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1、英语写作讲评课Teaching AimsKnowledge and skills:learn and grasp some words and expressions about this kind of topic.Process and methods:analyze the detail problems and the structure of the composition.Emotion,attitude and values:express positive opinions through cooperation with the partners.Teaching Proce

2、ssStep I.重新审题重新审题Step II.难点突破难点突破Step III.补充相关句型或表达补充相关句型或表达Step IV.错误纠正错误纠正Step V.让表达更精彩让表达更精彩Step VI.写作范例及查错改错、润色写作范例及查错改错、润色Step VII.巩固练习巩固练习Step VIII.课堂总结和拓展延伸课堂总结和拓展延伸Step I.重新审题重新审题 Examine the topic again,and solve the problems below after discussion.1.Style:_2.Tense:_3.Person:_4.Structure:_议

3、论文议论文（Argumentative Writing）PresentFirst and thirdThree parts开头开头 问题呈现问题呈现主体主体 正方观点论述正方观点论述+反方观点论述反方观点论述结尾结尾 陈述个人观点陈述个人观点 Step II.难点突破难点突破1.1.Person 写此类议论文时，作者（学生）一定要站写此类议论文时，作者（学生）一定要站 在客观的立场上来写，归纳介绍整体讨论在客观的立场上来写，归纳介绍整体讨论 的情况，因此应采用第三人称。行文中可的情况，因此应采用第三人称。行文中可 用用they,students,the others等。等。2.2.Expres

4、s personal opinions 个人观点大致分为三类个人观点大致分为三类个人观点大致分为三类：个人观点大致分为三类：支持其中一方的观点支持其中一方的观点。如如：In my opinion,we neednt hire private tutors.中立（折中两方的意见）。中立（折中两方的意见）。如如：Whether we have private tutors,we must study hard,or else we wont make any progress.保守或谨慎态度保守或谨慎态度。如如：Having a private tutor has both advantages

5、and disadvantages.Wed better think twice.Step III.补充相关句型或表达补充相关句型或表达1.问题呈现问题呈现Different people hold different opinions.Opinions are divided on the problem.People have different attitudes towards the problem.2.支持或反对一方的观点支持或反对一方的观点支持支持：be for,be in favor of,approve of,support the view 等等。反对反对：be again

6、st,disapprove of,oppose,object to the view 等等。3.过渡句过渡句：However,each coin has two sides.60%of the students hold the opposite opinion.60%of the students dont think so.过渡词过渡词:表示顺序。表示顺序。如如：first of all,to begin with,firstly,secondly,then,finally等等；表示对等、选择或递进关系。表示对等、选择或递进关系。如如：and,or,as well(as),eitheror

7、,also,besides,whats more,moreover,furthermore,whats worse,above all,not onlybut also,in addition等；等；表示转折或对比关系。表示转折或对比关系。如如：but,yet,while,however,instead,on the contrary,by contrast,otherwise,though,although,despite,in spite of等；等；表示因果关系。表示因果关系。如如：because,due to,thanks to,so,as a result,therefore,thu

8、s等；等；表示解释说明。表示解释说明。如如：in other words,that is,that is to say,namely,for example,such as等等；4.总结和表达个人观点总结和表达个人观点in my opinion,as far as Im concerned,personally(speaking),in all,in a word/in short,generally speaking,in conclusion,in brief 等等。Step IV.错误纠正错误纠正1.误用误用there be 句型句型如：如：There are 40%of the stu

9、dents think it necessary to hire private tutors.可改为：可改为：40%of the students think it necessary to hire private tutors.写作指导：在使用写作指导：在使用there be句型时，学生一定句型时，学生一定 要注意两个方面的问题：要注意两个方面的问题：充分考虑其意义和用法；充分考虑其意义和用法；不要受到汉语的干扰（不能一味地罗列单词不要受到汉语的干扰（不能一味地罗列单词 而不顾及语法规则）。而不顾及语法规则）。2.句子结构不完整句子结构不完整如：如：40%of the students

10、agree to the opinion.Because private tutors can easily find the students learning problems and solutions to them.可改为：可改为：40%of the students agree to the opinion because private tutors can easily find the students learning problems and solutions to them.写作指导：当句子中用到写作指导：当句子中用到because,if,unless,until等词

11、引导状语从句时，切记要核查一下等词引导状语从句时，切记要核查一下 是否有主句的部分，否则不能成为一个完整是否有主句的部分，否则不能成为一个完整 的句子。的句子。3.缺乏连词缺乏连词如：如：They think what should be learnt will be taught at school,the cost of paying a tutor is a burden of the parents.可改为：可改为：They think what should be learnt will be taught at school,and the cost of paying a tut

12、or is a burden of the parents.写作指导：作文中，很多同学偏爱逗号而根本不理写作指导：作文中，很多同学偏爱逗号而根本不理会句子的整体结构，出现了用逗号来连接句子的现会句子的整体结构，出现了用逗号来连接句子的现象。学生一定要牢记：英语中，逗号没有连接的功象。学生一定要牢记：英语中，逗号没有连接的功能。能。4.词或短语使用不当词或短语使用不当如：如：Many students are not in favor of inviting private tutors.可改为：可改为：Many students are not in favor of employing/ha

