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1、高考英语作文复习高考英语作文复习2021/8/11 星期三12021/8/11 星期三2？1.Can you list the outline of the writing?2.Could you find out the transition sentence（过渡句）（过渡句）of each paragraph?3.What words are used to connect each supporting idea successfully?2021/8/11 星期三3高考作文类型：高考作文类型：A.A.数据说明类文章数据说明类文章B.B.提示议论文类文章提示议论文类文章C.C.看图说话

2、类文章看图说话类文章2021/8/11 星期三4影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个影响高考英语书面表达得分的几个因素因素1.语篇信息是否完整语篇信息是否完整2.行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。行文是否连贯流畅，语言是否得体。3.是否使用高级词汇是否使用高级词汇4.是否使用复杂句是否使用复杂句5.卷面整洁卷面整洁,书写工整书写工整2021/8/11 星期三5现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以现在正是春暖花开的春游时节。你校学生以“高三学生要不高三学生要不要参加春游活动要参加春游活动”展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，以展开了讨论。请根据以下讨论结果，以“whether or not should

3、Senior 3 students go spring outing？”为题，写一篇短文。为题，写一篇短文。的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为的学生认为应该春游应该春游不应该春游不应该春游接触大自然，呼吸接触大自然，呼吸新鲜空气，有利健康新鲜空气，有利健康高考临近，没有心高考临近，没有心情玩情玩活动是精神放松，活动是精神放松，大脑休息，有利于学习大脑休息，有利于学习春游耽误学习春游耽误学习Appreciation of good composition2021/8/11 星期三6 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We

4、 have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and res

5、t their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at

6、 least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies2021/8/11 星期三7浙江卷高考作文：浙江卷高考作文：当前不少文学作品被改编成电影有人选择看电影，有人当前不少文学作品被改编成电影有人选择看电影，有人则喜欢读原著。请你以则喜欢读原著。请你以“Film or book,which do you prefer?”为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：为题，按照下列要点写一篇英语短文：看电影：省时、有趣、易懂看电影：省时、有趣、易懂读原著；细节更

7、多、语言优美读原著；细节更多、语言优美我的看法及理由我的看法及理由2021/8/11 星期三8 Film or book,which do you prefer?There are many films which are adapted from the book in the original nowdays.Which is better,to read the book in original,or to see the film?The answers vary a lot.Some of us think that it is better to see the film than

8、 to read the book in the original.The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story.Besides,the film is usually more interesting,and it is easier to follow.Some others have just the opposite opinion.They think that they can get more detailed information from the original.Meanwhile,

9、the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.Personally,I agree with the second view.Actually I have more reasons for it.I think I can stay at home,reading quietly in a situation of my own,and whats more,I am able to better understand the authors ideas.In a word,to read the origina

10、l work is better than to see the film based on it.2021/8/11 星期三9Introduction(topic)Body(supporting ideas)Conclusion2021/8/11 星期三10The outline of the writing:Conclusion paragraph:Introduction paragraph:Point 2BodyPoint 1supporting idea 1supporting idea 2supporting idea 1supporting idea 22021/8/11 星期三

11、11 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh ai

12、r and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like goin

13、g anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea thatOn the other hand,about 35%students areagainst the id

14、ea.2021/8/11 星期三12Film or book,which do you prefer?Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.The reason is that it takes less time to understand the whole story.Besides,the film is usually more interesting,and it is easier to follow.Some others have jus

15、t the opposite opinion.They think that they can get more detailed information from the original.Meanwhile,the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.Personally,I agree with the second view.Actually I have more reasons for it.I think I can stay at home,reading quietly in a situati

16、on of my own,and whats more,I am able to better understand the authors ideas.In a word,to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.Some of us think thatSome others have just the opposite opinion.Personally,I agree with the second view.2021/8/11 星期三13 表示观点对比类写作套语表示观点对比类写作套语A.

