读后续写：亲情类（故事构造“三板斧”）-2023年新高考英语读后续写提分技能 模拟题.docx

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1、读后续写（新高考专用）模拟题01L （2022.山东潍坊.一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文A GIFT FOR GRANDPASummer vacation was coming. Jack and his brother Berlin were filled with excitement as they thought of visiting their grandparents again.The big day came at last. After the happy family got ready, they set out for

2、 the grandparents9 eagerly. On the way, the brothers were excitedly talking about the fun they had with grandparents.A little blue house with a tall white chimney finally appeared. Behind the property was the forest carrying their good memories with Grandpa. They arrived at the driveway, at the end

3、of which Grandma was waiting for them joyfully.Jack and Berlin each gave Grandma a big hug and then swept to the living room, shouting excitedly “Grandpa, we are back!”Seeing his grandsons, Grandpa was wild with joy and tried to get up with all his strength from the chair but in vain. A helpless exp

4、ression flashed on his face. Grandma explained that his health was declining rapidly and maybe couldnt stand up on his own forever. But Grandpa declared stubbornly （倔强地），I can!” Certainly, he was stuck in his boyish way. Mum and grandparents were happy to meet again after a long time. They sat toget

5、her and chatted about what happened recently.The brothers were soon bored with adult conversation, went out and wandered into the forest. Tall trees stretched up to the heavens with large branches crossing each other, while young ones rose straight like soldiers. Grandpa was once a great explorer fu

6、ll of wisdom. He could tell where the birds came from only by their calls and songs. The trees, birds, lizards, lots of bugs.How many merry moments they spent with Grandpa in the kingdom!But now Grandpa couldnt get up. This made them worried. Wed think out a way to cheer him up. Jack said. Grandpa i

7、s a bird lover, and we can catch him a bird., Berlin suggested. Butcozy and warm.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。After several hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance.On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them.参考答案：After several hours, Lizzy heard her name called in the distance

8、, dad.” Lizzy called out and began to shake her sleepy mother and sister. Mother opened her eyes and squeezed out a faint smile and fell asleep again. Through the thick fog, a white small boat sliding close. Lizzy cried out, “Dad, here”, with tears rolling down her face. Finally, Dad got three of th

9、em into the boat where Lizzy finally closed her eyes, exhausted and relieved. She knew they were rescued.On the coast, an ambulance was waiting for them. With the help of the nurses, they all got in. Wrapped in a warm blanket, Lizzy sit beside her family, looking at her mom on the bed. Suddenly, Liz

10、zy turned to her father and said JT knew you would be back, Dad.“ I knew you would keep mother and sister safb, her father hugged her. Tears rolled down their faces.【解析】【分析】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Lizzy和妹妹跟随爸爸妈妈出海钓鱼，遭遇沉船落水，爸爸 留下Lizzy照顾妈妈和妹妹，自己游去寻求救援，妈妈的妹妹体力不支快失去意识，只有 Lizzy坚持着保护着她们，等待爸爸归来。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“

11、几个小时后，利奇听到远处有人叫她的名字。”可知，第一段可描写爸 爸归来，三人获救。由第二段首句内容“在海岸上，一辆救护车正等着他们”可知，第二段可描写获救后利齐与 爸爸的对话。2,续写线索：爸爸归来三人获救得到救助父女对话3 .词汇激活行为类大喊：cry out/yell/scream营救：rescue/save在的帮助下：with the help of/with the aid of情绪类疲倦的：exhausted/tired【点睛】高分句型 1 Finally, Dad got three of them into the boat where Lizzy finally closed

12、her eyes, exhausted and relieved.（运用了 where引导定语从句和形容词作状语）高分句型2 She knew they were rescued.（运用了省略连词的宾语从句）高分句型 3 Wrapped in a warm blanket, Lizzy sit beside her family, looking at her mom on the bed .（运用了过去分词和现在分词作状语）he hates birds being caged!v Jack shook his head.Then a bright idea came to Jacks min

13、d. Why not make a cane （拐杖）out of a young tree!”注意：L续写词数应为150左右；2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Berlin thought it was a good idea.Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa.参考答案：Berlin thought it was a good idea. When the two brothers reached an agreement, they quickly ran back to their grandfather house, got t

14、he tools they needed to make the cane, and ran back to the woods. Jack said, “What kind of tree should we pick for the walking stick?” Berlin thought for a moment and said, I think we should choose a straight tree, so no knots will scratch grandpas hands. Jack nodded his head in agreement. They foun

15、d a straight tree and set to work. They cut the tree down, and with a knife they took the bark off. It was a wonderful tree, which was smooth and was just of the right size. They thought grandpa would love it.Jack and Berlin handed the cane to Grandpa. When grandpa took the cane, his hands shook wit

16、h joy, thinking, This is made by my grandsons themselves. How precious it is!” Jack said, “Grandpa, we hope this cane will help you stand up and come with us to explore the woods.”Grandpa smiled and decided to give it a try so as not to make his grandchildren disappointed. He held the cane in his ri

