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1、第二讲用高级句式增分层级三 /言简意赅的“非谓语”众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之间的关 系显得松散；而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费力。而恰当地运 用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅显得句式多样、句子活泼，而且 读起来结构紧凑、言简意赅。美句输入.动名词作主语、表语、定语和宾语等。Working as a volunteer will give me a good chance to spread Chinese culture.（2019全国卷I总分值作文）做一名志愿者将会给我提供一个传播中国文化的好机会。By learning Engl

2、ish we can broaden our mental horizons and increase our knowledge in various fields.通过学习英语我们能够开阔我们的视野，并增加我们各领域的知识。1 .现在分词作表语、定语、补语和状语等。Knowing that you are fond of classical music, Id like to invite you to participate in a Chinese classical music concert。19全国卷UI总分值作文） 了解到你喜欢古典音乐，我想邀请你参加一个中国古典音乐会。2 .

3、过去分词作表语、定语、补足语和状语等。Aimed at helping us to be aware of the importance of working, an activity themed Working is the most glorious” was held last week.（2019北京卷总分值作文）旨在帮助我们意识到劳动的重要性，上周举办了一次主题为“劳动最光荣”的活 动。3 .不定式作主语、表语、定语、宾语、宾语补足语和状语等。I feel much honored to have the chance to make my voice heard.（2019天津卷

4、总分值 作文）我很荣幸有机会让大家倾听我的声音。I think its a good chance for you to participate in the English Speaking Competition. 我认为参加英语演讲比赛对你来说是一个好机会。佳句输出用所给词的适当形式填空/补全句子1 .A11 the students are welcome to watch （watch） the short film Growing Together to learn （learn）more about the development of our school.（2018-卷 II

5、 总分值作文）.Moreover, with the stadium set （set）up, all the students are accessible to the facilities. （2018 全国卷III总分值作文）2 .Standing （stand）in Shandong Province, Mount Tai has long been a popular tourist attraction, with many Chinese legendary stories attached to it.（2017北京卷总分值作 文）4.1 am writing to tell

6、 you that I cant go to the bookstore with you at our appointed （appoint）time.（全国卷HI总分值作文）5.1 would like to volunteer to help visitors，introduce Chinese paintings，spread Chinese culture, and strengthen world cultural exchanges.（2019全国卷 I 总分值作 文）我想志愿帮助游客，介绍中国绘画，传播中国文化和加强世界文化交流。6.Having a trip there wi

7、ll give you a good understanding of Chinese culture. （2017 北京卷总分值作文）到那里旅行会使你对中国文化有一个很好的了解。7.In order to make our school life colorful and meaningful, our school has decided to organize a sports meeting.为了使我们的校园生活既丰富多彩又有意义，学校决定组织一场运动会。8.Realizing the benefits and importance of this activity, I have a

8、 strong desire to participate in it.意识到本次活动的益处和重要性，我强烈希望参与其中。完美文章（建议信）利用非谓语动词，结合中英文提示补全短文并背诵【题目要求】（2020.石家庄质检）假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Shirley在和同学交友方面有困 难。请你用英语给她写一封信，给出你的建议并写清理由。要求：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【考生作文】Dear Shirley,Fm glad 1 .to receive your收到你的电子邮件）.The problem2. mentioned （mention） in your e-mai

9、l is common among middle school students.Dont worry about it too much.Follow 3.the following advice （以下建议） I give you, and you may get/have your problem 4.settled （settle）.First of alb believe in yourself.The first thing you must do is 5.to smile at your classmates （对你 的同学微笑）.A smile speaks louder a

10、bout your wish 6,to make friends （交朋友）than any words.Your smile will show that you are friendly to them.Next, try 7.talking with a student （和学生交谈）who is as shy as you or who shares the same interest as you.You can find a chance 8.to discuss your studies with a classmate（与你的一个同学讨论你的学习）,or you can als

11、o talk about your hobbies.If anyone is in trouble in life or study, you should be ready to help him or her 9.Having regained your confidence （在恢复你的自信后），you can make as many friends as possible.Yours,Li Hua 常用表达I .首段常用语.Fm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn English well.

12、 我很高兴收到你的来信，问我关于如何学好英语的问题。1 .However, the situation is easy to change if you take my advice.Here are some tipsto help you./Here are a few suggestions to help you.然而如果你采纳我的建议，这 个情形很容易改变，这是给你帮助的一些建议。3.In my personal opinion, it would be wise of you to take the following action.我认为，如果你能采取以下措施，将是明智的。II

13、.中段常用语1.1 suggest we (should) communicate with our friends face to face instead of sending text messages.我建议我们应该与朋友面对面交流而不是发短信。2.When it comes to improving Mandarin, my advice is that you should practice speaking it whenever possible every day.当谈到提高普通话水平时，我的建议是每 天尽可能地多练习说普通话。3.It is strongly recomme

14、nded that the school should give students more free time to take part in sports activities.(有人)强烈建议学校给学生们更多的自由时间参加体育活动。4.1fs wise of you to take more physical exercise, which can lift your spirits.你多参加体育锻炼是明智的，这能振奋你的精神。5.Above all, you need to develop a positive attitude towards your studies and life. 最重要的是，你需要对你的学习和生活持一个积极的态度。III.尾段常用语1.1 sincerely hope you will take my advice into account.我真诚希望你能认真考虑我的建议。2.1 hope you will find these suggestions useful.我希望你能觉得这些建议有用。