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1、A bad coldIm not feeling well today. I think I have a bad cold. I have a headache. I have a fever. My nose hurts. My throat is sore. I have to take some medicine and stay in bed. My parents will take me to the hospital. What a bad cold! I hope I can be better soon. And I want to go to school.【要领点评】写

2、法：这篇习作是按照时间顺序记叙了生病、病的病症、服药及治疗 的全过程。写出了小作者希望快点康复并且去上学的愿望。时态：这篇文章可以采用一般现在时来写。如果主语是第三人称单数, 动词别忘了第三人称单数形式。句型：要用feel加形容词，和表示“患某种疾病的用法have+表示的 疾病的单词。注意：在表示疾病时，可以使用-ache, hurt和sore。不要只用一个单 词，以防止枯燥。要写出得病后的简单治疗及心情，不能只写得病的 情况。常见病句：My nose is hurto因为be后面要加形容词，而hurt 是动词，因此应使用sore；东西放在床上要用on the bed。生病，是 卧床不起，应该

3、说stay in bed。表示吃药时，通过用take some medicine, 不用eato词汇量要控制在406()之间。Toms holidayTom went to Beijing by plane over his holiday. Every day he had fun with his parents. They went to the nature park. They saw elephants. They went swimming. They ate lots of delicious food. They also took many beautiful pictur

4、es. They will come back home tomorrow. They enjoy their holiday.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按照地点的顺序记叙假期里的活动，记叙了假期里 去北京做了哪些活动以及对活动的感受。时态：这篇文章可采用两种时态来写。句型：主语+动词过去式+其他.主语+will+动词原形+其他.注意：活动的相关表达法可采用旧知识和新知识相结合去写，但要注 意动词过去式的变化规那么。例：eat的过去式为ate,为不规那么变化。Zooms weekendZoom had a busy weekend. On Saturday morning, he washe

5、d his clothes and went to a park. He did his homework and went fishing on Saturday afternoon. On Sunday morning, he cleaned his room and visited his grandparents. He played football and watched TV on Sunday afternoon. Zoom was too tired.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作是按时间顺序记叙了 Zoom的周末活动。时态：这篇文章可以用三种时态来写。句型：主语+动词过去式+其

6、他+过去时间状语.注意：活动的相关表达法采用新旧知识结合的方法，但要注意动词过 去式的拼写。BirthdayMy birthday is on Sunday. My parents are going to have a birthday party at home. I invite my friends to come to the party. At the party, they give me many small presents, such as cards, picture books, pens. They sing the birthday song to me. My m

7、other makes a big cake for me. I cut the cake into small pieces and give them out. we sing and dance. We have a good time at the party.Happy dayToday Im very happy. After I have breakfast, I go to a park. Its a sunny day, birds are singing. Im singing, too. When I get to the park, I see some girls a

8、re playing games. So I join them. We play very happily. Then I have lunch with my friends. We both have a good time. What a happy day!Last weekendI had a happy weekend last week. On Saturday morning, I watched TV and helped my mother wash clothes. In the afternoon, I cleaned three bedrooms in my hou

9、se, mine, my parents, and my brothers. On Sunday, I played football in the park. Then I went to my grandparents, house. Grandpa played the piano. The whole family was so happy. Later, we wanted to swim. But it was too cold. This was last weekend.Mikes weekendMike is a student. He is my good friend.

10、He is busy at the weekend. He is going to read a magazine this Saturday morning. He is going to the zoo this Saturday afternoon. He is going to buy a book this Sunday morning. He is going to learn kung fu this Sunday afternoon. He is going to watch TV this Sunday evening.My happy weekendI am going t

11、o do many things and be very busy on the weekend. So I do my homework on Saturday morning. In the afternoon, I am going to do housework with my mother. Because I am a good girl, and I am helpful at home. On Sunday morning, I am going to visit my grandparents with my parents. In the afternoon, we are

