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1、书面表达作文真题汇编（15题）V-江苏地区2022-2023九年级英语上学期期末备考学校:姓名： 班级： 考号： 一、话题作文1. （2019.江苏南京）最近，你们学校公众号“佳文共赏”栏目将以“Myhcro”为题开展一 次作文评选，请以此为题写一篇短文，介绍你所敬佩的一位文体类名人，向该栏目投 稿。My heroUseful expression:Talents and achievementshave a gift for, win an award for,.Difficulties he / she met and howhe / she dealt with themnever gi

2、ve upachieve success through,.Charity workfar more than, devote.(o.Your opinion(s) about him / herbe famous for / as,.要求：1.80词左右，语句流畅通顺；2.文章需涵盖以上要点，并作适当发挥；3.文中 不得出现任何考生真实二、材料作文2. （2020江苏景山）书面表达盐城市政府正在努力发展旅游业，宣传广告“盐城，一个让人打开心扉的地方”正在CCTV4播放，请你根据思维导图中提供的信息，为这则广告写一篇宣传稿，介绍盐城 的风土人情。要求：1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；2）必

3、须包括思维导图中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；3）词数：100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；4）参考词汇:the coast of the Yellow Sea, one of the worlds most important wetlands, red-crowned cranes, rare birdsYours.Sandy13. （2018.江苏苏州）书面表达假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Bill给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你的梦想职业。请认 真阅读下面的邮件，根据信中的内容和你的实际情况用英语回复，词数90左右。To: From: bi 11 （X）Subject: Your

4、dream jobDear Lihua,Our teacher told us China is developing fast. You are lucky enough to livein China.Would you please （ell me about your dream job in the future? What is your dream job? Why do you like the job? Do you think your personality is suitable for the job? Why or why not? What do you need

5、 to do for your dream job?Drop a few lines if you have time.Best wishes,Bill注意:l.开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数。 .回复必须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯通顺。 .文中不得提及人名，校名等相关信息。Dear Bill,Thank you for your letter. I am glad to tell you about my dream job._Tell me about your ideal job !Yours,Lihua14. （2018江苏苏州）书面表达假如你是李华，你和英国一所友好学校的学

6、生Robert做了笔友。最近你收到他的第一 封信，他在信中向你提出了一些问题。请你根据他的来信，写一封回信。Dear Li Hua,How are you? Im so glad that weve become penfriends. I want (o know much around you and Im interested in Chinese festivals. Would you please tell me the Following things? What personalities do you have? How do you like your school lif

7、e? How do Chinese people celebrate the Spring Festival? What will you do in the coming winter holiday?Look forward to your reply.Yours,Robert注意:1.词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数：2 .回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺；.文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。Dear Robert.I am so glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you the things you ask

8、ed me before.Im a student in Grade 9.Hope to meet you in China as soon as possible!All （he best,Li Hua四、讲稿15. （2019江苏常州）书面表达假如你是“航天英雄杨利伟事迹报告团”成员之一，请你以报告团成员的身份向世各界人 士介绍我们中国的航天英雄杨利伟的有关情况。要点如下：出生1965年6月21日，辽宁省绥中县，教师家庭，童年幸福。天赋成绩优异，有数学天赋，获得过许多数学竞赛奖。个人经历1 .中学毕业后，在中国人民解放军空军第八航空学院(the No.8 Aviation College

9、of the Air Force of the Peoples Liberation Army)学习。2 .学习刻苦，后来，成为战斗机飞行员(a fighter pilot)。3 .表现出色，儿年后，被选拔接受宇航员训练，1996和1997 年通过宇航员考试。4.2003年10月15日，成为我国进入太空的第一人.你的感想(至少发挥两点)要求：词数不少于100字(文章的开头已经写好，不计入总词数)Ladies and gentlemen,Yang Liwci was bom on June 21st* 1965 in Suizhong, Liaoning Province in a teache

10、rsfamily.参考答案： I. My heroI like Chinese Kung Fu and My hero is Bruce lee, he is an actor and famous for performing Chinese KungFu.He has a gift for Kung Fu and have been made great achievements.Unfortunalely, he died young, at the age of 33.He is an important founder of Chinese Kung Fu and has won t

