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1、大连市第八十中学大连市第八十中学 张渴秋张渴秋HelplinesquestionsWho called Friendship HelplineLinglingWhat was the problem?Linglings best friend didnt like her to.Why Lingling called it Because she had a problem with She wanted to.What might be the reason?Maybe her best friend didnt feel very sure of adviceTry to.Be patie

2、nt with and explain to Try to introduce to.Who:Zhang Bei When:the early autumn ofher first yearWhere:at a new schoolWhat:No one knew;was very lonely,afraid to make friendswith anyoneAt firstStory:_Then one day Now What happened?One day:were talking,sat in silenceAt that moment:entered-passed-turnedb

3、ack-looked at-smiled(without a word)Suddenly:felt the touch of;made feel;was likeAttitude towards:other studentschanged;started totalk with learnt totrust;included intheir circle of the girlhas become stickthe worldI believe that.If you think,youmight.Smile atand it will.A beautiful smileFrom Lingli

4、ngs call:When we have a problem with our best friend,we should try our best to solve it.From Zhang Beis story:The world is what we think it is.Smile at the world,and it will smile back.What can you learn from Linglings call and Zhang Beis story?We should treasure our friendship.An interview1.What do

5、 you think is the most important about friendship?Honesty(真诚真诚)Confidence(信任信任)To help each other(互助互助)Tolerance(宽容宽容)Undertanding(理解理解)Respect(尊重尊重)Sharing(分享分享)Encouragement(鼓励鼓励)2.Say something about your experience.Some good sayings about friendshipA life without a friend is like a life without

6、the sun.人生没有朋友,犹如人生没有了太阳。Friendship is a love without wings.友谊是一种无形的爱A friend in need is a friend indeed.患难朋友才是真朋友.A friend without faults will never be found.没有缺点的朋友是永远找不到的。A good friend is my nearest relation.良友如近亲。Without confidence there is no friendship.没有信任，就没有友谊。Friendship is like money,easie

7、r made than kept.友谊如金钱一般，容易得到却不易保持。大连市大连市20152015年中考作文题目（分值：年中考作文题目（分值：2020分）分）朋友情深，友谊无价。在与朋友交往的过程中，你朋友情深，友谊无价。在与朋友交往的过程中，你认为什么是最重要的？是以诚相待、彼此信任，还是认为什么是最重要的？是以诚相待、彼此信任，还是？目前，你校校刊正在就此话题开展征文活动，请？目前，你校校刊正在就此话题开展征文活动，请你结合自己的经历，写一你结合自己的经历，写一 篇英语短文，谈谈看法。篇英语短文，谈谈看法。内容提示：内容提示：（1）What is the most important ab

8、out friendship?（2）Share your experience.要求：要求：（1）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名；）文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名；（3）80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。思路点拨思路点拨审题审题作者身份作者身份：读者读者：体裁体裁：主题主题：内容内容：时态时态：素材素材：题目：朋友情深，友谊无价。题目：朋友情深，友谊无价。在与朋友交往的过程中，你认在与朋友交往的过程中，你认为什么是最重要的？是以诚相为什么是最重要的？是以诚相待、彼此待、彼此

9、 信任，还是信任，还是？目？目前，你校校刊正在就此话题开前，你校校刊正在就此话题开展征文活动，请你结合自己的展征文活动，请你结合自己的经历，写一经历，写一 篇英语短文，谈谈篇英语短文，谈谈看法。看法。内容提示：内容提示：（1）What is the most important about friendship?（2）Share your experience.学生（第一人称）学生（第一人称）老师和同学老师和同学记叙文记叙文(narration)友谊友谊(Friendship)（1）What is the most important about friendship?（2）Share you

10、r experience.一般现在时、一般过去时一般现在时、一般过去时 教材中与友谊话题相关的模块教材中与友谊话题相关的模块（Module9）自己与好友的经历自己与好友的经历Tips:中心突出、内容完整、表述真情实感。Structure（结构）（结构）BeginningWhat is the most important about friendshipBodyShare my experienceEndingWhat my experience has brought me.WhenWhoWhereWhatFeelingsTips:层次清晰，分段行文，详略得当，首尾呼应。LanguageSe

