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1、雅思写作范文:2023雅思大作文解析和范文编者按：雅思索试最让人头疼的就是作文了，如何写好作文就是关键所在。一篇好的范文，能让你明白什么是好作文。20xx0708雅思大作文题目：范文：In my country, a century ago, it was not easy for a child to grow up due to malnutrition and diseases. But today, parents are able to not only guarantee children’s material abundance, but also provide t

2、hem with qualified education. All these allow children to have more freedom enabling them to have better development.Admittedly, it seems plausible to assert that children, given the young age, are not mature enough to enjoy much freedom. Obviously, children sometimes lack necessary experience and k

3、nowledge for them to make right decision or regulate their behaviors. Without any restriction, they may fail to resist the temptation and indulge themselves with freedom. For example, they are likely to spend all their pocket money on snacks, such as candies and puffed food, which is bad for health,

4、 or they waste too much time on watching TV and playing computer games, which squeeze up their time for other more meaningful activities.However, with parents’ appropriate and effective supervision and guidance, children can benefit a lot from the freedom. It is parents’ responsibility t

5、o help children cultivate self-discipline and self-control and teach them how to judge right and wrong. All these are indispensable for children to enjoy freedom. Hence, they are free to explore the outside world and govern their life. The free access to Internet enables them to gain knowledge and m

6、ake friends; the free choices of study and entertainment help them become independent and responsible. In a word, with the freedom, children are able to nurture many valuable traits and habits.To sum up, it is beneficial for children today to have much freedom in life.In many parts of the world, children have more freedom than they used to. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?儿童自由利：1)自由的探究实践，获得更多学问技能2)培育自身的独立和责任感弊：1)缺乏自控，做出错误选择2)沉溺于嬉戏和电视作者:Cindy