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1、Stt OI年高考英语精选考点专项突国居间瓯熨体裁命题形式写作主题2022新高考I卷应用文邀请信写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈II卷应用文邀请信写邮件邀请外教进行一次访谈全国卷乙卷说明文投稿利用填表调查结果给报社投稿甲卷应用文投稿以世界海洋日为主题向英文征文比赛投稿2021新高考I卷应用文投稿校刊youth庆祝十周年，向校刊表达自己经历，并送上 祝福II卷应用文投稿校刊youth庆祝十周年，向校刊表达自己经历，并送上 祝福全国卷乙卷应用文发言稿以be smart online learners,为主题写一篇发言稿参赛甲卷应用文征求建议征求外国朋友建议，哪些中国传统文化更吸引外国友人2020全国卷I

2、卷应用文投稿写一篇以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题投稿参赛II卷应用文日记写一篇英文短文介绍上周末采摘活动III卷应用文求助信给外教写一封信，请帮助指导劝慰信用于向人表达抚慰、关切、问候之意，要根据不同的对象、不同的情况，表达真挚的慰问，要能够真正打动人心，以此到达劝慰的目的。其结构一般如下：、得知困难，表示遗憾与关心、提出合理的建议、祝愿对方情况能够改善素材精粹【高分句型】首段：知悉困境，表示同情1. Im sorry to know that you are having a hard/tough time at the moment. skills.Hope my suggestions w

3、ill be helpful for you.Yours,Matt【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给一位名叫王宁的同学写封信，对他的苦恼表示抚慰并提出建议。【详解】L词汇积累情绪：mood一emotion遭遇：encounter一meet with建议：suggestadvise参力口 ： take part in=participate in2 .句式拓展同义句转换原句： Therefore, you can have a good command of their social customs and make more friends.拓展句：Therefore, you

4、 can have a good command of their social customs, thus making more friends.【点睛】高分句型 1 In the situation, I suggest that you should take part in various after-class clubs for communicating with more foreign classmates.（运用 了 that 引导的宾语从句）高分句型 2 Besides, its a good option to make yourself immersed into

5、local cultural activities by improving your language skills.（运用了过去分词作宾语补足语）六、（2022湖南长沙一中模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Peter来信说他对中国汉字感兴趣，但是在学习时遇到了困难，比方很多 汉字不知如何书写，不理解意思等，希望得到你的帮助。请你给他回信，内容包括：1 .表示理解并给予抚慰；.提出建议。注意：1 .词数数左右;2 .可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Peter,Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Peter,Im more than glad to kn

6、ow that you are interested in Chinese characters. It*s never easy to learn the pronunciation and meanings of Chinese characters. Even native Chinese speakers may find it hard to learn them well, so you dont have to feel upset.Here are some useful tips for you. First, turn to the Internet for help wh

7、en you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters. Second, you can learn from Chinese people around and Im always here to help. But the most important thing is to keep on learning and reading. You are sure to make progress.Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考

8、生给美国朋友Peter写封回信，给他关于学习中国汉字困难的建议。【详解】第一步：审题体裁：应用文时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时。结构：总分法 总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。要求：1 .表示理解并给予抚慰；.提出建议。第二步：列提纲（重点词组）more than; be glad to; be interested in; be easy to; have to; turn to sb. for help; keep on doing; be sure to; make progress第三步：连词成句Im more than glad to kno

9、w that you are interested in Chinese characters.1. Its never easy to learn the pronunciation and meanings of Chinese characters.2. First, turn to the Internet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters.3. But the most important thing is to keep on lemm

10、ing and reading.4. You are sure to make progress.根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）.表文章结构顺序：First, Second1 .表转折比照关系：but.表因果关系：So连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。【点睛】高分句型 1 Tm more than glad to know that you are interested in Chinese characters,这句话运用 了 宾语从句。高分句型 2 First, turn to the Inte

11、rnet for help when you have a problem, where you can learn how to read and write the characters.这句话运用了关系副词where引导的非限制性定语从句。高分句型 3 But the most important thing is to keep on learning and reading.这句话运用了不定式作表语。七、（2022广东模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter给你发邮件说他即将参加英国高考（A-level）,但现在感到紧张，不 知如何办。请给他回复邮件，内容包括：1.以具体事例抚

