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1、精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -读书之法 ,在循序而渐进 ,熟读而精思学校英语五年级上册各单元作文范例及点评My English TeacherMissTang ismy Englishteacher.Shes verypretty.She istalland thin.She has two bigeyes and a smallmouth.Her hairislong.She likescatsverymuch.And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very g

2、ood. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师”,是一篇介绍人物的作文.小作者开门见山,直接点题, 第一介绍了英语老师的姓名,然后逐一介绍了她的外貌特点、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等.小伴侣们在写作文时,要留意使用自己最熟识的词 组 ,以免写出一些错句子.写作时要留意意思连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、书写清晰、规范等.My Days of the weekI m a student and I am in Grade 5.I

3、 get up at six o clock every day. I have breakfastat halfpastsix,and go to schoolatseven oclock.Ihave classesfrom Monday to Saturday. I have an English class on Friday and I have a PE class on Tuesday. I don t have to go to school on weekend, and I like going swimming on that day.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的一周

4、”,小作者没有说一些空话,而是从自己的亲身经受写起,表达了自己一周七天的所作所为,并特殊强调了星期天的喜好,写得自然、流畅.小伴侣们写作文时要留意人称及谓语动词的变化,要依据提示,结合自己的实际,写自己身边熟识的事情.I can help do houseworkIama girl.My nameisLiLing.I minClass Three,Grade Five.I mveryhelpful athome. Ican waterthe flowers,empty the trashand sweep the floor.Aftermeals,I can help my mother do

5、 the dishes. On Sunday, I can wash the clothes. What about you. Are you helpful, too.【要领点评】本篇作文的题目是“我可以帮忙做家务”,作者主要表达自己在家帮忙做的事情,介绍自己的名字,所在年级及在家能做的家务,很具体,到位.小伴侣们在写作时,应尽量写一些亲自经受的事情,这样会防止在作文时显得太空,由于只有自己常常做的事情印象才会特殊深刻.写作时仍要留意大小写和时态.My VillageMy villageisverybeautiful.There are many houses inthevillage.Ne

6、ar thevillage,thereisa forest.A smallriverisinfrontofthe village.The water in it is very clean. We can see some fish in the river. Near the river, you cansee a mountain. Some flowers and grass are on the mountain. I like my village.Welcome to my village.【要领点评】可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选 - - -

7、- - - - - - -第 1 页,共 8 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -读书之法 ,在循序而渐进 ,熟读而精思本文以“我的村庄”为题描述了自己家乡的风景.介绍了村庄的房屋、森林、河流及大山,使人看了这篇作文后的确感觉到“我的村庄”的漂亮.小伴侣们在写作时,可认真想一下自己的村庄或所在城市的特点,尽量使用本单元学过的单词或短语进行叙 述.学校英语五年级下册各单元作文范例及点评My weekendThereare two days on the weekend,

8、 Saturdayand Sunday. OnSaturday,I often go to my dancing class in the morning and do my homework in the afternoon, andIoftenhelpmy mother do somecleaning.OnSunday, Ialways visitmy grandparents in the morning and do some reading in the afternoon. After dinner, I often watchTV with my parents. At that

9、 time, we can talk with each other and say something happily. We often have a good time.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是依据时间次序记叙周末的活动,记叙了周六和周日的上午和下午分别做 了哪些活动及对活动的感受.即：周六上午：舞蹈课下午：做作业和帮妈妈做清洁周 日上午：探望祖父母下午：阅读晚上：看电视,与父母沟通感受：兴奋和开心.我 们仍可以选取周六和周日中的几个比较主要的活动来写,先说明什么时间在什么的方由什么人做了什么事,有什么感受.再依据活动次序把活动内容写清晰,最终抒发一下对这次 活动或这个周末的感想.时

10、态：这篇短文我们可以用三种时态来写:a. 一般过去时（主要描述你上个周末是怎样度过的） ;b. 一般现在时（主要描述你常常怎样度过周末）;c. 一般将来时（主要描述你要怎样过周末）.这里我们来表述平常是如何过周末的,所以采纳一般现在时来写.留意：活动的相关表达方法可采纳旧学问,eg. （例）起床 get up,和新学问, eg. Climbmountains 去爬山中的 un 很简洁错写成 nu.仍要留意不要显现病句, eg. “ I oftenwatch TV with my parents.”不要写成“I often with my parents watch TV .” 词量上掌握在 5

11、0 80之间.My SeasonsWe have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in eachseason.Inspring,theweather iscooland windy,Ican flykiteswhen its windy. And Ican go hikingwithmy familywhen its sunny and cool.Ilikehiking.Summer is hot in the north of China, but its not long time. I often go s

