读后续写练习 写作指导讲义----2023届高三英语二轮复习写作专项.docx

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1、读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。Growing up on a small farm, I lived a life that I took for granted. My father worked in the city as a plumber（水暖T）. He was not highly educated, but he was smart, looking at problems in an engineers way. He was a man made of leather, brass and chewing tobacco who tri

2、ed to teach my brother and me useful things, including respect. He also had a temper and was strict with us for he would scold us when we made some careless mistakes. Sometimes, my father seemed like a distant enemy to me and I didnt like him very much.One day I came home from primary school and his

3、 car was already there. Once inside, I was told by my mother that he didnt feel well. His back hurt. My father never missed work； in fact, when he came home, he went to the barn to work even more. I remember looking at him secretly around the corner as he lay on his bed in the middle of the day.Late

4、r, my mother told me he got multiple myeloma（多发性骨髓瘤）,a type of blood cancer. As the cancer grows, the person will shrink because the disease destroys the body/s energy and the abnormal antibodies cause problems for other cells and tissue. Bones eventually look like Swiss cheese, and when they break,

5、 they may never heal. But I didnt realize that my fathers time was rather limited and just treated him the same way I used to.For the last year of my fathers life, his entire day consisted of rising from his hospital bed in the living room and walking to his chair to sit and think. He was predictabl

6、y in that chair when I came home one day during the ninth grade. I do not remember where my mother and brother were, but the two of us were alone.注意：1 .所续写短文的词数应为150左右：2 .续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；Paragraph 1：He asked me to sit down and what he told me still moves me these decadesla ter. Paragraph 2：At t

7、hat moment ， I realized that he was doing more than telling.试题分析Hello, August!前文分析人物 father：oworked in the city as a plumberowas not highly educated, but smarto a man made of leather, brass and chewing tobacco who tried to teach my brother and me useful things, including respectohad a temper and was

8、 strict with usoseemed like a distant enemy to meo never missed worko got multiple myeloma01:o lived a life that I took for grantedo didnt like him very mucholooking at him secretly around the corner as he lay on his bed in the middle of the dayodidnt realize that my fathers time was rather limited

9、and just treated him the same way I used to主要情节父亲是一个水暖工，为了一家人的冷暖，总是忙于工作，无暇顾及家人，对小孩 子的教育总是“严字当头。我对父亲没什么好感，甚至把他当作“敌人来对待。后来， 父亲病了，母亲告诉我说，父亲得了多发性骨髓瘤（一种血液方面的病），这种病让 父亲的身体状况更加糟糕，但是我总是不以为然，也不关心父亲还有多少有生之年。 在父亲还在的最后一年，他就只能在病床和椅子之间不断转换。九年级的一天放学回 家，屋里只有我跟父亲两人，母亲和哥哥也不知道去了哪里，两人无话可说地呆着。.冲突点如何从不理解父亲到接受并珍惜父亲？续写部分对两

10、段开头的解读。段1：He asked me to sit down and what he told me still moves me these decades later. 总关键要突出 what he told me,而且 still moves me。段2：At that moment, I realized that he was doing more than telling.如何在这段中体现父亲的doing,虽然现在父亲躺在病床上或只能坐在家里的 椅子上。考虑行文的合理性方面几个注意点：前文最后写的父亲是坐在椅子上的，而且屋里只有父亲和我两人。父亲到底说了什么使得我几十年后还清

11、晰记得。为什么我认为当时跟父亲的一次长谈不是父亲在说故事而是他的真心的 “做。对父亲的认识如何从“敌人”转为“父亲可以写些什么段1：当时父亲的身体状况父亲与我分享了他的珍贵的人生经历把与父亲的心结打开了4段2:回忆过往父亲的所作所为现状让我感动父亲的爱让我珍藏终生-试题分析-下水文Hello, August!一Paragraph 1：He asked me to sit down and what he told me still moves me these decades later. That was when my father was in a relative good healt

12、h condition rising from his hospital bed and sitting in his predictable chair. He asked me to go over and sit beside. He shared his past precious life, his deep love for us, his strong belief, etc. Thats the first time when I stayed so close to him since my primary school. And thats also when I had

13、a deep understanding about why he was always strict with us and why he worked so hard. (85 words)Paragraph 2：At that moment, I realized that he was doing more than telling. Indeed, since I was able to remember something, my father was always engaged in chores both in family life and his work, let al

14、one playing with us on the farm. However, his cancer just asked him to slow down his life paces and enjoy such a beautiful life with us, though he suffered a lot. His patient but unspectacular life story moved me, tears welling up in my eyes. What precious but talkative love from my so-called distan

15、t “enemy”, which I would cherish the whole life! (86 words)参考范文Hello, August!Paragraph 1:He asked me to sit down and what he told me still moves me these decades later. Lying on the hospital bed, he told me about his life on the farm, his family, his loves, and his heartbreaks. Although he was tortu

16、red by the cancer, his inner self rushed out to me in a great flood as if a pipe had burst all of a sudden. He had been speaking for maybe an hour or more and mentioned that he actually felt regretful about being too strict with us.Paragraph 2:At that moment, I realized that he was doing more than t

17、elling. He was asking to be forgiven. All it took was to understand that was what he needed, and I forgave everything, immediately. The thought of my father being an enemy disappeared, with tears rolling down on my face. I held my fathers hands tightly, enjoying this deep but quiet love. Although he has gone for a long time, I still always remember that moment and the realization that I love him. (153 words)