rview,I shall be most happy to call in person,on any day and at any time you may appoint.15.Should you think favorably of my application,kindly grant me an interview.16.I trust that youll give this application your favorable consideration.17.Should you give me a trial,Ill do my utmost to afford you

18、every satisfaction.欢迎您阅读并下载本文档，本文档来源于互联网整理，如有侵权请联系删除!我们将竭诚为您提供优质的文档！4 三、2011 年上海高考英语作文参考范文 2011 上海高考英语题目：若你是明启中学李明，想申请一个扶贫项目，帮助贫困地区的儿童。根据以下启示写一封申请信。启示：国际儿童基金会将资助中学生开展扶贫项目，以帮助贫困地区的儿童。申请成功者将获得项目经费 2000 元。有意者请来信告知。信中请包括：1 你个人基本情况 2 你对申请项目具体设想 3 项目经费使用情况 这类作文在篇章布局上可以用最常见的“总-分-总”的框架。首先，总起全文，介绍自己并说明得知国际儿童

19、基金将开展扶贫项目，非常想申请此项目。接着，第二段说明自己的想法和具体的方案。这里提供两个方案供大家参考：1、买文具，日常生活用品。2、买教科书，或者号召同学募捐旧书，等等。最后，总结全文，表达自己非常热切地想申请到这个扶贫项目。望国际儿童基金能尽早回复。范文一：Dear Sirs,Hello!Im Li Ming,a student from Mingqi High School of Shanghai.As Ive always been interested in charity,Im writing to you in the hope that I could be given th

20、e 2,000-yuan fund to carry out my project to help children in poverty-stricken areas.My poverty-relief program is divided into three parts.In the initial stage,Ill try to purchase textbooks for subjects such as English and Maths.Given that new books are usually expensive,Ill be on the look-out for g

21、ood-quality second-hand books.The second stage of my program is to recruit high school students who have a strong desire to help pupils in poor areas.Surely they should be armed with relative knowledge to be qualified teachers.Lastly,we will set out for primary schools,which are selected and contact

22、ed in advance,to carry out our program.As to how to allocate the money,Id like to use 1,000 for textbooks,and the rest to pay for the travelling fee of volunteers.I am looking forward to your reply,thanks!Yours,Li Ming 欢迎您阅读并下载本文档，本文档来源于互联网整理，如有侵权请联系删除!我们将竭诚为您提供优质的文档！5 亮点词组句型归纳:1.be interested in 对感

23、兴趣 2.write to someone in the hope that 写信给某人以期（实现某愿望）3.carry out 履行 4.poverty-stricken 贫困的 5.poverty-relief 扶贫的 6.given 考虑到 7.be on the look-out for 寻找 8.meet more demands 满足更多的需求 9.recruit 招募 10.qualified 有资格的 11.set out for 出发前往 12.in advance 提前 13.allocate 分配 范文二：Dear Sirs,My name is Li Ming and

24、Im a student from Mingqi High School.As I have grownup in the city,lending a hand to my rural peer group has always been my dream.Im writing to apply for the poverty-relief program launched by the International Children Fund that I have heard about recently.In fact,there are still a large number of

25、school-age children who have no access to good education in the undeveloped regions of our country.So,I sincerely hope that I can do something to make a difference by making full use of your program.If I can get the supporting money,first,I will use some parts of it to buy the textbooks they need.Si

26、nce the fund is limited,I will try to buy some second-hand reading materials for their free-time reading.Besides,I have to keep a small sum of money in order to pay the postal charges.Last but not least,I will feel honored if I can get the fund to start the poverty-relief program in our country and

27、I will try my best to use the fund.Im looking forward to your reply!Yours,Li Ming 欢迎您阅读并下载本文档，本文档来源于互联网整理，如有侵权请联系删除!我们将竭诚为您提供优质的文档！6 亮点词组句型归纳:1.lend a hand to 帮助 2.apply for 申请 3.the poverty-relief program launched by the International Children Fund由国际儿童基金会发起的扶贫项目 4.school-age children 学龄儿童 5.have n

28、o access to good education 接受不到良好的教育 6.undeveloped region 欠发达地区 7.make a difference 有影响 8.make use of 利用 9.a small sum of money 一小笔钱 10.postal charge 邮费 四、2011 年上海英语高考写作与 2005 年上海春季高考英语写作 2011 年上海高考英语卷考察是写一份申请扶贫项目的申请信，2005 年春季高考中也考察到申请信 09 年秋季高考是申请信，但依然以理由型议论文为考核重点（06-10 年考察的都是理由型的议论文）。下文为 05 年春季的作文

29、题目以及 2 篇范文 Directions:write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.你叫李宏，你校在为一批来自加拿大的交流学生（exchange student）征询为期两周的住宿家庭。你有意申请，写封信说明你申请的理由（包括所具备的条件）。范文一：Dear Mr./Ms,I have heard that our school is seeking for some home stays for exchange students wh

30、o came from Canada.I guess my family meets the requirements and I would love to apply for it.欢迎您阅读并下载本文档，本文档来源于互联网整理，如有侵权请联系删除!我们将竭诚为您提供优质的文档！7 My house is close to the Central Business District.From my house,one can enjoy a good bird view of our city,as it is on the 42nd floor.Whats more,I will arr

31、ange sightseeing for the exchange students to have a deep impression of our cultural deposits 文化底蕴 and great development.My father works in a foreign-owned enterprise and my mother is an English teacher.In view of this,our family will have no trouble communicating with them.Besides,we even have a gu

32、est room in our house,which allows the exchange student to have his or her own space.In conclusion,I definitely have the confidence of being a wonderful host to the exchange students.It is a great honor if I get this chance to show them the culture and modernization of our city and to leave them a d

33、eep impression of hospitality.Yours,Li Hong 范文二：Dear Headmaster,I am writing to you in the hope of attaining the opportunity of accommodating exchange students from Canada.I think my family can provide them with decent conditions and my reasons are as follows.Firstly,my family lives in the downtown

34、of Shanghai.Therefore,we have easy access to all kinds of transportations,such as subway,bus,and plane,thereby greatly facilitate the exchange students traveling.Secondly,my parents are local Shanghai residents,indicating that they can afford advantageous advices for foreign students on where to go

35、and what to do during their fortnight-stay,thus enabling them to make full use of their sojourn.Last but not least,my family is living in a large detached house,so we have sufficient vacant rooms for them,which I believe is most desired for tired travelers whove gone all the way from Canada to China.Therefore,I am confident to provide the exchange students with comfortable living conditions.And I would really appreciate if you could give me the chance.Thank you for reading my application.Yours,Li Hong 欢迎您阅读并下载本文档，本文档来源于互联网整理，如有侵权请联系删除!我们将竭诚为您提供优质的文档！8