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1、试题原题第二节（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇 完整的短文。Sunlight flooded through the window when Tomas was sitting at the kitchen table, struggling with a literary classic. Streamers of clouds drifted by high above in the sky. Not far away, the huge new tower blocks lined the road. The faint sound of ca

2、rs was dimly heard.His mother was chopping tomatoes for their dinner as usual. Suddenly she said, “You know, the thing I miss most is cooking a really hot salsa（辣番茄酱）, with fresh peppers straight from the garden/ She sighed. Thats what I miss most about Merida/7Tomas looked up from his book in surpr

3、ise. His mother had never talked like this about their old life before. He studied her now. She looked a little sad, but then she smiled at him and swept the pile of chopped tomatoes into the cooking pot.But Ive already learned a lot about this new country, Tomas, she said. “For a start, Ive learned

4、 that theres more than one way to make a salsa!” She waved a packet of chili spice powder at him, and they both laughed.Watching his mother busy in the kitchen preparing dinner, Tomas thought about the insight his mother had given him into her feelings, and he realized that he felt the same way abou

5、t leaving.Sure, it had been great for his father to get this good job, but it had also been hard. Tomas missed his old home especially the sun and the beach. And his mother missed Merida, too. She had loved working in her market garden, selling the fresh vegetables that she had grown herself and the

6、n coming home to cook up huge, tasty meals for her family. Tomass stomach rumbled at the memories.He thought about how different things were for them now, living in this large, gray apartment block where there was no garden and no friends dropping by to share their delicious meals.He sighed. At leas

7、t they were still able to speak regularly every night after dinner with his grandmother back i n Mexico over the computer Grandmother! Abuela!注意：1 .续写词数应为150左右；.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。Suddenly Tomas had an idea.A week later, a box arrived from Mexico.试题分析.试题分析：(1)人物： Tomas:儿子，因为爸爸在他国找到了一份不错的工作，跟着爸爸妈妈移居 他

8、乡V Tomass mother:从墨西哥移居他乡Grandmother:留在墨西哥(2)前文情节: 远在他乡，思念之情油然而生。Tomas无意间注意到一天晚饭前，妈妈说起 了思念家乡Merida及家乡用刚从菜园采摘的辣椒做的辣番茄酱。Tomas开 始不解，后来经过思量，也了解了妈妈的话意。他也开始想念家乡了，特别是家乡的阳光和沙滩。为了生计，现在移居他乡，多少有点失落，没有大大 的菜园，没有朋友的欢聚。但是，至少还能通过网络与远在墨西哥的奶奶说 说话。于是，Tomas就1 .主题：人与社会，人与自我如何解妈妈的思乡之情？2 .情节设计：第一段： Suddenly Tomas had an i

9、dea.决定给妈妈一个惊喜与奶奶交流奶奶决定给Tomas寄新鲜的辣椒过来第二段： A week later, a box arrived from Mexico.打开包裹 送给妈妈 主题升华一一 下水作文Suddenly Tomas had an idea. lt was apparent that I cant go to Mexico, but at least I can enjoy the tasty food from it, he thought to h imself, wearing an expression of excitement. Thinking of the de

10、licious food ranging from hot salsa to fresh vegetables, he felt as if he had tasted all of them. Tomas wasted no time turning on the computer and it didnt take much time to get in touch with his grandmother. They chatted with each other cheerfully, sweet memories crowding in. His hands sweating and

11、 heart pounding, he briefly explained his intention. It was no surprise that his grandmother agreed without any hesitation. (104 words)A week later, a box arrived from Mexico. No sooner had Tomas received the box than he opened it. What especially astonished him were some marvelous fresh peppers, as

12、 well as photos attached to the box, enabling him to recall the wonderful sun and beautiful beach. Then he took it to Mom, hoping to give her a surprise. Thrilled as she was, she turned back to Tomas and hugged him tightly, l have no idea that my son is such a considerate boy! With a bright smile be

13、aming on her face, Mom was too amazed to find a hot salsa. Tears rolled down her face in seconds. It was then that Tomas realized how both of them missed Merida! (Ill words)参考范文Suddenly Tomas had an idea. Why not turn to Abuela for help? Seized by the increasing eagerness to contact his grandmother,

14、 he wolfed his supper once it was ready. Right after dinner, Tomas raced to the computer before he had even had his favorite dessert, leaving his mother in curiosity. The moment he got through to his grandmother via the video chat, he lowered his voice, whispering, Abuela, I need your help!” After T

15、omas poured out his idea, Abuela clapped her hands, promising, zzExcellent! Youll receive what you want! Beside himself with joy, Tomas waved goodbye to Abuela, expectantly waiting for the package.A week later, a box arrived from Mexico. Bubbling over with excitement, Tomas invited his mother to ope

16、n the box together. Unfolding before their eyes were a sealed package of dried ha ba nero peppers and a colorful packet of seeds. Thats what I miss most! A taste from HOME!, blurted out his mother, her lips curving into a broad beam and eyes glittering in amazement. Never had Tomas seen his mother s

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