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1、广东高考英语基础写作技巧指导 Still waters run deep.流静水深流静水深,人静心深人静心深 Where there is life,there is hope。有生命必有希望。有生命必有希望 上周，我们以上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像谁是你的偶像”为题，在为题，在2600名学生中进行了一次调查名学生中进行了一次调查(survey)。以下。以下是调查数据：是调查数据：1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；2男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；3“父母父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异；在男女生偶像中的排序差异；4男女生在以伟人为偶

2、像方面的异同；男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；5你的偶像及理由。你的偶像及理由。07年年广广东东卷卷 你很荣幸地成为你很荣幸地成为2008北京奥运会的一名志愿者，北京奥运会的一名志愿者，负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。负责编写奥运比赛项目的英语介绍。【写作内容】：请根据以下中文提纲，编写射写作内容】：请根据以下中文提纲，编写射击项目的英语介绍：击项目的英语介绍：背景：射击最初只是生存工具，背景：射击最初只是生存工具，19世纪末才世纪末才发展成为一项体育运动。发展成为一项体育运动。1896：第一次成为奥运项目：第一次成为奥运项目1904：中断：中断1928：中断：中断1932：重回奥运会：重回奥

3、运会1968：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛：第一次允许妇女参加奥运射击比赛现状：稳步发展，现状：稳步发展，1896奥运会只有三项射击奥运会只有三项射击项目，现今有项目，现今有17项。项。08年年广广东东卷卷 1、写作题材贴近考生的学习和生活。、写作题材贴近考生的学习和生活。2、信息点多，必须用、信息点多，必须用5句话表达。句话表达。3、信息呈现方式多为表格、图表等。、信息呈现方式多为表格、图表等。4、以翻译为基础、注重考察表达能力。、以翻译为基础、注重考察表达能力。一、题型特点：一、题型特点：二、能力要求:1 1、审题能力、审题能力 2 2、处理信息的能力：、处理信息的能力：信息组合、排列合

4、理信息组合、排列合理3 3、表达能力、表达能力 语法正确语法正确 句式灵活句式灵活 信息内容表达准确、完整信息内容表达准确、完整 语篇连贯语篇连贯三、表达能力训练三、表达能力训练1.1.写好简单句写好简单句简单句的五种基本句型：简单句的五种基本句型：1 1）主语）主语+不及物动词不及物动词 (S+V)2 2）主语）主语+及物动词及物动词+宾语宾语 (S+V+O)3 3）主语）主语+系动词系动词+表语表语 (S+V+P)4 4）主语）主语+及物动词及物动词+双宾语双宾语 (S+V+O+O)5 5）主语）主语+及物动词及物动词+宾语宾语+宾补宾补 (S+V+O+C)Ex:改正下列病句并指出基本句型

5、。改正下列病句并指出基本句型。1.My favourite subjects including English and Chinese.2.Last week we hold a discussion about this topic.3.The future life will become more and more better.4.The fire destroied their houses.5.He spends two hours to study English every night._应改为应改为include_应改为应改为held_应改为应改为better and be

6、tter_应改为应改为destroyed_应改为应改为studying6.He cost ten dollars for the book.7.He felt confused，he didnt know what to do.8.He watched TV for a while before went to bed.9.She is confidence and patience.10.In his opinion,get fat is a terrible thing._应改为应改为paid_应改为应改为.He_应改为应改为going_应改为应改为confident and patien

7、t_应改为应改为getting fat2 2、如何做到句式灵活？、如何做到句式灵活？1)1)并列句并列句2)2)复合句复合句(定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句定语从句、状语从句、名词性从句)3)3)强调句型强调句型4)4)非谓语动词非谓语动词5)5)倒装句倒装句6)6)其他句型及结构其他句型及结构Ex:按要求改写下列句子。按要求改写下列句子。1)English is widely used in the world.Most business letters are written in English.(合并为并列句合并为并列句)English is widely used in the wo

8、rld and most business letters are written in English.2)People thought of some ways to solve the problem.These solutions didnt work.(合并为并列句合并为并列句)People thought of some ways to solve the problem but these solutions didnt work.3)I suggest that you visit the Great Wall.It has a history of more than two

9、 thousand years.(合并为定语从句合并为定语从句)I suggest that you visit the Great Wall,which has a history of more than two thousand years.4)July 11 has been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005.Zheng He began his famous voyage on July 11.(合并为定语从句合并为定语从句)July 11,when Zheng He began his famous voyage,has

10、 been named the Sailing Day in our country since 2005.5)I will not be able to meet you at the airport.I have some experiments to do that day.(合并为状语从句合并为状语从句)I will not be able to meet you at the airport because I have some experiments to do that day.6)The problem was complicated.He solved it in only

11、 two hours with a computer.(合并为状语从句合并为状语从句)Though the problem is complicated,he solved it in only two hours with a computer.7)In the past five years,there have been changes in peoples diet.It is a fact.(合合并为名词性从句并为名词性从句)It is a fact that in the past five years,there have been changes in peoples diet

12、.8)The weather was fine.We went to visit the ZhongShan Park.(独立主格结构独立主格结构)The weather being fine,we went to visit the ZhongShan Park.9)You should never give up when you are faced with difficulties.(非谓语非谓语+倒装句倒装句)Never should you give up when faced with difficulties.10)When a man and a woman meet,the

13、 woman first offers her hand.(改为强调句改为强调句)When a man and a woman meet,it is the woman who first offers her hand.11)众所周知众所周知,吸烟危害健康。吸烟危害健康。（一句多译）（一句多译）a.It is known to all that smoking does harm to peoples health.b.As is known to all,smoking harms peoples health.c.Everyone knows that smoking is harmfu

