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1、基础写作评讲IV 基础写作基础写作（共（共1小题，满分小题，满分15分）分）【写作内容】上周末在我校3400名学生中进行了有关“幸福感”的相关问题调查。数据如下：比例“幸福感”的来源50%从家庭中获得幸福感：父母或亲友的爱、温暖的家庭生活30%从给予他人中获得幸福感：助人、捐赠、义卖10%从友情中获得幸福感：同学、老师、朋友等10%从其它方面：成功、成就等评价：调查情况体现了学生们是热爱生活的，但同时也反映了他们生活面较窄、视野不够开阔。1)上周末在我校3400名学生中进行了有关“幸福感”的相关问题调查。Last weekend,a survey about“The feeling of ha

2、ppiness”was carried out(conducted)among 3400 students in our school.2）50%的学生从家庭中获得幸福感：父母或亲友的爱、温暖的家庭生活。(It shows that)50%of the students gain happiness from the love of their parents or relatives and from the warmth of families.3）30%的学生从给予他人中获得幸福感：助人、捐赠、义卖10%的学生从友情中获得幸福感：同学、老师、朋友等About 30%of them exp

3、erience(taste)happiness by assisting others,donating and taking part in a voluntary selling while other 10%of the students feel delighted from friendship.4)（剩下的）10%（的学生）从其它方面（获得幸福感）：成功、成就等The rest of the students describe their happiness from different angles such as success as well as achievements.

4、5)（我的评价：）调查情况体现了学生们是热爱生活的，但同时也反映了他们生活面较窄、视野不够开阔。The survey shows that students have passion for life,but they lack life experience and broad horizons.From the figures,we can draw a conclusion that students have passion for life,but they lack life experience and broad horizons.Last weekend,a survey a

5、bout“The feeling of happiness”was carried out(conducted)among 3400 students in our school.It shows that 50%of the students gain happiness from the love of their parents or relatives and from the warmth of families.About 30%of them experience(taste)happiness by assisting others,donating and taking pa

6、rt in a voluntary selling while other 10%of the students feel delighted from friendship.In addition,the rest of the students describe their happiness from different angles such as success as well as achievements.From the figures,we can draw a conclusion that students have passion for life,but they lack life experience and broad horizons.