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1、现在越来越多的人成为低头族(People who cant help checking their phones all day are known as phubbers. Phubbing trends to involve not only the young people, but also the elderly.), 如何弓I 导低头族抬头?你们班举行了以“拒为低头族”为主题的班会。假设你是学生李华,请为班 会写一篇100词左右的发言稿。要点如下:1 .你周围有低头族吗?他们成为“低头族”的原因。2 .成为“低头族”给学习和生活带来的影响。3 .就如何“拒为低头族”提一些建议。【优
2、秀总分值范文】Nowadays, we can see many people are watching their mobile phones in subway, restaurants, elevators, roads and so on. There is no denying that people who like mobile phones are concerned about its attractive functions. Phubbers cant stop sending messages, surfing the Internet, listening to mu
3、sic and even taking photos by using the mobile phone. Moreover, some people have less time to relax themselves. They make use of the time when they are on the way to school or other places to play mobile games.However, phubbing disturbs not only our study but also our life. On the one hand, phubbers
4、 waste lots of time playing cell phone games and sending messages, particularly in class. Other people also complain they are disturbed when phones ring in classrooms. On the other hand, it can lead to health problems. For instance, using a mobile phone on the sofa can cause back and neck pain.As fa
5、r as I am concerned, it is high time that we put aside the phone and raised our heads up. Do cherish everything around us and appreciate the scenery ahead of us.Whats more, we should do more exercises and take part in real-life activities. In a word, only when we use the phone reasonably, can we rea
6、lize the happiness of life.最近,某科技公司推出一款新型5G手机(Smart Mobile Phone 9),请你为该款手机写一篇 英语广告,内容包括:1 .手机的功能;2 .手机的特点;【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一篇短文;假定你是李华,你校英文周刊本周讨论的话题是 高中生在学校该不该用智能手机”。请你写篇短文,说明你的观点。请从以下两个观点中选 择一个:1.高中生应该在学校使用智能手机;2.高中生不应该在学校使用智能手机。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:smartphones (智能手机),spend too much time on (花费了
7、太多时间),outdoor activities (户夕卜活动),get addicted to (上瘾),have a bad effect on (不利影响),play an important role in (扮演重要角色)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。【点睛】范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式, 如 I think it is wrong for us students to use
8、smartphones at school.运用 了 宾语从句。we may get addicted to the phone so that it has a bad effect on our study.运用 了 so that 弓| 导结果状语从句; It is widely known that smartphones play an important role in our daily life.运用了主语从句。 with the development of the Internet, we can obtain a wider knowledge more effectiv
9、ely.运用了 with结构。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思 路清晰、层次清楚,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。3 .适用人群。注意:1 .写作词数应为80左右;2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Smart life from Smart Mobile Phone 9【答 案】Smart life from Smart Mobile Phone 9Smart Mobile Phone 9 will make your life smarter in an all-round way!Besides the general functions as
10、a handset, it also serves as a laptop, with which you can surf the Internet wherever you are by using the 5G. It is so intelligent that it is ideal for office workers who are always on the go.Due to its small size and being light in weight, it is very convenient to carry. What/s more, it is a high-q
11、uality product sold at a reasonable price.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生为一款新型5G手机写一篇英语广告,介绍手机的功能、 特点和适用人群。【详解】1 .词汇积累手机: mobile phone玲handset担任:work asfserve as完美的:perfect玲ideal 除了: in addition to= besides2 .句式拓展简单句变复合句原句:Due to its small size and being light in weight, it is very convenient to carry.拓展句:
12、It is very convenient to carry because it has small size and is light in weight.【点睛】高分句型 1 Besides the general functions as a handset, it also serves as a laptop, with which you can surf the Internet wherever you are by using the 5G.(运用了 介词+关系代词”结构非限 制性定语从句)高分句型 2 It is so intelligent that it is ide
13、al for office workers who are always on the go.(运用 了结果状语从句)随着手机及其他电子设备的普及,低头族到处可见,大街上,公交车上,以年轻人为 主,针对这一问题,请写一篇建议书,呼吁人们尽量抬起头来注意:1.行文连贯流畅;2.参考词汇:低头族:phubber 3.词数:80词左右【答案】The mobile phone and other electric devices have been part of our life, bringing us much convenience. However; more and more phubbe
14、rs, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around.Obviously, while people are riding on a bus, crossing the street, or lying on the bed, etc., phubbing can be harmful to their physical health, their eyes in particular. Therefore, I call on everyone to pay
15、more attention to this and hold your heads up to enjoy your surroundings.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是提纲类作文,要求写一篇建议书。【详解】第1步:根据提示可知,本文要求写一篇建议书:随着手机及其他电子设备的普及,低头 族到处可见,大街上,公交车上,以年轻人为主,针对这一问题,请写一篇建议书,呼 吁人们尽量抬起头来,时态应为一般现在时。第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如;phubber (低头族),electric devices (电 子设备),convenience (方便),especially (特别是)
16、,everywhere (到处),obviously(明显地) 及harmful (有害的)等。第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰, 保持卷面的整洁美观。本文内容完整,层次清楚,结构紧凑,表达准确。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示 了很高的驾驭英语的能力。【点睛】范文语言地道,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式,高级词汇 有 be part of (成为的一局部),care about (关心),be harmful to (对有害),in particu
17、lar (尤其),call on (号召)以及pay more attention to (关注),而且还使用了非限定性定语从句However; more and more phubbers, especially young people, can be seen everywhere, who never care about what happens around/, 时间状语从句while people are riding on a bus, crossing the street, or lying on the bed, etc., phubbing can be harmful
18、 to their physical health, their eyes in particular., 非谓语动词The mobile phone and other electric devices have been part of our life, bringing us much convenience.及Therefore, I call on everyone to pay more attention to this and hold your heads up to enjoy your surroundings/, 全文没有语法错误, 上 下句转换自然流畅。学会反思、提
19、升自己是中学生必备的素质。信息时代,智能手机的普及对中学生的自控力提 出了挑战。请你写一篇英语短文,内容包括:1 .反思自己使用手机时的问题;2 .提出合理化的改进措施。注意:1 .词数100左右;3 .可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;4 .题目已给出。Learn to Use Mobile Phones Wisely【答案】Learn to Use Mobile Phones WiselyI have to admit that the mobile phone has greatly distracted my attention while I am studying. I tap, s
20、wipe and click too many times a day, sending texts, scrolling on social media and playing games. Upon reflection, I find it gives me nothing but eye ache, blank mind and even phone addiction.I should turn over a new leaf. Firstly, start my morning unplugged. I will place my phone in another room, sp
21、ending quiet moments without it. Ill never pick it up only when I have to look up some task-related information. Secondly, focus on my real life. I intend to set aside enough time to accompany my parents and do sports. What I want is not a wipe-out of phone in my life, but a rational use of this adv
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