14、l to peoples health.四、如何使文章连贯？四、如何使文章连贯？(过渡词的使用过渡词的使用)1)时间：时间：soon,then,suddenly,meanwhile,before,after,earlier,in the morning,afterwards,later,immediately,next,the other day,nowadays,gradually2)空间空间:above,below,up,down,under,near,far from,in front of,behind,beside,beyond,on the right/left,around,in

15、side,outside,opposite to,next to,on top of,across.3)列举：列举：for example,such as,first(ly),second(ly),finally,besides,apart form,for one thingfor another thing 4)比较比较:like,unlike,on the contrary,in contrast to,on the one handon the other hand,than,not soas,asas,while,similarly,the former,the latter,som

16、eothers,onethe other,compared with5)逻辑关系：逻辑关系：a.并列：并列：and,as well as,alsob.转折：转折：but,however,yetc.递进：递进：besides,apart from,in addition,whats more,furthermore,moreover,to make things worsed.原因：原因：because,because of,as,since,for that reasone.结果：结果：so,therefore,thus,as a result f.让步：让步：though,although,

17、in spite of五、基础写作的推荐步骤：五、基础写作的推荐步骤：1 1、认真审题、认真审题 2 2、归纳、排列信息点、归纳、排列信息点 3 3、确定短语和句型、连词成句、确定短语和句型、连词成句4 4、组句成篇、组句成篇5 5、检查修改、检查修改 高高 三三 学学 生生 现现 状状负担过重的原因负担过重的原因每天在校时间每天在校时间约约10小时小时1.面临高考；面临高考；2.家长期望高。家长期望高。每天作业时间每天作业时间3-4小时小时每天娱乐时间每天娱乐时间几乎没有几乎没有每天睡眠时间每天睡眠时间不足不足某报设有一个求助信箱，请根据以下表中列出的信某报设有一个求助信箱，请根据以下表中列

18、出的信息，以高三学生李华的名义给息，以高三学生李华的名义给Mr.HelperMr.Helper写一封英文写一封英文短信。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入五句话。短信。信的开头和结尾已写好，不计入五句话。Dear Mr.Helper,Im a senior 3 student.I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure._ I am looking forward to your advice.Yours sincerely,Li Hua写作步骤：写作步骤：1 1 体裁格式体裁格式

19、2 2 内容内容3 3 人称、人称、时态时态4 4 信息点的整信息点的整合和排列合和排列第第1 1步步 审题审题写信写信描述高三学生描述高三学生现现状。状。第一人称。一般第一人称。一般现现在在时时。6 6项项第第2 2步步 整合信息整合信息,译成英语。译成英语。1)每天在校时间约每天在校时间约10小时。每天完成作小时。每天完成作 业时间业时间34小时。小时。Every day we stay at school for about ten hours to have lessons.We spend at least three to four hours doing our homework

20、.2)每天几乎没有时间娱乐、消遣。每天几乎没有时间娱乐、消遣。a.We hardly have any time for relaxation.b.Hardly can we find any time to do what we want.3)每天睡眠时间不足，不利于健康。每天睡眠时间不足，不利于健康。a.We dont have enough time to sleep,which does harm to our health.b.We suffer from lack of sleep,which,in the long run,is not good for our health.4

21、)负担过重的原因是面临高考。负担过重的原因是面临高考。a.The main cause of our heavy burden is the pressure from the college entrance examination.b.The reason why we are carrying such a heavy burden is that we are facing the college entrance examination.5)父母对我们的期望很高父母对我们的期望很高。a.Our parents expect too much of us.b.Our parents h

22、ave high expectations of us.Dear Mr.Helper,Im a senior 3 student.I am now in great need of your help because I can hardly stand the great pressure.Every day we stay at school for about ten hours tohave lessons _ spend at least three to four hours doing our homework._,hardly can we find any time to d

23、o what we want._,We suffer from lack of sleep,which,in the long run,is not good for our health.The reason why we are carrying such a heavy burden is that we are getting the pressure from the college entrance examination._,Our parents have high expectations of us.I am looking forward to your advice.Y

24、ours sincerely,Li Hua第第3 3步步 连句成篇连句成篇andAs a resultWhats worseIn addition假设你最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比假设你最近参加了由某电视台举办的中学生英语演讲比赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏赛并获奖，该台准备组织获奖者去北京参加一次英语夏令营活动。令营活动。电视台现就活动时间和活动内容征求你的意见。请按照电视台现就活动时间和活动内容征求你的意见。请按照以下要求以书信形式给予答复。以下要求以书信形式给予答复。1、选择适合你的时间并、选择适合你的时间并说明理由；说明理由；2、解释你只能参加其中的两项

25、活动（听英语、解释你只能参加其中的两项活动（听英语讲座和教外宾学中文），虽然你认为所有的活动都很有讲座和教外宾学中文），虽然你认为所有的活动都很有意义；意义；3、说明你选择的理由：听英语讲座了解英美文化、说明你选择的理由：听英语讲座了解英美文化的信息；教外宾学中文因为的信息；教外宾学中文因为2008北京奥运让越来越多的北京奥运让越来越多的外宾想了解中国。外宾想了解中国。Im glad to be invited to the English summer camp.活动时间活动时间 7月月15日日-22日或日或 8月月15日日-22日日 活动内容活动内容 参加英语角参加英语角 学唱英语歌曲学唱英语歌曲听英语讲座听英语讲座 表演英语短剧表演英语短剧看英语电影看英语电影 教外宾学中文教外宾学中文 08样题样题