12、wimming. Itcan make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watchthe leaves fall. Winter comes, its often snowy in winter in my hometown. Whenit snows, everything is white. We can play with snow

13、and make a snowman, skateand ski.And winterismy favouriteseason,because of theSpringFestival.Ilove seasons. I love the nature.【要领点评】写法：这篇短文是描述“我的四季”,在写法上,是依据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的,先讲明每个季节的特点,之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动.同时讲一些自己的真实感受,最终阐述自己最宠爱的季节.在实际的写作的时候我们仍可以先写出自己宠爱的季节及主要的活动内容,之后再去讲其他几个季节,仍可以多讲解一下的域的季节特点和大自然

14、中的其他景色,如：秋天的田的里一片金黄, 农夫在收割等等,这样写出来的四季更贴近实际.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 2 页,共 8 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -读书之法 ,在循序而渐进 ,熟读而精思时态：这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”,是比较惯常的一些行为,所以我们最好采纳一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法.即：在什么季节,天气如何,我们可以做什么.留意：在写作内容上, 不行以像以往的

15、内容那么简洁,由于有四个季节, 所以要写明季节,季节天气,季节性活动,活动的人,活动的感受等,要求句子次序要正确,在写作中仍要留意关联词的使用,如用了“由于”,就不能用“所以”,二者不行以同时显现.词量要掌握在 80 个词以内.My familyThereare fivepeopleinmyfamily.They are my grandma, grandpa,dad,mom and I. Look. Grandma is watching TV. Grandpa is reading a book. Dad is writingan e-mail. Mom is cooking dinner

16、. I am doing my homework. I love my family.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作介绍了自己家的家庭成员,以及此刻他们正在干什么,表达了自己对家人的感情.时态：由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时态,所以建议采纳现在进行时态.句型：主语 +be+动词的现在分词.留意：本单元的重点是现在进行时态,留意在写句子时要保持时态的完整性,即系动词和动词的 ing 缺一不行.A Field TripIt is a nice day. Our classwill have a field trip today. The classmates are very excited.Look

17、. Here we are. Therere a lot of activities to do. Amy is watching insects.Peter is collecting leaves. They want to write a report. Mandy is catching butterflies in the woods. Tim and Bob are playing chess. Some of the classmatesarehavinga picnic.There isa lotof deliciousfoodtoeat.Oh, who s thatovert

18、here. It s Miss White. What is she doing. She is taking photos. We had a very good time. I ll never forget this field trip.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是依据郊游时的画面来描述的,记叙了同学们分别在郊游中做了哪些活动及郊游的感受.时态：这篇文章可以用一般过去时和现在进行时来写.由于本单元主要讲的是现在进行时,所以,这里我们采纳现在进行时比较合适.句型： . is/are doing sth. She /He is doing sth. They re doing sth.留意

19、：活动的相关表述法采纳新旧学问相结合去写.留意时态的转换、描写感受时用一般现在时.PEP学校英语六年级上册各单元作文范例及点评Li YingS HobbyLi Ying likes English very much. She works hard at it. She reads English every morning. She likes speaking English. She often listens to the radio. She watches TV only on Saturday evening.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选 -

20、 - - - - - - - - -第 3 页,共 8 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -读书之法 ,在循序而渐进 ,熟读而精思Does she likedancing.No, she doesn t.But she likesdrawingand singing.Her parentsloveher.And allthe teachersand her friendslikeher,too.She says her hobbies make her happy.【

21、要领点评】这一篇写爱好的文章 , 小作者的写作思路很值得我们学习, 他没有具体写到刘莹的某一种爱好 , 而是从学习到课余的多种爱好入手, 对刘莹的各种爱好进行了粗线条的勾画. 从“爱好”这个角度来看刘莹的话,我们会觉得这个形象很饱满.小伴侣们写这种“叙事写人”作文时,可以从两个角度下手：一是具体的描画.二是和上面小伴侣一样,粗线条的勾画,二者各有所长,另处在行文中使用一些问句,使用一些转述的话,可以使作文更有灵气,防止了平铺直叙的缺点.比如上文的“ Doesshe like dancing. No, she doesn t. ”和“ she says her hobbies make her

22、happy. ”就是非常不错的句子,使读者眼前为之一亮.Don t be against the traffic rulesI go to school from Monday to Friday .I go to school by bike at 7:30 inthe morning .I must crosstwo busy roads .If the traffic light is red oryellow,I know I cant cross the road ,so I wait.If the light turns green, I know it means“Go”, an

23、d then I walk across the road .Ialways rideon the rightsideof the road .Iamnever againstthe traffic rules.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“不要违反交通规章”,小作者没有说一些空话,而是从自己的经受写起,表达自己以什么方式去上学,在上学的路上是怎么做的,很形象.小伴侣们在作文时留意不要图大,那样很简洁使文章显得空洞,而要写自己身边熟识的事情.要留意行文中字母的大小写、句子的标点符号等.I Love My FamilyHere is a photo lfmy family. These are

