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1、应用文写作导学案题目：假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：表示感谢；2.回顾Alex对你的帮助 ；3.临别住祝愿注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【题目分析】：1)体裁：本文是一封_。2)人称：_3)时态：_4)要点：1._；2._；3._【主题】：回顾_，以表示_，最后_【范文】：知道你将返回自己的国家，我写信给你是为了真诚地谢谢你在我学习英语时对我的帮助。如果没有你的帮助，恐怕我不会取得如此大的进步。无论何时我在学习英语的过程中遇到麻烦，你一直都在那里帮助。那些你给我的书对我有很大的帮助。再一次，我想向你表达

2、我衷心的感谢。注意一路平安。Dear Alex,_Yours,Li Hua一、查漏补缺例文：Dear Alex,I thank you very much for your help in my English study during this period.I remember that you are very concerned about my English study, so you will let me read English books and listen to English radio every day morning. Also taught me some g

3、ood ways to learn English.I hope you can have a good time in China.Yours,Li Hua问题：请改写：例文2：Dear Alex,I am writting to excite my gratitude to you.During the day of you stay in China, I was got along with you. And you helped me a lot in my English. So I would like to thank you. While studying in Englis

4、h, you help me knowldge and culture about English. And I got the great progress since you help me.I would never forget your help! Thank you again!Your,Li Hua问题：请改写：二、优秀范文Version1Dear Alex,Learning that youre returning to your country soon, _。（我急切地想在这封信里就你给我的慷慨帮助，表达衷心的感谢)There were so many unforgetta

5、ble memories in my mind._ (因为我不擅长英语，正是你的帮助让我取得了如此大的进步。)Moreover, when I met some problems in English learning, you always helped me out(帮我摆脱困境）with offering me such many practical suggestions._（再次感谢你好心的帮助，希望你回家旅途愉快！) and wish you a wonderful journey home.Your,Li HuaVersion2Dear Alex,Learning that yo

6、ure returning to your motherland soon, _（我写信给你表达我最深切的感激，谢谢你帮我学习英语。）I can still remember that my English was poor when you first came to our class._.(正是你的帮助我的英语才能进步如此大）Youve introduced me plenty of practical tips，especially in oral English, so that I can communicate with others fluently now._.(不是你的慷慨

7、帮助，我不可能在说英语上获得自信)_ (再次感谢你好心的帮助，希望你回家旅途愉快！)Yours,Li Hua三、语料收录单词和词组:_v.感谢_n.感激_adj.感激的_adj.慷慨的 _n.慷慨_adj.无私的_n.帮助_adj.好心的；善良的_n.善意；好意_v.给予；表达 _感激某人_难以描述/难以表达_抓住这次机会_多亏了/幸亏了（to是介词）_回报开头段：表达感激之情1.Im_to you for your_during _ in China.感谢您在中国逗留期间给予我的无私帮助。2.I wish to thank you_for you _.我从心底感谢您的慷慨帮助。3.Im wr

8、iting to_for your_help during your visit in China.我写信感谢您在中国访问期间对我友好/慷慨的帮助。4.Id like to_to express my_for your timely help and support.我想借此机会感谢您给予我们的及时帮助和支持。5.Please_for your _ help.请接受我对您好心帮助的真诚感谢。中间段:具体描述对方给予的帮助1._your kind help_I could make such great progress.正是你的帮助我才取得如此大的进步2._in my English lear

9、ning, my English would not get any _.没有你对我学习英语的及时帮助，我的英语将不会有大的提高。3._it_for your help, I could (not) have made such great progress.如果没有你的帮助，我不可能取得如此大的进步.4.If it _ for your _ assistance，_ that my poor English_ such great progress.如果没有你的及时帮助，恐怕我的英语不会有如此大的进步。5.I appreciate it _ I can say./ I can _thank