12、 going to the park together. Because there is a kite show. And my grandparents likes making kites. I think we can see many beautiful kites there. And we are going to buy some beautiful kites, too. Then we are going to fly the new kites. Thats fun. In the evening, we are going to have a big dinner. W

13、e are going to have fish for dinner. Because my grandparents likes eating fish. And my grandma cooks fish well. After dinner, we are going to watch TV together. We are going to be very happy. This is my happy weekend. I like my weekend very much. What about your weekend? Can you tell me?My winter ho

14、lidayIfs January. My winter holiday is coming. I am going to Thailand. I will go there by plane. I like the food in Thailand. Its spicy and tasty. In the winter holiday, I am going to play basketball. I am going to drew pictures, too. I will help my mother do some housework. I will be very happy in

15、my winter holiday.The vacationI travelled to Hainan this summer holiday. It was so beautiful there. The blue sea was around us. Its very wide and very nice. The coconut milk was delicious. I liked it so much. I also liked to swim there. I was happy and I swam like a fish. I will also come here for a

16、nother trip the next summer holiday, because it is a nice place with a beautiful scenery and delicious food.A visit to BeijingThis summer vacation, I went to Beijing. It was a very great city! We went to the Great Wall first. Like its name, it was very great. We could see many mountains around and m

17、any foreigners. Then we went to visit Tiananmen Square. It was also fantastic. There were so many people on the square. Some were flying kites, and some were taking photos. We lived in a small house in Beijing. It was a traditional building in Beijing called Four-Section Compound”. I enjoyed myself

18、a lot during the summer vacation in Beijing. It was a great memory!My winter holidayWinter holiday is coming. I am so excited. In this winter holiday, I am going to take a trip with my parents by plane. We are going to Beijing. Then I am going to go ice-skating there. I am going to see the snow. I w

19、ill play with the snow. I am going to make a snowman with my sister. Then we are going to visit the Great Wall. At last, we are going back home by plane. That will be fun in the winter holiday! I cant wait!Happy familyEveryone has a family. I have a family, too. I name it Happy family, because every

20、one in my family is happy. Come and meet my family, please! My mother is kind. I love her, and she loves me, too. My mother is pretty. She likes beautiful clothes. I call her Dressy Mum”. My father is a boss. He is tall and thin. He has a small head. I give him a nickname “Small Head Father”. I am f

21、at and lovely. I have a big head. I give myself a nickname “Big Head Girl”. I study hard. I am a good student. We are happy every day!Here is a photo of my family. These are four people in my family. They are my father, my mother, my brother and me. My father is a doctor. He works in a hospital. He

22、goes to work by subway. My mother is a teacher. She works in a school near my home. She goes to work by bike. After work, they like reading books. Who is the tall boy? He is my brother. He is five years older than me. He is a singer. Hes in Beijing now. He goes there by plane. I love my family.【要领点评

23、】一个平凡的题材，一篇生动的作文。这样的命题，我们可能面对 几次，甚至几十次了。但这位小朋友的笔端很是灵巧，了了数言，让 一个幸福的家庭跃然纸上，很值得我们去思考，我们能做到吗？小朋友的这篇作文除了语言优美之外，在结构上也有闪光之处。 先总说，将自己的家人逐个介绍一遍，后分说，把家人的工作、上班 方式，爱好一一细说。最后以一句话进行概括，起到点题的作用。我 们在写类似的作文的时候是不是也可以借鉴呢?My best friendMy best friend is Mary. She lives in a tall building. She lives on the fifth floor. E

24、veryday she takes the lift up and down. She is twelve years old. She is tall and thin. She has short black hair, two big eyes and a small mouth. She is very cute. I like playing with her. We are in the same class. I like to read books, but she likes playing games. She likes to eat popcorn and ice cr

25、eam. I like them, too. Her favourite food is fish. She loves her cat. She often plays with her. The cat likes Mary, too. They are cute. Do you have a best friend? Can you tell me something about your friend?My English teacherMiss Tang is my English teacher. Shes very pretty. She is tall and thin. Sh

