读后续写练习写作指导讲义--2023届高三英语复习写作专项.docx

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1、读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的 故事。In high school, I was a straight-A student, a member of many school clubs, and a receiver of many rewards. However, I had been subjected to （受至U 折磨）peer pressure. Wanting to be cool, I started going to parties and drinking, drunk beyond recognition. My life took a

2、turn for the worse. However, the experience in one summer program taught me a lesson: never do something you believe is wrong just to gain the pproval of others.In June, I worked part-time at a restaurant. The day before I left for the program, one co-worker offered me his drivers license, telling m

3、e to have fun in Quebec since we two almost looked the same. Id seen friends walk into liquor （酒）stores with fake licenses and come out carrying a twelve-pack of beer, smiling proudly. So I took the license, but I promised myself that I wouldnt use it. However, I easily got carried away.On the first

4、 night of the program, while walking around, my new friends and I came across a liquor store. Kai asked if anyone had a fake license. After everyone shook his head, I cleared my throat and declared, I do. With everyones admiration and Kais twenty dollars and instruction, I boldly agreed to take on t

5、he task without thinking. I managed to buy a case of beer. The boys cheered and gave me pats on the back. YoiTre the man, someone said to me. The praise boosted myself-confidence.he last night there was a party. A few of my friends insisted that we drink before the dance. They asked me, the “ID man,

6、 to buy alcohol. To earn their admiration, I took the cash and bought what they wanted. Later that night, I was enjoying myself when Kai said nervously, “Cristian isnt okay. Worried for my friend, I went to assess the situation. Clearly, Cristian was overly drunk and almost unconscious （不省人事的）.注意：1.

7、所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； Paragraph 1:Suddenly, something went wrong: Cristian fell to the ground.Paragraph 2:The next day, I was called to the program directors office.写作解析上文分析人物： I: was a straight-A studenthad been subjected to peer pressure wanting to be cool”, I started going to par

8、ties and drinking, drunk beyond recognitionmy life took a turn for the worse co-worker: in a restaurant of my part-time joboffered me his drivers license Kai: one of my friends in a summer programCristian: one of my friends in a summer programdrunk and even almost unconscious 时间地点：one summer program

9、主题：人与自我，对自我的反思改进主要情节：在高中期间，我是个全A生。后来因为同伴的压力，为了想表 现的“酷一点，我开始参加各种party和酗酒，甚至于醉成烂泥， 我的生活开始“急转直下。然而，一次参加暑假活动的经历让我明 白了一个道理：千万别为了得到所谓的别人的“赞同而做自己认为 是错的违心的事情。具体故事是：打零工的同事给了我他的驾照， 告诉我可以用驾照去找乐子，因为我跟他长的很像。我一直提醒 自己不会用这本驾照，但是我却是一个很容易被说服的人。后来，我去参加了一个暑期的活动，第一天晚上，在活动过程 中，我们发现路边有个卖酒的店，于是Kai出钱，我用餐馆同事的 驾照去买了一箱啤酒回去。大家纷

10、纷为我点赞，这让我的“自信心 膨胀。在活动最后一晚，有个聚会，大家提议，跳舞前先喝点酒。 当我们都沉静在快乐之中的时候，Kai忐忑不安地跟我说Cristian身体不适，我过去一看，发现Cristian醉的一塌糊涂，有点不省人0 下文情节安排两段开头：段1:Suddenly, something went wrong: Cristian fell to the ground.段2:The next day, I was called to the program director/s office.两段情节安排：段1：现场的情况，特别是Cristian的状况我采取的措施（心理表现+如何安排抢救等

11、）幸运的是，经医生抢救Cristian并无大碍段2：在director面前承认了事实接受惩罚，反思自己的行为吸取教训范文1aragraph 1:Suddenly, something went wrong: Cristian fell to the ground. My friends askedme what to do next. I sensed something worse was happening. Surely, Cristian rank too much beer, which brought him to this dangerous stage. My self-con

12、fidence and responsibility forced me to assign tasks to people present, Kai calling the ambulance, others providing the first aid or something else. Fortunately, there was no danger to Cristian because of ourimmediate action and the medical measures doctors took. But the happy night turned out to be

13、 a sad one. (80 words)Paragraph 2:The next day, I was called to the program director/s office. In front of the director, I lowered my head, admitting the fact that to earn the admiration from my friends in the program, I bought and shared what they wanted using the fake drivers license. I knew it wa

14、s my fault that might bring tragedy to Cristian. The punishment was certain, which let me know clearer about myself. The lesson deserved to be remembered all my life: never do something against your moral to gain others1 approval, especially when peer pressure came. (82 words)范文2Suddenly, something

15、went wrong: Cristian fell to the ground. Seeing his pale face, I stiffened, totally not knowing what to do. Luckily, someone called 911 and Cristian was pulled into the ambulance, and I saw his unconscious face drooping over the white sheet. I had never seen a situation like this before and I was gu

16、ilty, not only for buying the beer but also for the risks I put him at. Later I was told Cristians condition was serious, but fortunately he didnt suffer any permanent damage. The whole night found me tossing and turning, worrying about the mess I had caused. (93 words)The next day, I was called to

17、the program directors office. He asked if I bought the alcohol. I knew that there was no point in denying the truth. So I admitted everything that happened. Like a caught criminal, I was overcome with shame. My punishment was much less than what I deserved: I was merely expelled from the program. Back home, I shredded the fake drivers license and threw it away. Through this experience, I learned an important lesson: never do something you believe is wrong just because someone else is telling you to and dont sacrifice anyones well-being to gain the approval of others. (95 words)