12、慰对方；2.提出建议。注意：1 .词数80左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Dear Peter,Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua 【答案】One possible version:Dea】 Peter,Receiving your e-mail and learning you,re worried about your A-level, Im writing back immediately.Actually, I fully understand you because I had the same experience as you. I once had

13、to participate in an important exam, but I was so stressed that I almost gave it up. However, my English teacher comforted me, saying that if I tried every effort, everything would go on well. Hearing this, I calmed myself down and successfully passed the exam.So rd advise you to ask your teachers f

14、or help. Theyre experienced and skilled in dealing with problems. Why not have a try?Best wishes !YoursLi Hua 【解析】 【分析】本篇书面表达属于普通书信，要求考生给英国朋友Peter回信，帮助他缓解考前压力并提出一些建议。【详解】.词汇积累收至getreceive马上，立亥U： at once一immediately参与：take part in一participate in处理：handledeal with1 .句式拓展原句：So rd advise you to ask your

15、 teachers fbr help. Theyre experienced and skilled in dealing with problems. 拓展句：So rd advise you to ask your teachers fbr help because theyre experienced and skilled in dealing with problems.【点睛】高分句型 1 Receiving your e-mail and learning youre worried about your A-level, Im writing back immediately.

16、 （现在分词短语作状语）高分句型 2 I once had to participate in an important exam, but I was so stressed that I almost gave it up. （that 结 构引导的结果状语从句）八、（2022四川绵阳中学三模）假定你是李华，你班的交换生Mike因在“用英语讲中国故事”比赛中表现欠佳而心情低落。请你给他写 一封电子邮件，内容包括：1 .进行抚慰；.分析原因；2 .提出建议。注意：1 .词数100左右；.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Mike,Best wishes!Yours,Li Hua【答案

17、】One possible version:Dear Mike,Im sorry to hear that you didnt perform well in the contest of Telling Chinese Stories in English and that youre feeling down. Actually, as a foreigner, youve tried your best.Anyhow, you shouldnt lose heart. Instead, you should analyze the cause of your failure. As I

18、can see, you werent well prepared for it as you didnt understand the story well and lacked practice in storytelling.I think you should spend more time reading more Chinese stories and practise telling Chinese stories with me or your other Chinese friends, Fm sure you will make great progress.Best wi

19、shes!Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。交换生Mike因在“用英语讲中国故事”比赛中表现欠佳而心情低落，要求给他写 一封电子邮件表示抚慰，帮助分析原因并提出建议。【详解】词汇积累感到沮丧：feel down 一色el depressed尽力：try ones best一 do ones best失去信心：lose confidence 一lose heart原因：reason 一 cause2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句：Instead, you should analyze the cause of your failure.拓展句：Instead, yo

20、u should analyze the cause which leads to your failure.【点睛】高分句型 1 Im sorry to hear that you didnt perform well in the contest of Telling Chinese Stories in Englishnand that youre feeling down.（运用了 that引导的2个并列的宾语从句）高分句型 2 As I can see, you werent well prepared for it as you didnt understand the story

21、 well and lackedpractice in storytelling.（运用了 as引导的原因状语从句）九、（2022重庆市涪陵高级中学校模拟预测）假定你是李华，你的外国笔友Joe的家乡遭遇了特大洪涝灾害，他的家受损严重，他本人也受伤了。请 你给他写一封信，要点包括：1 .抚慰和鼓励；.为他提供帮助。注意：1.词数80左右；.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Joe,Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Joe,Fm so sad to know that a heavy flood struck your hometown the other day

22、. Tm writing to offer my genuine concern and sincere backup.I know that your hometown has been badly destroyed and you are physically hurt and mentally affected as well. I do feel bad about this and I hope you can get recovered soon. Meanwhile, never lose heart and dont forget I am by your side thou

23、gh I can not fly there to fight against the disaster alongside you. I have been raising money and collecting useful items for you, which will be sent to you as soon as possible.Wish you all the best. And feel free to contact me if you need any more help.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生

