2023高考英语逆袭冲刺 名校模拟题速递专题07 读后续写（新高考专用第一期）.docx

《2023高考英语逆袭冲刺 名校模拟题速递专题07 读后续写（新高考专用第一期）.docx》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《2023高考英语逆袭冲刺 名校模拟题速递专题07 读后续写（新高考专用第一期）.docx（16页珍藏版）》请在淘文阁 - 分享文档赚钱的网站上搜索。

1、2023高考英语逆袭冲剌名校最新模拟真题速递第一期专题07读后续写（新高考专用）1. （2022.广东.肇庆市第一中学一模）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成 一篇完整的短文。The Dog Who Saved Our FamilyWe met Max at the pickup area of Alaska Airlines five years ago. He was a standard poodle（狮子狗）born on Valentines Day in 2017, and came to us in a small blue box. We had ado

2、pted him from an out-of-state raiser who posted the news on the social network. Our only request was that he have a calm behavior, able to bear the pushing and hugging of our eight-year-old daughter and six-year-old son.We were a sweet little family:me,my husband, and our children, Sophie and Jake.

3、But fbr years Id felt as if we wouldnt really be complete until we had a dog. Also, my husband worked in a business company and had to travel some 200 days a year fbr his job, and I knew Id feel safer with a large animal sleeping by the door.When we opened the box, the last piece of our puzzle fell

4、into place. With his black hair and intelligent eyes,Max was beautiful. He was so small that he fit into the palm of my hand, his big paws lapping over the sides. He was also a little bit scared. As I pulled him close,I felt his heart pound and wondered if wed done the right thing, taking him from h

5、is mother. But it was too late. Sophie and Jake were already fighting over who would hold him next and who should have the right to take a bath for him.Over the following months, we spent endless hours watching Max play with his Kong toy or roll around the living room floor. Like most poodles, he wa

6、s smart. He mastered house-training quickly and never chewed on our furniture or shoes. He considered himself one of us.注意1 .续写词数应为150左右2 .请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。One night we were sleeping in the bedroom when I heard some strange noise.At that time,Max ran towards me.Finally, the grand end came, and Prin

7、ce was brought onstage inside the box.“How can we get Prince out from beneath the stage?” Mrs. Alvarez asked.参考答案:1. One possible version:One night we were sleeping in the bed room when I heard some strange noise. I thought it was Max running and hitting something, so I kept lying in the bed and mad

8、e an attempt to fall asleep again. However, the noise became louder and louder, which had already annoyed me. Swiftly I got up from my bed. I opened the door and found Max was running around the living room, trying to let all the things fall down. These abnormal behaviors really confused me while it

9、 also made me a little afraid.At that time,Max ran towards me. He firmly grabbed my trousers and motioned me to the kitchen. As I approached the kitchen, I could obviously smell a strong burning scent and instantly knew what had happened. When I saw the fierce fire in the kitchen, I dashed into my c

10、hildrens room like an arrow, waking them up at my maximum voice. Rushing out of the house together, I called 911 and asked our neighbors for help at the same time. Fortunately both my family and my house were saved. Thanks to our smart Max, we did escape from death.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者收养了一只狮子狗，取名为Ma

11、x,这只狗给作者一家带来了 欢乐，并最终救了他们一家人。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“一天晚上，我们正在卧室睡觉时，我听到一些奇怪的声音。”可知，本段可描写Max 努力制造动静，吸引作者注意，作者听到声音去查看。由第二段首句内容“这时，马克斯向我跑过来。”可知，本段可描写Max把我拉到厨房，我发现厨房着火 了，我及时在Max的提醒下，拯救我们一家人和房子，我对Max由衷的感谢。2 .续写线索：想养狗收养Max调教MaxMax成为家中的一员听到Max制造的动静去查看Max让我发现火灾救了一家人。3 .词汇激活 行为类试图： make an attempt/make an effort/

12、take a crack at急奔：dash/rush接近：approach/move toward知道；know/be aware of/realize 情绪类生气：annoyed/irritated/infuriated害怕：afraid/frightened/scared【点睛】高分句型 1 However, the noise became louder and louder, which had already annoyed me.（which 弓| 导 的非限制性定语从句）高分句型 2As I approached the kitchen, I could obviously s

13、mell a strong burning scent and instantly knew what had happened.（As引导的时间状语从句）2. Now she faced what for many is the most difficult activity: the Single Wire. Thinking about the fact that therewas only one wire, Chelsea was trembling again and afraid to make one more step. But hearing the cheers from