17、ght hand and the arm of his chair in his left hand. He stood up with strength on his legs. Everyone was surprised and excited to see grandpa stand up. At that moment, Jack noticed a tear coming from the comer of his grandfather eye.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了暑假即将来临，杰克和他的弟弟柏林去看望祖父母，他们却 发现爷爷站不起来了，兄弟俩走进了森林，

18、杰克突然想到了一个好主意，就是给爷爷做一根 手杖。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“柏林认为这是个好主意。”可知，第一段可描写兄弟俩怎么做手杖。由第二段首句内容“杰克和伯林把手杖递给爷爷。”可知，第二段可描写爷爷拿到手杖后的 反应。2,续写线索：拿工具做手杖爷爷尝试站起来众人反应3.词汇激活行为类拿：get/fetch砍下：cut down/chop down站起来：stand up/rise to ones feet情绪类高兴：joy/delight兴奋的：excited/thrilled【点睛】高分句型 lWhen the two brothers reached an agree

19、ment, they quickly ran back to their grandfather house, got the tools they needed to make the cane, and ran back to the woods.（由 when引导的时间状语从句）高分句型 2It was a wonderful tree, which was smooth and was just of the right size.（由关系代 词which引导的非限制性定语从句）2. （2022.山东淄博.一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成 一篇完整的短文

20、。续写的词数应为150左右。The Christmas Spirit Strikes AgainI always dreamed of making a big surprise of a lifetime. Thanks to a little determination, some luck, and a generous helping of Christmas Spirit, my dream became a reality.My family is Canadian, although my sister moved down to Australia a few years ag

21、o to study. She was graduating just before Christmas, but due to my own scholarly schedule back home, I would be unable to make it down in time for her graduation. She was understandably disappointed, and I felt guilty that I wasnt able to be there for her on this special occasions.While I was talki

22、ng to my professor the week before my sisters graduation, she commented, “Well, if you want to go, just go ahead!n I couldnt believe my luck! I nearly jumped fbr joy. Just make sure you get permission from administrator （彳亍政主管）,“she added. My heart sank. The administration at my school was infamous

23、for denying any sort of time-off requests. I almost didnt bother asking, because I knew it would be a waste of time. But something in me decided to try, just in case. Maybe it was the hope that the Christmas Spirit would somehow affects the administrator at this time of year. When I returned home to

24、 check the reply in my inbox, I steeled myself for disappointment. I held my breath, opened the e-mail, and started to read. And re-read, just to make sure Id understood. Approval? I couldnt believe my luck!Immediately, I called the airline. Unexpectedly, even during the busy Christmas season, I was

25、 able to change my ticket to arrive the day before my sisters graduation. With news this fantastic, I was bursting to tell my sister. But, fingers on the dial（拨号盘），I paused. Wouldnt it be much more fantastic if I could surprise her? What a state of shock she would be in! Slowly a great idea came to

26、my mind. I decided a much more dramatic arrival than just a ring of the doorbell. What if I couldnt arrive in a box?I started lo plot.I, hidden in the biq box, heard the mailmen ringjne my sisters doorbell.参考答案： Paragraph 1:I started to plot. Then, a great idea occurred to me: getting delivered in a

27、 box to my sisters house! I knew if I pulled this off, my grand arrival would be the best Christmas present I could ever give my sister. I frantically started Googling mail companies. Fortunately, I came across a mail company named Couriers Please and to my great amazement their manager agreed to he

28、lp me to fulfill my dream! The next day, they found a box big enough for me to hide in. The Christmas Spirit strikes again! （86 词） Paragraph 2:I, hidden in the big box, heard the mailmen ringing my sisters doorbell. They announced they had a delivery for her. When the box was opened and she saw me s

29、itting inside smiling up at her, my sister was at a complete loss for words and burst into tears. I would never forget the look on her face. It was such a gift to be able to attend my sisters graduation to show her my love, and it was a memory that both of us would cherish forever. So never underest

30、imate the power of the Christmas Spirit （85 词）【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者的姐姐在加拿大，即将毕业，作者想请假去参加她的毕 业典礼，作者忐忑地向自己的学校请假，令作者出乎意料的是居然被批准了，作者订好了机 票，想要给姐姐一个惊喜。【详解】.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我开始策划。”可知，第一段可描写作者的计划。由第二段首句内容“我躲在大箱子里，听见邮递员按我姐姐的门铃。“可知，第二段可描写 作者的姐姐看到作者时的反应。1 .续写线索：想到好主意联系邮件公司打开箱子感想.词汇激活行为类想到：occur to sb./strike

31、sb.偶然遇见：come across/run into打开：open/unfold突然哭起来：burst into tears/burst out crying情绪类疯狂地：frantically/insanely【点睛】高分句型 1 JI knew if I pulled this off, my grand arrival would be the best Christmas present I could ever give my sister.（由关系代词that引导的定语从句，省略了 that）高分句型 2It was such a gift to be able to atte

32、nd my sisters graduation to show her my love, and it was a memory that both of us would cherish forever.（由关系代词 that 引导的定语从句）3.（2022.福建福州.模拟预测）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使 之构成一篇完整的短文。It was my twelfth birthday, and what I really wanted most was a new bicycle. But I knew that my family couldnt afford on