24、以李华的身份给家乡遭遇了特大洪涝灾害，家受损严重，本人也受伤 的外国笔友Joe写一封信。【详解】.词汇积累给予：o他I一give/provide破坏：destroydamage难过的：sad/badsorrowful有用的：useful-helpfUl1 .句式拓展并列句变复合句原句：I know that your hometown has been badly destroyed and you are physically hurt and mentally affected as well.拓展句：I know that you are physically hurt and ment

25、ally affected because your hometown has been badly destroyed.【点睛】高分句型 1 Im so sad to know that a heavy flood struck your hometown the other day.（运用 了 so.that 引导的结 果状语从句）高分句型 2 Meanwhile, never lose heart and don*t forget I am by your side though I can not fly there to fightagainst the disaster along

26、side you.（运用 了 though 引导的让步状语从句）十、（2022陕西长安一中模拟预测）假定你是高三学生李华，受西安疫情形势影响，你的留学生朋友Amy滞留西安不能回国，请你给此时 处于焦虑中的他写一封英文慰问信。要点如下：1 .对其表示关心和同情。2 .对其表示抚慰并提供帮助。3 .表达愿望和祝福。注意： 词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：新冠疫情 epidemic/novel CoronavirusDear Amy,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Amy,Knowing that you are stuck in Xian and cant

27、return home because of the severe epidemic, I am writing to convey my sincere care for you.Thinking about your present situation, I have delivered some daily necessities for you to help you pull through the lockdown. You are supposed to remain calm and stay optimistic. Even though Xian is in bad con

28、dition due to the spreading novel Coronavirus, a large number of people are making every bit of their effort to fight the virus. Besides, our online class will be held from next Monday, so it would be a great idea if you could join the online classes with us. Feel free to contact me, if you need any

29、 help.With the joint effort of all the people, Tm sure the virus will be in control and our life will return to normal soon.Yours,Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是高三学生李华，受西安疫情形势影响，你的留学生朋友Amy滞留西安不能回国，请你给此时处于焦虑中的他写一封英文慰问信。【详解】.词汇积累因为：because of/due toThanks to度过：pull through一get through积极的：optimistic一p

30、ositive此外：besides一in addition1 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： Thinking about your present situation, I have delivered some daily necessities for you to help you pull through the lockdown.拓展句： After I thought about your present situation, I have delivered some daily necessities for you to help you pull through the

31、lockdown.【点睛】高分句型 1 Knowing that you are stuck in Xian and cant return home because of the severe epidemic, I am writing to convey my sincere care for you.（运用 了现在分词作状语）高分句型 2 Besides, our online class will be held from next Monday, so it would be a great idea if you could join the online classes wit

32、h us.（运用了 if引导条件状语从句）十一、（2022安徽省舒城中学模拟预测）你刚刚得知你的英国笔友Jim因为密切接触奥密克戎感染者需隔离2周，情绪低落。请你给他写一封 电子邮件，要点如下：1 .表示抚慰。2 .向其提供建议。注意：1.词数100左右：3 .可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：奥密克戎。micron感染infection 隔离quarantineDear Jim,获悉你目前身处困境，我深表遗憾。2. Im sorry to hear about your difficulties in.I know it can be really tough at times.听说

33、你在方面遇到困难我很难过。我知道，这件事有时候真的很难。3. On behalf of.,T would like to express our sincere concern and care for you.我谨代表，对表示诚挚的关心和关怀。主体局部：表示理解与同情，给予抚慰和劝导As we all know, failure is the mother of success.I do hope you wont lose heart and will get ready to try again.众所周知，失败是成功之母。我真希望你不要灰心，做好准备再试一次。1. You shouldn

34、t/are not supposed to do sth.你不应该做某事。2. Be brave/Pull yourself together.You will surely overcome the difficulty.勇敢一些/振作起来。你一定能克服困难。尾段：表达期望、祝愿1.1 hope things will get better soon.希望事情会很快好起来。2. Pm sure you will get over your difficulties in a short while, 我相信你很快就会克服困难。佳作共赏Dear Amy,I received your lett

35、er this afternoon and Im sorry to hear of your illness, which makes you so upset. Since you have asked for leave, youd better take a good break from your heavy school work.Actually, there is no need to worry about your school work.Im sure it wont take you long to recover with the proper treatment gi

