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1、2014年英语中考书面表达预测 提示性作文的写法： 写提示作文要注意两个方面：一是内容；二是表达。对内容的要求是包含所有要点，如果要点遗漏就会失分。为防止遗漏要点，下笔前可在题上标出1,2,3。最难的是表达。一般要求是用词准确、句子通顺、行文连贯，句型、短语使用正确，不出现语言错误；较高的要求是能写出结构复杂的句子，熟练运用较好的短语和句型，并作适当发挥。步骤：1. 理顺要点 在所给提示上标出要点，然后按事件的先后顺序或各要点之间的内在联系排序，分出层次。 2. 构成框架 在理顺要点的基础上，定人称、定时态、定顺序、定段落、定开头结尾，形成框架。 3. 组织句子，连句成篇 多用熟悉的短语、句型

2、来表达，遇有表达障碍，可以换一种说法。注意句子间的逻辑关系，适当采用递进、让步、转折、因果等关联词语，使短文层次分明，过渡自然。 5. 检查修改成文后，读一两遍，检查人称、拼写、短语有无错误，要点有无遗漏，有无语法错误。写作的突破 方法1、认真审题，明确要求 在提笔写作之前，花几分钟时间弄清楚题目提示的内容和要求，以免文不对题。倘若审题不准，就有可能出现“下笔千言，离题万里”的情况。除了审题还要确定文章所需的时态。 方法2、分析要点，编制提纲 通过审题，弄清楚文章主题之后，接着就要考虑文章的内容要点并组织语言材料。根据题目提示或说明，按事件发生的时间顺序或空间顺序或事理重要性顺序，先取那些典型

3、的、易于表达的材料作为自己写作的重点，列出提纲。这样做，可以使杂乱无章的材料变得井然有序，可以使写作思路清晰，避免在卷面上出现涂改现象，同时还可以节约时间。 方法3、依纲据点，扩展成文 列出写作提纲之后，就可以着手写作了。要注意把题目要求的东西无一遗漏地写进去，以确保内容的完整。同时，对于与要求无关的内容切记任意发挥，画蛇添足。这一步是整个写作过程的关键环节。 方法4、反复检查，查漏补缺 在写好短文，从题目要求上要对全文进行检查和修改。经过反复修改润色，才能措辞准确，句子流畅，布局严谨。因此修改文章是提高写作水平的有效方法。注意问题：1.一要点齐全，二表达准确、清楚、地道，三通顺；发挥适度，因

4、为文采不加分，杜绝中文式的句子。2.一人一句，联句成段，张贴优秀范文，还有书写规范。3.句子是灵魂，谓语是关键。4.常见的写作弊病：（1）书写不规范，卷面涂改严重，直接影响了得分。（2）不按要求写作，无关主题的内容偏多，该表达的要点没说清楚。（3）对试卷中提供的要点生硬翻译，不懂得将提供的信息进行加工处理。（4）词汇贫乏，遣词造句的基本功不够扎实，对常用词和词组掌握不够（拼写、以及短语、词组的搭配出现错误较多，词义混淆，词性不分） 命题原则：1）突出开放性。书面表达题目将越来越摒弃早期那种“汉译英”式的题目，而会提供更大的自由空间，让学生都有话可写，同时激发学生的写作欲望，唤醒与强化写作主体的

5、意识，启发思维，拓展心灵。这类题目让学生的写作空间更广泛，便于学生表达真实情感，充分展示个性，这一点与新课标的要求一致。2）突出时代性。无论从认识、道德伦理、形象展示、哲理思考等方面，书面表达都会体现一定时代性的价值取向。也许有的同学会认为关注时代性(共性)与提倡发展学生的个性有矛盾，其实个性化色彩并不排斥时代性，个性化也要求关注时代性，两者是相互通融的。现代中学生应善于关注自己的小天地，同时放眼大时代。提倡时代感同样可展示真善美的自我，否则写出的都是大话、空话、套话，融入不了个性。3）突出实用性。细心的同学可能会发现，往年的英语书面表达在设计时会考虑要考查哪些词汇、哪些句式，而近年来的题目则

