读后续写练习写作指导 讲义-高三英语二轮复习.docx

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1、读后续写练习写作指导讲义阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇 完整的短文。A MOTHERS DAY SURPRISEThe twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mothers Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicke

2、n porridge . They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a. m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot o

3、f water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff starte

4、d frying the bread . The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread . This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. T

5、he next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff*s hand touched the hot burner and h

6、e gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.第一步通过四读，理清文章脉络.读标题（或首句）通过标题和首句可知，本文为记叙文，中心人物为一对双胞胎和妈妈， 主要事件是这对双胞胎在母亲节给妈妈一个惊喜。1 .读要素Whenon Mother*s DayWhereat home, in the kitchen, i

7、n the bedroomWhothe twins Jenna and Jeff, their mother and fatherWhatto make breakfast for their motherWhyto give her a surpriseHowThey had trouble when cooking.The main i deaIn order to give their mother a surprise, the twins Jenna an d Jeff made breakfast for their mother, but they had trouble wh

8、en cooking.3 .读结构注意：1.续写词数应为150左右；Para. 1The twins planned to give their mother a surprise.（事件的开 端）Para. 2On the morning on Mothers Day, the twins started making bre akfast.（事件的发展）Para. 3Unfortunately, they had some trouble with cooking.（事件的发 展）续写段 1当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时，他们的父亲出现了。（事件的高潮）续写段2双胞胎把早餐端到楼上，叫醒母亲。（

9、事件的结局）2.请按如下格式作答。As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared .The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.4 .读情感变化本文中，作者的心情变化可以用以下表格来表示:CluesEmotion cha ngeThe twins were filled with excitement as they though t of the surprise .（Para. 1）excitedJenna

10、 panicked . But Jeffs hand touched the h ot burner and he gave a cry of pain. （Para. 3）disappointed续写第一段可推断，续写 第一段的情感应 该是hopeful,续 写第二段的情感 应该是proudo续写第二段第二步关注“三点，续写契合美文1.根据首句关键信息，设计故事情节续写第一段的首句为 As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared .这句话要引出接下来的续写内 容，需要我们认真分析。此句中的关键

11、信息是their father appeared , 再结合续写第二段的首句，我们展开合理想象，本段内容应该是在父亲的帮助下，这对双胞胎顺利做完了早餐，并准备一份送到妈妈的卧 室。续写第二段的首句为 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.这句话承接上文，可以想象到妈妈看到早饭时 的心情是既高兴又惊讶的，并且会夸赞这对双胞胎。并且父亲会表现 出不知情的样子。2 .依据情感变化，烘托故事气氛在整个故事中,这对双胞胎的情感变化为excited - disappointed hopeful - proudo在

12、续写的后两个自然段中，可充分利用这条情感 线来烘托故事气氛，使内容更加饱满。3 .依据语言特点，选择恰当词句本篇短文的语言特点如下表所示：式结构长句并不多，使用了较多的并列句。法结构使用了状语从句、定语从句、动词不定式作目的状语、动词ing 形式作宾语补足语等。汇选择使用了大量的短语，如be filled with, throw into ,put out, turn off, clean up 等。体印象语言描写生动，语言充分体现了母子之间的亲密关系。选材描述了一个母亲节活动，结合上表语言特点分析，续写时可用 love, care, company, encouragement, trust

13、, gratitude 等词体现亲子 之间的 亲密关系。参考范文：their father Seeing their helped them and did asAs the twins looked around them in disappointment, appeared. One look and he knew what they were up to. downcast eyes, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he make breakfast for their mother . The twins cheered up

14、 told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned up, and the father made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he sneaked back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, and added a card they had made.The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They hugged t

15、heir mother tightly and yelled, “Happy Mothers Day, dear Mummy ! ” The mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook father who was pretending to snore. He acted astonished when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best one she had ever tasted . Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite, too. Jenna caught her fathers eye and they winked at each other secretly.