14、 her teacher and classmates below, she got to gain courage. Holding the harness tightly, Chelsea began to walk step by step carefully and cautiously. Finally, she made it.The final challenge is a zip line （滑索）,which requires leaping off the last tower and sliding to the ground. Staring at the zip li

15、ne, Chelsea didnt feel frightened any longer. Because she found it is much easier to slide to the ground with the line. She had experienced much tougher activities before, so she had the faith to go through it. Without hesitation, Chelsea slid along the zip line and landed on the ground safe and sou

16、nd. All her teacher and classmates applauded for her and there was a wide smile on her face.【导语】本文是以人物为线索展开，主要描述Johnson老师和同学们见证了 Chelsea在一个秋天举办的探 险活动中重拾信心的故事。【详解】1.段落续写：根据第一段首句内容“现在，她面临着对许多人来说最困难的活动：单线。”可知，第一段可描写是切尔 西如何成功挑战单线的。根据第二段首句内容“最后的挑战是拉链滑索，这需要跳下最后一座塔并滑到地面。”可知，第二段可描 写切尔西拉链滑索挑战的情况。2 .续写线索：害怕一鼓

17、励一鼓起勇气成功3 .词汇激活 行为类 再迈出一步：make one more step/walk a little farther 成功做到：made it/do sth. successfully 抓住：Hold/catch hold of 情绪类害怕的：frightened/fearful/ afraid相信：had the faith/be faithful/believe in【点睛】【高分句型 1 Thinking about the fact that there was only one wire, Chelsea was trembling again and afraid

18、to make one more step.（由 that 引导的同位语从句）【高分句型 2 Because she found it is much easier to slide to the ground with the line.（由 Because 引导的原因 状语从句）3. One Possible Version:The phone was ringing when we got to the back door. After answering the phone, my father understood what had happened. It turned out t

19、hat the farmer called to ask whether I was safe or had any other injuries. Father assured him that I was safe and sound and offered to make up for the damage I caused to his truck. To our surprise, the farmer declined my father offer. Meanwhile, my mother helped treat my lip and swollen eyes with so

20、me ice. “Dont worry about the car. Your safety matters most. my father comforted me. To my great delight, they decided to accompany me to the graduation ceremony.I graduated that evening with my family in attendance. With my parents company, I enjoyed an unforgettable and meaningful graduation cerem

21、ony. Even many years later, the laughter and sweet memory we shared together still lingered in my mind. Had it not been fbr my father unconditional love and encouragement, I would have been sunk in depression and guilt. I finished high school, growing into a loving and confident person.I was so grat

22、eful that my dad taught me whafs most valuable in my life.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了作者去参加高中毕业典礼的路上，开着父亲的车去学校，结果在 半路上遇到车祸，致使父亲的车被毁，但万幸的是，作者并无大碍。作者非常害怕被父亲责备，但最终受 到父亲原谅的故事。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我们走到后门时，电话铃响了。”可知，第一段可描写农民打电话问作者是否安全， 并拒绝作者补偿造成的损坏的提议，并且父母决定陪作者去参加毕业典礼。由第二段首句内容“那天晚上我毕业了，我的家人都出席了。“可知，第二段可描写在父母的陪伴下，我

23、度过了一个难忘而有意义的毕业典礼。2,续写线索：询问一拒绝补偿安慰参加毕业典礼回忆感激3 .词汇激活 行为类接电话：answer the phone / pick up the telephone补偿： make up for / compensate决定做某事：decide to do sth. / determine to do sth.情绪类令某人高兴的是：to ones delight / to ones joy感谢：be grateful / show my gratitude【点睛】高分句型 1. It turned out that the farmer called to as

24、k whether I was safe or had any other injuries.（运 用了 that引导的主语从句和whether引导宾语从句）高分句型 2. Had it not been fbr my father unconditional love and encouragement, I would have been sunk in depression and guilt.（运用了虚拟语气的倒装形式）4. One possible version:A few hours later, another knock. Linda glanced out of the w

25、indow. To her surprise, at the door was the same lady, back again. Really annoyed this time, Linda opened the door. Before Linda could utter any word, the young lady handed her a warm pot, with a concerned look on the fhce. Im so sorry to have disturbed you earlier. I thought you may need this homem

26、ade chicken soup. Hope it might make you feel a little better.Linda was surprised by this lovely action. After being refused so rudely, the lady still showed much kindness to her. A sense of shame creeping upon her heart, she could only force a smile with burning ears. But also, a warm current surge