33、e, so I settled fbr a bedside table with lockable drawers, a safe place to keep my private stuff.We went to the charity shop where we found an old dark one. It didnt look too cool, but I thought that I would paint it to make it look better.After we took it home, I was getting ready to paint it. When

34、 I pulled the drawers out. I felt something stuck to the back. I reached in all the way, and guess what? A sealed bag with some papers in it.When I opened the bag, I realized that the papers were official documents. And, wrapped in them were a bunch of ten and twenty dollar bills! Talk about finding

35、 a treasure! And on my birthday!“Is this some kind of joke?” I said aloud. I went ahead and read the papers, and it turned out to be a will. Some old lady was leaving her savings for her son and grandchildren.My mind was going crazy. Was I the luckiest twelve-year-old ever? With this money I could b

36、uy the coolest bicycle. Who know siI began counting. When I reached a thousand dollars, my mother was knocking on my bedroom door. I quickly closed the drawer with the money in it.“Do you want some help? Is everything all right? she asked.No, everything was not right. Actually, my stomach was growli

37、ng （彳氐吼）.Tm okay, I lied.When my mother left my room, I lay on my bed, starting thinking. What a dilemma （窘境）！ I wished there were some one I could talk with. Could I keep it and get all kinds of stuff for me and my family? It wouldnt be too bad for me to keep it, if I shared it.right? Thoughts ran

38、through my mind. But I really didnt need someone else to give me the answer.注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。I finally made a decision and called my parents into my bedroom.Though surprised, the shop owner helped find the familys telephone number.参考答案：I finally made a decision and called my parent

39、s into my bedroom. When my parents saw what I had found in the drawer they were wide-eyed and speechless! Then, they read the papers carefully and were moved to tears. When they asked, What should we do?” I said, Lets take it back to the store and find her family?7 My father nodded with a smile on h

40、is face and my mother hugged me warmly, saying You are my pride, dear. I felt very happy because I already knew right from wrong. We collected all the money and papers at once, putting them in the drawer. We rushed to the charity shop with the drawer in the hope to find the owner as soon as possible

41、.Though surprised, the shop owner helped find the familys telephone number. Within a few minutes, the family all came over. When I showed them what I had found in the drawer, they couldnt believe their eyes. The parents had tears in their eyes. They were still sad about the ladys death and the fathe

42、r had just lost his job. It was easy to see that my act of honesty gave them hope. They showed me sincere gratitude from the bottom of their hearts. In fact, I had never felt better before. No new bicycle could have made me felt as good about myself as I felt that day because I passed a very importa

43、nt test-a lost and found test of my own character.【解析】【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者在12岁生日时，父母给他买了一个二手的床头柜作为 生日礼物，作者发现在床头柜里有以前主人的遗书和很多现金，经过一番思想斗争之后，作 者和家人一起把钱还给了去世老人的家人们。【详解】.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我终于做了决定，把父母叫到我的卧室。”可知，第一段可描写作者与 父母分享这件事后，他们做出归还东西的经过。由第二段首句内容“店主虽然很惊讶，但还是帮他找到了这家人的电话号码。”可知，第二 段可描写作者与那一家人见面的经过以及个人的深切感受。1

44、 .续写线索：做出决定父母的表扬一一寻找失主失主的感激个人感悟.词汇激活 行为类着急去：rush to/ hurry to 归还：take sth. back/ return sth. 拥抱：embrace/hold in ones arms 情绪类感动落泪：be moved to tears/ be touched to tears感谢：show sincere gratitude/ /be grateful【点睛】高分句型 1 When my parents saw what I had found in the drawer they were wide-eyed and speechl

45、ess!（由when引导的时间状语从句和what引导的宾语从句）高分句型 2J We collected all the money and papers at once, putting them in the drawer.（使用现 在分词作伴随状语）高分句型 3 It was easy to see that my act of honesty gave them hope.（由 that 引导的主语从句）4. （2022.福建龙岩.一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构 成一篇完整的短文。Its a beautiful sunny day. The Bonds

46、boarded their boat for a carefree day trip to Dove Island for some fishing as a family custom. Thomas Bond, a 30-year-old construction worker, loved the sport, especially catching bass （妒鱼）and had impressed on his oldest daughter, Lizzy, a love of the outdoors, teaching her how to bait （下诱饵）a hook a

47、nd cast a line and brave the waves.The family spent the day fishing in the vast ocean, and then left the island in the early evening. Upon setting off from the shore, they found thick fog rolling in. Lizzy fell into a light sleep beside her five-year-old sister, Molly, at a table on the boats lower

48、deck （甲板）.Their father sharp orders woke her up: “Get out of the boat. The boats sinking! Lizzy pushed her sister into the cold, dark water. Both girls wore life jackets. The adults did not. The girls were followed by their mother, Petra Bond, who was expecting a baby at that time. Within seconds, the boat was damaged and was left just the tip of its bow in the air.Looking into the faces of her father, mother, and sister, Lizzy wasnt frightened. After some time, her father told them he would swim fbr help. Ill be back J he said before disappearing into