读后续写练习写作指导2则 讲义--2023届高三英语写作复习备考.docx

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1、读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。The watch was my grandfathers. He hung it by his bed. The face was marked with elegant Roman numerals and the case was gold. My grandfather got it after his fifty years of faithful service with his firm. I often gazed at it longingly as I sat with my grandfather aft

2、er school.The day I told him of my success in the examinations, he was pleased, Youll be going to the new school next, Will. Remem ber youll need plenty of patience. That/s the right way. I nodded when handing him the watch. He gazed at it for some moments, and wound it.The next morning my mother to

3、ld me he had died in his sleep and left me his watch. For safety, my mother was to put it away in trust until she considered me old enough to look after it. I protested（抗议）so strongly that she finally agreed to hang it in the kitchen where I could always see it.The summer soon ended and it was time

4、for me to enter the new school. I never made friends easily, and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. One of them was a rich fellow whose way of impressing us was to parade his possessions before us. Everything Crawley had was better than ours -until he brought the

5、 watch.“I have a better watch than that/7 I announced, attempting to impress them. Well, show it to us,“ Crawley sneered（冷笑）in disbelief. Embarrassed, I promised to bring it to them that afternoon.Considering there was no way to persuade my mother to let me take the watch, I decided to wait for her

6、to step outside and slip the watch into my pocket. So I did. After lunch, as I was too excited to wait for the return bus, I got my bike out of the shed.I rode fast, excitement coursing through me. Then suddenly a puppy ran out into my path. I pulled at my brakes so hard that the bike stopped to a s

7、harp standstill急停）and I fell over.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；I picked myself up and put a trembling hand into my pocket.Paragraph 2Thats not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience/ a voice echoed in my ears after the boys left.试题分析前文分析情节：爷爷在他所在的公司忠心耿耿服务了五十年后，该公司颁发给他的奖励 一一一块印着优雅的罗马数

8、字的手表。爷爷过世后，就把这块留给了作者一家。 过世前，爷爷经常叮嘱作者Will： “你要有足够的耐心，这才是正确的方法。夏天很快过去，我去了新的学校。我从来不容易交到朋友。有一段时间， 我只是跟一些男孩子攀谈而已。其中有一个男孩家里很有钱，经常在同学们 面前炫耀他的财产，他带来的东西确实比其他人的要好，直到有一天他带来 一块表。我的表比你的好看并答应带来给那些男孩子看看，想让他们留下好 印象。中午溜回家，偷偷把表拿学校去。我等不到返程汽车，就迫不及待地 骑车去学校。路上遇到一只小狗冲出来，我摔了跟斗。主题：patience人物：l(Will), my mother, my grandfath

9、er, boys, Crawley后续写作：段1:我爬起来，用颤抖的手伸进口袋。段2：“那是不对的。耐心，Will,要耐心。”那些男孩子们离开后，有一 个声音在我耳边回响。下水文Paragraph 1 ：/ picked myself up and put a trembling hand into my pocket. A disgusting feeling swept over me. The valuable possession of my grandfather was still in. But, just as I had thought, the watch was not

10、in its usual condition, a crack on its surface and one of the Roman numerals out of its place! I rode my bike slowly to the school, thinking about the way out. My mother doesnt allow me to take it out! I told the eagerly waiting boys. Thats your story/ Crawley burst into laughter, leaving a faint sn

11、eer of victory. (85 words) Paragraph 2：“Thats not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience/ a voice echoed in my ears after the boys left. Embarrassment, sadness and guilty embraced me! The echoing voice dragged me to the reality. Indeed, it was not suitable for me to impress them in such a hurry. No

12、r should I have stolen the watch behind my mother. For the first time in my life, I had learned the meaning of “patience”, which cost me a lesson of my grandfathers precious watch! Now, my grandfathers words have been my motto, always reminding me to calm down when dealing with trouble in my life. (

