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1、概概要要写写作作Teaching aims:(1)Enable Ss to find the topic sentences and main idea(2)Learn to use five techniques to paraphrase the sentences试题呈现 阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。If you are a perfectionist,you are probably familiar with the feeling of wanting to get everything just right.According to researchers

2、,perfectionists hold themselves to unrealistically high standards and become selfcritical（自责的）if they believe they havent met these standards.Amanda Ruggeri,writing about perfectionism for BBC Future,explains,When perfectionists dont succeed,they dont just feel disappointment about how they did.They

3、 feel shame about who they are.Although many people think seeking excellence as a good thing,researchers have found that on the extreme end,perfectionism is actually linked to lower mental health.In an article published in 2016,researchers found that people higher in perfectionism tended to have inc

4、reases in depression（抑郁）symptoms,which suggests that perfectionism may lead to depression.In other words,although people may think of their perfectionism as something that helps them succeed,it appears that their perfectionism may actually be harmful to their mental health.Thus,what can someone with

5、 perfection tendencies do to change their behavior?One possible alternative to perfectionism is developing what psychologists call a growth mindset Researchers at Stanford University have found that developing a growth mindset is a significant way to help you learn from your failures.Unlike those wi

6、th fixed mindsets,those with growth mindsets believe they can improve their abilities by learning from their mistakes.Another potential alternative to perfectionism is to develop self-compassion（自我同情）.The idea behind self-compassion is that you should treat yourself kindly when you make mistakes,rem

7、ind yourself that mistakes are part of being human,and avoid being consumed by bad emotions.In fact,psychologists point out that giving up on perfection doesnt mean being less successful.The key is to find ways to give an effort you can be proud of without demanding the impossible of yourself.Instea

8、d of struggling for perfect,struggle for good enough,which can actually help you develop a healthier way of setting goals for yourself in the long run.Step 1:Read for the genre,theme and the structure1.Read for the topic/theme2.Read for writing style3.Read for structureQ:Whats the writing style of t

9、he passage?A.Narration记叙文 B.Argumentation议论文 C.Exposition说明文Perfection/Perfectionism(1)introduce a real object(a dictionary,a book)实体事物说明(2)explain an abstract thing(a research，a problem)抽象事理说明Step 2:Locate the topic sentences and key pointsPara 1：If you are a perfectionist,you are probably familiar

10、 with the feeling of wanting to get everything just right.According to researchers,perfectionists hold themselves to unrealistically high standards and become self-critical（自责的）if they believe they havent met these standards.Amanda Ruggeri,writing about perfectionism for BBC Future,explains,When per

11、fectionists dont succeed,they dont just feel disappointment about how they did.They feel shame about who they are.”introduce the topica quote to support the topic According to researchers,perfectionists hold themselves to unrealistically high standards and become self-critical（自责的）if they believe th

12、ey havent met these standards.Topic sentence:topic sentenceTip 1:利用高频词找出主题 Para 2:Although many people think seeking excellence as a good thing,researchers have found that on the extreme end,perfectionism is actually linked to lower mental health.In an article published in 2016,researchers found tha

13、t people higher in perfectionism tended to have increases in depression（抑郁）symptoms,which suggests that perfectionism may lead to depression.In other words,although people may think of their perfectionism as something that helps them succeed,it appears that their perfectionism may actually be harmfu

14、l to their mental health.Step 2:Locate the topic sentences and key pointsTopic sentencean example for detailed explanationTip 2:pay attention to link phrases(注意连接词）Topic sentence:Tip 3:example and quote support the topicIn other words,their perfectionism may actually be harmful to their mental healt

15、h.Topic sentencePara 3：Thus,what can someone with perfection tendencies do to change their behavior?One possible alternative to perfectionism is developing what psychologists call a growth mindset.Researchers at Stanford University have found that developing a growth mindset is a significant way to

16、help you learn from your failures.Unlike those with fixed mindsets,those with growth mindsets believe they can improve their abilities by learning from their mistakes.Another potential alternative to perfectionism is to develop self-compassion（自我同情）.The idea behind self-compassion is that you should

17、 treat yourself kindly when you make mistakes,remind yourself that mistakes are part of being human,and avoid being consumed by bad emotions.Step 2:Locate the topic sentences and key pointsTopic sentence:raise a questiona research result to support Benefits of growth mindsets One possible alternativ

18、e to perfectionism is developing what psychologists call a growth mindset.those with growth mindsets believe they can improve their abilities by learning from their mistakes.Another potential alternative to perfectionism is to develop self-compassion detailed explanation of self-compassionTopic sent

19、enceTopic sentenceTip 4:If there is question at the beginning,please pay attention to the answer(s)如开头有提问，注意问题的答案Para 4:In fact,psychologists point out that giving up on perfection doesnt mean being less successful.The key is to find ways to give an effort you can be proud of without demanding the i

20、mpossible of yourself.Instead of struggling for perfect,struggle for good enough,which can actually help you develop a healthier way of setting goals for yourself in the long run.Step 2:Locate the topic sentences and key pointsperfection successTopic sentence:giving up on perfection doesnt mean bein

21、g less successful.The key is to find ways to give an effort without demanding the impossible of yourself.struggle for good enoughbrief idea：find wayssupporting:a detailed way Tip 5:并不是所有的段落都有主题句List all the key pointsPara 1:According to researchers,perfectionists hold themselves to unrealistically h

22、igh standards and become self-critical（自责的）if they believe they havent met these standards.Para 2:their perfectionism may actually be harmful to their mental health.Para 3:One possible alternative to perfectionism is developing a growth mindset.(主要点）those with growth mindsets believe they can improv

23、e their abilities by learning from their mistakes.（次要点）Another potential alternative to perfectionism is to develop self-compassion（主要点）Para 4:giving up on perfection doesnt mean being less successful.（次要点）The key is to find ways to give an effort without demanding the impossible of yourself.(主要点）st

24、ruggle for good enough（次要点）Paraphrase with techniques:Paraphrase with techniques:1.1.正反法正反法 You will fail.You will not succeed.I cant agree with you any moreI agree with you 2.2.词性转换法词性转换法 Patience is very important.Patience is of great importance.The pollution makes people very anxious about their

25、living environment.People show great _ about their living environment.anxiety3.3.同义替换法同义替换法:We can benefit from it It does good to us.I didnt catch any fish owing to the fact that I was no patient I didnt catch any fish _ I was not patient.because4.4.句式变换法句式变换法 Parents should give children more prai

26、se.（主被动）Children should be given more praise.Children should be encouraged more.This will help them learn faster.（简单句变复合句）Children should be encouraged more,will help them learn faster.Children are given more praise.They will achieve more success.（简单句变复合句）When children will achieve more success.whic

27、hgiven more praise5 5.句意理解法句意理解法Because he played carelessly we lost the game._,we wouldnt have lost the match.But for his carelessness Shopping on the internet is becoming increasingly popular.More and more people prefer Internet shopping.Possible version:According to researchers,perfectionism,whic

28、h means people pursuing perfection excessively,may contribute to poorer mental health.（要点1，2）However,by forming a growth mindset to see mistakes as learning opportunities,and replacing self-criticism with self-compassion,its possible to overcome perfectionism.（要点3）Perfection isnt equal to success,so try your best to do things well enough rather than demand too much of yourself.（要点 4）Step 4:Summary writing.