27、d through her brain and body. Linda took the chicken soup gratefully, tears blurring her eyes and a lump in her throat. The lady wrapped Linda in her anns and patted her on the back. “Its OK, dear. Everything will be fine. Hearing these words, Linda felt a ray of bright sunshine lighting up her life

28、.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了琳达经历了离婚和破产。一天清晨，琳达躺在床上，感到浑身疼 痛，被敲门声叫醒。她看到敲门的是一名推销电视的年轻女士，琳达拒绝了推销，年轻的女士礼貌地转过 身，沉默地离开了。【详解1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“几个小时后，又传来敲门声。”可知，第一段可描写琳达的心情以及年轻女士给琳达 带来的惊喜（鸡汤）。由第二段首句内容“琳达对这个可爱的举动感到惊讶”可知，第二段可描写琳达的感受以及年轻女士对琳 达的安慰。2 .续写线索：生气惊喜琳达感受安慰3 .词汇激活 行为类 .拒绝：refuse/rej ect .展示：show/express .拥抱：hug/wr

29、ap 情绪类.令某人惊讶的是：to ones surprise/to ones astonishment.感激地:gratefully/appreciatively【点睛】高分句型 1. Before Linda could utter any word, the young lady handed her a warm pot, with a concerned look on the face. （before 引导的时间状语从句）高分句型 2. Hearing these words, Linda felt a ray of bright sunshine lighting up her

30、 life.（现在分词作状语） 5. I yelled for help. Hearing my cry for help, Mel made her way down and other climbers came to assist me. A couple of them were trained first aid treatment. They splinted my leg and called rescue team. Mel stayed by my side while I tried not to cry from the pain. Td been lying on th

31、e ice shivering and in agony for four hours by the time the rescuers reached me. They strapped me into a sled and pulled me down the mountain. Then I was loaded into an ambulance and taken to a hospital, where I stayed for four days.This accident made me have a deep reflection, but I was back climbi

32、ng again. The fall has made me more cautious. One slip on a mountain can change everything. But the experience also made me grow as a person and helped me mature. Since the accident, Fve climbed another 60 mountains. Tm not going to let one fall and its aftermath keep me from doing my favorite thing

33、 in the world.【导语】本文以时间为线索展开，讲述了作者从八年级开始就对爬山有兴趣，并且很快爬了近百座山峰。 16岁时，作者和朋友Mel Olsen相约去攀登11,240英尺高的胡德山，但在中途过程中，作者意外从山上摔 下来的故事。【详解】1 .段落续写：由第一段首句内容“我大声呼救。”可知，第一段可描写作者被得到救助的过程。由第二段首句内容“这次事故让我有了深刻的反思，但我又重新爬了起来。”可知，本段描写作者通过本 次经历得到了哪些反思，以及后续又开始爬山。2,续写线索：大声呼救被救助过程感悟重新开始爬山3 .词汇激活 行为类帮助：assist/aid/help颤抖：shiver

34、/tremble/quiver阻止某人做某事：keep sb from doing sth/prevent sb from doing sth 情绪类痛苦：agony/pain/suffering谨慎的：cautious/careful/prudent【点睛】高分句型 1. Hearing my cry for help, Mel made her way down and other climbers came to assist me. （运用了现在分词作状语）高分句型 2. Id been lying on the ice shivering and in agony for four

35、hours by the time the rescuers reached me. （运用了 by the time引导的时间状语从句）高分句型 3. Then I was loaded into an ambulance and taken to a hospital, where I stayed for four days.（运用 了 where引导的非限制性定语从句）6. Luckily, I felt a pat on my shoulder and a gentle voice came, “Are you lost”? Yeeesss!” I cried. It was a l

36、ady working at Disney. She picked me up and carried me through the crowd as she kept asking me where my parents had been standing. As I began to feel safe in the ladys arms, I calmed down and thought for a few minutes. I remembered we had been leaning against a wooden fence. She carried me around th

37、e wooden fence, asking random people, “Is this your child?” No. Sorry,“ everyone kept saying. Youre sorry? Look at me. Tm looking for my mommy, I thought.Finally, through the crowd of people, I recognized a face. I was so happy。 Mommy!” I shouted as I pointed toward her so the lady could carry me to

38、 her. When the lady put me down, I ran to my mom and gave her a huge hug. I couldnt let go of her. I didnt want to lose her again. As I cried in my mothers arms, my family thanked the nice lady for everything she had done for me. For the rest of the evening and the entire next day, I was more concer

