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1、材料作文.上周日下午，你去天津图书馆读书，发现了一些不文明现象。请根据以下提示点，写写 你的经历和感受。1 .在图书馆二楼，有一个大约四岁的小男孩，在大声喧哗、跑跳；2 .他的妈妈没有阻止他，而是在旁大声接打电话；3 .你走过去，告诉他这样做是不对的；小男孩表示歉意然后悄悄回到座位。4 .对此现象，你的感受和想法参考词汇:some uncivilized phenomena 一些不文明现象1 .字数80-100个；2 .开头字数已给出，不计入总字数；3 .要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥。Last Sunday afternoon, I went to Tianjin Library to rea

2、d my favourite books there.4 .作为中学生该怎么度过自己的闲暇时光？你会推荐什么样的放松方式？理由是什么？请根据以下表格中的信息写一篇文章。观点理由一部分同学喜欢网络和电视1 .放松，信息量大2 .可以足不出户和同学乃至陌生人互动另一部分同学喜欢亲近家人、自然和读书1 .与家人相处更加和睦2 .增长见识，开阔视野你的思考（不少于一点）修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外，还要 检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词数是 否符合要求等。4. Dear friends,Im very glad

3、that you arc coming to our school fbr the friendship exchange. Here arc the exact arrangements.The activity will last tor one week. On the first day, you will attend the welcome party, which will be held in the school hali. We will exchange the cultures of our two countries. During the following fiv

4、e days, you will practice speaking Chinese with Chinese students in the morning. And in the afternoon, we will take you to travel around Jincheng. There are many places of interest here. You can take some photos and take part in the photo contest. When you are here, you can live with a Chinese famil

5、y. This will help you learn more about the Chinese customs and speak Chinese well. Of course you can also live in the hotel, which is clean and comfortable.I hope you can have a good time here.Yours,Li Ming【详解】这篇作文要求我们以李明的身份给来自澳大利亚的中学生们写一封电子邮件，告知 他们来到你校后的活动安排。题目中列出了具体的写作提纲和内容，学生们应根据这些提示 信息，先进行整合，分清主

6、次；然后根据表达需要，补充更多的细节，使文章内容充实：最 后用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，这篇短文应以一般将来时为主来叙述，人称主要应为 第二人称。写作时应注意：首先在内容上应包含题目中要求的所有内容，不能遗漏要点；并 根据表达需要，进行适当的发挥，使上下文意连贯，内容更加丰富。其次需要注意表达，英 语的表达习惯和汉语是不同的，不能根据提示逐词翻译，应从句子的整体结构出发，写完整 的句子。句式结构可以简单句为主，这类句子叙述简洁，易于掌握。为提升作文档次，可以 在文中穿插几个并列句或者复合句，如用连词and, but或者so等连接的并列句；或者宾语 从句、状语从句等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成

7、分，使文意连贯。【点睛】这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，以李明的身份给来自澳大利亚的中 学生们写了一封电子邮件，告知了他们来中国后的活动安排。短文有如下几个优点：首先文 章内容完整，结构清晰。短文以题FI中所列的三个内容为提纲，充实了一些细节，使文章内 容更加的丰富。三个内容主次分明，叙述有层次。其次短文语法规范，语言准确，句式完整。 短文以般将来时为主，符合表达需要，谓语动词形式正确。句式结构以简单句为主，叙述 简洁、明了。最后短文里使用了较丰富的句型和短语,如On the first day, you will attend the welcome party, which wi

8、ll be held in the school hall、During the fallowing five days, you will practice speaking Chinese with Chinese students in the morning、When you are here, you can live with a Chinese family. This will help you leani more about the Chinese customs and speak Chinese well.、Of course you can also live in

9、the hotel, which is clean and comfortable.等等。5. When Liu Ao took the high-speed train to Beijing after school last Friday, he saw a man grabbing a womans window seat instead of sitting on his own. He tried to persuade the man to return to his seat, but the man refused. The passengers took photos on

10、their mobile phones and posted them online.The teacher praised Liu Ao when he knew it. Liu said it was his duty to stop such uncivilized behavior. I think we should learn from Liu Ao. When vve meet some uncivilized acts in our life, we should stop them in time.【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，文中所给材料比较详细；动笔之前根据所给材料组织语言

11、， 确定句子的时态，这里用一般过去时态，人称是第三人称单数，注意内容表达清楚，语法正 确，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不要出现单词拼写错误。相信只要平时多积累，就能 获得满意的作文。【点睛】本篇习作成功地完成了写作任务，表达顺畅，结构连贯，字数符合要求。准确运用 时态，要点全面，语法正确，上下文意思连贯，适当发挥了想象。本文应用了很多短语使得 文章很生动，文中用到 J一些好的句型：He saw a man grabbing a womans window scat. He persuaded the man to return to his seat, but the man refused