11、he lifetime achievement award of the Hong Kong film awards.When he was very young, Bruce lee was very diligent in learning Chinese Kung Fu. He was not afraid of difficulties and never gave up.Hc was also a warm-hearted person. He loved his family and was willing to help people in trouble.He was read

12、y to help others and always gave a hand to those in need.Although he is no longer alive, I admire him very much.【详解】本文以My her。为题，要求写作自己敬佩的名人。学生首先要认真阅读材料中 给出的短语及相关信息，认真审题，确定文章的中心。在写作的文章具有一定的连贯性,还应注 意使用一些连接词，使文章的表达更有逻辑性和条理性。写作时还要注意:1.书写规范：2.可适 当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯；3.写完后要认真检查是否有漏写要点，有无拼写错误等。 高分句型：he is an

13、actor and famous for performing Chinese KungFu.他是个演员,以表演中国 功夫而闻名。He has a gift for Kung Fu and have been made great achievements.他有功夫天赋， LL经取得了很大的成就。Unfortunately, he died young, at (he age of 33.不幸的是，他英年早逝， 年仅 33 岁。He was not afraid of difficulties and never gave up.他不怕困难，从不放弃。He was ready to help

14、others and always gave a hand to those in need 他乐于助人，总是帮助那些需要帮 助的人。学会使用材料中提供的短语：学会使用连词和插入语。例如材料中的Talents and achievements 天赋和成就：have a gift for 在.有天赋：win an award for 荣获奖项；nevergive up永不放弃;achieve success through通过获得成功。【点睛】注意写作过程中，将要点展开并表达清楚，注意使用英语的经典句型，避免出现汉 语表达。2.范文Welcome to Yancheng! Yancheng is

15、 a place to open up your mind. Yancheng is a seaside city that lies on the coast of the Yellow Sea. You can get there by bus.It is named after the salt fields around it. It has a Chinese Sea Salt Museum that displays the sea salt civilization.Wc can learn a lot from it.Yancheng Nature Reserve is hom

16、e to Wild animals.Yancheng is famous for its red culture.For example, the New Fourth Army memorial, there you can learn stories about Anti-Japanese War.East or west, Yanchcng landscape is best! Wc arc here waiting for you.【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇广告宣传稿。盐城市政府正在努力发展旅游业，宣传广告“盐 城，一个让人打开心扉的地方”正在CCTV4播放，请你根据思维导图中提供

17、的信息，为这 则广告写一篇宣传稿，介绍盐城的风土人情。2 .例文点评：这篇短文应使用一般现在时态，注意使用正确的语法结构、句型和短语，不要 逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。在文章中使用一些连词，使上下文意思连贯、流畅。3 .高分亮点：短语：open up ； your mind： lie on ； the coast of the Yellow Sea： get there； by bus； is home to Wild animal So句型：It has a Chinese Sea Salt Museum that displays the sea salt civilization.Yanc

18、heng Nature Reserve is home to Wild animals.Yancheng is famous for its red culture.4 .例文Dear all:Safety is very important for students. But how can wc keep safe? Here arc some of my suggestions. First of all, we should use the network carefully. We should browse healthy web pages. Dont make friends

19、alone. Dont post some of your personal information on the Internet. Second, we should obey the traffic rules. Avoid listening to music when cycling. You cant cross the road when its red. Third, dont eat junk food. Read instructions and dates carefully. I hope you can have a healthy body.As teenagers

20、, wc should always keep safe in mind.【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇倡议书，安全，牵系每个人的生活，为增强中学生的安全意 识，提高自我保护能力，请你以How to keep safe为主题，根据以下要点提示写一篇100词 左右的安全倡议书。（开头已给出，不计入总词数），文章必须包括文中所给提示:网络安全； 交通安全；食品安全。2 .例文点评：本题目要求学生以安全为话题写一篇演讲稿。所给要点比较详细。在写作前; 可以先翻译这些要点，然后再考虑将这此要点有条理的组合在一起，构成篇章，当然在写作 中我们也可以适当发挥，但所给要点一个也不能少。3 .高分痉点：短语：