39、ned with making sure that my parents were within my sight at all times than I was with seeing the sights at Disneyland. I look back at these memories and laugh at myself, but to this day, I always make sure to tell someone where I am going before I run off.【导语】本篇书面表达为读后续写，文章讲述了作者一次难忘的经历。作者跟家人去迪士尼游玩，

40、没告诉 家人的情况下跟着姐姐们去卫生间，结果与家人走散。作者哭着到处找家人，但是大家都沉浸在烟火表演 中。就在作者无助时，有人发现了与家人走散的作者，并带着作者找到了家人。【详解】1.段落续写：由第一段首句内容“幸运的是，我感到有人拍了拍我的肩膀，一个温柔的声音传来：，你迷路了吗?”可知， 第一段可描写有人发现作者与家人走散，并带着作者去找家人。由第二段首句内容“最后，在人群中，我认出了一张脸。“可知，第二段可描写作者找到了家人，家人表 示感谢。2 .续写线索：询问情况帮助找家人找到家人感谢感悟3 .词汇激活 行为类镇定下来：calm down/compose oneself 跑向某人：run

41、 to sb/rush to sb拥抱：gave sb a hug/hug sb/embrace sb情绪类高兴：happy/delighted感谢：thank/show appreciation/show gratitude/be grateful【点睛】【高分句型 1 She picked me up and carried me through the crowd as she kept asking me where my parents had been standing.（运用了 as引导的时间状语从句和where引导的宾语从句）【高分句型 2 As I cried in my m

42、others arms, my family thanked the nice lady fbr everything she had done fbr me.（运用as引导的时间状语从句和省略that的限制性定语从句）7 . paragraph 1 ：After a while, Chris and Mark, nearby farmers, were driving by the farm. Everett rushed towards them and stopped them, telling them what had happened. Hearing the accident f

43、rom Everett, they picked him up and sped to Brandon house. Upon arrival, they quickly jumped off the truck and grabbed a long thick rope and then rush to the welLBrandon J they shouted, We are going to send a rope down to you.” OK, I will send Louie up first/9 Brandon shouted back, freezing down the

44、re.paragraph 2:Twenty minutes later, Louie emerged（出现），then Brandon, both cold and wet. Struggling to his feet, Brandon hugged the two farmers tightly, whispering You save our lives! Thank you!” Yet, Mark said Jit was actually Everett who saved your lives. Without him, we wouldnt have known the acci

45、dent. Let alone the rescue! ”Words could not express his surprise when the father turned to the 3-year-old boy. Everett cried, rushing to Brandon and Louie. Brandon held them tightly in arms, cherishing them like never before, and tears welled up in the eyes of this tough guy. Finally, they thanked

46、the two farmers Chris and Mark again.【导语】本文以人物为线索展开，讲述了 Brandon喂完牛后和两个儿子Louie和Everett 一起回家。Brandon 关上牲口棚门后却发现大儿子不见了，问过小儿子Everett后得知Louie掉进了井里。于是Brandon跳进井 里救Louie,但是因为水太深，两人都不能逃出。Brandon让井口的Everett到路边去寻求帮助。Everett答 应了父亲，他站在路边。【详解】1.段落续写由第一段首句“过了一会儿，附近的农民克里斯和马克开车经过农场。”可知，第一段可描写两位农民在 听到Everett的描述之后，两人

47、加速开车到Brandon的农场救援两父子。由第二段首句“二十分钟后，路易出现了，然后是布兰登，又冷又湿。”可知，本段可描述两父子被救上 来后，父亲感谢两位农民的救命之恩，而两位农民则说救他们父子俩的小儿子Everett。随后，父子三人相 拥一起。8 .续写线索开车经过了解情况援救成功感激感恩。9 .词汇激活 行为类快速赶去：speed up/rush to/fly to大声回应：shout back/respond with a loud voice 感谢：thank/show ones gratitude情绪类哭泣：tears well up in the eyes/eyes full of

48、 tears吃惊：surprise/astonishment/amazement【点睛】【高分句型1】Everett rushed towards them and stopped them, telling them what had happened.（运用 了现在分词作状语和 what 引导宾语从句）【高分句型2】Struggling to his feet, Brandon hugged the two farmers tightly, whispering “You save our lives! Thank you!” （运 用了现在分词作伴随状语）8. Finally, the grand end came, and Prince was brought onstage inside the box. He was meek and cooperated well with the actors on stage. He jumped out as it was planned in the plot. He jumped in