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1、读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。Twenty years ago, Chase Poust was only 7. On Sunday morning just before the Memorial Day, he, his dad Steven, and his 4-year-old sister Abigail, were out for a family boating trip on Florida* s St. Johns River. Chase and Abigail were swimming at the back of t

2、he anchored boat while Steven was on deck （甲板）fishing.It was a perfect outing一 it was so peaceful and the colors of the deep blue sky, the light green river water and the mild late May sunshine mixed to create a magic scene. Off the shore lay quietly several cottages. Everythng was sound until a str

3、ong current emerged and loosened Abigail * s grasp and she let go of the boat. Instantly realizing his sister would be swept away, Chase let go of the boat as well to try and reach her. At the same time, Chase screamed at his father desperately.Without thinking twice, Steven jumped into the water an

4、d swam towards the two kids with al 1 his efforts. But after realizing he couldn, t keep up with both kids, he was faced with a heartbroken decision. He told them he loved them very much because he wasn t sure what s going to happen. Steven tried his best to stick with both of his children. He wore

5、himself out. But his little daughter was washed away from him. Directing Chase to swim to shore for help, Steven stayed behind, keeping as close as he could to Abigai I as the 1 ife-vest that was keeping her above the waves floated further and further from his reach.It was a tough go for the 7-year-

6、old, but rather than attempting to swim all out, Chase wisely paced himself. Stopping to float or dog paddle when he was tired, he d rest and then set off again. The current was going the opposite way of going to the boat and the shore, so it was very hard to swim that way for Chase.注意:1 .续写词数应为15()

7、左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:An hour later, Chase swam to the shore, anyhow.Paragraph 2:Luckily, Steven and Abigail were found and rescued.试题分析文章分析：1 .人物：Chase： 7 years old；Abigail: his sister, 4 years old；Steven: his father2 .事件：两年前的一个星期天的上午，父亲Steven带着Chase和Abigail去佛罗里达州的 St. Johns河游玩。两个小孩在拴

8、好的小船边游泳，而父亲Steven则坐在小船上钓鱼。起 初，一切都很安好一一蓝天碧水，加上五月末和煦的阳光，不远处还有几幢小屋。突然， 来了一股很强的水流，Abigail没抓牢小船，被水冲了出去，Chase试图松开原先抓着小船 的手边向父亲大喊边想方设法去拉住妹妹，但水流急，被冲开。父亲Steven想尽力把两个 孩子都救起来，无奈因体力不支等原因，意识到不能同时救两个小孩，就指挥Chase游到 岸边求救，然后径自去救女儿Abigail。自救对于一个7岁的孩子来说，难度可想而知。 好在Chase非常明智地做出了行动。3 .冲突点:父亲Steven不能同时救两个孩子，儿子Chase如何自救4 .情

9、节安排： a第一段：Chase如何上岸（与前一句的swam to the shore衔接）上岸后，他做了什么开始实施救援（与下一段开头衔接） a第二段：父女被救上岸后的情况（与开头句衔接）三人全部获救，父亲对救援人员的感激之情感谢和庆幸的同时，要特别给7岁的儿子Chase点赞下水作文An hour later, Chase swam to the shore, anyhow. So exhausted was he that he had to stop to float once again. A short moment * s rest, with the hope of surviva

10、l, Chase gathered all his strength, swimming to the shore. Fortunately, he grabbed a branch of a tree sticking to the river surface and climbed to the bank. Without any delay, he ran breathlessly to the cottages for help. A thorough rescue work was soon carried out, some calling for ambulance, some

11、running along the river to search for the father and daughter. （84 words）Luckily, Steven and Abigail were found and rescued. They had the luck that nothing was wrong with them except that Abigail was still in the state of fear. Seeing the family members were all right, Steven felt quite a relief, an

12、d bowed again and again, thanking all the rescuers for their timely help, courage and selflessness. What made Steven feel proud was what Chase did-Chase s bravery, wisdom and suitable action, which gave him the chance to rescue Abigail. And one lesson they learned was that “Safety First” should be a

13、lways in mind. （85 words）参考范文An hour later. Chase swam to the shore, anyhow. Once on solid ground, he ran to the nearest cottage and called for help. Hearing Stevens desperate cries, people in the cottage rushed out immediately. Realizing what had happened, they sprang into action. They rushed to th

14、e bank of the river following Chase and paddled their boat instantly with rescue equipment towards the dad and daughter. Meanwhile, someone called the Rescue Department. Soon after, rescuers arrived. All of them did everything they could to carry out a thorough search. (79 words)Luckily, Steven and

15、Abigail were found and rescued. After ensuring their safety, people breathed a sigh of relief. Steven was deeply moved and expressed his gratitude to all the rescuers with tears swirling in his eyes. Then he hugged Chase and Abigail lightly and couldnt help weeping with joy. He couldnt be prouder of his son. It was the bravery, calmness and determination of the pint-sized superhero that changed everything. It was likely to be one Memorial Day the family would never forget. (75 words)