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1、试题原题读后续写（满分25分）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短 文。续写的词数应为150左右。One warm Autumn day, Jane drove to Cincinnati to stay with her friends for Thanksgiving Day. After the holiday, she drove back together with Sam, her eight-year-old son.On the way, unexpectedly, it began snowing. It had never snowed s

2、o early in this area. The bad weather made Jane upset. And she was more upset when thinking of her husband, a firefighter. He had lost his life not long before when helping a family put out a big fire.Sad, Jane tried to calm herself and continued driving ahead. However, the weather turned worse. The

3、 snow danced violently in the air and her small car frequently skidded （打 滑）on the highway. She drove slowly and carefully, in case of any accident.To check whether her son was alright, through the mirror in front of her, she had a look at him in the back seat, with a pair of crutches （拐杖）nearby, wh

4、ich he was temporarily using due to an injured ankle.Seeing her son was just sleeping, Jane quickly took her sight away from him; she needed to find a place to stop. She knew due to the small wheels, her car would soon be unable to make it through the snowy road with more and more snow. Then, throug

5、h the white dancing snow, she saw her salvation （救星）a green sign reading “Rest Area”. She thought finally she found a place where she could wait out the snowstorm.She pulled over, noticing the cars gas needle was nearly empty. It doesnt matter as long as we have a warm place to stay,“ she whispered.

6、 Then, she parked in the lot where a big truck stopped. She left her son sleeping in the back seat and she went to check out the inside.As she struggled to walk through the snow towards a brown building, she found there were no lights on. She went to the door, only to find it locked. It was the only

7、 rest stop for miles but they couldnt get in. Janes heart sank. Whatever strength had been holding her一since her husbands death-disappeared.Paragraph 1:She sat in the snow and couldn 7 help weeping.Paragraph 2:Let me drive you to the nearest hotel J the truck driver smiled gently.试题分析1 .主要人物：Jane： t

8、he motherSam： the son,脚踝受伤，其他没什么描述（在车里睡觉）Vthe truck driver：在下文中应该有所描述2 .情节：Jane和她八岁的儿子去Cincinnati跟朋友过了一个感恩节，回家途中，不幸遇上 了下大雪，这是在以往所没有过的。天气越来越糟糕，雪越下越大，她的车又小，没 法在雪地里开，于是，她小心翼翼地沿着路开了一段，幸好发现公路旁有个“休息处”。 她就把车开了进去，准备避一避风雪。雪上加霜的是，油箱里的油也不多了。她把车 停在一辆货车边上。她留下车里熟睡的儿子，去停车处内的黄颜色的房子看看有没有 人。房子里面空无一人，经过多方努力，房子的门没法打开。这

9、下子，丈夫（是一位 消防员，因为去破灭一场大火，失去了生命）走了以后，仅有的一丝力量荡然无存。3 .主题：“人与社会”人与人之间的互助4 .续写安排：第一段：She sat in the snow and couldnt help weeping.（与前一句衔接）Jane感到非常无助，身心有怎样的表现？想起丈夫生前所做的一切，顿时Jane身上充满了力量。决定不放弃的时候，刚 好停在车旁的货车准备开动。于是，寻求货车司机的帮助。（与下一段开头句衔接）了解了真相，货车司机二话没说就答应帮助她们母子 俩。第二段：“Let me drive you to the nearest hotel J the

10、 truck driver smiled gently.（做好与开头句的衔接）听到好心的货车司机话，Jane有怎样的反映？货车司机把Jane母子俩送到了最近的酒店。（主题升华）世界上，有很多像她丈夫这样的好人。范文展示参考范文She sat in the snow and couldn 7 help weeping. Later, a man approached her. He was a truck driver. He knelt down and asked, “Whats wrong, madam?” Between sobs, Jane told him about her hus

11、bands story. Touched by her husbands bravery, he helped Jane stand up and comforted her. Slowly, Jane regained her calmness and told him that her car couldnt make it through the snow. After knowing where shed go, he offered help. （65 words）“Let me drive you to the nearest hotel,“ the truck driver sm

12、iled gently. Jane nodded gratefully. Then, they forced their way through the snow to her car to pick up her son. Seeing Sam, the truck driver was shocked. When Jane explained Sam was just temporarily using crutches, he breathed a sigh of relief. Then, he carried Sam to his truck. Driving for a while

13、, he pulled over before a hotel. After Jane and Sam were settled in their room, the man left. It was so cold that day, but the mans help warmed Janes heart. （83 words）考场作文1：Paragraph 1:She sat in the snow and couldn 7 help weeping. Desperate and helpless, Jane kneltdown, not knowing what to do next,

14、 every limb trembling. So sorrowful was she that she couldnt help sobbing. Suddenly, the big truck beside her started and the truck driver noticed Jane, asking, Are you OK, Madam?” Drawing herself back from the sadness, she stood up and replied, “I couldnt go ahead because of the bad weather and the

15、 nearly empty gas. I have nowhere to go now with my son sleeping/9 Sympathetic about her situation, the driver made a decision. (86 words)Paragraph 2:Let me drive you to the nearest hotel,“ the truck driver smiled gently. Delighted and grateful, Jane asked whether he could wait for a minute, for she

16、 would get her son onto the truck. Jane felt the warmth in the truck. On the way, they had a good chat. It didnt take long before they arrived. Jane and her son got out of the truck and thanked him again and again. The warmth left Jane knew there were many warm-hearted people like her husband in the

17、 world and they would give you a favor at any time. (84 words)考场作文2：Paragraph 1:She sat in the snow and couldn 7 help weeping. If I hadnt driven on the highway, I wouldnt be trapped in this awful place. Jane regretted. Faced with the potential danger, she had various terrible thoughts flooding in. B

18、efore figuring out what was going on, she was already lost in the maze of snow. However, the her husbands spirit gave her strength. Exhausted, she continued searching for assistance, but in vain. Back to her car, she found a driver in the truck, which made her violent happy. Knowing Janes situation,

19、 the driver offered to help. (86 words)Paragraph 2:“Let me drive you to the nearest hotel,the truck driver smiled gently. What the kind driver said brought Jane the last glimmer of hope. A sense of calmness immediately replaced the mounting fear. Jane had difficulty containing her emotions and tears

20、 of gratitude welled up uncontrollably. “Its so kind of you. Words fail to convey my thanks!” On the way to the hotel, Jane chatted with the driver cheerfully as they were long lost friends. It didnt take them too long to approach the destination. Soon the truck disappeared in the darkness, leaving Jane warmth in the heart! (86 words)