2023年高考英语写作指导：写人篇.docx

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1、2023年高考英语写作指导：写人篇写人的英语作文在高考中不少见，什么样的作文更能吸引人呢?下面请看语文迷为大家带来的技巧。写人记叙文，一般为肖像描写、行动描写、语言描写、心理描写以及对细微环节的描写，应依据要求，敏捷驾驭，突出重点。【几点留意】1.运用正确人称和时态。时态：一般现在时-描写人物外貌、性格、爱好等一般过去时- 描写人物诞生、教化背景、经验、事迹人称：第一人称或第三人称2.介绍人物的姓名、年龄、外貌、学历、经验、专业、爱好、特长、事迹、性格等，包括所给的全部信息点，不能遗漏或随意添加。3.对所给的信息进行适当重组，支配好写作依次，突出重点信息。4.正确运用描写人物的词汇和句型。【常

2、见词语】外貌特征：pretty, beautiful, good-looking，handsome,ordinary-looking, with a big nose, with a bigsmile, short, tall,thin, strong, white-haired，1.80 metres tall, …性格特点：absent-minded, charming, attractive, bright, wise smart, confident, naughty，talkative, diligent,lazy, friendly, generous, be rea

3、dy to help others,kind-hearted, warm-hearted, patient, humorous,have a good/ bad temper, independent,narrow-minded, …童年状况：as a boy of 15, be born on, during his childhood, live a happy/hard life, the son of a poor family,spend his childhood in, .爱好爱好： be delighted in doing, be good at , be in

4、terested in , be fond of , be crazy about, be pleased with, do well in, enjoy doing, have a strong desire to do, long for/long to do), take a pleasure in doing,…教化背景： be admitted to Beijing University, be enrolled in, fail in the test, get a master’sdegree, get on well with one’s

5、lessons, go abroad to further one’s study, graduate from,major in, receive a doctor’s degree, pass the examination, take an active part in, … 成就或事迹：become a member of the team, encourage sb to do sth, give up one’s life for sth, receive theNobel Prize for physics, set a new

6、world record of,win the first prize in, win a gold /silver/ bronzemedal, have a talent for, make up one’s mind to do sth., put one’s heart into, work hard at,concentrate oneself to, devote oneself to,do sth.with great determination and perseverance, .他人评价：an inspiring leader, a model wor

7、ker, an advanced teacher, be respected by , be honored as, beconsidered/regarded as, be famous/known as,his hard work brought him great success, makegreat contributions to our country, set a good example for , be highly spoken of for, .例文你班要举办以Ordinary but Great为题的英语主题班会。请依据下列信息打算一篇发言稿，介绍赵郁的成长经验。留意：

8、 1、词数不少于60。2、文章的题目和开头已经给出。3、可以适当增加细微环节，以使行文连贯。提示词：首席技师 chief technicianOrdinary but GreatWe are all ordinary people, but following what we are interested in and doing what we are goodat can help us make great achievements for society and go far. Here’s a convincing and inspiring example._【范文】Z

9、hao Yu, the chief technician in the Benz Company,is regarded as a great success. However, his success is no accident. As a young boy with a sense of creativity, he was eager to learn and to make a lot of inventions. Being an ordinary worker in the Benz Company for 17 years, not only did he do well i

10、n his job, but he also made efforts to teach himself English and to learn how to use computers. Now it is easy for him to read English materials about cars. Besides, he became expert at solving various technical problems.Because of his great contribution, he has received awards many times.Zhao Yu ha

11、s set a good example that ordinary people can stand out by doing their jobs with interest and enthusiasm.【评析】1.作者运用了所给出的全部信息：姓名、职务、经验。对所给的信息进行了适当重组，突出了重点信息(赵郁的经验)，内容完整、详略得当，体现了话题Ordinary but great所表达的内容。2. 正确运用人称(第三人称)，敏捷运用时态(一般过去时、一般现在时);合理运用过渡词，使文章层次分明、结构紧凑。3. 语言规范，表达精确。文章运用了一些高级句式，犹如位语、介词短语、分词短语、倒装句、同位语从句等，增加了文章的亮点。