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1、Task-writing Task-writing How to write a summary读写任务评分原则读写任务评分原则(assessing principles)(assessing principles)1 1、本试题总分为、本试题总分为2525分，分两部分给分分，分两部分给分 短文概短文概括括5 5分分 主题写作主题写作 2020分。分。2 2、强调内容健康，观点鲜明，说服力强，表述清、强调内容健康，观点鲜明，说服力强，表述清晰。可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原晰。可参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。文中的句子。3 3、评分时，选根据文章语言的规范、内容的合适

2、、评分时，选根据文章语言的规范、内容的合适及篇章的连贯性初步确定其所属档次，然后以该及篇章的连贯性初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。4 4、语言规范：拼写与标点符号是语言规范的一个、语言规范：拼写与标点符号是语言规范的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5 5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。档次。评分标准评分标准(assessing crit

3、eria)(assessing criteria)1.1.概括的准确性。概括的准确性。语言简洁明了，能客观、准确、全面地转述语言简洁明了，能客观、准确、全面地转述所给文字材料。所给文字材料。2.2.语言的规范性。语言的规范性。语言合乎语法，地道自然。（无中国式英语）语言合乎语法，地道自然。（无中国式英语）3.3.内容的合适性。内容的合适性。选材必需切题；内容符合写作要求；论据能选材必需切题；内容符合写作要求；论据能证明论点证明论点Narration(记叙文记叙文)1Argumentation(议论文议论文)3Exposition(说明文说明文)2Identify the style of th

4、e passageSkills of writing a summary?Skill1:Omit(省略省略)the details Skill2:Omit the examplesSkill3:Use general(概括性概括性)words instead of specific(具体的具体的)words Skill4:Put the main points of a dialogue in indirect speech(间接引接引语，第三人称，第三人称)Skill 1 Omit the details,examplesEX:Last Sunday,I went fishing.I wen

5、t fishing.I met a friend.1).Yesterday,I met an old friend on the way to the bus station.2).She bought a lot of vegetables such as cabbage,carrots,cucumbers and tomatoes.She bought a lot of vegetables.1).He likes swimming,running,playing football,basketball and so on.Skill 2 Use general(概括性概括性)words

6、instead of specific(具体的具体的)wordsEX:In the following six hours,I caught over 10 fish.I caught some fish.He likes sports.2).She bought a few copies of China Daily,English Weekly and People Daily.She bought some newspapers.Patience is the key to success.Skill 3 Paraphrase The key to success is patience

7、.Patience leads to success.Patience is the secret of success.Patience is very important to success.The secret of success is patience.When Sam first got to his boarding school with his parents,he was very happy.He thought he would be able to go home every weekend.When he was told he would not,he star

8、ted crying because the thought of not seeing his parents was driving him crazy.He was given uniforms and all other things that he would need for the term.He started crying when it was time for his parents to leave.He was then taken to the dorm,where he saw other children happy.He tried as much as he

9、 could to fit in but could not because his mind was at home.He started feeling homesick(想家)and wanted to go home as soon as possible.He got sick soon because he could not eat the school food.He could not concentrate in the classroom.All he could think was being at home with his family.He had no mobi

10、le phone or other means to get in touch with his parents.He was angry and felt lonely.He thought his parents hated him and that was why they left him in a boarding school.第一类：第一类：记叙文记叙文例文例文(1)(1)谁做了什么？谁做了什么？Sam got to a boarding school and he felt homesick.(2)(2)结果结果如何？如何？He got sick.He was angry wi

11、th his parents and felt lonely.Summary Sam could not get used to the life of the boarding school,and he thought his parents hated him and left him in it,which made him sick,angry and lonely.（31words）Summary Alan was given more money by the clerk mistakenly.In order not to put the clerk intotrouble,h

12、e returned the money.Finally,he was praised for his honesty.巩固练习巩固练习第二类：第二类：说明文说明文例文例文 “对象对象 +性质功能性质功能 +利好利好”模式模式 The writer introduces the idea of a balloon robot,especially how it helps to guide people to their destination without being connected to the Internet,from which we know it may become po

13、pular in the future.“问题+解决方法解决方法”模式模式 The passage tells us how to be a good friend,including listening more to friends talking,offering help when necessary,staying with them and making plans together.巩固练习巩固练习论点论点论据论据结论结论1.we memorize some things more quickly and accurately in the morningGetting up e

14、arly has been regarded as a good habit2.build our bodies and become much healthier3.have enough time to make a plan and get ready for our work or study of the day例文例文 第三类第三类 议论文议论文 getting up early is a good habit and try our best to keep it例文例文 The passage tries to tell us that getting up early in

15、the morning is a good habit that will benefit us a lot,including a better memory,healthier body and better preparation for the day.论点论点论据论据1.work keeps people busy,away from lonelinesswork is helpful to health2.work serves as a bridge between man and reality3.work gives one a sense of fulfillment and a sense of achievement巩固训练巩固训练 第三类第三类 议论文议论文 The author highlights the effect of work on peoples health,because it can rid one ofloneliness,and make one feel successful and proud of himself,which always contributes to a good body.巩固练习巩固练习