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1、中考英语作文考场丢分“十”大要点 俗话说“千里之行始于足下”。英语书面表达能力的形成不是一日之功，必须从平时的课堂学习一点一滴抓起，持之以恒。一篇优秀的英语作文在内容和语言两方面应是一个统一体，任何一方面的欠缺都会直接影响到作文的质量。然而，很多考生在写作中或者由于粗心大意，或者由于基本功不扎实而经常出现名词不变复数、第三人称单数不加s，前后不一致，以及时态语态、句子完整性等方面的错误。1. 审题不清如2004年中考微博作文要求写一项最喜欢的课外活动，有些考生将作文的主题定位为“我最喜欢的活动”，偏离了“一项、课外活动”这一主题。依据作文的评分原则，若文章内容不切题，则不管语言如何规范、用词如

2、何准确，都会被判为零分。2.拼写错误拼写是考生应该具备的最起码的基本功，但在考生的作文中却经常能发现很多拼写错误。有拼写错误的作文肯定会被酌情扣分，而且有大量拼写错误存在的作文不仅体现出语言基本功差，同时也直接影响内容的表达，通常会降低作文的档次。3.名词单复数问题误 my father and my mother is all teacher。正 my father and my mother are both teachers。4.缺少动词在汉语中没有动词的句子是允许的，但英语中每个完整的句子都必须有 动词来构成，如：“我累了。”这个句子没有动词作谓语，而用形容词，但英语形容词不能作谓语，

3、一定要写成：im tired。误 i happy i can come to beijing zoo。正 i am happy i can come to beijing zoo。误 the apples cheap. ill take some。正 the apples are cheap. ill take some。5.缺少介词、冠词等还有一些考生因为没有熟练掌握介词或者冠词的用法，不了解中英文语言习惯的不同，也会出现明显的错误，造成丢分现象。误 because heavy rain we cant hold the sports meeting。正 because of the hea

4、vy rain we cant hold the sports meeting。6.代词的误用英语中代词的形式很多，包括主格、宾格、物主代词、反身代词等。而汉语中没有主格和宾格、形容词性物主代词和名次性物主代词之分；此外汉语中很多时候不用物主代词，而英语中物主代词是不可省略的，代词的误用是考生最容易发生的错误。误 i mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for i father。正 my mother and i went to the shop to buy a present for my father。7.句子不完整有的考生因为对

5、句子结构认识模糊，所以出现只写半句的现象，这也是造成失分的原因之一。误 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college. for example, my friend in high school。(这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。)正 many students have a hard time passing all the tests to get into college, for example, my frie

6、nd in high school。8.前后不一致所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。例1. when one have knowledge, he can do what he want to do。(人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。)剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has ;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。改为 when one has knowledge , he can do what he wants (to do)9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误汉语动词无时态、人称和数的变化，而对英语来说，这些都至关重要

7、。例：误 when i get to the station the train leave。正 when i got to the station the train had left。10.综合性错误综合性错误是指单词的大小写和标点符号的错误等，以及形容词和副词的混淆、连词的误用等等。这些都是靠考生平时知识的积累，所以考生应该从平时练习出发，每天坚持写英语日记，多读适合自己英语水平的原版著作，提高自己的英语素养。初中英语作文分为四等。一等文：13-15分；二等文：9-12分；三等文：5-8分；四等文：0-4分。教给大家十个字，搞定初中英语写作，帮你拿到一等文。要点+结构+逻辑+语法+亮点要

8、点：实际上中考微博英语写作就等于两个字，翻译！因为中考英语写作一般会给出几个要点，要求必须在文章中有所体现。文章写的再好，只要缺少要点就会扣分。所以要点，也就是文章的第二段内容，要做到全，围绕中心。结构：中考最流行的结构就是三段式，深受各地区中考英语写作阅卷老师的喜爱。为什么尼？因为这种结构十分清晰。“观点要点总结”让人一目了然。三段式的第一段：简单明了，开门见山，不超过2句话，如，我们想表达小强很强壮，第一段直接说XQ is extremely strong. 观点明确，这一句足矣。第二段：分2-3点说为什么他强壮。1. 每天吃10顿饭，He has ten meals everyday!详

9、举吃的是什么。2. 每天运动2小时，He does exercise 2 hours a day! 详举做了什么运动。第三段：经过第二段的论证，可以得出结论。但请注意，不能完全照抄第一段，要有升华。也可以提出希望和建议等。如，Howstrong and robust XQ is! I hope to be him one day!逻辑：这里的逻辑实际指的就是逻辑词。最常用的就是表示递进的，转折的，总结的逻辑词等。递进：除了first, second, third, finally 等还可以使用高级点的，如first of all(首先)，inaddition, whats more, more

