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1、妙记3如何筛选靓丽词汇书面表达在英语高考中，担负着区分考生、选拔人才的功能.对于学优生来说，作文拿到四档分数仅是一个“平庸分”，很有可能与 名校失之交臂，但五档分数又是把大多数考生挡在门外的一道槛.其 实，四档与五档的差别是微小的，仅仅是一些细节的美化而已（参见 下表对比展示）。在平时的训练中，考生应注重抓一些细节，杜绝一 些瑕疵，就可以实现由“完成”到“完美”的蜕变、由“四档”到“五 档”的晋升。因为本书针对学优生而编写，所以其编写定位起点高（重 点讲如何打造亮点），目标高（直指五档作文）。让学优生吃好吃饱、省 时高效是本书的编写定位.四档作文与五档作文评定对比表第四档（1620分）第五档（

2、2125分）9 .错误！例句或许我们能想 到这个问题的更好的解决 办法.10 .错误！例句我真诚地感激 您所做的一切。因为某事向你表达我的感激之情例句对您的好意我 谨表示我的谢意。感激（某人）做例句我非常感谢 你花这么多时间帮助我。我衷心感谢你为我和 我家人所做的一切。错误！Maybe we can come up with a better solution to the problem oI am truly grateful to you for what you have done oexpress my gratitude to you for o oI d like to expr

3、ess my gratitude /dr your kindness.appreciate (one s) doing/ that/sth.I appreciate your giving me so much of your timeoI really appreciate what youve done for my family and me o11 .错误！_例句希望全班同 学参加讨论.参与，热衷于例句你应当参与 各种各样的活动.12 .错误！例句将有20名学生 参加英语演讲比赛。13o错误！例句我们将竭尽全 力以赶上发达的工业国 家。14o错误！例句他把业余时间都用在读书上。错误！E

4、veryone in the class is expected to participate in the discussion.get involved in (an activity)You should get involved in various activities oThere will be twenty students to compete in the English speech contest.错误！We 11 spare no effort to catch up with the developed industrial countries o错误！He dev

5、otes all his spare time to reading.15o错误！例句我们应该做 出努力来彻底解决这个问 题。16o错误！一例句我决心要不 惜一切代价来实现自己的 目标.下定决心做某事例句听了他的报告 后,我想了很多，反思了以 前我所做的事情.我已经下 定决心从以下几个方面来 提高自己.17 .错误！例句他们用水只 能依靠这条河。相信我会全心全意地错误！We should make an attempt to thoroughly solve this problem.Vm determined to achieve my goal at any cost.make up on

6、e s mind to do sthoHaving heard his report, I thought a lot and reflected on what I did before。 I have made up my mind to improve myself in the following ways.错误！They have to rely on the river for their water.You can count on me帮助你。to help you heart and soul.18 .错误！_例句我在生人面 前总是不知要说什么。19o错误！例句就我所知，他们

7、 每一个人都想成为一名模 范学生。错误！I am always at a loss what to sayxx front of strangers o错误！So far as I know, every one of them intends to be a model student.第三组形容词及形容词性短语lo错误！例句体育运动有益 于增强我们的体质。有益的;值得做的例句众所周知，学好 英语是有好处的.2o错误！例句他是一位杰出 的科学家，对我国做出了巨 大贡献。错误！例句你的发音很 完美，这令人羡慕。极好的例句“你要来么？” 他激动地说：“那太好了！ 简直难以置信！”错误！Sport

8、s are beneficial to building our bodies.rewardingAs is known to us all, learning English well is very rewarding.错误！He is an outstanding scientist, who has made a great contribution to our country o错误！Your pronunciation is perfect, which is admirable.fantastic“You re coming?” he said excitedly o “Tha

9、tsfantastic!incredible! ”That s3.错误！例句他是一个普通 的学生，但是做了许多好 事。4O错误！例句每年成千上 万的游客都会涌入这个景 区来欣赏这里美丽的风 景。5o错误！例句听到这个好消 息后我非常兴奋.错误！He is an average student but he did many good deedso错误！Hundreds of thousands of tourists pour into this scenic spot to admire the amazing scenery every year.错误！I was thrilled whe

10、n I heard the good news.6O错误！_例句我的同桌是动人的、文雅的女孩。错误！My deskmate is acharming and elegant girl7够绅O错误！_例句.:持一等我的薪水不己的生活。错误！My salary is not adequateto support our family o8.错误！例句改变这种情形 需要每个人付出很大的努 力。错误！Changing this situation requires considerable effort on the part of everyone.9.错误!例句她是一个勤奋的老师，她工作非常勤奋。

11、错误！She is a diligent teacher and she is diligent in her work.1(对我意义)错误！_例句.4/她的老师的鼓励J学生具有重要错误！Encouragement from a teacher is really of great significance! importance to his/her students o对至关重要，关键的例句学好英语对 你未来就业至关重要。llo错误！例句这本书对你会 有很大用处。12o错误！例句所获得的经验 对我们有很大价值.13.错误！例句这项工程对每 个人都大有好处。14o错误！例句你的建议对 我很有

