读后续写练习写作指导讲义----2023高三英语二轮复习写作专项.docx

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1、读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事When Dr. Henderson was assigning （指定）project mates for his psychology class, I secretly hoped he would pair me with my best friend or at least a classmate I could have some fun with. Above all, I hoped he wouldnt assign me to work with the fiercely competitive, extre

2、mely serious fellow who always wore dark clothes and apparently had a personality to match. As fate （命运）would have it, Dr. Henderson very deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoid.I went up to my new teammate and intro

3、duced myself He looked at me as though I werent there. I felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the course. He wasnt mean or abusive; he just gave me the impression he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if he did it alone.Needless to

4、say, I didnt look forward to an entire term of being brushed off, but I tried to make the best of it and didnt say anything for fear that I would make things worse.The project required each team to develop a hypothesis （彳畏说）,set up an experiment to test the hypothesis, do the statistical analysis an

5、d present the findings. Whatever grade the team received would be sharedby both students.When my teammate and I met to discuss our project, I was uneasy. Here was this challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good gradesthe exact opposite of me. I was outmatched. I actually

6、 wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short because I didnt want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out. I decided to stick to it no matter what.After long discussions we somehow agreed to do a study on the psychological well-being of teenagers. I wasnt sure what it meant ex

7、actly, but at least we had a topic.注意:1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1:We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.Paragraph 2:One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease.试题分析前文分析人物： Dr. Henderson:was assigning （指定）project mates for his psych

8、ology classVery deliberately matched everyone in class and announced that I would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoidthe new teammate:Looked at me as though I werent therewasnt mean or abusive; he just gave me the impression he could do whatever project we dreamed up better if

9、he did it aloneThis challenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good grades01:Would be working with the one person in class I wanted to avoidI felt he treated me as though I would hold him back and probably make him fail to get an A in the courseI was uneasy. Here was this cha

10、llenging student who had a reputation for single-mindedness and good gradesthe exact opposite of me. I wasoutmatched. I actually wanted to drop the class at one point, but stopped short because I didnt want to give him the satisfaction of my chickening out. I decided to stick to it no matter what.主要

11、内容：心理学老师Dr. Henderson布置了课堂学习任务，班内每个人要找一个同伴开展 项目学习。虽然我也做了选择，但他故意安排了一位优秀的学霸与学术功底不好的我 搭档一起做课题。我们俩开始相处不佳，我认为他是一个独来独往的人，他可以一个 人完成这个项目，但是我不甘心做个“透明人，努力参与，积极配合，终于跟学霸一 起商定了研究的课题内容。（后续会有怎样的发展呢？）冲突点：虽然被学霸嫌弃，但我还是要努力把项目做好。（如何做呢？）下文情节安排：每段前两句：Paragraph 1:We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans.Paragraph

12、 2:One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease.可以写些什么： Paragraph 1:（做好与开头句的衔接）做的计划都是他的计划随着课题研究的推进，我对搭档的印象有了改观（可以描述搭档是怎样的一个 人）超乎想象，课题研究开展的很顺利（与下一段的开头句做好衔接，体现一波三 折：本来可以顺利把课题做完，搭档却突然生病了） Paragraph 2:（做好与开头句的衔接）让我担心的是搭档的身体状态，当然还有课题研究如何推进幸运的是，他身体状况在慢慢恢复，只要体力允许，他都会对课题研究进行远 程指

13、导最终，我们的课题获得极高的评价。我也对Dr. Henderson的安排有了理解（升 华和呼应）下水文Paragraph 1:We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans. But what made me puzzled was that our plans were always his! However, with the projectgoing ahead, I found my new teammate always had good ideas about it. We discussed everything possibl

14、e of the project ranging from the plans to the possible findings. I began to feel that his first impression misled me. The fact was that he was not a serious fellow, but an excellent one with good minds and creative thinking, though a little single-minded. Then beyond my imagination, our project wen

15、t through smoothly. （87 words）Paragraph 2:One day I got word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease. What worried me a lot was that I might lose an outstanding partner and that I had to carry through the project alone. Fortunately, he was recovering gradually, and when his health con

16、dition allowed, he would gather his strength to give our project much help, sharing his brilliant thoughts and providing timely aids. Eventually, a finalsatisfaction saw our great joint efforts, which earned us a top grade. Till this time, I could understand what Dr. Henderson meant to arrange the p

17、erson I wanted to avoid. (86 words)参考范文Paragraph 1:We started to meet regularly to draw up our plans. Serious as my teammate was, we gradually grew in good tune with each other. He had a way with technical things and approached every detail with a clear purpose. And I spared no effort to do my bit,

18、collecting data and recording results carefully, so as to make up for my academic disadvantage. I fully discussed my ideas and shared my insights with him, who was once indifferent but later listened to me with close attention. We were making steady progress with our project.Paragraph 2:One day I go

19、t word that he was admitted to hospital for a serious disease. The moment I saw him lying helplessly in bed, I decided I had to act alone and do my best. I assured him I would not let him down and he should concentrate on recovering. I poured more time and energy into that project than ever before, and finally presented our findings to the class, which surprisingly earned us an excellent grade! When I told him about our shared success, he smiled. It had to do with trust and the joy of sharing a common prize.