10、you_.我的感激之情无以言表。6._for all the things you have done in _ English.非常感谢您帮我学英语。7.Thanks to your _ help, _which I _have made such great progress.多亏你慷慨的/无私的/友好的帮助，没有你的帮助，我就不会取得这么大的进步。结尾段：结尾段：再次表达谢意并祝福1._ when I want to_ my_ to you.语言无法表达我对你感激。2.Please _ my most _ thanks for your _, which I will never for

11、get.请接受我对你及时帮助的感激，我永远不会忘记。3.It is _ of you to help me, and I appreciate it _say.您帮助我的好心和慷慨，言语不足以表达我的感激之情。4.My_ to you for your generous help is _. I wish I could _ it some day.对你的慷慨帮助，我的感激之情意无以言表。希望有天能够回报你。5.I_ your help and I hope to have the _ of _you.我深深地感激你的帮助，我希望有机会回报您。6.I wish there were a _wo

12、rd than“thanks”to _ for your generous help.任何答应都不能表达我对您慷慨相助的真挚谢意。7.My _ gratitude is _ any words/_.任何语言都不能表达为真挚的谢意。8._ for your kind help./ Again, I would like to _to you.对您的好意相助再次表示感谢。/再次向您表达我们衷心的感谢。四、仿写练习假定你是李华，下晚自修回家的途中不小心被电动车撞到，你的留学生朋友Tony恰好经过并第一时间给予了帮助。请给他写封信表示感谢。注意：1.词数80左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。D

13、ear Tony,Im writing to _ (对你的帮助表示衷心的感谢）when I was involved in the terrible accident.After self-study class at night, when walking down the road, I was _ （被失控的电动车撞倒）. Before I saw the riders face, he had already run away. It was so dark that nobody noticed me. Luckily, you were just passing by, takin

14、g me to the nearby hospital right away. Im getting better now. Thanks to your timely help.（感谢你的及时帮助）_（我想要招待你以表示我的感激）this Sunday. _（期待你的尽快回复）Yours,Li Hua2019年6月浙江省应用文开发落实（进阶版）教师版【题目】：假定你是李华，经常帮助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国家。请给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1.表示感谢； 2.回顾Alex对你的帮助 ；3.临别祝愿注意：1.词数80左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【题目分析】：1)体裁：本

15、文是一封感谢信。离别前表示感谢Alex帮助的感谢信。2)人称：第一人称（I）和第二人称You3)时态：Alex即将返国，用一般将来时回顾Alex对“我”的帮助，用一般过去时其他的，用一般现在时4）要点：1.表示感谢；2.回顾Alex对你的帮助 ；3.临别祝愿【主题】：回顾Alex对我的帮助，以表示感谢，最后祝福【解题思考过程】：1.这是一封感谢信。要注意感谢信的语气-真诚和感恩。因为是临别前，所以还可以有些不舍和怀念。2.按照提出的要点：1）表示感谢；2）.回顾Alex对你的帮助 ；3）.临别祝愿三段式的作文，可将本文分成三段。第一段：按照写作背景（Alex即将回国），点明写信目的（表达对Al

16、ex的感激之情），此处请注意表示感谢句子的表达；第二段：回顾Alex在“我”学习英语时的帮助（可适当增加细节，遇到什么样的问题，Alex是如何帮助我解决这些问题的等等）。此段，请注意时态的运用（一般过去时和一般现在时）；第三段：再次表示感谢并送出临别的祝福。【范文】：Dear Alex,Knowing that you are going to return to your own country,Im writing to extend my sincere gratitude for your help in my English learning.If it had not been f

17、or your timely assistance, I fear that I wouldnt have made such rapid progress.Whenever I have trouble in learning English, youre always there helping me.Those book you gave me are also of great help to me.Again, Iwould like to express my heartfelt thanks to you. Wish you a safe journey home.Yours,L