12、帮助。15o错误！例句他来自一个偏be critical/vital toLearning English well is critical I vital to your future employment o错误！This book will be great use to you。错误！The experience gained will be of great value to uso错误！This project is of great benefit to everyone o错误！Your suggestions are of great help to me.错误！He is

13、from a 远的村庄。16 .错误！例句这是一个要求 极严的、具有挑战性的工 作。17 o错误！一例句越来越多的 人开始意识到教育不能随 着毕业而结束.许多例句许多学生反 对这个主意。很多,非常多例句这个图书馆有 相当多英语书.distant/remote village。错误！It s a demanding and challenging j ob。An increasing number of people are beginning to realize that education is not complete with graduation.many aMany a stude

14、nt is against the idea.a good manyThere are a good many English books in the library o18 .错误！例句自然保护区 里有许多不同种类的珍稀 动植物。范围广的，种类多的例句你有很大的 选择余地。19o错误！例句学习了一天, 我都累坏了。筋疲力尽的；疲惫不堪 的例句夜里没有休息 好,课堂上我感到筋疲力 尽。20 o错误！例句她精力充沛, 聪明活泼。错误！There are a wide variety of rare animals and plants in the nature reserve oa wide

15、 range ofThere is a wide range of choices open to you.错误！I was worn out after a day of studyingoexhaustedNot sleeping well ) I always feel exhausted in class.错误！She is energetic,in telligen t and lively o语法结构或词汇方面应完全完成了试题 规定的任务。一覆盖场看够;要 点。应用了邀经的语 法结构和词汇.-语法结构或词汇 方面有些许错误，但 为尽力使用较复杂 结构或嚏西丽丽系;具 备较强的语言运

16、用 能力。-薪卷 ,使用了语句 间的连接成分，使全 文结构紧凑。完成了试题规定的任务。-虽漏掉一两个次重点，但覆盖所有u至蚓靠。-应用的语法结构和词汇能篇定在务由耍莱二用基本准确，些许错误主要是 因尝试较复杂语法结构或Q词汇所致一应用 语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。口期了预期的写作目的.遽获期了预期的写作目的。第四组副词、连词及其他1.错误！例句我的手机非 常有用.特别地例句约翰似乎特 别喜欢她。苏珊和约翰对于获得 这个奖项感到兴奋不已。错误！My mobile phone is extremely useful.especially/particularly John seems to

17、be particularly fond of her oSusan and John were especially thrilled with this award o2.错误！例句如果有什么我 能为你做的,我将非常乐意 帮忙。错误！If there is anything I can do for you, I would be more than glad to help.3.错误！例句我们偶尔去田野里散步。偶尔,有时候例句他偶尔来我错误！We go for walks in the fields occasionally.once in a whileHe comes to our

18、room们房中闲谈。for a chat every once in awhile。4.错误!_例句不用说它对 我们的健康是有好处的.错误！It goes without saying that it will do us a lot of good.错误!5o错误!例句J积大概有一百平方千米。The area is approximately100 square kilometers.6 .也_例句我喜欢踢足 球，也喜欢游泳。7 .错误!一例句我们的人 口在增长，因此我们需要 更多的食物.他很忙，因此他不能 来。错误！I like playing football andI enjoy sw

19、imming as well。错误！ We have a growing population and therefore we need more foodoHe was busy; therefore he could not come o（therefore前要用分号）8 .错误！例句抓住这个机 会，否则你会后悔的.9o错误！例句第三，你们 说如果我提前付费的话就 可以给我打折。假如不下雨我就去。10o错误！例句这次比赛不仅职业运动员可以参加，而错误！Seize the chance ) otherwise/ or else you 11 regret it.Thirdly, you s

20、ay that there is a discount provided/ providing (that) I pay in advance. I shall go providing/provided that) it does。 t rain。The tournament is open to amateurs as well as professionals.且业余运动员也可以参 加。llo错误！例句作为中学生， 我们在学校应该衣着整 洁。12o错误！例句大多数被采 访者宁愿待在家里看电视 也不愿去看电影。13 o错误！例句因为吸烟的缘 故，我父亲经常咳嗽。所以；因此（副词）例句雨很大

21、，所以路被淹没了。错误！As high school students, we are supposed to be neatly dressed when at school oThe majority of the interviewees prefer watching TV at home to going to the cinema o -As a consequence of smoking, my father coughs frequently.consequendyThe rain was heavy, and consequently the road wasflooded

22、.14 .错误！_例句他全神贯注 地想心事，以至于和一个 行人撞了个满怀。忙于（做）某事例句我每天都 忙于日常的工作。他忙于照料三个小 孩.15 .错误！例句我想把几天前 说到的那位绅士介绍给你 们.16 .错误！例句走了 10英里 之后，我们都累了。错误！He was so absorbed in thought that he ran against a passer。byobe occupied with stho /in doing stho I am fully occupied with my daily work.He，s fully occupied in looking af