21、First of all； some of： your personal information； obey the traffic rules； avoid doing sth.： listening to music。句型：1. Dont make friends alone.2. Dont eat junk food.3. Read instructions and dates carefully.4.1 hope you can have a healthy body.4.范文：One possible version:As a Grade 9 student, we have too

22、 much homework. However, we still have our own ways to relax ourselves. Usually, I prefer to watch TV programmes to relax myself and I spend about 2 hours watching TV every week.Watching TV is one of the most popular free time activities. There are all kinds of TV programmes, such as chat shows, dra

23、ma series, cartoons, and so on, so people of all ages are interested in watching TV. TV programmes can improve our knowledge of the world. For example, wc can learn a lot about history, nature, and real-life events by watching documentaries.In iny opinion, watching TV not only helps me relax but als

24、o gives me knowledge.【分析】本篇为材料作文，要求按照提示完成一篇你如何放松自己有关的短文，内容包括： 选择课后放松自己的方式；结合己选的方式进行细节描述（花多长时间和为什么选择这项活 动）；总结自己从这项活动中学到了什么。要求短文要包含所有的提示内容，语言通顺，意 思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范。【详解】1题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以李华的身份，用第一人称的方式按照提示完成一 篇你如何“放松自己”的短文，叙述口常的状况，用一般现在时；书写时要注意用全所给材料， 文句通顺，内容完整。2 .例文点评：本例文结构严谨，层次分明。开篇紧扣主题，介绍自己选择课后放松自己的方 式是看电视

25、、自己看电视的时间；正文部分详细地介绍各种各样的电视节目以及这些节目让 自己学到什么知识；文章布局合理，内容完整连贯。3 .高分亮点：本篇例文短语丰富、句式多样。用短语have our own ways to relax ourselves.： prefer to；句式 spend.doing sth 介绍自己的放松方式;用短语 one of the most popular free time activities； all kinds of ； be interested in； improve our knowledge of the world； learn a lot about ；

26、介绍电视节忖以及节目的知识性；用连词not onlybut also总结看电视的好处， 文句精彩，行文通畅。【点睛】本篇材料作文书写前要认真审题，确定人称（第一人称）和时态（一般现在时）； 关注题材的格式（记叙文），注意文章的篇章结构；书写时要紧扣主题，做到中心突出，内 容完整、连贯；成文后要检查人称、时态是否一致、单词的拼写是否正确、短语和句式的使 用是否得当。5. Recently, scientists have made a survey about young adults walking habits.The survey shows that a quarter of 18- t

27、o 24-year-olds walk less than five minutes a day, which is bad for their health. With the popularity of electric bicycles, most people believe that less walking is due to the development of technology. In fact, some young people feel that having no people to walk with is also a reason fbr walking le

28、ss. In addition, some young people are too busy studying or working to have time to walk. We should pay attention to sports and health. To be healthy, we should often walk instead of always driving or taking buses. Take a walk outside with your family on weekends, or go fishing with your friends.Jus

29、t remember. The more you walk, the healthier you will be.【详解】这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make a survey, walking habits, less than, be bad for, with the popularity of, be due to, in fact, in addition* busy doing. too.to, pay attention to, instead of 等。The survey shows that a quarter of 18- to 24-year-

30、olds walk less than five minutes a day, which is bad for their health./ In fact, some young people feel that having no people to walk with is also a reason for walking less. / With the popularity of electric bicycles, most people believe that less walking is due to the development of technology.等 复杂

31、从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化。而三句Asa的运用，使短文很有 条理，是本文的最大亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当 引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。【点睛】书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容 经整理后展开思维，考杳运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点， 要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得 到较高的分数。6. Dear Mike,My name is Li Lin. Tm a student of Grade 9, My Chinese

32、zodiac is a dragon. I am a kind and lively person. I like warm colours such as orange and yellow, because they can bring me success and chccr me up. I like to read detective stories full of mystery and horror, And I like listening to Chinese classical music. But my parents were very strict with me,

33、they were too concerned with grades. I always have a lot of homework every day. I dont get enough sleep and I often feel tired.So I communicate with my parents and plan each day carefully. I hope I will have less homework and Tm looking forward to having enough time to relax myself during the winter