10、over(都是另外的意思)，in a word, all inall(表示总结的)。转折：but, yet,however等。真正有经验的阅卷老师会很注意这些逻辑连接词，因为这些词体现了这个文章的思路。语法：其他几点都不是硬性的要求，不那样做不能说是错，只能说是不好，但是语法却是硬性的。如，单词的使用，时态等。亮点：当我们将前八个字都做得很完美的时候也只能得到一个二等文的上。要想得到一等文，最后两个字，亮点至关重要。大家设想如果我们是阅卷老师。有两篇写人美丽的作文摆在我们面前，都是结构清晰的三段式，要点都很全，都用了一些逻辑词，都没有语法错误，但是A篇只用了beautiful,good-loo

11、king,B篇却用到了attractive，charming，catching等，我坚信正常人都会给B篇高分的。这些高级一点的词汇，词组，句型便是我们得到一等文的最有力的绝招。所以，以后写英语作文要养成一般词汇限量用的好习惯。沉迷网络游戏题目：李华沉迷于电脑游戏中，影响了学习。作为他的好朋友，你打算怎么帮他呢?请用下面所给的提示词写一篇不少于80字的短文。字迹工整，语言流畅。提示词：give up; concentrate on; be (become) interested in范文Li Hua spent too much time playing computer games and h

12、e fell behind others. As a good friend of his, I must do something to help him.Firstly, I think its very important for him to learn lessons well. He should spend most of his time on his study instead of computer games. Secondly,I must tell him that playing computer games too much is bad for his heal

13、th,especially for his eyes. So he must give it up. I can play more sports with him after school. Maybe he will become more interested in sports than computer games. And then Ill ask him to concentrate more on his study. Of course, I will try my best to help him with all his subjects. I think I can d

14、o it in many fun ways and let him find much fun in studying. At the same time, Ill ask both his parents and our teachers to help him, too. If I try these, Im sure he will make great progress soon.一、有关留守儿童：（一）、“ 留守儿童”问题是近几年社会关注的热点话题。假如你是一名农村留守儿童 小伟，请你现在给你父母写封信，告诉他们你的近况和一些想法。“留守儿童”的心事：1. 父母外出，一人在家，孤独寂

15、寞； 2. 看到别的孩子和父母在一起非常快乐，很羡慕； 3. 有一次因没有足够的时间做饭，上学迟到，受到老师和同学的误解。“留守儿童”的笑声： 1. 老师和同学经常鼓励，在学习和生活上给予了很大的帮助；2. 政府给留守儿童过中秋节。注意：1. 词数：80词左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数。Dear Mom and Dad，How are you these days? I miss you very much. Im writing to tell you about my recent situation（情况）while you ar

16、e out.During the time you are away，I feel quite lonely，especially when watching other children playing with their parents happily. How I envy（羡慕) them！One day，I was late for school and misunderstood (误解)by my teacher and classmates because I had not enough time to cook a meal. However，to my joy(高兴)，

17、 my teachers and classmates always encourage me and give me a lot of help in study and life.Whats more， on the Mid-autumn Festival，the local government held a special party for us. I was happy and deeply moved(感动).I miss you， Mom and Dad. But I can take care of myself. Im looking forward to seeing y

18、ou.YoursXiaowei （二）如今，在我们身边，父母均在外打工的留守儿童比比皆是。关注留守儿童，构建和谐社会的重要内容。关注留守儿童，要靠全社会的共同努力。你认为留守儿童面临的主要问题有那些？为了解决留守儿童的问题，请你向当地政府提建议：提示：1.缺乏父母的关爱，性格孤僻，学习压力大、自卑。2.缺乏安全保障（家庭照管不力，容易犯错误甚至犯罪）。建议：1.学校建立留守儿童心里咨询室，老师应该把爱播撒到每一个留守儿童的心田。2.政府利用节假日建立留守儿童家长学校。 3.社会各界开展与留守儿童一帮一结对子的活动。4.父母尽可能回到孩子身边，给孩子生活上和学习上的帮助和关爱。Dear Mayo

19、r:Im a middle school student.（我是一名中学生）Im writing to tell you something around us.（我现在要写信告诉你我身边的一些事情）Nowadays, there are many left-behind children whose parents work away from their hometowns.（现在这有许多父母因工作而离开家乡的留守孩）Most of them are from the countryside, you know,（你知道，他们大多自农村）they have many problems.（他