17、总起总起:Opinions are divided on this question.Different people hold different/opposite opinions.People have taken/adopted different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem.People take different views on this question.B.表达观点一表达观点一:of them hold the opinion that.of them are in fav

18、or of the idea that People who are for the idea think 2021/8/11 星期三14C.表达不同观点之间的衔接表达不同观点之间的衔接:However,of them hold a different view./of them hold the opposite opinion.People who are against it dont think so.However,every coin has two sides.Different from those.,people think.On the other hand,people

19、think.D.结尾常用套语结尾常用套语:In my opinion/Personally,As far as Im concerned,In short/in brief/in a word,2021/8/11 星期三15 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 studen

20、ts should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%stude

21、nts are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.Opinions are divided on t

22、he question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea thatOn the other hand,about 35%students areagainst the idea.whats more,Besides2021/8/11 星期三16Film or book,which do you prefer?Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.The reason is that it takes less

23、 time to understand the whole story.Besides,the film is usually more interesting,and it is easier to follow.Some others have just the opposite opinion.They think that they can get more detailed information from the original.Meanwhile,the language in the book is possibly more lively and beautiful.Per

24、sonally,I agree with the second view.Actually I have more reasons for it.I think I can stay at home,reading quietly in a situation of my own,and whats more,I am able to better understand the authors ideas.In a word,to read the original work is better than to see the film based on it.Some of us think

25、 thatSome others have just the opposite opinion.Personally,I agree with the second view.Besides,Meanwhile,whatsmore,In a word2021/8/11 星期三17表列举说明的关联词表列举说明的关联词:Firstly/First of all/To begin with,.Secondly ThirdlyIn the first place In the second place In the third place Finally/Last but not least/,.表示

26、递进、强调的关联词表示递进、强调的关联词.Besides/Apart from/Whats more/In addition/Furthermore/Moreover/worse still/to make matters worse 2021/8/11 星期三18A A、运用高级词汇或短语、运用高级词汇或短语B B、增加形容词或副词、增加形容词或副词C C、灵活运用各种句型、灵活运用各种句型 亮点点拨亮点点拨2021/8/11 星期三19A.A.高级词汇和短语举例高级词汇和短语举例:challengingavailablesignificanttake advantage of/make f

27、ull use of/make the most ofmake forcontribute to in favor of enjoy to the fullest2021/8/11 星期三20B.增加形容词或副词增加形容词或副词在我们的校园里有一个小池塘在我们的校园里有一个小池塘。There is a lovely pond in our beautiful campus.2021/8/11 星期三21C.灵活运用各种句型灵活运用各种句型1.1.活用活用it it 句型句型It 常用句型：常用句型：It is the first/secondtime thatIt is(high)time t

28、hat It is said/reported/well-known thatIt takes sb.some time to do sth.sb.feel/find/make/think/consider it+adj.+to do When it comes to sth.我们到了采取措施保护环境的时候我们到了采取措施保护环境的时候我认为举行英语比赛很有意义我认为举行英语比赛很有意义2021/8/11 星期三22.从句从句 李宇春在超级女生比赛中获得第一，李宇春在超级女生比赛中获得第一，这令她的歌迷们很兴奋这令她的歌迷们很兴奋Li Yuchun won the first in the S

29、uper Girl Competition,which made her fans excited.2021/8/11 星期三23.倒装句型倒装句型我们只有通过努力才能获得成功我们只有通过努力才能获得成功 Only by working hard can we achieve success.2021/8/11 星期三24.强调句型强调句型 是超级女生比赛让女孩们获得了自信。是超级女生比赛让女孩们获得了自信。It is the Super Girl Competition that makes girls gain confidence.2021/8/11 星期三25.with 结构结构有那么

30、多的人支持超女比赛，这个活动很成功。有那么多的人支持超女比赛，这个活动很成功。With so many people supporting the Super Girl Competition,it enjoyed a great success.2021/8/11 星期三26.分词短语分词短语30%30%同学不赞同这一看法，同学不赞同这一看法，认为孩子不应当认为孩子不应当。30%of my classmates disagree with it,saying children shouldnt.知道了这点，他们会越来越努力学习。知道了这点，他们会越来越努力学习。Knowing this,th

31、eyll study harder and harder.2021/8/11 星期三27 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be

32、 close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examina

33、tion drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.be close toenergeticfeellike goingaffordfix theirattention onheatedfresh2021/8/11 星期三28 Wheth