12、.等给文章增色不少。6. Boys and girls,Im very pleased to speak here and Id like to talk about what happened in the school sports meeting last week. At first, I got so nervous that I felt awful all over. Even worse, 1 got into trouble keeping running as a result of a serious stomachache. When my teachers and s

13、tudents saw me fall down, they cheered me on and encouraged me never to give up. Thanks to their help, I successfully crossed the finishing line. Even though I didnt win a prize fbr my class and felt a little disappointed, I was proud of myself fbr the reason that I managed to overcome the difficult

14、y.As teenagers, we may suffer from troubles in our life from time to time. What we should do is to spare no effort to achieve our goal. It will certainly help us grow as a person.Thats all. Thank you!【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如be pleased to do,d like to do, talk about, all over, get good grades,

15、 be willing to do, even worse, as a result of, fall down, Thanks to, Even though, be proud of, suffer from, time to time 等。而 Im very pleased to speak here and Id like to talk about what happened in the school sports meeting last week./ At first, I got so nenous that I felt awful all over./When my te

16、achers and students saw me fall down, they chccrcd me on and encouraged me never to give up.等多种从句结构的运用，丰富 了短文内 容，使表达多样化，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作 时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容 经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点， 要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以

17、便得 到较高的分数。7. The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At present, about 70% of the students are shortsighted. Here are some main causes.Some students may not have enough sleep. Some students spend too much time reading or doing their homework without a rest.

18、Some students even like to watch TV or use computers for a long time.In order to have good eyesight, we should do eye exercises every day. We can also try to do more sports in our spare time. We should have the good habit of using our eyes.I think all of us should understand the importance of protec

19、ting eyes and try our best to protect them.【详解】这是一篇图表作文。根据题干要求可知，本篇文章主要使用一般现在时写作，人称 用第三人称复数和第一人称。内容包括：学生近视原因：1.睡眠不足(not enough) 2.长时间 看书、做作业、用电脑等(for a long time)防止近视的方法：1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育 活动(eye exercises) 2.养成正确的用眼习惯(have the good habit of)个人观点：如：我认为， 我们应该了解保护眼睛的重要性，尽最大努力保护我们的眼睛。(I think -； try one,s

20、best to dosth.)o 常用的重点句型和短语有：sb. spend some time doing sth., in order to do sth., try to do sth., the importance of等。8. The Story of LinglingLast Friday, Lingling went out for a walk with her mother after supper. She saw a wallet at thedoor of the community. Lingling picked up her wallet and found t

21、hat there were ID cards and some money in it. Lingling and her mother handed the wallet to the security guard, who sent the news to the microphone group in the community. When the owner saw the news, he came to fetch her wallet and thanked Lingling and her mother. .1 think Li Hua did a good deed.We

22、should learn from her.【详解】本文是一篇给材料作文。根据以下内容提示，以“The Story of Lingling”为题，为社 区宣传专栏写一篇短文，介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。文章时态用一般过去时，人称主要 为第三人称。本文所给材料比较详细，考生要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。 动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并可适当发挥。在写作时，注意紧扣主题，连句成 篇，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句 应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量 选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词

23、汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最 后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。【点睛】点睛：首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点：然后根据提示内容，列出写作要 点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与 句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使 文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检 查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。9. When I have trouble with my best friendThere are always

24、problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday my best friend Lisa lost my favourite book that was a birthday present from my mother. The book is vety meaningful fbr me. Whats more, she didnt apologize to me about this, I felt quite sad. I love re

25、ading, because it can open up our eyes and increase our knowledge. I cherish every book of mine and they are my treasure.So 1 am going to have a serious talk with Lisa in order to tell her my true feelings. I think we can buy a new one and read it together. In fhct, understanding is the most importa

26、nt thing between friends.【分析】本文是一篇材料作文。【详解】根据题干“生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后， 你会如何处理此类问题呢？ “要求可知，本文用一般过去时，人称用第一人称。英语作文一般分为三个部分：第一部分：开篇点题我将介绍和好友闹矛盾的一件事情。第二部分：文章主体一具体介绍这件事情的始末。根据事情发展顺序，从先到后交代事情的经过，我做了什么，为什么会和好友有矛盾。 这些内容用般过去时，注意动词的过去式变形。1 .上周日，你的好友Lisa,弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物；.但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过；2