20、们有很多问题） They are always lonely and stressed out because they are short of their parents love（因为他们缺乏父母的关爱，性格孤僻，学习压力大） At the same time, they are easy to make mistakes even do some thing against the laws, because theyre short of their families care.（同是，由于缺乏家庭的关爱，他们容易犯错误甚至犯罪）。 How to solve their proble

21、ms?（怎样解决他们的问题呢） In my eyes, the government can set up a parents school for these children on holidays,（我们可以看到，政府利用节假日建立留守儿童家长学校）you can organize hand-in-hand activity to call on more people to help them.（你能够组织手拉手活动来帮助他们）You can also raise money to donate to these children.（你也可以为这些孩子募集钱）As the song s

22、ays: If everyone gives their love, the world will be better.（就你一首歌里唱到的：只要人人都献上一片爱，世界将变成更美好的人间） Its very important for us to pay more attention to these children if we want to build a harmonious society.（如果我们想要建立一个和谐的社会，关注这些孩子是很重要的）Best wishes to you!Sincerely,二保护环境，倡导低碳生活 Li Hua（一）低碳生活：现在全世界都在倡导“低碳生

23、活”（low-carbon life），即：降低二氧化碳的排放，采取低能量、低消耗、低开支的生活方式。低碳生活对我们大家都有好处，请你写一篇短文向一家英文报社投稿。内容包括：你的具体做法、你的感受以及建议。提示词语：be good for，everyone，ride a bike，think，make a difference，environment，suggest，reuseLow-carbon life is good for everyone. To help with the environment， I always walk or ride a bike to school ins

24、tead of taking a car. Besides， I will try to use things that can be recycled and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom. I think its my duty to live a low-carbon life. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reu

25、se books as long as possible. And wed better not spend much money on expensive clothes. If everyone does something for the environment， I believe the earth will be a better place.（二）保护环境：从2008年6月1日起，国家将禁止商家免费提供塑料袋，掀起全国“拒塑”的环保运动。假如你是李华，准备以“What Can We Do for the Environment”为题，写一篇保护环境的英语演讲稿。 内容包含：1.在

26、购物时用布袋子替代塑料袋； 2.尽可能地再利用使用过的课本； 3.离开教室应关灯； 4.最好走路或骑自行车上学； 5.简述理由：保护环境，减少污染，节约能源等 注意：1.词数：80词左右。开头和结尾已经为你写好，不计入总词数； 2.可根据要点适当增加细节，使行文连贯； 3.文章中不能出现真实姓名和校名，否则以零分处理。 3.参考词汇：布袋子cloth bag塑料袋plastic bag保护protect能源energy污染pollution课本textbook参考作文: What Can We Do for the EnvironmentHello, everyone. Im Li Hua.

27、Its nice to speak about what we can do for the environment, and I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem. The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags in stead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps to protect the environment. The second thing we can do is to reuse t

28、he old textbooks as possible as we can. We should also never forget to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms in order to save energy. Whats more, it would be better if we walk or ride a bike to school. We should try our best reduce pollution and waste. In fact, even the simplest everyday

29、activities can make a real difference to the environment. I believe we can make the world a better place to live in. Thank you for your listening!（三）.环境问题：今天环境变得越来越糟糕,环境问题影响着人们的工作,学习,生活等,而我们的工作,生活,生产等又使环境污染越来越严重.,如何保护我们的环境?请以“ How to protect/save our environment/world? ”为题写一篇短文。提示:存在问题:1.水污染越来越严重 2.

30、砍伐森林严重 3. 大气污染严重 4. 白色垃圾等。 要求：如何改善/保护环境?至少:3-4个方面， 80字左右。How to protect/save our environment/world?The environmental pollution is worse and worse /more and more seriously today . Water is polluted ,we have no clean water to drink Many trees are being cut down, some animals are getting less and less.

