高三英语讲评开放式书面表达--三步作文法课件.ppt

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1、书面表达：书面表达：古人云：古人云：“笑福开来笑福开来”。微笑是和谐的开始，微笑是。微笑是和谐的开始，微笑是沟通的通行证。微笑可以冰释前嫌，微笑可以舒缓窘境，沟通的通行证。微笑可以冰释前嫌，微笑可以舒缓窘境，微笑可以感化灵魂，微笑可以增强自信，微笑可以增添微笑可以感化灵魂，微笑可以增强自信，微笑可以增添魅力，微笑可以魅力，微笑可以 请你以微笑为主题写一篇英语短文，题目自拟。请你以微笑为主题写一篇英语短文，题目自拟。注意：注意：1.对所提示内容不要简单翻译，可以适当发挥。对所提示内容不要简单翻译，可以适当发挥。2.词数词数150左右。左右。3.文中不得提及考生所在学校及本人姓名。文中不得提及考生

2、所在学校及本人姓名。Before writing审题审题审主题：审主题：smile(微笑微笑)1.审人称：审人称：要求以微笑为主题写一篇英语短文。要求以微笑为主题写一篇英语短文。Smiling is the beginning of harmony.(smiling causes harmony.)smiling relieves stress 故人称应为第三人称故人称应为第三人称。2.审时态：审时态：smiling is smiling does 一般现在时一般现在时 3.审要点：审要点：微笑是和谐的开始，微笑是沟通的通微笑是和谐的开始，微笑是沟通的通行证，微笑可以冰释前嫌，微笑可以舒缓窘境

3、，行证，微笑可以冰释前嫌，微笑可以舒缓窘境，微笑可以感化灵魂，微笑可以增强自信，微笑可微笑可以感化灵魂，微笑可以增强自信，微笑可以增添魅力，微笑可以以增添魅力，微笑可以4.列提纲：三段法模式列提纲：三段法模式第一段：第一段：Introduction:主题句或背景导入或使用主题句或背景导入或使用hook.第二段：第二段：Body:具体细节或具体论据既要点陈述具体细节或具体论据既要点陈述。第三段：第三段：Conclusion:换种说法重申主题或提出倡换种说法重申主题或提出倡议、号召。（目前大多数作文的要求是表达自己议、号召。（目前大多数作文的要求是表达自己的观点）的观点）While writing

4、(注意书写注意书写)1.表达要点：用动宾短语来表达。表达要点：用动宾短语来表达。make us attractive.cause harmony.change our mood.build up the bridge of communication.mean confidence.relieve stress.mean success make us seem successful help stay positive.2.扩展成句：扩展成句：Smiling makes us attractive.Smiling changes our mood.Smiling relieves stres

5、s.Smiling people appear more confident.Smiling helps us stay positive.3.连缀成文：连缀成文：(1)关联词的使用。关联词的使用。(2)复杂句的使用。复杂句的使用。(3)高级词汇的使用。高级词汇的使用。Smiling makes us attractive.We are drawn to people who smile.Smiling changes our mood,as it can trick the body into feeling better.Smiling is infectious.When someone

6、 is smiling they lighten up the room,change the moods of others,and make them happier.Smiling relieves stress.It helps to prevent us from looking tired.Smiling people appear more confident,and are more likely to be approached.Smiling helps us stay positive.When we smile our body is sending the rest

7、of us a message that“Life is Good!”After writing1.检查单词拼写、标点符号等。检查单词拼写、标点符号等。2.检查要点是否遗漏。检查要点是否遗漏。3.检查句子结构是否正确。检查句子结构是否正确。4.估计字数是否符合要求。估计字数是否符合要求。学生作文中错误的句子：学生作文中错误的句子：Keep your smiles,you will healthier in the future.Smiling also contributes your selfconfident.Smile also can increase ours confident w

8、hich has a good effect on ours work.A idiom goes that when you smiles,you will own happiness.Not only smiling can promote the development of nationships with others,but also it can make ourselves live better than before.beandtoSelf-confidenceour confidenceourAn smilecan smilingfriendship学生作文中较好的句子：学

9、生作文中较好的句子：While you are sad,a gentle smile from your friends or even strangers will cheer you up.(王娟王娟)As is known to us all,smiling is the beginning of harmony.（刘晓菲）（刘晓菲）Since smiling has many advantages,why dont you smile all the time?Laughter is a good medicine.If you really smile,you will live l

10、onger and lead a happy life.(吴晓远吴晓远)For example,it is the beginning of harmony and it is also a good way to communicate with others.(刘刘静静)抄阅读文章中的句子;不知所云.得分为0分语言素质欠缺语言素质欠缺;基本功差基本功差;语句毛病多语句毛病多;大大小写小写;标点符号标点符号;书写不清等等书写不清等等;得得5分分.卷卷面面不不整整洁洁;涂涂改改较较多多;语语言言错错误误多多;层层次次不不清清;得得1 12 2分分语言不地道语言不地道;中文式思维中文式思维;词汇

11、错误词汇错误;卷卷面有涂改面有涂改;得得15 15分分.有少许语言错误有少许语言错误;得得2323分分范文：范文：Why Do We Smile?Everybody likes smiling.But why do we smile?Smiling makes us attractive.We are drawn to people who smile.Smiling changes our mood,as it can trick the body into feeling better.Smiling is infectious.When someone is smiling they l

12、ighten up the room,change the moods of others,and make them happier.Smiling relieves stress.It helps to prevent us from looking tired.Smiling people appear more confident,and are more likely to be approached.Smiling helps us stay positive.When we smile our body is sending the rest of us a message that“Life is Good!”So just try smiling our way through the day.Stay away from depression,stress and worry smiling.Smile when you meet others.Smile in time of difficulty.Smile when you feel sad.Smile wherever you are and whenever you can.