短文改错公开课课件.ppt

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1、德才高级中学德才高级中学 王王 刚刚1How to doProof-reading2Task 1:Task 2:Task 3:Our tasks:the exercise and secretethe skills of doing proof-readingthe information and demand in outline3高考短文改错专题高考短文改错专题v一一.对短文改错的要求对短文改错的要求 高考短文改错的目的在于测试考生判断发高考短文改错的目的在于测试考生判断发 现现,纠正语篇中语言使用错误的能力纠正语篇中语言使用错误的能力,以及考以及考 察考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的能力察

2、考生在语篇中综合运用英语知识的能力.4二二.近三年高考短文改错错误类型统计近三年高考短文改错错误类型统计 设题方式设题方式试卷试卷多一词多一词()缺一词缺一词()错一词错一词(_)2009年浙江卷年浙江卷1182009年辽宁卷年辽宁卷2172009年宁年宁海海卷卷1182008年宁年宁海海卷卷1182007年宁年宁海海卷卷1185三三.近三年高考短文改错考点分布表近三年高考短文改错考点分布表 时态时态语态语态非谓非谓语动语动词词一一致致副词副词形容形容词词名名词词代代词词介介词词冠冠词词连连词词2009年浙江年浙江1101113112009年辽宁年辽宁1001122122009宁宁海海1001

3、123112008宁宁海海0121021122007宁宁海海211111201考查点考查点试卷试卷61、We are going to have a meeting on next week.4、The boss made workers to work 10 hours a day.Look at these sentences and correct the Look at these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs.mistakes in them with the right signs.3

4、、He is fond of like English.2、He is more taller than me.5、He married with a beautiful girl.7总 结 1、时间状语前是否多了介词。2、形容词、副词比较级前是否多了相似词。3、固定搭配中是否多了词。4、不定式前是否多了应该省的to。5、及物动词后受母语的影响是否多了介词。一、多词8Look at these sentences and correct the Look at these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right sig

5、ns.mistakes in them with the right signs.1.I met student yesterday.2.He is looking a missing book.3.He wants have a rest.a for4.He praised by the teacher several times.to was5.Im looking forward your letter.to9总 结 1.名词前特别是可数名词前是否缺冠词。2.不及物动词是否缺介词。3.不定式是否漏了to.4.被动语态是否缺少了助动词be.5.习惯用法是否漏了不可缺少的词。二、缺词101.

6、It is time of me to walk my dog.forLook at these sentences and correct the Look at these sentences and correct the mistakes in them with the right signs.mistakes in them with the right signs.3.Passed the book store,he stopped to buy a book.4.He as well as his sister are a League member.readPassing i

7、s5.My pronunciation was terribly.6.I dont know that they dont like to talk with me.7.Some students may also save up for our college or future use.their2.She liked it very much and reads it to the class.8.She is smiling at me but nodding at me .terriblewhyand11总 结 1.介词是否误用。2.动词的时态、语态是否误用。3.非谓语动词是否误用。

8、4.主谓是否一致。5.判断句子中形容词和副词是否误用。三、错词 6.从句中关联词是否误用。7.代词是否误用。8.连词是否误用。12做题要求v假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。v增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在其下 面写出该加的词。v删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。v修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修 改后的词。v注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限 一词。2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计 分。13Passage 1：2009年浙江卷 One rainy d

9、ay while I was walking home with one of my friend,a truck came to a stop besides us.The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through.I stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful.The man insisted,so I grateful accepted the

10、 offer,thanked him and watched the truck disappear down the road.This man might need the umbrella himself,and he preferred to give it to everyone else.It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.14 One rainy day while I was walking home with one of my friend,a t

11、ruck came to a stop besides us.The driver put the window down and offered us a umbrella because he found we were wet through.I stood there and couldnt believe in that a complete stranger is so thoughtful.Passage 1：friendsbesideanwas15The man insisted,so I grateful accepted the offer,thanked him and

12、watched the truck disappear down the road.This man might need the umbrella himself,and he preferred to give it to everyone else.It was a lesson to us that it was possible give without expect anything in return.butPassage 1：gratefullysomeonesomebodytoexpecting16短文改错口诀 动词形，名词数动词形，名词数，注意是形和副注意是形和副非谓动词细

13、辨别，非谓动词细辨别，习惯用法要记住习惯用法要记住。句子成分多分析，句子成分多分析，逻辑错误需关注。逻辑错误需关注。删加各次心有数，删加各次心有数，改完一定要读读。改完一定要读读。17Passage 2 2009 海南卷 As is well know,when senior students graduate from school,most of their textbooks are throwing away,which are still in good condition.What a waste of it!I quite agree to the suggestion we s

14、hould recycle these textbooks.For one thing,recycling textbooks can save a lot of nature materials,which are used to making textbooks.For another,senior students may have plenty of useful notes in the pages.They are very much helpful to those textbooks users.whats most,the cost of the books will unl

15、oad some burden of the families of the students.Actually in Australia and any other countries,recycling textbooks are popular and it gives us a good example.18Passage 2 As is well know,when senior students graduate from school,most of their textbooks are throwing away,which are still in good conditi

16、on.What a waste of it!I quite agree to the suggestion we should recycle these textbooks.For one thing,recycling textbooks can save a lot of nature materials,which are used to making textbooks.knownthrownthatnaturalmake19Passage 2For another,senior students may have plenty of useful notes in the page

17、s.They are very much helpful to those textbooks users.Whats most,the cost of the books will unload some burden of the families of the students.Actually in Australia and any other countries,recycling textbooks are popular and it gives us a good example.moreisonsome20短文改错应注意的问题 .四不改。即：四不改。即：标点符号不改。大小写

18、不改。词序错误不改（不是不改，而是按错词或少词来 改)。在纲外生词不改。文中出现带汉语注释的词，在 句中不可能用错。.规范做题方法。规范做题方法。要严格按照示范，即用规定的符号去改错。不要 用文字去说明或用箭头去表示。换词、去词和加词三者不可混淆。21 Practice makes perfect.谚谚 熟能生巧熟能生巧 In a small town where there lived two brothers whom were very lazy.One day,before the mother went out to an evening party,she asked about

19、her two sons give the house a good cleaning.But before the mother left the room,the elder brother said to his younger brother,“Tom,when mother came back,you will say I have been ill and I can get out of bed.”the younger brothers agreed.“OK,and when mother turns back you will say I have gone to call

20、for a doctor for me.”22In a small town where there lived two brothers whom were very lazy.One day,before the mother went out to an evening party,she asked about her two sons give the house a good cleaning.But before the mother left the room,the elder brother said to his younger brother,“Tom,when mother came back,you will say I have been ill and I can get out of bed.”the younger brothers agreed.“OK,and when mother turns back you will say I have gone to call for a doctor for me.”who/thattoaftercomescantbrotherbutyou23Homework What did you learn from this lesson?2425Goodbye Goodbye 26