读后续写练习写作指导 讲义---高考英语二轮复习写作备考.docx

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1、读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短 文。Finally, the bell rang. “Dont forget to practice your class presentation at home!” Miss Bella cried as everyone started talking and packing their school bags. Jessy felt sick. She hated having to read aloud in class. She was sure everyone got really b

2、ored listening to her. Once, when Jessy was reading out her holiday diary, Lee was even looking at his watch, a silver and blue one which seemed just magical.Jessy watched Lee walk ahead of her as they left school. He seemed so clever, and he had a certain sort of shining confidence. He was just one

3、 of those people who were good at everything. Jessy sighed. As she turned the corner, she saw Lees watch lying right in the middle of the path.Jessy knew she should just pick it up and return it to him, but she didnt want to run after him. Jessy bent down quickly, picked up the watch and ran home. O

4、n arriving home, Jessy put it on almost without thinking. She was surprised it fitted so well. She walked to the mirror and started practicing her speech. Words just flooded out of her， Im going to talk about swimming. I have been lucky. Ive won lots of competitions. But when Im in a race, Im not re

5、ally thinking about winning. Im just loving the feeling of being in the water.Jessy laughed with excitement. She walked across the room. She suddenly seemed to have a certain sort of confidence. Turning back to the mirror, Jessy saw a flash of light from the watch in the glass. The flashes of silver

6、 seemed almost magical. So maybe Lees watch really DID have something magic about it.The next day, as the lesson began, Miss Bella asked who was going to be brave and go first. Nobody moved. Jessy slowly raised her arm. Before Miss Bella could say anything, there was a shout from behind. Shes stolen

7、 my watch!” Lee said angrily, “It went missing at school yesterday/9注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Paragraph 1:Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jessy, waiting for an explanation. Paragraph 2:Miss Bella smiled and asked the class to listen to Jessy fs speech first. 试题分析文章分析1 .人物： Miss Bella

8、：布置了家庭作业，让学生为第二天的presentation做好准备（从续写第一段开 头看出来，也是一位善于激励学生的好老师） Jessy：She hated having to read aloud in class. She was sure everyone got really bored listening to her.a Lee：He seemed so clever, and he had a certain sort of shining confidence. He was just one of those people who were good at everythin

9、g.He had a silver and blue watch which seemed just magical.2 .事件：Bella老师布置了家庭作业，第二天要求学生们做presentation。Jessy不太喜欢在 同学们面前大声朗读（表达），她觉得同学们不愿意听她的展示。不过，有一次，当 她在跟同学们分享她的假期日记的时候，她发现Lee在看着他的银蓝色的手表，他的 手表好像很有魔力，毕竟Lee在各方面表现都很优秀。那天放学路上，Jessy却无意中发现Lee的表丢在了地上。她想着表是要归还给 Lee的，但她想看看他的表到底有多少魔力。回家后，她戴上手表，发现很好。于是， 她就走到镜子

10、前开始练习第二天的演讲。真的很神奇文字像洪水般涌出来！她心 里感到很高兴，对第二天的presentation也很有信心，感觉Lee的手表真的很有魔力。第二天，Miss Bella让同学们开始进行演讲的时候，没人举手。Jessy慢慢举起手， 在她想解释点什么之前，后面突然有一个声音传来，说：“Jessy偷了他的手表。手表 昨天在学校里丢了。”3 .冲突点：Jessy如何既很好地做了 presentation又妥善地解释了手表在她手上的缘由。续写情节安排：A第一段：（与开头句衔接）在大家等着Jessy解释手表的时候，Jessy的心理表现是怎 样的有点后悔昨天没有直接把捡到的Lee的手表及时归还并马

11、上借用理了理想法，Jessy决定还是先请求Miss Bella让她把presentation做完再说（与 下一段开头衔接）院第二段：得到Miss Bella的允许后，Jessy开始准备演讲（与开头句衔接）“手表在腕”，presentation做的很顺利，她也很高兴，自信满满最终说明了事情的来龙去脉。（主题升华）其实，不是因为Lee的手表有魔力， 而是不断练习，让自己对做presentation很有信心成功来自于对自己的信心。下水作Paragraph 1:Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jessy, waiting for an explanation. A

12、n expression of embarrassment came to her. Recalling what happened the day before, Jessyfelt a bit regretful. Why didnt I run after Lee, returning and then borrowing hiswatch? I didnt mean to steal it!” Things were running in her mind. How to explain what happened to the watch? And what about the pr

13、epared presentation without it? . Clearing the messy thoughts, instead of telling the truth, she began to make a request to Miss Bella to give her the chance to present her speech. (86 words)Paragraph 2:Miss Bella smiled and asked the class to listen to Jessys speech first. Getting the permission, s

14、he calmed down herself and began to focus on her topic. With the “magical” watch on her wrist, Jessy really had a fluent presentation of what she had practised at home, which won thunderous applauses from the classmates. She filled herself with excitement, confidence, as well as great satisfaction.

15、The truth about Lees missing watch came to light. With thanks after thanks, Jessy returned the watch to Lee in a sincere manner. Actually, success came from being confident in oneself. (83 words)范文Everybody was fixing their eyes on Jessy, waiting for an explanation. A flush of embarrassment came to

16、her cheeks, making Jessy biting her lips. Dead silence suddenly fell. Then came Miss Bellas voice, Why is Lees watch on your wrist?” Jessy hesitated for a while and decided to tell the truth. However, on second thoughts of the well-preparedspeech and the magic of the watch, she changed her mind. Mis

17、s Bella, could I give thespeech first and then explain? She made a request in a tone of begging. (78 words)Miss Bella smiled and asked the class to listen to Jessy speech first. Jessy put away her fright, took a deep breath, and made for the platform. Casting a glance at the sea of faces watching he

18、r, Jessy cleared her throat and began her speech. Im going to talk about swimming.Word began to flood out of her. What a terrific a speech. Whispers went around the classroom, and even Miss Bella nodded with approval. Immediately Jessy finished her speech, a storm of applause erupted from the class. Relieved, Jessy told everyone the truth, and especially the magic of the watch. She returned the watch to Lee as she eventually realized the real source of confidence. (103 words)