27、.你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍；.接下来你打算第三部分：总结全文一好友之间应该互相理解。10. My visit to the Palace MuseumOn May 1 st I went to visit the Palace Museum. I bought tickets to the Palace Museum online in advance. When I arrived in Beijing by train, I transferred to the Forbidden City by subway. The Palace Museum i

28、s tall and magnificent, with beautiful exhibits. Tourists in the Palace Museum arc like knitting. People take pictures in succession. Ifs closing time. I still dont want to leave. I feel that the Palace Museum is very great. It was a very happy day and and I gained a lot.【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇发言稿。题目中给出的材

29、料较为简略，动笔前应根据 材料内容组织语言，列出简单提纲，确定句子的时态，关键单词等问题。注意不要遗漏要点， 可以适当发挥。在写作时，本文的主语可以用第一人称，时态一般应该用一般现在时。为了 是表达更有逻辑性，可以使用序数词，连接词等。【点睛】这篇短文用到了 一些好的句型:The Palace Museum is tall and magnificent, with bcautifiil exhibits. ； Tourists in the Palace Museum arc like knitting. People take pictures in succession.这些给文中增色不

30、少。参考词汇:增长见识increase one knowledge开阔视野open ones mind要求：（1）词数：80100个。（2）短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Our society is developing fast. People arc getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time.3 .近日中央电视台报道了一个十四

31、岁小男孩何思汗的事迹，介绍了他卖画筹款医治姑姑的感人故事。请你根据以下内容提示，写一篇短文。(1)何思汗从小和姑姑生活在一起，他自幼时绘画有很大兴趣。(2)2016年姑姑患上重病，何思汗的家境日渐贫寒。(3)他作画筹款给姑姑治病。(4)思汗勇于面对困难、主动承担家务且刻苦学习。你的想法参考词汇：严重的serious 疾病disease要求：词数：80 100个。(2)短文的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。(3)要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。The Moving Story of He SihanRecently, the moving story of He Sihan has been r

32、eported on CCTV. The 14-year-old boy is a student in Grade 9. He.假如你是李明，下周澳大利亚的批中学生将来你校进行为期一周的友谊交流活动，而 你将负责此事。请你根据提示内容写一封电子邮件、向他们介绍具体安排。提示：（1）第一天参加欢迎晚会，并交流中澳文化。（2）接下来的五天，上午和中国学生练 习汉语，下午游览津城，拍摄照片并参加摄影比赛。（3）可以和中国家庭一起居住，也可以 住在旅馆.要求：1.词数：80100；2 .开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。3 .要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。Dear friends,Im very g

33、lad that you arc coining to our school fbr the friendship exchange. Here arcYours,Li Ming5.请你根据以下内容提示，为学校英语与栏写一篇短文，介绍发生在你班同学刘奥身上的 一件事。（I）上周五放学后刘奥乘高铁去北京，看到有一男子在高铁上抢占一位女士的靠窗座位而不 坐自己的座位。(2)刘奥劝说这位男子回到他自己的座位，但遭到了拒绝。(3)乘客用手机拍了照片，发布到网I二。(4)老师知道后表扬了刘奥，刘奥说制止这种不文明行为是他的职责。(5)你觉得参考词汇： 高铁high-speed train抢占某人的靠窗座

34、位 grab(grabbed, grabbing) someones window seat劝说某人做某事persuade sb. to do sth.不文明的uncivilized要求：(1) .词数：80100个。(2) .短文的题目和开头已给出，开计入总词数。(3) .要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。When Liu Ao took the high-speed train to Beijing after school last Friday,6.假如你上周参加了学校的运动会。长跑比赛中发生了一件使你难忘的事情。在运动会总 结班会上，你讲述了事情的经过并表达自己的感受。请你用英语写一篇

35、发言稿。要点如下: (1)一开始，紧张，感到不舒服。(2)跑步时，遇到麻烦，胃痛严重。(3)摔倒在地。(4)同学加油，老师鼓励，不放弃。(5)最后成功冲过终点线。(6)尽管没有获奖，但感到骄傲。(7)表达自己的一点感受。要求：()词数8010()。(2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。(3)文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。(4)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇:终点线 finishing lineBoys and girls,Im very pleased to speak here and Id like to talk aboutThats all. Thank you!7.最近一份学

36、生体质健康调查结果显示，学生近视率仍维持在高位水平，且越来越低 龄化。请根据下表所提示的内容，用英语写一篇短文，并发表自己的观点。现状大约70%学生眼睛近视主要原因1.睡眠不足2.长时间看书、做作业、用电脑等预防方法1.做眼睛保健操，多进行体育活动2.养成正确的用眼习惯你的观点（至少一条）参考词汇：近视的shortsighted要求：（1）词数：80100个。（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。The survey shows that many students have become shortsighted at a very young age. At

