读后续写练习写作指导 讲义----2023高考英语复习写作备考.docx

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1、读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。In our kitchen, there was a wooden table and three chairs one for Dad, one for Mom, and one for me. In the cellar （地窖）,the very last jar of apple jam lay quietly on the shelf, waiting to be turned into an apple pie when Dad came back. Mom sat at one end of the table

2、. I sat in the middle between her and Dad. I tried not to look at Dads empty place. Dad had gone to the city to look for work for a long time.Every night, I lay awake in bed and waited for the train to stop; waited to hear the creaky （嘎吱作响的）gate Dads going to fix when he came home; waited to hear th

3、e sound of his work boots dropping on the step by the kitchen door, and his voice calling, zzKm home!”Every night, as I lay there, I stared at the window and the curtains Mom made from empty flour sacks （麻布袋）.Every night, Mom came to kiss me good-night after the train/s gone by. She had been listeni

4、ng, too. Z/Go to sleep. Your dad will be home soon. Maybe for Thanksgiving/Time dragging by, it finally came the day before Thanksgiving. I went to sleep with the sound of train wheels in my head, whispering, /zMaybe tomorrow maybe tomorrow/Early the next morning, the smell of coffee woke me. I ran

5、into the kitchen. There he was! Dad lifted me onto his shoulders and pretended to stagger from my weight. Hows my boy? Youve gotten so big that I can barely lift you up anymore.He put me down, and I stared at the two sacks on the table. One said FLOUR I knew that word. I fried reading the other: S-U

6、-G-A-R. Dad whistled admiringly and winked at me. Mom and I had been practicing my letters most days. I could see that Mom was pleased with me. Tm going to bake a pie for your dads homecoming dinner. Jimmy, bring me that jar of apple jam from the shelf in the cellar. Mom smiled at me.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应

7、为150左右；2,续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好;Paragraph 1:Hearing this, I took the steps two at a time to the cellar. Paragraph 2:“Never mind, boy, accidents happen/ Dad said and wiped my tears. 试题分析ANALYSIS OF THE WRITING MATERIAL上文情节分析 人物：Dad：Dad had gone to the city to look for work for a long time.I：Jimmy,无时无刻不

8、在想念爸爸回家Mom:在安慰我的同时，也在思念着丈夫的回家 主题：人与人的关系，亲情 主要情节：家里剩下最后一坛苹果酱，等待着爸爸回家后做apple pie。我每天盼星星盼月亮地盼 望着爸爸的回来，妈妈总是安慰我爸爸不久就会回来了，或许就在感恩节这天。时间过的 很快，感恩节前一天晚上，我在盼望的思念中慢慢睡去。第二天一早，咖啡的香味飘过来， 一骨碌爬起来，跑到厨房一看，爸爸真的回来了。父子相见，百感交集。于是，为了表示 对爸爸的“接风洗尘，妈妈决定晚饭做apple pie。她让我去把地窖里最后一坛苹果酱去拿 下文情节安排两段开头：段1：Hearing this, I took the step

9、s two at a time to the cellar.段2：“Never mind, boy, accidents happen,“ Dad said and wiped my tears.可以写些什么：A段1：很高兴地跑到地窖去拿苹果酱不幸的是，装苹果酱的坛子摔破了爸爸妈妈听到后，跑过来安慰我A段2：不能原谅自己的过错，向爸爸妈妈道歉。妈妈也安慰我。我和爸爸清理地上的苹果酱和坛子的碎片，妈妈去做apple pie（主题升华）若干年后，回忆起来，都是爸爸妈妈满满的爱范文Paragraph 1:Hearing this, I took the steps two at a time to

10、the cellar. So pleased was I that soon I dashed to the shelf, where the very last jar of apple jam lay. Using all my strength, I lifted the jar, took hold of it tightly and ran upstairs to the kitchen. Unfortunately, after passing the door, I bumped into the chair and fell to the ground, the jar bro

11、ken. Not knowing what to do, I lay on the ground, crying loudly with a blank mind. Hearing this, Mom and Dad ran, lifted me up, and comforted me. (83 words)Paragraph 2:“Never mind, boy, accidents happen/ Dad said and wiped my tears. I couldnt forgive myself for the fault. Sorry, Dad! Ive ruined your

12、 homecoming dinner. I will be careful next time!” Nothing. Reunion is the happiest thing in the world!z/ Mom said with a warm smile. I felt a bit relieved. Dad and I began to clear the ground and Mom went to bake the apple pie. Years later, I still remembered the special Thanksgiving Day, which was not for the attractive smell of the apple pie without the apple jam, but for my parents love. (85 words)