13、83 words) 读后续写材料阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。A few years ago I moved to Montreal, where winter lasts between four and five months of the year. During the first real winter of my life, staring out my living room window at the snow, I felt like I was on the surface of the moon, far away from everyone

14、 I loved. I was a new mother in a new city. I didnt know many people, and I didnt have any friends except for my husband, who was at work, and my baby, whod just learned to walk.One day, tired of being shut in, I decided to visit a yarn（毛线）shop. I thought a hobby would give me something to enjoy and

15、 offer a way to meet new people. Knitting（编织）seemed like a good choice in a place where winter lasted so much of the year.I Goggled directions, held my daughter, and headed outside. Quickly I found the shop named MAriadne Knits. Inside, a woman sat knitting on a big sofa. As it turned out, her name

16、was Molly Ann, not Ariadne. After I came in, shook the snow off my boots, and took them off by the door, Molly Ann immediately invited me to sit down on her sofa while she made me a cup of warm tea. It felt like Id entered her living room instead of a shop. The space was bright and cheery. My daught

17、er had fallen asleep during our walk to the shop.I was so grateful to sit quietly and drink some tea. Molly Ann was easy to talk to. We just started chatting. The whole afternoon passed by. Molly Ann held my daughter for a few minutes, led me through the shelves filled with yarn, and helped me pick

18、out yarn for a little baby sweater. Do you really think I can knit a sweater? I asked doubtfully. Sure you can, she told me. She offered to help me if I ran into any trouble.注意：L所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:I came back the next day, apologizing as Molly Ann dealt with theyarn.P

19、aragraph 2:Gradually, Molly Ann and I became friends.前文分析 情节：作者作为一个年轻的妈妈跟着丈夫到了人生地不熟的Montreal, 女儿蹒跚学步，丈夫上班。厌倦了宅家的日子，作者决定出去学学编织毛衣 什么的。经过Google搜寻，她找到了 一家叫Ariadne Knits的毛线店，与店主 人Molly Ann的沟通非常好，发觉不仅店非常温馨，店主也非常和蔼可亲。 主题：友谊人物：作者、女儿和店主Molly Ann后续写作：段1：第二天，作者又去了 Molly Ann的毛线店。段2：她们成为了好朋友。下水文Paragraph 1:I cam

20、e back the next day, apologizing as Molly Ann dealt with the yarn.“Nothing wrong/ she said in a casual tune. I know, though half a days direction from Molly Ann led me to have a try of knitting, I lacked my confidence to make it, always thinking I wasnt smart enough to be an intelligent mother. Howe

21、ver, it was Molly who encouraged me to go forward, saying no one could be successful in doing something in a day! Her warm tea, and especially her easy-going character and patience attracted me to visit her cheery shop regularly. (84 words)Paragraph 2:Gradually, Molly Ann and I became friends. Stayi

22、ng with her, not only could I be skilled in knitting kinds of sweaters for my daughter, but shared my loneliness, homesickness and even private stories with her. Snows in my heart melt piece by piece. I was really grateful to her generosity and thoughtfulness. Every time I had trouble in my life, sh

23、e would be always with me at the right time. Thus, I was thinking it was necessary to step out bravely and show your kindness to make great friends.范文I came back the next day, apologizing as Molly Ann dealt with the yarn. No worries, Molly Ann said, quickly fixing my mistake. She told me, in her hon

24、est straightforward style, that my daughter and I could come back any time and stay as long as we liked. I started going to the shop regularly once or twice a week. The snow went away. Spring came, and then summer. Molly Ann always looked happy to see us come through the shop door.Gradually, Molly A

25、nn and I became friends. We got together outside the shop. We shared stories. We got to know each other better. At anxious moments as a young mother in a strange new city, when I felt lonely and homesick and trapped, Molly Ann just made me a cup of warm tea, sat down to listen and cheer me up. Sometimes, Ive discovered, even after youve faced great trouble inside, it takes another person to help you see your way back to the sunlight.