6、倾向于考察如何解决某一问题，更注重了实用性。留言条、书信、日记等常见应用文普遍受到关注，电话记录、采访提纲、演讲稿、说明书、海报等应用文也不容忽视。我们还要注意到，一般的看图作文、记叙文、说明文、议论文也各有其实用性的一面。4) 突出教育性。书面表达的材料和提示语将更多地体现教育性，以便让学生在读题和写作的过程中得到熏陶感染和教育。范文预测如下（30个写作项目）：1. 雅安芦山县大地震4月20日，四川省雅安地区芦山县发生了罕见的7级大地震，那里的人们痛失亲人和家园。全国人民众志成城，抗震救灾。作为一名中学生，请你谈谈你的做法和感受。要求：文章语言流畅，逻辑清晰，用词准确，80100字左右;词汇

7、参考：地震earthquake，悲痛sorrow，受到感动be deeply moved，安慰comfort，重建rebuild，自愿做某事volunteer to do sth参考范文： April 20th, a big earthquake happened in Lu Shang Town, YaAn ,Sichuan. Many people lost their relatives and their homes. All the Chinese people feel quite sorrow. A lot of people volunteer to help them. So

8、me people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. Thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes Even foreign friends also give them a hand. Im deeply moved by these people. So Ill use my pocket mone

9、y to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.2. 雪灾去年春节期间，我国大部分地区遭受雪灾，特别是南方，室几十年未遇。公路、铁路、机场都被迫关闭，电网瘫痪，数百万人不能回家过年。部分山区人民生活异常困难，在各级政府的带领下，人民群众、解放军战士英勇抗击雪灾，涌现出大批可歌可泣的英雄事迹。作为一名中学生，你有何感想?有何打算?能不能改变这种状态?As

10、 we know, our country suffered heavy snow last Spring Festival. Everything was covered with heavy snow. It made the buses, trains and planes stop. Millions of people couldnt go home. Many people suffered trouble. There was no food, water or light in some places. Our government called on people to fi

11、ght against heavy snow. As a student, I think we should learn from those heroes. We must study hard at school. We should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.3. “4.20”雅安市芦山县大地震后，某校将开展“人人为灾区孩子献爱心”的主题班会活动，现在请你以学生会的名义写一份倡议书，内容要点如下：1）许多孩子地震后不能上学 2）没有足够的学习用品和衣物

12、3）每个孩子都应该有上学的权利4）我们应该作一些力所能及的事情去帮助、他们，比如 5）希望他们能尽快重返校园注意：1）可根据要点，适当发挥，(参考词汇：school things, have the right to do something, as possible as one can)2）词数：70词左右参考作文：Dear students，After the terrible earthquake, there are lots of children out of school. Some of them are even homeless. Their schools and ho

13、uses have destroyed. They can just live in the open air. They dont have enough school things or clothes .As we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble. As a Chinese, we should help them as possible as we can. We can raise some money and things for them. And we

14、can also write to them to encourage them. I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.Students Union4. 甲型H7N9流感从电视上看到我国上海，江苏，浙江等省份正流行甲型H7N9流感(A/H7NI9 flu), 学校应该引起高度重视，你为你正在上海上学的笔友Mike的健康与安全担心。请立即给他写一封email询问他的情况，并给他提出防护建议。要点：1）询问：他的健康状况;他们学校有无甲型H7N9流感病例(A/H7N9 flu cases);他们是否

15、还上学。2）建议：尽量呆在家里，少去人多的地方;勤洗手;讲卫生；多开窗，保持空气新鲜;多吃水果蔬菜。范文：Dear Mike,From the TV, I know many A/7IN9 I flu cases are reported recently in some provences of China and many schools pay more attention to it as a result. Im so worried about you. Are you alright? Are there any A/H7N9 flu cases in your school?

16、Do you still have to school everyday?To stay away from the disease, youd better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people. Wash your hands more often to keep them clean; Open the window to have more fresh air in the room; And eat more fruit and vegetable to ke

17、ep yourself fit and strong.So far the disease is not so deadly as it seems to be. Do be at ease! Take care and youll be OK.5. 卫生健康饮食:健康一直是人们关注的问题我校要举行以“关爱健康”为题的主题班会,请根据下表内容谈谈你的看法,写一篇80字左右的演讲槁。(1)保持健康的重要性(2)保持健康的方法(3)保持健康的结论(4) 你的看法:1)多吃水果蔬菜保持饮食平衡避免含糖高脂肪高的食物2)多锻炼健身强体;3)鄙弃不良习惯范文1）:Dear boys and girls,

18、Here is my advice about how to keep health / fit.As a middle school student , first youd better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子). Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals. Dont eat too much meat and sugar but more vegetables and fruit. Thir