36、ven by the doctors.You wont fall behind other students too much because you are so smart in learning and I will do my best to help you.Hope that you will get well soon.Best wishes to you !Yours,Li Hua*注：本书“佳作共赏”栏目中画波浪线的局部可作模板背诵。Hope my suggestions will be of help for you.Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,I a

37、m sorry to know that you are very distressed, for you need to be quarantined for two weeks because of the epidemic. Honestly speaking, it is not rare during the epidemic period, but we should make efforts to adapt to the change because we may suffer the epidemic for a long time. My advice is as foll

38、ows.To start with, you should devote your time to your study instead of killing time in playing virtual games or something useless. Progress in study will improve your mood. Equally importantly, you should develop a good habit of living. After all, early to bed and early to rise makes a person healt

39、hy, wealthy and wise. If possible, youd better have a good rest, which is of great benefit to your health.Hope my suggestions will be of help for you.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【导语】本篇书面表达属于劝慰信。英国笔友Jim因为密切接触奥密克戎感染者需隔离2周，情绪低落。要求考生 给其写信表示抚慰。【详解】.词汇积累失落的：down distressed首先：at first 一 to start with而不是：rather than 一

40、instead of 益处：beneficial 一 of benefit.句式拓展合并简单句原句： To start with, you should devote your time to your study instead of killing time in playing virtual games or something useless. Progress in study will improve your mood.拓展句：To start with, you should devote your time to your study instead of killing

41、time in playing virtual games or something useless because progress in study will improve your mood.【点睛】高分句型 1 I am sorry to know that you are very distressed, for you need to be quarantined for two weeks because of the epidemic.（运用 了 that 引导的宾语从句）【高分句型 2 If possible, youd better have a good rest, w

42、hich is of great benefit to your health.（运用 了 which 引导的非限制性定语从句）十二、（2022陕西西北工业大学附属中学模拟预测）假定你是高三学生李华，因西安疫情形势严峻，你的留学生朋友Amy滞留西安不能回国，请你给此时 处于焦虑和郁闷中的他写一封英文慰问信。要点如下：1 .对其表示关心和同情。2 .对其表示抚慰并提供帮助。3 .表达愿望和祝福。注意：L词数150左右；2,可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Amy,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Amy,Knowing that you are stuck in Xian and

43、 cant return home because of the severe epidemic, I am writing to convey my sincere pity and care for you.Thinking about your present situation, I have delivered some daily necessities for you to help you pull through the lockdown. You are supposed to remain calm and stay optimistic. Even though Xia

44、n is in bad condition due to the spreading novel Coronavirus, a large number of people are making every bit of their effort to fight the virus. Besides, our online class will be held from next Monday, so it would be a great idea if you could join the online classes with us. Feel free to contact me,

45、if you need any help.With the joint effort of all the Chinese, Im sure the virus will be in control and our life will return to normal soon.Yours,Li Hua 【解析】 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给因为疫情滞留西安的留学生朋友Amy写一封英文慰问信。【详解】.词汇积累表达：conveyexpress由于：due to 一because of/as a result of止匕夕卜：besideswhat,s more/moreover尽力

46、： make every bit of ones effort to do sth.一 spare no efforts to do sth.1 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句： You are supposed to remain calm and stay optimistic.拓展句：It is vital that you should remain calm and stay optimistic.【点睛】高分句型 1 Knowing that you are stuck in Xian and cant return home because of the severe epidem

47、ic, I am writing to convey my sincere pity and care for you.（运用 了 that 弓I 导的宾语从句）高分句型 2 Even though Xian is in bad condition due to the spreading novel Coronavirus, a large number of people are making every bit of their effort to fight the virus.（运用 了 even though 弓| 导的让步状语从句）一、（2022浙江模拟预测）假定你是李华，你校交换生Paul最近因为疫情在家上网课，感觉学习效果不理想，写信询问你如何改善。请你给他写封邮件，内容包括：1 .给予抚慰；.提供建议；2 .表达愿望。注意：L词数80左右.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Paul,Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Paul,Sorry to know that you are being troubled when taking online classes. Actu