书面表达如何拓展信息课件.pptx

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1、【Homework】假设你是李华假设你是李华,是你校武术俱乐部是你校武术俱乐部(Martial Arts Club)的负责人。请你用英文写封邮件给你校的的负责人。请你用英文写封邮件给你校的美国交换生美国交换生Tommy，邀请他加入武术俱乐部。，邀请他加入武术俱乐部。内容包括：内容包括：1、加入武术俱乐部的意义；、加入武术俱乐部的意义；2、俱乐部的日常活动安排。、俱乐部的日常活动安排。注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【高考年报高考年报】改卷场关于写作内容的反馈：改卷场关于写作内容的反馈：好的方面：好的方面：内容上，表表

2、达达信信息息完完整整、准准确确且且充充实，要点基本覆盖到位，重要信息把握相对好，能处理好内容的主次重点，细节展开丰富。展开丰富。存在问题：存在问题：没有理解好写作内容，中等偏下的同学无无话话可可说说；内内容容拓拓展展不不好好，有有些些拓拓展展不不多多，不能突出主题。Reading&Discussion Read letters A&B.Discuss with your partners:Which is better in content?Why?ABDear Tommy,I am Li Hua,the person in charge of the Martial Arts Club of

3、 our school.Im writing to invite you to join our club since I learn that you have a keen interest in Chinese culture.Martial art is an important part of Chinese culture,and our club is the place where you can have a better understanding of it.You can have a healthy lifestyle by learning martial arts

4、 and will make more friends in our club.We have professional coaches to give us training every Wednesday in the Student Center.The training lasts two hours from 4 p.m.to 6 p.m.Besides,theres a martial arts competition at the end of each school term,which is a special event everybody looks forward to

5、!Hopefully you can take the chance and sign up immediately.Yours,Li HuaWhy am I writing to you?Why am I writing to you?Why was the club founded?Why was the club founded?the result of learning martial artsthe result of holding a competition WhyWhyresultresultHow can we enrich our writing?如何拓展书面表达的信息？

6、Key words:Why?Result?【2017 全国全国 I 卷卷】假定假定你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友你是李华，正在教你的英国朋友Leslie学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。学习汉语。请你写封邮件告知下次上课的计划。内容包括：内容包括：（1）时间和地点；）时间和地点；（2）内容：学习唐诗；）内容：学习唐诗；（3）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。）课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。时间It is convenient for you.We are both free then.As usual.地点地点It is near your dormitory.It is quiet.Why

7、?Why?内容：学内容：学习唐唐诗Why?Why?Group work:Discuss with your partners and share your ideas.课前准前准备：简要了解唐朝的要了解唐朝的历史。史。Why?Why?Result Result?内容：学内容：学习唐唐诗They are beautiful.They are an important part of Chinese culture.Why?Why?They have a high status in Chinese literature.Discuss with your partners and share y

8、our ideas.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。to get some background knowledgeto help better understand Tang poemsWhy?Why?to make it easier to learn Tang poems.Discuss with your partners and share your ideas.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。You can appreciate Tang poems better.to know more about ChineseResult?Result?to have a better unde

9、rstanding of Tang poems.Discuss with your partners and share your ideas.Please write about the following information.Try to add some details to enrich your writing.Writing 1内容：学内容：学习唐唐诗ContentMarks紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，细节展开丰富细节展开丰富9-10紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实7-8紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点

10、5-6遗漏一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容漏一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容3-4明明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容1-2Peer-assessment 同伴互同伴互评 Sharing&Marking 1 Take a photo of your sentences and upload them.Then mark your friends writing.A possible version:In the next class,you will mainly learn Tang poems,which are an important part of Chine

11、se culture and are deeply loved by Chinese.You can feel the beauty of Chinese by learning Tang Poems.Please write about the following information.Try to add some details to enrich your writing.课前准备：简要了解唐朝的历史。Writing 2ContentMarks紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，细节展开丰富细节展开丰富9-10紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容

12、较充实7-8紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点5-6遗漏一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容漏一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容3-4明明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容1-2Peer-assessment 同伴互同伴互评 Sharing&Marking 2 Take a photo of your writings and upload them.Then mark your friends writing.Possible versions:In order to know the Tang poems better,you can read some

13、books about the history of Tang Dynasty before our lesson.If you learn something about the history of Tang Dynasty in advance,you can appreciate the beauty of Tang poems better.Summary How can we enrich our writing?Why?Result?Homework Finish your letter and share it with your partners.Thank you.Thank you.Have a good day.Have a good day.