23、ter the three litde children o错误！I would like to introduce to you the gendeman whom I spoke of the other day。错误！After covering (walking10 miles) we all felt tired.Io如何理解“覆盖所有内容要点”评分标准中对考生所要求的“覆盖所有内容要点”，就是要求考生在写作时要认真审题，确保要点“全而不漏”，要点全面是书面表达得高分的必要条件。2.如何理解“应用了较多的语法结构”“较多的语法结构”就是指句式结构的多样性. 感叹句、倒装句、复合结构、

24、强调句型、定语从句、 非谓语动词短语等语法结构的正确使用，可以使文 章的语言充满层次感，从而较好地反映出作者的语 言运用能力。3o如何理解“应用了较多的词汇”这里所说的“应用了较多的词汇”，是指词汇使 用的多样性，如词性的多样性、高级词汇的使用、同 义词与反义词的使用、短语的使用等.4.如何理解“具备较强的语言运用能力”评分标准中对考生所要求的语言得体，就是要求 考生在表达时应根据说话的对象、时间、地点、场合等选择使用恰当的英语语言，尤其是不同体裁和 题材的文章对用语方面有着不同的要求。5o如何理解“有效地使用了语句间的连接成分”一篇优秀的书面表达应该能做到段与段、句与句 之间以一种明晰的、合

25、乎逻辑的顺序组织与安排， 在文章与结构上层次分明、条理清楚、连贯流畅。阅卷时，一篇高考作文往往在1分钟内就被判定生死，大众化的 词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。在 词汇方面：如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮 的词汇，能迅速激起阅卷老师的兴奋点，赢得阅卷老师的好感，这是作 文得高分的必备点。熟记四组靓点词汇让表达更鲜更靓本部分英汉对照，主要是便于 背诵.使用时先把右列的词汇、例句等反复读熟然后把右列遮住，看 着左边的汉语提示来翻译背诵。第一组名词及名词短语1.错误！例句现在你们有一个好机会，可以大大增错误！Now you have anopportunit

26、y to develop a进对彼此的了解.2 .错误！例句有4个基本的 选项，简述如下.3 .错误!例句所有学校都设 有音乐和舞蹈课.4o错误！例句他们称他们 预期这次会议会对国家的 未来产生显著影响。后果5 结果，后果例句如果气候变 化继续下去，我们将自食其greater understanding of each other oThere are four basic alternatives; they are described briefly below oAll the schools have music and dancing classes as parts of the

27、curriculum.They say they expect the meeting to have a marked impact on the future of the country o错误！If climate changes continue) we will suffer the consequences0果.J缺点60 ;缺点；劣势例句这种方法的缺 点之一是必须把单词预先 存储在系统中.61 错误！例句我们将探索 收集信息的不同方法。8o错误！例句在这类职业 中，只有20%的岗位是由 女性担任的。62 错误!例句家庭中的每个 成员都会互相帮助，特别错误！One drawbac

28、k of this approach is that the words must be registered in the system beforehand o way, approachWe will be exploring different approaches to gathering information o错误！Only 20 percent of jobs in the professions are held by women.错误！Members of a family help one another, with particular是照顾好年轻人和老年 人。63

29、.错误！例句激发这些年轻 人的不是对成就的渴望， 而是对失败的担心。care for the very young and the elderly.These youngsters are motivated not by a desire to achieve) but by fear of failure.第二组动词及动词短语lo错误！例句他喜欢踢足 球，这是他最喜欢的运动。对痴迷例句我对那里发生 的事情都非常感兴趣。2o错误！例句就我而言，我错误！He is fond of playing football, which is his favourite obe crazy aboutI

30、 m crazy about everything that goes on there.As for me) Vm firmly convinced that the number坚定地认为游客的数量应 得到限制，理由如下。3o错误！例句许多人开始 意识到锻炼的重要性。我深知这是一份艰难 的工作。4o错误！例句请告诉我那边 的情况。5o错误！例句几天前我在 你的店铺买了一部手机。6.错误！例句更糟的是，暴 力电子游戏可能导致进攻 性行为，这比暴力电影更of tourists should be limited for the following reasons。 Many people ar

31、e becoming aware of the importance of exercising。I am well aware that this is a tough job.错误！Please keep me informed what s going on there o错误！I purchased a cellphone at your store the other day。Whats worse, violent video games can lead to aggressive behaviours, which is more harmful than violent 有害

32、。导致结果例句紧张和疲劳 常导致失眠.错误！例句所有的游客 被要求不能在公园内乱扔 垃圾。8.错误！一例句我主张我们 人人都应该尽力帮助那些 需要帮助的人。指出例句许多专家指出 体育锻炼直接有助于身体 健康.movies。result inStress and tiredness often result in sleeplessness o错误！All the visitors were requested not to throw litter about in the park.I argue that evety one of us ( should) try our best to help those in needopoint outMany experts point out that physical exercise contributes direcdy to a persons physical fitness o