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1、Writing TrainingWriting Training假如你是李华假如你是李华,你的美国朋友你的美国朋友Alice听说中国的中小学正在实施素质听说中国的中小学正在实施素质教育教育,来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写封回信，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写封回信，谈一谈谈一谈“素质教育素质教育”实施后你们学校生活发生的变化。实施后你们学校生活发生的变化。应试教育应试教育素质教育素质教育上课：听讲，做上课：听讲，做笔记笔记上课：课堂活跃，研究学习，能力上课：课堂活跃，研究学习，能力培养，培养，有时学生当老师有时学生当老师课外活动：课外活动：做不做不完的作业完的作业课
2、外活动：开展各种类型的活动：课外活动：开展各种类型的活动：唱歌跳舞，球类活动，电脑学习，唱歌跳舞，球类活动，电脑学习，英语角英语角晚上：继续做作晚上：继续做作业至深夜业至深夜晚上：晚上：看新闻，做实验，各学科讨看新闻，做实验，各学科讨论论注意：注意：1、写信日期为、写信日期为2004年年2月月20日；日；2、词数：、词数：100左右；左右；3、注意书信格式。、注意书信格式。Dear Alice,You said that you wanted to know something about quality-oriented education.So I will talk about qual
3、ity-oriented and exam-oriented education.At last,we only could listen our teachers and make notes.After classes we had a lot homeworks to do.It took us much time on it at night.But now,in class,we can discuss questions with teacher.Students are all like to study.Sometime we also could play a teacher
4、.We dont have so many homeworks.So we have enough time to do all kinds of activities,for example,singing,playing balls,English coner,and so on.At night,we can see news,do experiments Yours,Li Hua 2004,2,20 Incorrect letter form;Spelling mistakes;Grammatical mistakes;The passage is wordy;Think in Chi
5、nese and write in Chinglish;No effective conjunctionsCommon problems:Dear Alice:Yours,Feb 20,2004Li HuaIncorrect letter form,Spelling mistakes:Our school life was quite boiling.We only made notices and lessoned in class.A lot of activists take the place of the homework.But now things are difficult f
6、rom it.We do experiences and discussion the subjects.boringnoteslistenedactivitiesdifferentexperimentsdiscussIn class,exam-oriented education made us to listen the teachers and make notesComparing with that,quality-oriented education allows us learn lively.We just had too many homeworks to do.Severa
7、l years ago,we have saw and experienced the exam-oriented education.Grammatical mistakestoComparedto learn activelymuch homeworkThe passage is wordyI received your last letter yesterday.I am pleased to receive it.You said you heard that China is carrying out the quality-oriented education in primary
8、 schools and middle schools and you wanted to know something about it.So I will tell you something about it and the exam-oriented education.(50 words)Glad to hear from you.You want to know something about the quality-oriented education in China.Id like to tell you something about the changes in my s
9、chool.27 wordsWrite in ChinglishIn the evening,we see news,do experiments and discussing subjectswhich instead of continue doing homework.On top of that,we not only happier than ago,we can learn better and more now.In the evening,instead of continuing our exercises far into the night we can watch ne
10、ws on TV,do experiments and discuss our subjects.In a/one word,we are not only happier than before,but we can learn better and more now.No effective conjunctionsAnd we did our homework in our free time.We did homework till midnight.We have a lot of activities,dancing,computers,English,and so on.And
11、we had to do our homework exercises both in our free time and even far into the night.After class,We have various outside activities,such as singing,dancing,English corner,and taking computer lessons.Feb 20,2004Dear Alice,How nice to hear from you.You want to know what is going on in schools in Chin
12、a?Now,I will tell you about it.In the past,exam-oriented education forced us to listen to our teacher while taking notes in class.After class,we did all kinds of exercises without end.After supper,we had to continue our exercises far into the night.Now,quality-oriented education has made our school
13、life colorful.We are active in class.In order to train the ability,we often do research on study.Sometimes one of us teaches ourselves.We have various outside activities,such as singing,dancing,English corner,and taking computer lessons.Basketball and football are our favorite sports.In the evening
14、we can watch news on TV,do experiments by ourselves and have talks and discussions of our subjects.Its certain that our school life is getting more and more colorful and interesting.Best wishes.Yours,Li HuaProper letter form.No obvious mistakes.Write in logical order.Use exact adjectives,good verbs
15、and proper phrases.Use some effective conjunctions.Use different sentence structures.Why do say it is a good article?Read the following sentences and decide which is better.1)Im waiting for you to come.Im looking forward to your arrival.2)Tom is ill.He cannot study.He still attends school.Tom is ill
16、 and cannot study,yet he still attends3)I read the newspaper in the past.I like to watch TV now.I used to read the newspapers,but now I prefer to watch TV.4)He came and brought us a lot of new stories.He came with a lot of new stories.Improve the following sentences:1)The flat has an area of 25 squa
17、re metres and there is a bedroom,a bathroom,and a kitchen.3)Next the text will be gone through by us and then the main idea will be found.4)He saw the boy in the street.He stopped to speak to him.He gave him a penny.2)I heard you are learning Chinese.I am very glad to hear that.Im very glad to hear
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