34、er or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and wh

35、ats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhe

36、re.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.be close toenergeticfeellike goingaffordfix theirattention ondrawing near2021/8/11 星期三29 Recently many people especially high school students h

37、ave been fascinated by a singing competition“Super Girls Voice”,which is held by Hunan TV Station.Last weekend the students in our class had a heated discussion about it.Some students supporting it think highly of the competition.They think it has offered a wonderful stage to ordinary but well-singi

38、ng girls to show their singing talents in public,and encourages people to pursue their dreams.And this can help them gain more confidence than ever.Whats more,they can also develop their sense of competing during competition.On the other hand,the others dont agree with them.They think a series of co

39、mpetitions costs lots of time and money.As most of girls are still students who should concentrate on their study at present,taking part in it is not good for their further progress.Besides,some young people may wrongly feel that success comes from luck but not hard work.In my opinion,it is just a s

40、uccessful program,which has attracted lots of audiences attention.But seeing a bunch of girls with passion to realize their dreams in the competition,we are inspired to study harder to be super girls too,just as competitors.2021/8/11 星期三30 Whether or not should Senior 3 students go spring outing?We

41、have had a heated discussion.Opinions are divided on the question.Most students,about 65%,are for the idea that Senior 3 students should go spring outing.They think it good for their health to be close to nature and breathe some fresh air and whats more,they can relax themselves for a while and rest

42、 their brains so that they will be more energetic.They think it will do good to their students.On the other hand,about 35%students are against the idea.They say that with college entrance examination drawing near,they dont feel like going anywhere.Besides,they think going spring outing will take at

43、least a day off.They cant afford the time.They think they should fix their attention on their studies.be close toenergeticfeellike goingaffordfix theirattention onheatedfresh2021/8/11 星期三31 近来湖南卫视策划的近来湖南卫视策划的“超级女生超级女生”节目热播，在很多观节目热播，在很多观众特别是中学生中引起了很大的凡响，现在你班为此展开众特别是中学生中引起了很大的凡响，现在你班为此展开了一场讨论，把讨论的结果写成

44、一篇文章了一场讨论，把讨论的结果写成一篇文章观点观点支持者支持者1.给一些爱唱歌的女孩提供了一个展示才华给一些爱唱歌的女孩提供了一个展示才华的舞台的舞台2.获得更多的自信获得更多的自信3.培养了她们的竞争意识培养了她们的竞争意识反对者反对者1.花费了太多的时间和精力花费了太多的时间和精力2.不能集中精力学习不能集中精力学习3.让人觉得不通过努力就可以成功让人觉得不通过努力就可以成功你的观点你的观点2021/8/11 星期三32写作基本步骤：写作基本步骤：1.仔细审题，把握要点。仔细审题，把握要点。2.围绕要点，写出句子。围绕要点，写出句子。3.添加过渡，确保连贯。添加过渡，确保连贯。4.先求正

45、确，再求灵活。先求正确，再求灵活。5.认真誊写，卷面整洁。认真誊写，卷面整洁。2021/8/11 星期三33你校部分学生进行了一场有关学生可否带手机进校园的讨你校部分学生进行了一场有关学生可否带手机进校园的讨论，请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。论，请你根据下表中的提示写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况。一些同学认为一些同学认为另一些同学认为另一些同学认为.带手机便于与同学联系带手机便于与同学联系便于与家人联系便于与家人联系是一种娱乐方式是一种娱乐方式破坏学习气氛破坏学习气氛浪费过多时间和金钱浪费过多时间和金钱考试时会发短信作弊考试时会发短信作弊Homework:2021/8/11 星期

46、三34 The students of our school had a discussion about whether middle school students can go to school with mobile phones.Different people hold different opinions.Some students think that students have mobile phones at school,because mobile phones will enable students to stay in touch with their frie

47、nds and family wherever they are.Besides,the mobile phone is a way to have fun.As a coin has two sides,the mobile phones,while providing convenience,cause trouble too.In classrooms,the untimely ringing of phones interrupts lectures and destroys the atmosphere of study.And some students may spend too much time and money on phone calls and sending messages.Whats worse,sometimes students might use phone messages to cheat during exams.2021/8/11 星期三352021/8/11 星期三36