26、e has two big eyes and a small mouth. Her hair is long. She likes cats very much. And she likes singing and dancing, too. Her English is very good. We often play games in English classes. She is very kind to us. We all love her.【要领点评】这篇作文的题目是“我的英语老师“，是一篇介绍人物的作文。小 作者开门见山，直接点题，首先介绍了英语老师的姓名，然后逐一介 绍了她的外

27、貌特征、喜好、英语水平、上课特点以及师生情感等。小朋友们在写作文时，要注意使用自己最熟悉的单词或短语，以 免写出一些错误句子。写作时要注意语意连贯、语句通顺、标点正确、 书写清晰规范等。A farewell partyIfs the end of the school year. The students in Class There have a farewell party. They invite their parents to the party. Many students have performances at the party. Look! Chen Jie is sing

28、ing songs. Zhang Peng is playing the piano. Sarah is playing the erhu. Mike is doing Chinese kung fu. What is Miss White doing? She is dancing. Everybody has a lot of fun. But Liu Yun isnt here. She has a cold. She is at home. The classmates are going to visit her after party. They prepare many gift

29、s for her. And they will take a picture together.【要领点评】写法：这篇习作记叙了一个告别晚会。记叙了学年末的告别晚会上大 家都表演了什么节目，以及晚会后大家要去看望刘芸的故事。时态：这篇习作可采用一般现在时，现在进行时和一般将来时三种时 态来写。句型：一般现在时：主语+动词原形+其他.现在进行时：主语+现在分词+其他.一般将来时：主语+ be going to / will +动词原形+其他.注意：由于本文章中所涉及的时态比拟多，所以要注意一下时态的变 化。学生们都在表演什么节目可以用现在进行时，将要去做什么，要My familyHi, eve

30、ryone! Im Cindy. I live in Hainan. Tm 13 years old. I am tall and thin. Now, let me tell you something about my family. There are seven members in my family. They are my grandparents, my parents, my sister, my brother and me. My grandparents like reading newspapers. They are very old. They are alway

31、s happy. My father is a businessman. He works hard. Hes very tall but fat. He likes sleeping. Hes kind. My mother is a housewife. She looks young. Shes strict with us. My sister is a university student. She studies hard. My brother is in Grade Four. He is only 10 years old. He likes playing computer

32、 games. Hes a naughty boy. I love each person in my family. I love my sweet warm home.My fathers DayMy father is very busy. Every day he goes to work by subway. He teaches maths at school. His maths is very good! In the afternoon, he eats lunch at school. After lunch, he reads newspapers. Then he go

33、es home at 5:3(). He eats dinner. Then he takes a bath in the evening. He watches TV at the living room. After watching TV, he goes to bed at 10:00. My father works hard. I like my father very much!Who is your favorite person? My favorite person is my mother. She is beautiful. She is 38 years old. S

34、he is tall and thin. She has big eyes and long hair. She likes cooking. She cooks good meals for us every day. And she always does all the housework. She looks after my father and me. I love my mother very much.Hello, my name is Steven. I have many good teachers, but my favourite teacher is Miss Li.

35、 She is a very good teacher. She is very young, but her English is very good. She teaches us English every day. Her class has so much fun. She sings songs and plays games with us. We are so happy. And we learn English well. Our English are very good. So I like her very much. She likes reading books

36、and playing sports. After class, Miss Li often plays sports with us. We are very happy. We all love her very much. This is my favourite teacher. She is a good teacher. I like my English teacher very much. What about you? Do you have a good teacher, too?Ive got a lovely friend at school. His name is

37、Jack. Jack is 12 years old now. Im 11. Hes older than me. Hes 150cm tall. Tm 148cm. Hes taller and stronger. Hes 43kg and Im 41kg. Hes heavier. Weve got round faces and short hair. But my eyes are bigger. Our favourite colour is white. We like summer best. We both like sports, too. On Saturdays, we