24、fourpeoplein my family. Theyare my father, my mother, my brother and I.My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital far away. He goes to workby subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy. He

25、ismy brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. He s now in Beijing.He goes there by plane. I love my family.【要领点评】一个平凡的题材,一篇生动的作文.这样的命题,我们可能面对几次,甚至几十次了.但这位小伴侣的笔端很是敏捷,了了数言,让一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上,很值得我们去摸索,我们能做到吗？小伴侣的这篇作文除了语言美丽之外,在结构上也有闪光之处.先总说,将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍,后分说,把家人的工作、上班方式,爱好一一细说.最终以一句话进行概括,起到点题的作

26、用.我们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴了？可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 4 页,共 8 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -读书之法 ,在循序而渐进 ,熟读而精思How to get to the science museumWe are going to the science museum tomorrow. There is an old thing show in the M

27、useum. Do you know how we can get to the science museum.The science museum is next to the Peoples Park. Its isn t far fromourschool.So we can go thereon foot.Walkstraighttothewest from ourschool, next turn left at the post office and walk for about 5 minutes, then turn rightat traffic lights. You ca

28、n find the People s Park on the right . Walk straight,and you ll see the science museum.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“怎样去科学博物馆”.怎样才算是一篇好作文了？通过你的表达,能让别人很简洁找到博物馆, 这应是最基本的要求. 小作者在文中告知我们什么了？ 第一他写了去博物馆的位置,最终浓墨重彩,指明从学校去博物馆的具体路线,这条路线 够清晰吧；小伴侣们在写这类作文的时候,总有些无从下手的感觉,不知从何说起.其实介绍路线,无非就是告知他人某段路的起点和终点,仍有就是如何从起点走到终点.要给他人说清晰,你自己第

29、一得清晰,然后再通过自己的表达,将路线清清晰楚得出现出来.肯定要留意行文中一些关键的的方,如在哪儿转弯,向哪儿转,经过哪些重要的交通标志或惹眼的标志建筑等.这样,你就能说清,别人也能弄明白.Let s have a nice dayIt s Sunday tomorrow .I mgoingto the bookstorewithmy friendstomorrow morning .We are going to look for some good books .We all like reading books .Weare going to eat our lunch at the r

30、estaurant. I like chicken, beef andvegetables .After lunch, we are going to the Summer Palace by bus. We are going to play near the Kunming Lake. Maybe we are going to row a boat on the lake .Wow, that will be relaxing. We are coming back at 5pm.【要领点评】怎样才称得上是“美好的一天”？有两点不能遗忘,一是支配得充实,二是支配得有意义.这两点小作者无疑

31、都想到了,上午去书店看书买书,中午在饭店吃饭,下午去颐和园玩耍、划船,丰富多彩；文章以时间为线索,表达清晰,文笔也很美丽.小伴侣们在写这种叙事的文章时,要尽量给读者交代好时间、的点、人物和活动等,使文章有血有肉.要看好是写过去发生的事情,仍是现在正在做的事情,或方案、准备要做的事情,以挑选适当的句型.假如是写将来的事情,那么就要留意在表述时多用“ begoingto+ 动词原形”这种句型.仍有一点也很重要,那就是故事的线索要交代好,让读者在阅读时对整个过程一目了然.PEP学校英语六年级下册各单元作文范例及点评 My friend and IIhave a good friendatschool

32、.His nameisJack.Jack is12 yearsoldnow.I m 11. He s older than me. He s 150 cm tall. Im 148 cm. He s taller and stronger. He s 43 kg and Im 41 kg. He s heavier. Our favourite colours are white and blue. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选 -

33、 - - - - - - - - -第 5 页,共 8 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料word 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -读书之法 ,在循序而渐进 ,熟读而精思play ping pong. On Sundays, we play basketball. Hes good at basketball. But I do better at football. We laugh and play together. How happy we are.【要领点评】写法：这篇作文的题目是“我的伴侣和我”

34、.既然写作范畴是两个人物,就要笔墨匀称,两者缺一不行.不能只描写伴侣,也不能只表达我.这无形中增加了写作的难度.解决这个难点的关键是：找出两个人几方面的异同.可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方面列举出每个人的具体实际情形,再进行比较,通过比较突出每个人物的特点.这样就把人物活敏捷现的呈现给读者了.时态：像此类题目的作文,运用一般现在时即可.句型：由于涉及两个人的比较,不要遗忘使用比较级句型：A+be+比较级 +than+B.留意：在列举两个人的“体貌、喜好”等方面情形时,应一边列举,一边比较.不要一味指出不同, 仍要列举相同之处. 两人能成为伴侣, 肯定有共同语言和喜好, 共性不容

