作文讲评_初三作文讲评课.ppt

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1、英语作文讲评 根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上根据要求完成短文写作，请将作文写在答题卡指定的位置上。许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存许多学习生活中的烦恼都会使人产生压力，为了更好地发现及解决同学们中存在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以在的心理压力问题，你们班特意开展了一次以“Less，Pressure，Better Life”为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好为主题的英语演讲比赛，请你准备发言稿，谈谈你的一些缓解压力的好办法，与同学分享，内容包括：办法，与同学分享，内容包括：1.同学中普遍存在的压力是什么

2、？同学中普遍存在的压力是什么？2.我的压力是什么？我的压力是什么？3.我是如何成功缓解压力的。我是如何成功缓解压力的。Less，Pressure，Better LifeHello，boys and girls！Pressure is a serious problem in todays world.Students in our class are under pressure._ Less pressure makes better life.Thats all.Thank you!本次作文展评：本次作文展评：1.Much pressure makes people sad,tired,e

3、ven angry.(李镇涛李镇涛)2.I always feel unhappy when I meet some trouble in study.(叶舒叶舒)3.Face the pressure,I have to do something to relax.(丘秀巧丘秀巧)4.All of us face study pressure.(李精理）李精理）5.I think pressure can make us study hard,but much pressure can make us unhappy.(李源基）李源基）1.In my free time,I often pl

4、ay basketbll with my friends on the playground.(张志军张志军)2.When I get into trouble,I often ask the teacher for help.()3.First of all,I often listen to music and watch TV,because it can make me have a good mood.(邓为有邓为有)4.Talking a walk is a good way to relax.(欧秋芸欧秋芸)5.At last,I will chat with my friend

5、s when my feeling is bad.(李精理李精理)1.In a word,we should try our best to solve problems.(张志军张志军)2.I believe I can!I will try my best to study hard in school.(刘鑫庭刘鑫庭)3.Have a good time playing with your parents.(孙程帅孙程帅)4.I hope you will be happy soon!(管艺涵管艺涵)5.It can make you get on well with your pare

6、nts.(孟德孟德嵘嵘)6.I think its important to talk with your parents about your ideas.(徐洁徐洁)1.Listen to music is also helpful.2.As we know,many students has many pressure in study.3.Students think study preessure is a serious problem,I think too.4.They will give us some advices to deal with the problem.5.S

7、o we usually feel tired when us meet some trouble.Listening muchsoadvicewe6.I often talk or listen some music with my friends.7.In the weekends,I often climb mountains with my friends!8.You can also do some sports.9.Many students has pressure.10.It make me feel tired.listen to Onalso canhavemakesHel

8、lo,boys and girls!Pressure are a serious problem in todays world.They feels so tired.I am busy with my study.However,I can relax myself.First,I with my friends often plays basketball in my free time.It make me happy.Second,I often ask the teacher for help when I get into trouble.They can give me use

9、ful advice.Third,listening to music are also helpful.I can sing along with some music.In a word,we should try our best to solve difficulty.Believe in yourself,you can do it well!Less pressure makes better life.Thats all.Thank you!根据下面的来信，写一封回信，词数根据下面的来信，写一封回信，词数80词左右。词左右。Dear Miss Sun,How are you?I

10、failed my English test again.I thought I had tried my best,but why?I dare(敢敢)not to tell my parents about it,So I was upset.Could you tell me what to do?Yours,Wei HuaDear Wei Hua,_ Yours，Miss Sun时态时态人称人称确定基本要素确定基本要素When,Where,Who,What,Why,Howfail your English testbe upsetworry aboutFailure is the mo

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