38、play table tennis. On Sundays, we play basketball. Hes good at basketball. But I do better at table tennis. We laugh and play together. How happy we are!【要领点评】写法：这篇作文的题目是“我的朋友和我“。既然写作范围是两个人物, 就要笔墨均匀，两者缺一不可。不能只描写朋友，也不能只表达我。 这无形中增加了写作的难度。解决这个难点的关键是：找出两个人几 方面的异同。可以通过常见的年龄、身高、体重、外貌、喜好等方面 列举出每个人的具体实际情况，再

39、进行比拟，通过比拟突出每个人物 的特点。这样就把人物活灵活现的展现给读者了。时态：像此类题目的作文，运用一般现在时即可。句型：因为涉及两个人的比拟，不要忘记使用比拟级句型：A+be+比 较级+than+B注意：在列举两个人的“外貌、喜好”等方面情况时，应 一边列举，一边比拟。不要一味指出不同，还要列举相同之处。两人 能成为朋友，一定有共同语言和喜好，共性不容忽视。在表达喜好时,不同的句型应交叉运用，防止枯燥的重复。例Our favourite colour isWe like . best”, We both like ，too.，为突出不同时间做 不同运动，用“On Saturdays”，O

40、n Sundays”，形成鲜明比照。 常使用并列连词and和转折连词but ,使文章读起来更流畅。结尾 以How happy we are!突出了两人从友谊中得到的快乐！Name： BillFavorite sports: tennis, football, basketballClothes: black T-shirt, blue pantsAge: 13Phone number: 5352375My friendI have a good friend. We are in the same class. His name is Bill. He is 13. He likes spor

41、ts very much. These sports are tennis, football and basketball. He plays tennis twice a week. He plays football twice a week. He plays basketball once a week. He often likes to wear black T-shirt and blue pants. His phone number is 5352375. Everyone likes him.I have two good friends. Theyre Zhang Pi

42、ng and Jim. Zhang Ping is 12. Jim is three years older than her. Hes 15. Jim is heavier than Zhang Ping. Hes 60 kilograms. Jim is taller than her. Hes 162cm. Zhang Ping is a Chinese girl. She lives in Anhui. Jim is a Canadian boy. He lives in Guangzhou now. Zhang Ping likes red. Her favorite sport i

43、s badminton. Jim likes blue. His favorite sport is swimming. I like them very much.My good friendZhang Ying is my good friend. Shes in Class 1, Grade 4 in a primary school. Shes a model student. Shes clever and shes helpful, too. She often helps teachers and young students at school. She is good at

44、Chinese, maths, English, arts music and so on. She has a lot of hobbies. She likes painting and singing. And she likes listening to music, having picnics with her parents. Oh, she likes fishing, too. But she doesnt like playing basketball, football, table tennis or volleyball. Zhang Ying is the best

45、 friend of mine. I like playing with her. We always work together and help each other.My motherMy name is Jessie. I am twelve years old. I love my mother. She has black hair and two big eyes. She is a very beautiful woman. My mother works in a hotel. She is a manager. She likes fish and vegetables,

46、but she doesnt like meat and chicken. My mother can cook, sing and read, but she cant dance. She can cook and sing very well. This is my mother!用将来时。另外还要注意，一般现在时在肯定句中，主语是第三人称 单数，谓语动词也要用第三人称单数形式。My new teacherMy new teacher is a science teacher. Hes very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two

47、big eyes and a not too big and not too small nose. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants with two big shoes. My science teacher is very kind. And he is very smart. Today we have a science class. We are very happy. Because he is so funny. Who is he? Hes a Mr Zhou.I have a busy father and a

48、 kind mother. My father is a businessman. He is 42 years old. He is short. He likes reading newspapers after meals. He always watches TV in the evening. He goes to work by car. He has got a nice black car. He often plays golf with his friends on the weekend. He does not often eat dinner with us. My

49、mother is a housewife. She doesnt work. She stays at home. She is beautiful. She has long hair. She does housework in the morning. She often goes shopping in the afternoon. She is kind, but she is strict with me. She likes reading. She watches TV at night, too. I love my parents. And they love me, too.A libraryA library used to be only a building with a lot of bo