高考英语作文写作技巧 书信类写作 道歉信写作得分解析讲义.docx

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1、高考英语复习之作文得分讲【作文书写总纲】高中作文虽大约在100-120词左右，但也需要在书写前安排好文章结构，理清书写思路后再下笔写作，才能保证逻辑清楚，承接自然，首尾呼应。称为“五确定”，一般可以按照以下几步：1、 确定文章体裁。是书信，还是议论文、说明文等。即使是书信，也需要按照不同的书信类别进行分析准备，例如是否要写自我介绍；是否需要寒暄；是否需要时间落款2、 确定文章段落。一般段落在3-5段比较合适，段落太多会有冗余繁杂之感。但有些文章也可以两段，例如通知或者是演讲稿，也可以满足要求。3、 确当各段内容和段落之间的过渡。第一段往往起到引出话题的作用，安排2-3句话较为合适；二段为主要内

2、容，在分层和衔接上要求较高，文章的主要句子主要在这里体现；三段一般为呼应和总结，安排2-3句话，这样的结构较为紧密完整，主次分明，逻辑清楚。4、 确定人称和时态。人称使用一二人称难度较小，时态使用一般现在或者一般过去失分风险会更小，但也需要根据文章的具体要求对应调整。5、 确定提分拔高点。主要是指从句复合句数量和书写位置，特殊句型应用，词组代替单词，谚语使用等。第六讲 道歉信一、 常用单词和句型apologize v.道歉inconvenience.n.不便 弥补我的过失 make up for my fault 因某事向某人道歉 apologize to sb. for sth. / mak

3、e an apology to sb. for sth.向说对不起 say sorry to接受我的道歉 accept my apology为某事原谅某人 forgive sb. for sth并非故意做某事 have no intention to do sth弥补；赔偿 make up for赔偿；偿还 pay for / compensate for给你带来不便 cause you inconvenience给你带来许多麻烦 cause you much trouble更加小心 be more careful犯这样愚蠢的错误 make such a stupid mistake应当受到责

4、备 be to blame承担责任 be responsible for/shoulder /undertake the responsibility难以接受的后果 an unacceptable result/consequence下不为例 never let it happen again 段落安排第一段：自我介绍（如果是下级对上级的类型有必要），表示歉意和道歉的原因第二段：出现差错的原因，同时提出弥补的措施第三段：再次请求原谅，有需要的话表示对活动或个人的祝愿常用句式首段I am writing this letter to express my regretI am writing t

5、o apologize forI am terribly sorry to say thatI regret to inform you that I am unable toI feel guilty for what I havedone for you 中间段过渡句 Now let me explain what happened to me that day.解释原因 The reason is that Therefore,. As a result,.The reason why is thatIts mainly because对错误总结I am afraid what I ha

6、ve done has caused much inconvenience to youI am to blame for this silly mistake.描写弥补的句式In order to remove our misunderstanding,I would like to inviteTo make up for my fault,I willTo compensate for your loss,I decide toI wish you could give me a chance to make up for my faultI hope the settlement fo

7、r this mater can meet your wishes.末段Once again,I am sorry for any inconvenience caused.Please allow me to say sorry againHope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.I want to let you know how regretful I am feeling now.I am sorry that I cant.but trust that you will be able to unders

8、tandI sincerely hope you can forgive me and accept my apology.I sincerely hope you can understand that I offended you unintentionally. 模板举例Dear ,I am sorry that I must apologize for .Im writing to tell you the reason for it. .Im afraid what I have done has caused much inconvenience to you. In order

9、to make up for my fault, I will .Please accept my apology. I do hope you can understand me and excuse me for my carelessness .应用举例假如你是李华，你和在上海上学的英国朋友Tom约好下周末去北京旅游，但你因故不能赴约。请根据以下要点用英语给他写一封邮件：1、 表示歉意2、 解释原因3、 另约时间注意：100词左右，可以适当添加细节，使文章更加完整。Dear Tom,Im very sorry that I cant go on a trip to Beijing wit

10、h you next weekend, which I have promised you. Im writing to tell you the reason for it.(topic)Just now, my cousin, Li Ming, who went abroad for further education last year, informed me that he would return the next Saturday morning. He asked me to pick him up at the airport with his parents. As you

11、 know, we havent seen each other for about a year, so Ill have to help him in the first place.I really hope that you can accept my apologies and understand me. I would appreciate it if you allow me to fix another time to show you around some places of interest in Beijing.Wish you have a good time th

12、is weekend!Yours,LiHua假如你是王涛， 由于母亲生病住院,你要照顾她，所以你无法参加美国朋友 Tom 本周 六下午的生曰聚会。你已寄出生日礼物（张杰的最新 CD） 。请你写一封电子邮件，内容 如下： 1 表达歉意 2 说明原因 3 送上祝福 注意： 1.词数为 100 字左右。 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Dear Tom,How is everything going with you?Im terribly sorry that Im not able to go to your birthday party this Saturday afternoon. Im

13、 in Beijing now because my mother is seriously ill and will have an operation here. She is in bad need of my care these days, so Im staying here to take care of her in the hospital.I wish you a happy birthday and hope everything will go well with the party. By the way, I have sent you the latest CD of Zhang Jie. I hope youll like this birthday present.Im looking forward to seeing you soon.Yours,Wang Tao学科网（北京）股份有限公司