34、 holidays.What about you? Can you tell me more about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Li Lin【详解】这是一篇书信作文。假如你是一名九年级学生李林，你刚认识的美国笔友Mike想 了解你的情况。要求你根据表格所提供的信息给他写一封邮件介绍你自己。文章时态用一般 现在时，人称主要用第一称。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达。在写作时， 注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的 表述应该符合语法的结构

35、，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯：尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式, 最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富 多样，可以为文章增色添彩。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每 个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段 与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过 渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现语法错误。最后要细心 复核检查，确保正确无误。7. Dear Roy,Welcome to our school. Im Li

36、 Hua, a 16-ycar-old girl.Now let me introduce something about our class for you. There are 52 students in our class, including 30 boys and 22 girls. The students get along very well, but our English is not the same. We hope you can help us solve problems and help us understand western culture. Chang

37、shu is a famous historical city, it has a long history and ancient culture. I hope our classmates can be good friends with you. and I hope you live a very happy life in Changshu.Thank you!【详解】这是一篇给材料作文，新外教Roy要来你班任教，假如你是李华，要求根据表格 中所给出的内容，写一篇发言稿，对Roy的到来表示欢迎。文章时态主要用一般现在时， 人称主要用第一和第二人称。本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要

38、准确表达。在写作时， 注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的 表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式, 最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富 多样，可以为文章增色添彩。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点：然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每 个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段 与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过 渡平稳，自然流畅；同时注意语句要通顺，词汇书写无误，不要出现

39、语法错误。最后要细心 复核检查，确保正确无误。8. My classmate, Li Ming, is lucky enough to be chosen as one of the Virtue Teenagers in Jiangsu.Li Ming is a boy of medium height. He has a round face and smiling eyes. He is generous enough to share what he has with others. He is also confident. He likes to give a speech in

40、front of others. Reading is his favorite because he thinks reading can open up a whole new world to him.At home, Li Ming respects his parents. Hes willing to help them do housework. At school, he studies hard and gets along well with his classmates. In society, Li Ming takes an active part in charit

41、y activities. He often works as a volunteer (o help people in need.Li Ming has many strong qualities to be chosen as the Virtue Teenager. I hope everyone can learn from him and vote for him.【详解】本文属于材料作文，介绍你身边的一位“美德少年”的候选人。根据要表达的内容确 定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语

42、 习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如lenough, share with, respect be willing to, gets along well with, takes an active pari in, in need。增强逻辑关系，增加上下 文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。点睛：写作时可以从以下几个方面做起：认真审题。审好题是写好书面表达的关键。审题时要注意试题的要求，抓住要点，词数 符合要求。构思提纲。有了提纲，我们就可以根据提纲和主题确定相关的写作材料。通常书面表达 给出的话题是开放的，而具体的内容要求学生自己发挥，因此选择恰当的素材也是使短文

43、中 心突出、明确的关键。初写短文。一切都准备就绪，就可以动笔写作了，在写作的过程中我们要注意句子的准 确性、连贯性以及简洁性。使用的词语、短语及句型尽量用自己有把握的词。同时还要注意 使用恰当的连词，使句子衔接自然。修改润色。修改润色是获取高分的必要步骤。这一步我们除了检查短文的各种错误外， 还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，格式是否正确，词 数是否符合要求等。9. 【参考范文】Dear Principle,I am writing to recommend Simon as the chairperson of the Students, Union.Simon

44、 is the monitor of our class. He is very active and confident. He is hard-working at his lessons. He is also a top student in my class. He is very helpful, too. He often helps us solve problems. He is kind and generous to his classmates. We all like to make friends with him. He is clever, creative a

45、nd imaginative. He often comes up with new ideas. He is also patient and organized. He can plan things well and pay attention to details. I think he has all the qualities to be a good chairperson. I hope you can agree with me.Yours sincerely,Peter【详解】这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了大量短语，例如the Students Unio

46、n, the monitor of at his lessons, in my class, help sb. do sth., solve problems, like to do, make friends with sb., conic up, pay attention to, be a good chairperson, agree with 等。而 I am writing to recommend Simon as the chairperson of the Students Union./ He is also a top student in my class./ We a

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