13、ving private tutors.又如：又如：Students should learn by heart.可改为：可改为：Students should concentrate on/devote all our energies to studies.写作指导：之所以出现此类错误，主要是学生往往写作指导：之所以出现此类错误，主要是学生往往只注意了英语词汇和短语的汉语词义，而忽视了其只注意了英语词汇和短语的汉语词义，而忽视了其词性及用法。因此，要求学生在平时学习词汇和短词性及用法。因此，要求学生在平时学习词汇和短语时，一定要关注词性、结构和习惯用法等，要减语时，一定要关注词性、结构和习

14、惯用法等，要减少汉语对词汇运用的干扰。少汉语对词汇运用的干扰。5.汉语式英语表达汉语式英语表达如：如：More depend on the private tutors will make them lazy at school.可改为：可改为：Depending too much on the private tutors will make them lazy at school.又如：又如：Students in favor of it are more and more.可改为：可改为：There are more and more students in favor of it.写作

15、指导：在英语学习中，汉语有一定的辅助作用，写作指导：在英语学习中，汉语有一定的辅助作用，但是也要避免汉语对英语表达的负面影响，即不要但是也要避免汉语对英语表达的负面影响，即不要用汉语思维来学习英语，也不要用汉语语序来编造用汉语思维来学习英语，也不要用汉语语序来编造英语句子。在造句时，要顾及到英语句子的结构和英语句子。在造句时，要顾及到英语句子的结构和表达习惯，不能照汉语的语序逐词拼凑。表达习惯，不能照汉语的语序逐词拼凑。Step V.让表达更精彩让表达更精彩1.句子巧整合句子巧整合 如如：We discussed whether it is necessary for middle schoo

16、l students to have a private tutor.Im writing to tell you about the discussion.可改为可改为：Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to have a private tutor.2.摆脱摆脱“平庸平庸”，用词更高级，用词更高级如：如：Since they pay money to learn from the tutors,the st

17、udents will study harder.可改为：可改为：The students will study attentively and efficiently since they pay money to learn from the tutors.3.逻辑性更强逻辑性更强如：如：If you want to learn something teachers at school will teach you.可改为：可改为：What should be learnt will be taught by their teachers at school.4.表达方式更高级表达方式更高

18、级如：如：There are altogether 100 students,and most of them dont think so.可改为：可改为：There are altogether 100 students,most of whom dont think so.Step VI.写作范例写作范例Dear editor,Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether it is necessary for middle school students to have a private tutor

19、.40%of the students think it necessary to do so.In their opinion,since a private tutor teachers only one student at a time,he can easily find the students learning problems and a solution to them.Besides,the student will study attentively and efficiently since they pay money to learn from the tutor.

20、However,most of the students(60%)dont think so.In their opinion,what should be learnt will be taught by their teachers at school anyway.They also believe that the students may not work hard at school because they know they canalways depend on the private tutor after class.Finally,the cost of paying

21、a tutor is a economic burden to the parents.Having a private tutor has both advantages and disadvantages.Wed better think twice.Yours sincerely,Li Hua改错改错&润色润色Allow the students about 5 minutes to correct the mistakes in their own compositions,and then try to polish up the articles.The polished poin

22、ts较高级的词汇较高级的词汇丰富的语法结构丰富的语法结构恰当使用过渡词或过渡句，使文章结构恰当使用过渡词或过渡句，使文章结构紧凑紧凑段落的优化段落的优化Step VII.巩固练习巩固练习1.作文话题：作文话题：某网站就新世纪的中学生怎样某网站就新世纪的中学生怎样学习开展讨论。主要有两种观点：一种观学习开展讨论。主要有两种观点：一种观点认为学生应该以点认为学生应该以“头悬梁锥刺股头悬梁锥刺股”的精的精神学习，另一种观点则认为应该抛弃旧观神学习，另一种观点则认为应该抛弃旧观念，玩学结合。网站请你把其中任何一种念，玩学结合。网站请你把其中任何一种观点加以总结，写成一篇英语文章，在网观点加以总结，写成

23、一篇英语文章，在网站上登载。站上登载。2.2.布置任务，合作完成。布置任务，合作完成。学生审题，确定写作关键点：学生审题，确定写作关键点：总结任何一方观点总结任何一方观点 有理有据有理有据 自拟合适的题目自拟合适的题目 正文中可从哪些方面阐述理由？如：正文中可从哪些方面阐述理由？如：As everyone knows,hard work leads to success.Every one of us want to succeed,so it is necessary for us to work hard at our lessons.We should make full use of

24、every minute to study our lessons.We work to live,but we live not to work.If one always works hard,they will become bored and will lose interest in their lessons.Its best to find a good scientific way to study so that we can make greater progress with less time.作文中可使用的相关名言。作文中可使用的相关名言。No pains,no ga

25、ins.Practice makes perfect.All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.3.3.独立写作独立写作4.4.选择习作一篇，大屏展示，选择习作一篇，大屏展示，师生共同改错并润色。师生共同改错并润色。Step VIII.课堂总结和拓展延伸课堂总结和拓展延伸1.1.学生总结议论文的写作特点和注学生总结议论文的写作特点和注 意事项。意事项。2.2.给出一个类似的图表文章，分析其给出一个类似的图表文章，分析其 大致写作框架结构。大致写作框架结构。Thank you for your attention此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！此课件下载可自行编辑修改，仅供参考！感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢感谢您的支持，我们努力做得更好！谢谢