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1、phoenixsymbolismOn the way漫长、辛苦、劳累漫漫人生路的缩影漫漫人生路的缩影Possible Impossible山林、稻草人、大黑狗神秘、意料之外的事神秘、意料之外的事Help猎人、好心女士个体之间的联系、来匆匆去匆匆，自己的路自己个体之间的联系、来匆匆去匆匆，自己的路自己走走Forget抓药、为什么活着的理由活着的理由Phoenix浴浴火重生、火重生、生命轮生命轮回的生回的生生不息生不息ChristmasWriting style 情节简单，寓意深刻出发，路上，到达。圣诞节气氛与主人公名字“凤凰”呼应，通过主人公从日出走到正午，再走到日落，作者通过生命轮回和人生之路

2、的象征，在普通的故事中蕴含了深刻的哲理。捕捉细节，深化主题捕捉细节，深化主题外貌：She wore a dark striped dress reaching down to her shoe tops,and an equally long apron of bleached sugar sacks,with a full pocket.交代家庭背景动作动作:Her fingers slid down and along the ground under the piece of money with the grace and care they would have in lifting

3、 an egg from under a setting hen.使小说的象征使小说的象征意义具有普遍性和代表性，也使平凡的故事蕴含意义具有普遍性和代表性，也使平凡的故事蕴含了深刻的主题。了深刻的主题。独白话语独白话语陈述性自语陈述性自语倾诉性独语倾诉性独语异性化对白异性化对白交际性对话交际性对话陈述性自语陈述性自语“Up through pines”,she said at length.“Now down through oaks.”“Through the maze now”,she said,“for there was no path.”“Now comes the trial,”s

4、aid phoenix.推进叙事，读者参与推进叙事，读者参与倾诉性独语倾诉性独语“I wasnt as old as I thought,”she said.“Sun so high!”she cried,leaning back and looking,while the thick tears went over her eyes.“The time getting all gone here.”凸显主观评价凸显主观评价异性化对白异性化对白“Old woman,”she said to herself,“that black dog come up out of the weeds to

5、stall you off,and now there he sitting on his fine tail,smiling at you.”张三呀张三，你怎么这么糊涂呢？张三呀张三，你怎么这么糊涂呢？我怎么这么糊涂呢？我怎么这么糊涂呢？立体刻画人物，用逆向支撑方式，增加感立体刻画人物，用逆向支撑方式，增加感染力，使表述的信息更加突出。染力，使表述的信息更加突出。交际性对话Old Phoenix said,“Out of my way,all you foxes,owls,beetles,jack rabbits,coons and wild animals,”“Ghost,”she said sharply,“who be you the ghost of?For I have heard of nary death close by.”寻求沟通的欲望，前进的勇气和决心，深寻求沟通的欲望，前进的勇气和决心，深化主题化主题