18、i Hua译文：知道你将返回自己的国家，我写信给你是为了真诚地谢谢你在我学习英语时对我的帮助。如果没有你的及时帮助，恐怕我不会取得如此大的进步。无论何时我在学习英语的过程中遇到麻烦，你一直都在那里帮助。那些你给我的书对我有很大的帮助。再一次，我想向你表达我衷心的感谢。注意一路平安。一、查漏补缺例文：Dear Alex,I thank you very much for your help in my English study during this period.I remember that you are very concerned about my English study, so

19、 you will let me read English books and listen to English radio every day morning. Also taught me some good ways to learn English.I hope you can have a good time in China.Yours,Li Hua问题：【点评】本文三段式的作文结构基本齐备。总体而言，要点都有提及。第一段也说明了写信目的（感谢你的帮助）；第二段有意识地回忆过去。第三段表达了祝福。语言比较简单，虽然运用了一些衔接词（so, also），但是第二段略显单薄。没有总结

20、性的句子来提纲挈领地表达。而且第二段明显存在着时态问题，该用一般过去时的，用了一般将来时和一般现在时。最后一句缺少了句子you.第三段虽有祝福，但是和写作背景（即将回国）貌似有点不搭。请改写：【改进建议】第一段可以略微介绍写作背景（you are going to return to your motherland）;第二段是回忆过去，将时态改成相对应的一般过去时（you were very concerned about., you let me read）every day morning有点累赘，直接改成every morning即可。最后一句补足句子的主语you，修改搭配学习英语的方法

21、some good ways in learning English.可在第一句或者最后一句补充一个强调句总结你的帮助很大。E.g. It is your kind help that I have made great progress.第三段虽然表达了祝福，但是祝福的是在中国开心，和写作背景（Alex即将回国）有些符合。鉴于这个写作背景，祝福回家路上一路顺风平安等或许更适合一些(I hope you can have a good/safe journey back home.）例文2：Dear Alex,I am writting to excite my gratitude to yo

22、u.During the day of you stay in China, I was got along with you. And you helped me a lot in my English. So I would like to thank you. While studying in English, you help me knowldge and culture about English. And I got the great progress since you help me.I would never forget your help! Thank you ag

23、ain!Your,Li Hua问题：【点评】这篇文章对于感谢信的基本结构有概念，也有详略意识。第一段提出感激；第二段回忆过去，具体描述帮助的过程；最后一段，再次表示感激。但是，第二段具体描述帮助过程，显得空洞。第三个要点-临别祝福，没有任何提及。除此之外，单词的拼写问题（express写成了excite），时态问题（since引导的现在完成时；got along with多了was等），固定搭配问题help sb with sth, you和your不分。看得出该生英语基础比较薄弱，需要解决的问题比较多。请改写：第一段，简要交代背景+感激帮助Learning you are going bac

24、k to your country, I am writing to express my gratitude to you for your generous assistance.第二段，增加帮助的细节，修改单词拼写问题，词汇的搭配问题和时态问题。During your days in China,we got along with each other and shared some unforgettable memories. Especially，you helped me a lot in my English study, thats the reason why I woul

25、d like to thank you. I remembered that you introduced me the knowledge of English language as well as western culture. Besides, you kept practising oral English with me everyday. since you assisted me, I have got such great progress.尾段：再次表示感激，并附上临别祝福I would never forget your help! Wish you a safe tr

26、ip home!二、优秀范文Version1Dear Alex,Learning that youre returning to your country soon,I am eager to convey in this letter my heartfelt gratitude to you foryour generous help.（我急切地想在这封信里就你给我的慷慨帮助，表达衷心的感谢)There were so many unforgettable memories in my mind.As I was not proficient in English,it was with

27、your assistance that I have made such great progress.(因为我不擅长英语，正是你的帮助让我取得了如此大的进步。)Moreover, when I met some problems in English learning, you always helped me out(帮我摆脱困境）with offering me such many practical suggestions.Again, I would like to express my sincere thanks to you（再次感谢你好心的帮助，希望你回家旅途愉快！) an

28、d wish you a wonderful journey home.Your,Li HuaVersion2Dear Alex,Learning that youre returning to your motherland soon,Im writing to express my deepest gratitude for your help in my English learning.（我写信给你表达我最深切的感激，谢谢你帮我学习英语。）I can still remember that my English was poor when you first came to our c

29、lass.It was because of your assistance that my English has improved so much.(正是你的帮助我的英语才能进步如此大）Youve introduced me plenty of practical tips，especially in oral English, so that I can communicate with others fluently now.But for your generous help, I couldnt have gained confidence in speaking English.