37、 present,8.请你根据以下内容提示，以“TheStoryofLingling”为题，为社区宣传专栏写一篇短文, 介绍在玲玲身上发生的一件事。（1）上周晚饭后玲玲和妈妈一起出去散步，在社区的门口看见一个钱包；（2）玲玲把钱包捡起，发现钱包里有身份证和一些钱；（3）玲玲和妈妈把钱包交给保安，保安把这个消息发到小区的微信群中；（4）失主看到消息后，过来取回钱包并对玲玲和妈妈表示感谢；（5）你觉得参考词汇：社区community 身份证ID card 保安guard 微信群Wcchatgroup 失主 owner要求：（1）词数：80100个。（2）短文的题目和开头己给出，不计入总词数。（3）

38、要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。The Story of LinglingLastweek9.书面表达生活中好友间也会因各种原因闹些小矛盾，当你与朋友间产生不愉快后，你会如何处理此 类问题呢？请根据以下提示点谈谈你的想法。1 .上周日，你的好友Lisa,弄丢了你最心爱的图书，这是妈妈送给你的生日礼物；2 .但是Lisa并没有因此而道歉，你很难过；3 .你喜欢阅读，认为读书可以开阔眼界，所以你很珍惜自己的每一本书籍；4 .接下来你打算参考词汇：cherish珍惜open up ones eyes开阔眼界要求：1 .字数80-100个；.开头已经给出不计入总词数;2 .要点齐全，行为连贯，适当发挥

39、。When I have trouble with my best friendThere are always problems around us, even between close friends. Let me tell you something about myself. Last Sunday.10.假设五一小长假期间，你去故宫博物院参观，请根据以下要点提不与一篇英语短文，讲 述你在故宫的所见所闻。（1）你提前在网上购买了故宫门票。（2）你乘火车到达北京后，转乘地铁来到故宫。（3）故宫的建筑高大雄伟，展品琳琅满目，精美绝伦。（4）故宫内游人如织，人们纷纷拍照留念。（5）闭馆时

40、间到了，你仍然不愿离去。（6）你的感受参考词汇：故宫博物院the Palace Museum 提前in advance要求：（1）词数：80100个。（2）短文的题目和开头己给出，不计入总词数。（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。My visit to the Palace MuseumOn May 1 st I went to visit the Palace Museum.参考答案1. Last Sunday afternoon, I went to Tianjin Library to read my favourite books there. When I was on the s

41、econd floor, I found some uncivilized phenomena. I saw a boy who was about 4 years old shouting and running noisily. He didnt read the books at all. Whats more, his mother didnt stop him and just talked on the phone loudly. What should I do then? I walked towards the little boy and told him that it

42、was wrong to do so. The boy said “sorry“ and went back to his seat quietly. In my point of view, this mother set a bad example fbr her child. It is important fbr her to tell his son some public rules. As long as everyone follows these niles, all of us will be in a civilized society.【详解】上周日下午，你去天津图书馆

43、读书，发现了一些不文明现象。请根据以下提示点， 写写你的经历和感受。这是一篇给材料作文。本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正 确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据 材料内容可知本文主要是一般过去时态，主语是第一人称和第三人称，注意时态语时间状语 的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。【点睛】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如：He didnread the books at all. Whats more, his mother didnt stop him and just talked

44、 on the phone loudly.学习中 注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富 有条理.2. Our society is developing fast People arc getting busier too. As a result, people try to relax in their free time. We students have different ideas of spending our free time.Some classmates like surfing on the Internet and wa

45、tching TV. They think they can get plenty of information through the Internet and make them relaxed. Besides,it is easy fbr them to communicate and play with classmates and even strangers without going outside. Others think they should get close to their family,nature,and read a lot. In fact,thcy ar

46、c not only good ways to get along better with family members,but also open up their mind and increase their knowledge. I think we should do sports after school in order to keep healthy. Whats more,we also do after-class activities so that we will have a rich and colourful life.【详解】这是一篇议论文。以第三人称陈述观点，

47、以第一人称提出思考。主体时态是一般现 在时。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个 要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章 的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构， 造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句； 尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。 最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。3. Recently, the moving story of He Sihan has been report

48、ed on CCTV. The 14-year-old boy is a student in Grade 9. He has lived with his aunt since he was only one year old. When he was a little boy, he showed great interest in painting. At that time, they led a happy life. Unfortunately, his aunt got a serious disease in 2016. Their family became poorer and poorer after that. So he decided to do something for his aunt. By selling the pictures he painted, he raised money fbr his aunt to treat her disease. You cant imagine what difficulties he faces, he never