19、d you need enough sleep or rest . Next keep yourself happy. As people often say smiling makes younger. Last you mustnt drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health.That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life. Thank you, bye!范文2）:Dear boys and girls,Im talking about how to keep

20、 healthy/fit. Today many teenagers are unhealthy because they do less exercise, eat more junk food, and they usually do not have enough time to sleep. If we wish to keep fit, my advices are as follow:Firstly, we must keep taking exercises every day , and eat lots of fruit and vegetables . Secondly,

21、try to sleep for about 8 hours a night, and remember to “early to bed early to rise”. Finally, stay away from cigarettes / smoking / drugs毒品. Besides(除此之外), dont forget to breathe (呼吸)the fresh air in the open air .Keep happy every day.That is my advice. I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.6.

22、 有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。“英语角”打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法和建议。参考词汇：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer范文：We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isnt delicious. So they often go out of school to bu

23、y something which they like to eat. But Im afraid that its bad for their health to eat lunch outside the school, because some of the food they buy isnt healthy enough.In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and als

24、o they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.7. 人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，介绍人们的不同观点，并表达自己的看法。赞成的理由 反对的理由1)广交朋友 但浪费时间2)可自由表达思想 但影响学习3)有利于外语学习 但可能上当受骗你的看法是-【参考范文】Should students make friends on line? Some people say yes. Internet helps people make many friends. Chatting o

25、n line, students can express more freely their feelings and opinions, and even get help for their foreign language studies。Others, however, think students should not. They say making friends on line is a waste of time, which should be spent more meaningfully on study. Besides, some students get chea

26、ted on line。It is my opinion that students should place their study, health and safety before other things. As for friendship, we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us。8. 许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以Less Pressure, Better Life为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你

27、的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享，内容包括：1）同学们中普遍存在的压力是什么；2）我的压力是什么；3）我是如何成功缓解我的压力的。注意：1）文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。 2）词数80100；短文的开头已给出(不计入总词数)。参考范文：Less Pressure, Better LifeHello, boys and girls!Pressure is a serious problem in todays world. Students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students cant get on well with

28、 their classmates, while others may worry about their exams。Im always under pressure, too. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of training classes at weekends。Last Monday evening, I had a talk with my mother. I told her I was not lazy. I really felt tired.

29、 I needed time to relax. My mother agreed with me at last. So I think a conversation with parents is necessary to solve the problem。Thats all. Thank you!9. 李红是某校九年级（1）班一名新转入的外地学生。几个星期来，老师和同学们对她的关心和帮助让她倍感温暖，使她逐渐适应了新的学习和生活环境。假如你是李红，请你根据下面表中的提示语写一则日记，叙述这几个星期以来他们对你各方面的关心、帮助以及你的感受和愿望。生活方面： 1）同学们从家中带来当地可口

30、的食物给我吃；2）同学们带我参观校园，周末邀请我到他们家做客；3）下午放学后，同学们经常带我去操场跑步、打排球。思想方面： 老师、同学们找我谈心，和我交朋友。学习方面： 感受和愿望： 范文：6th June My teachers and classmates have helped me a lot since I came here. They brought me local food from their homes. They were very delicious. My classmates showed me around our school. They even invit

31、ed me to their homes, watching TV and enjoying dinner. After school they often ran and played volleyball with me in the playground. They came to talk with me when we were free. We have been good friends. They helped me with my lessons. When I had problems, I went to them for help. I feel very happy

32、here. I hope to make more friends and make progress in my studies. 10. 初中的学习生涯即将结束了。三年来，在你获取知识的同时，你的外貌，兴趣爱好，习惯都有了一定的改变吧！请你一定以(How I Change)为题，写一篇短文，告诉我们你的变化好吗？字数在80词左右。温馨提示：1.短文中请勿使用真实姓名、地点或所在学校名称。2.这些词汇也许对你有帮助:hobby, habit, used to, enjoy oneself3.短文开头已经为你写好（字数不计入总数），请你接着往下写。 How I ChangeMy life ha

33、s changed a lot in the past three years. 范文两篇：How I Change（一）My life has changed a lot in the past three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was a short and shy girl with long hair. I often listen to music at home. But now I like to make friends and take part in all kinds of activities. I prefer running

34、 with my classmates. So Im becoming much healthier than before. Not only my parents but also my teachers are satisfied with me. How I Change（二）My life has changed a lot in the past three years. I was fat and short when I came to the middle school. At that time I was interested in computer games and