31、 Some factories are pouring dirty air in the sky , the population is increasing faster and faster ,resources are getting less and lessetc. Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future. Peoples health has been greatly affected by air, noise and water pollu

32、tion. Many people died of diseases. In order to live a better life, we need protect our world.We shouldnt throw away rubbish everywhere. We should recycle ,reduce and reuse things .Dont waste things ,This saves money and reduces pollution. Use things for as long as possible. We dont use plastic bags

33、 . We must plant more trees and stop the people cutting them .We hope our world is more and more beautiful .（四）.为了保护地球有限的资源，我们应该采取什么措施呢？请根据下面的提示写一篇约80词的短文，短文开头已经给出。提示词；1.save water, the source of life , protect drinking water, stop polluting, make full use of it；2.save electricity, crucial, turn off

34、, other electric machines；3. save forests, useful ,stop cutting down；4.recycle useful rubbish, save resources参考作文：Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer. In order to protect them, something must be done.Save water. Water is the source of li

35、fe. No water, no life. So its very important for us to do so. Not only should we protect drinking water and stop polluting it, but also make full use of it. Save electricity. It is crucial. We cant imagine what the life will be like without it. Everyone should do his best to save electricity. Dont f

36、orget to turn off lights or other electric machines when we finish working. Save forests. They are useful .Please stop cutting them down and use recycled paper instead. Make our world a green one to live in. Recycle useful rubbish. Plenty of rubbish can be recycled like cans, paper, bottles, and so

37、on. We can save resources in this way.三介绍风景名胜: 我们的家乡有着悠久的历史和秀丽的风光。假设你是一名导游，你正在接待一个来自英国的旅游团，请写一篇短文简要介绍我市的风景名胜，不少于80词。 参考词汇：long history, beautiful views, tour guide, relaxing , educational, friendly 中考英语作文范文欣赏: Good morning, everyone! Nice to meet you ! Im your tour guide today, Welcome to my hometow

38、n -DuyunDuyun lies in the south of Guizhou Province, It has a very long history and many beautiful views.For example, Wenfeng Park and Baizi Bridge are the most beautiful and relaxing among them. And the air is very clean and fresh. Duyun is famous for its bridges and it is also a good place for sho

39、pping and having delicious food . So far, a lot of new shopping malls have been built. You can buy what you like there ,If you want to try traditional Duyun food, you can go to Night Snack Street, The food there is both delicious and cheap.There are still many other interesting and exciting things w

40、aiting for you to enjoy yourselves! Lets go for them!四高兴或伤心之事的经历: 在学习和生活中，你遇到过高兴和难过伤心的事，请用英语描述这样的经历。要求： 1：词数不少于80个，开头已给出，可选用下列词汇：experience 经历经验 unhappiness 不快乐 confidence 自信心Hights And Lows In My LifeWe all have experienced highs and lows in our lives. I will never forget the experience when I bega

41、n to learn English. I like English but I couldnt get the right way in learning. The more I wanted to remember, the harder I found it was. I was in a low spirit. I almost gave it up. Luckily, my English teacher encouraged me and helped me find a good way. Litter by litter I realized English was not s

42、uch a terrible thing. I became brave enough to open my mouth to speak English. How excited I was! My confidence came back to me. Believe it or not , I won the first prize in Spoken English Competition in our school. It was the first time I experienced the highs in my life!四、校园生活介绍：（一） My School life

43、 My name is Beth. Im 14 years old, and I study in No. 1 Middle School of Hangzhou. My school is very big and beautiful. Im very happy in the school. I usually get up at 6:15 in the morning. Then I do morning exercises in the playground. At 6:40, I have my breakfast. You can see many students and tea

44、chers in the dinning room. After breakfast, I often read English with my classmates.We have six classes every day. The first class begins at 7:50 am. I like all the classes for my teachers can make the classes lively and interesting. My favorite subject is English, so I join English Corner every wee

45、k. I can speak English with many other students there. Its very interesting and exciting. I think its helpful for me to learn English well. After class, I always play games with my friends. We play soccer ball, basketball, volleyball, ping-pong and so on. They are very relaxing.I like my lessons, my

46、 friends and my teachers. In a word, I love my school. I find my school life more and more meaningful and colorful. My school life is wonderful, isnt it? （二）假设你叫Liu Yan，初中三年，你与同学们在一起学习、参加各种活动，相互帮助，彼此之间建立了深厚的友谊。校园网的英语论坛开辟了 “Thank you letter” 专栏。请按下面的要求给你的同学Ling Feng写一封感谢信。注意：1.这封信要表达你对Ling Feng的感谢；2.

47、信中要简述感谢Ling Feng的原因，适当举例，并谈谈自己的感受；提示词语：thank you， at the end of ， kind， forget， help with， stay in touchDear Ling Feng，I would like to thank you at the end of our middle school education. You have been very kind and helpful since we knew each other.You have given me so much help that I will never fo

48、rget. Last term， I caught a bad cold and had to stay at home for a week. When I was worrying about the lessons， you came to my home after school and helped me with every subject. With your help， I didnt fall behind others. Since then， we have become very close friends. I think Ill try to help others just like you.Thank you again. Even though we may go to different schools， Ill always stay in touch wit