30、_.(不是你的慷慨帮助，我不可能在说英语上获得自信)Thanks again for your kind helpand I hope you can have a nice trip home! (再次感谢你好心的帮助，希望你回家旅途愉快！)Yours,Li Hua我学到的单词、短语或句式：开头段：1.Learning that youre returning to your country soon, I am eager to convey in this letter my heartfelt gratitude to you for your generous help.了解到你很快

31、要回国了，我急切地想在这封信里就你给我的慷慨帮助，表达衷心的感谢。2.Learning that youre returning to your motherland soon, Im writing to express my deepest gratitude for your help in my English learning.了解到你很快要回国了，我写信给你表达我最深切的感激，谢谢你帮我学习英语。3.Knowing that you are going to return to your own country, Im writing to extend my sincere gr

32、atitude for your help in my English learning.知道你要回国了，我写信给你，对你在我英语学习中的给予的帮助，表达我真诚的感激之情。中间段：1.There were so many unforgettable memories in my mind. As I was not proficient in English, it was with your assistance that I have made such great progress.在我的脑海里有如此多难忘的回忆。因为我不擅长英语，正是你的帮助让我取得了如此大的进步。2.It was b

33、ecause of your assistance that my English has improved so much. 正是你的帮助我的英语才能进步如此大。3.But for your generous help, I couldnt have gained confidence in speaking English.要不是你的慷慨帮助，我不可能在说英语上获得自信。三、语料收录单词和词组:appreciate v.感谢 appreciation n.感激grateful adj.感激的 gratitude n.感激generous adj.慷慨的 generosity n.慷慨sel

34、fless/unselfish adj.无私的help/assistance n.帮助kind adj.好心的；善良的 kindness n.善意；好意extend/express/convey v.给予；表达accept v.接受be grateful/ thankful/obliged to sb 感激某人beyond words/description/expression 难以描述/难以表达take/seize the opportunity to 抓住这次机会thanks to多亏了/幸亏了（to是介词）in return for 回报开头段：表达感激之情1.Im extremely

35、 grateful to you for your unselfish assistance during your stay in China.感谢您在中国逗留期间给予我的无私帮助。2.I wish to thank you from the bottom of my heart for your generous assistance.我从心底感谢您的慷慨帮助。3.Im writing to convey/express my gratitude for your kind/generous help during your visit in China.我写信感谢您在中国访问期间对我友好

36、/慷慨的帮助。4.Id like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help .我想借此机会感谢您给予我们的及时帮助。5.Id like to convey my heartfelt thanks/gratitude to you for your selfless/unselfish help.我为您无私的帮助向您表示衷心的感谢。6.Please accept my sincere appreciation for your kind help.请接受我对您好心帮助的真诚感谢。中

37、间段:具体描述对方给予的帮助1.Its your kind help that I could make such great progress.正是你的帮助我才取得如此大的进步2.Without your timely help/assistance in my English learning, my English would not get any improvement.没有你对我学习英语的及时帮助，我的英语将不会有大的提高。3.Had it been for your help, I could (not) have made such great progress如果没有你的帮助

38、，我不可能取得如此大的进步.4.If it had not been for your timely assistance，I fear that my poor English would not have got such great progress.如果没有你的及时帮助，恐怕我的英语不会有如此大的进步。5.I appreciate it more than I can say./ I can never thank you enough.我的感激之情无以言表。6.Many thanks for all the things you have done in helping me with my English.非常感谢您帮我学英语。7.Thanks to your generous/s