35、I spent most of time on it. My parents were worried about me.Now, I like sports and I often play football with my classmates after school. So I become taller and stronger than before. I like reading, too. I usually go to the library to read some interesting books. Good habits help me to study better

36、 and keep healthier. 11. 假如你叫张蒙，班主任李老师想了解班级同学的状况，以便有针对性地对学生进行考前心理疏导。请你根据下面的内容要求，给班主任李老师写封e-mail，说明自己的情况，并请她给你提一些建议。内容要求：1）学习任务重,睡眠不足,缺少体育活动。同学间缺乏沟通和交流。2）在家不允许看电视、上网、听音乐等。3）词数80左右。文中不得出现真实的校名、姓名。4）开头和结尾已给出。不计入总词数。参考范文:Dear Ms Li,Im very glad to write to you. I have a lot of troubles these days. Every

37、 day I have a lot of homework to do at school. I dont enough time to sleep. I nearly have no time to do sports. My friends and I can hardly find time to talk, or play together. When I get back home from school, Im not allowed to watch TV, surf the Internet or listen to my favourite music. I feel wor

38、ried about them. I dont know what I should do. Could you please give me some suggestions?Best wishes. 12. 假定你是李华，最近你们班就“低碳”生活方式进行了讨论，你的美国朋友Jack来信向你询问讨论情况，请你用英语写封回信，简单参照作文地带介绍的以下讨论结果：1）节水节电；2）垃圾分类；3）少用纸巾，重拾手帕；4）步行，骑自行车或乘坐公交车。参考词汇：低碳low carbon 纸巾tissue参考范文：Dear Jack,Thank you for your letter asking ab

39、out our discussion on low carbon lifestyle. Here is something about it。We can do a lot in our daily life to achieve the goal of living low carbon life. First, wed better turn off lights if possible and spend less time watching TV or surfing the Internet. Saving water also matters much. Besides, we s

40、hould sort out the rubbish, hoping that we might recycle some, which will surely benefit us a great deal. In addition, we suggest using handkerchiefs instead of tissues so that we can prevent more trees from being cut down. More importantly, when we go out, walking, riding bikes or taking buses shou

41、ld be our first choice, which contributes to a cleaner world。13. 节约水是我们每个人的责任, 我们知道，水对人类来说是非常的重要。没有水我们就不能生存。适合人类喝的水是越来越少了。但是有些人却不关心或不在意。日常生活中他们浪费很多水。更糟糕的是他们排放污水到河流里。他们还到处乱扔垃圾。很多河流湖泊已经受到严重污染。人类必须采取一些措施来制止污染。只有这样，我们才过得幸福开心。如果我们不节约水，那么最后一滴水也许会是我们人类的眼泪。 Its our duty to save waterAs we know, water is ver

42、y important to man, we cant live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people dont care about it. They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers. They throw rubbish everywhere, too. Many rivers and lake

43、s are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. Only in this way can we live happily. If we dont save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.14. 今春宜宾市部分地区发生干旱，水资源严重短缺。请你以Saving Water为题用英语写一篇短文。(参考词 tap 水龙头 reuse 再利用 recycle 再循环 drought 干旱)内容包括：1.水的重要性 2.人们浪费水

44、的不良现象 3.提出几条建议 要求：1）词数：80100词（开头已给出，不计入总词数）2）字迹工整，语言流畅，表达正确，逻辑清晰。 范文： Saving WaterAs we all know, water is important to us all. People cant live without water. Plants and animals will die if there is no water in the world.But there are still some people wasting water. For example, some students ofte

45、n forget to turn off the taps; some people take showers for a long time.Then what should we do to save water? First, we should turn off the taps after we use it. Second, wed better recycle and reuse the water. Third, we should take a bath instead of having a shower.Water is really important to man.

46、Lets save water from now on.15.今年宜宾市响应党中央的号召，启动了“文明餐桌行动，又叫光盘行动”，号召全体市民“文明用餐，节俭惜福”。请结合图片，联系实际，适当发挥，以“Save(节约) Food and Eat Healthily”为题，写一篇60-80词的英语短文。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。waste too much eat up all the food eat junk food eat a balanced diet范文： Save Food And Eat HealthilyYue yang government has called on th

47、e citizens to save food and eat healthily so that we can enjoy our happy life. We middle school students should do something for it.To save food, we shouldnt waste any of our food. We should eat up all the food. We shouldnt order the food more than we can eat while dining out, because many people in the world dont have enough to eat. To eat healthily, we shou