35、忽视.在表达喜好时,不同的句型应交叉运用,防止枯燥的重复.例“Our favourite coloursare”,“ We likebest ”,“ We both like,too ”,为突出不同时间做不同运动,用“ OnSaturdays”,“ On Sundays”,形成鲜明对比.常使用并列连词and 和转折连词 but,使文章读起来更流畅.结尾以Howhappy we are. 突出了两人从友情中得到的欢乐；My WeekendI had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, I washed his clothes and went to a pa

36、rk. I did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sundaymorning,I cleanedmyroom and visitedmygrandparents.I playedfootballand watchTV on Sunday afternoon. I was too tired but I was very happy.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按时间次序记叙了我的周末活动.时态：这篇文章可以用三种时态来写,由于本单元主要讲的是一般过去时态,所以我们采纳一般过去时态比较合适.句型：主语 +动词过去式

37、 +过去时间.留意：活动的相关表达法采纳新旧学问结合的方法,但要留意动词过去式的拼写.My HolidayIwent toBeijingby planeon my holiday.Every day I had fun withmy parents.We went to the Nature Park. We saw elephants. We went swimming. We ate lots of deliciousfood.We alsotook manybeautifulpictures.Ina word,I enjoymyholiday.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是依据的点的次序记

38、叙假期里的活动,记叙了假期里去北京做了哪些活动以及对活动的感受.时态：这篇文章可采纳两种时态来写.由于本单元主要表达的是一般过去时的用法,所以这里大部分我们采纳一般过去时比较合适.句型：主语 +动词过去式 +其他主语+will+动词原形 +其他留意：活动的相关表达法可采纳旧学问和新学问相结合去写,但要留意动词过去式的变化规章.例： eat的过去式为 ate ,为不规章变化.可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_学习资料 名师精选 - - - - - - - - - -第 6 页,共 8 页 - - - - - - - - - -可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_资料wo

39、rd 精心总结归纳 - - - - - - - - - - - -读书之法 ,在循序而渐进 ,熟读而精思1、依据给出的材料,写一写Mike 这个周末的活动方案.SaturdaySunday可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_read a magazine go to the zoobuy a book learn Kungfuwatch TV可编辑资料 - - - 欢迎下载精品_精品资料_Mike isa student.He ismy good friend.He isbusy at theweekend. He isgoing to read a magazine this S

40、aturday morning. He is going to go to the zoo thisSaturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is goingtolearnKungfu thisSunday afternoon.He isgoingto watch TV thisSunday evening.2,我的好伴侣My good friendI have a good friend. Her name is Ann. Her Chinese name is Wang Xiaolan. Sh

41、e is from England. She is in Beijing now. She is in Yuying PrimarySchool. She is in Class Four, Grade Six. She is twelve. She has blue eyes and yellow hair. Her father is a doctor and her mother is a nurse. Her brother is five years old. She likes dancing, singing and watching.TV She is friendly and

42、 she likes to help others. What a good girl.3、依据提示,从表格中猎取信息写一篇不少于60 个单词的小作文,要求提示的内容要全部表达在作文中.My FriendsI have two good friends. They re Zhang Ping and Jim. Zhang Ping is 12. Jim is three years older than her. He s 15. Jim is heavier than Zhang Ping. He s 60 kilograms. Jim is talle than her. He s 162

43、cma. nZgh Ping is a Chinese girl. She lives in Xinhui. Jim is a Canadianboy. He lives in Guangzhou now. Zhang Ping likes red. Her favorite sport is badminton. Jim likes blue. His favorite sport is swimming. I like them very much.4、描写你的周末生活,留意用一般现在时.My WeekendI have happy weekend.On Saturday morning

44、I always have English CLASses at school. I study hard in the CLASsroom. In the afternoon I often play computer games. On Sunday morning I often draw pictures. Sometimes I visit my grandmother and grandfather. Sometimes I listen to music. On Sunday afternoon I often do housework or go shopping.So I l

45、ove weekends.5 写一个你最宠爱的人,请对他/ 她进行肯定的外貌描写.My Favorite PeopleWhoisyour favoritepeople. Myfavoritepeople ismymother . She isbeautiful. She is38 years old. She istall and thin. She hasbig eyes andlong hair. She likes cooking. She cooks good mealsfor us everyday. And she always does all the housework. She looks after my father and me. I love my mother very much.6、请描写一下你的房间,留意要使用“there be”句型.My BedroomI have a nice and small bedroom. There is a beautiful bed and two small chair.Ialsohave a bigand tallclosetbecause Ihave many clothes.There isa bigdesk可编辑资