11、ntence patterns 语言句式运用准语言句式运用准 确、确、灵活，灵活，表达合理得体地道，贴切表达合理得体地道，贴切,恰当运用教材及阅读材料中的佳句和表达形式恰当运用教材及阅读材料中的佳句和表达形式Grammar 关注时态、动词变化、名词单复数、词性等关注时态、动词变化、名词单复数、词性等Words&phrases 注意单词拼写、大小写、标点符号正确使用注意单词拼写、大小写、标点符号正确使用书上好句：书上好句：1.I felt even more lonely.2.She looked at me and,without a word,smiled.3.Suddenly,I felt

12、 the touch of something4.It made me feel5.It was like a hidden treasure.6.They include me in their circle of friends.7.The girl with a bight smile has becomeand we stick together like glue.8.I believe that the world is Smile at the world,and it will smile back.BeginningSamplesSamples：An old saying g

13、oes,”.”So in my opinion,real friends should always Talking of friendship,the word“”appears in my mind suddenly.Im eager to share my opinion about friendship with you.plays an important role in friendship.What is the most important about friendship?BodySamples Samples：I will never forget the words sh

14、e told me which gave me energyNo matter how hard I tried,I couldtI felt my heart nearly broken.The memories are just like glaring stars at the bottom of my heart.I felt so moved that the tears rolled down my faceShare your experienceEndingSamples Samples：Im lucky to have such a friend.It was that ch

15、anged my life.The experience told me thatFriendship is like wine,the longer,the better.What your experience has brought you.Logical（逻辑性的）（逻辑性的）&Contextual（语义连贯的）（语义连贯的）Expressions Beginning:Talking of./As we all know,.I have such a friend.Body:At first,.Little by little,.And as a result,Since then,I

16、ve Whats more/In addition/Besides,Ending:In a word/All in all/In conclusion,.One possible version:A friend is easier lost than found.So in my opinion,tolerance plays an important role in keeping friendship.Lily and I have been friends for three years,but there is one thing impressing me deeply.One d

17、ay,we had a big quarrel just because we had different ideas.I said she never put herself in my shoes.As a result,she ran away with tears on her face.But later,I regretted hurting her.The following morning,I failed my exam.When she saw the sadness on my face,she walked towards me and cheered me on ge

18、ntly,just like nothing had happened.Suddenly,I felt the touch of something warm.She had forgiven me and we were still the best friends.Friendship is like wine,the longer,the better.If you want to keep it,you should learn to be tolerant first.Handwriting（书写）（书写）字迹工整，无划痕字迹工整，无划痕大小、字距适中大小、字距适中压线写（划线写）压

19、线写（划线写）平行（横平竖直）平行（横平竖直）字数字数100-120最佳最佳,一行一行12-13，答题卡区域，答题卡区域档次评分参考标准：A(17-20分分)出色完成了试题规定的任务，有围绕出色完成了试题规定的任务，有围绕主题的合理发挥，内容符合逻辑，覆盖所有要点，组织结主题的合理发挥，内容符合逻辑，覆盖所有要点，组织结构清晰，选词贴切，语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误，标构清晰，选词贴切，语言基本无误或有少量拼写错误，标点、大小写正确。点、大小写正确。B(13-16分分)较好完成了任务。有围绕主题的适当发较好完成了任务。有围绕主题的适当发挥，内容比较符合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点，组织结构比较挥，内容

20、比较符合逻辑，覆盖了所有要点，组织结构比较清晰，语言较准确。清晰，语言较准确。C(9-12分分)基本完成了任务。覆盖了所有主要内容，基本完成了任务。覆盖了所有主要内容，意思基本连贯，但语言有一些错误。意思基本连贯，但语言有一些错误。D(5-8分分)勉强完成了任务。内容缺乏连贯性，语法勉强完成了任务。内容缺乏连贯性，语法结构单调，结构单调，运用运用词汇有限，有一些语法词汇方面的错误。词汇有限，有一些语法词汇方面的错误。信息未能较清楚地传达给读者。信息未能较清楚地传达给读者。E(0-4分分)未完成任务。语言表述不清，词汇使用有未完成任务。语言表述不清，词汇使用有限，错误很多，只有个别语句可读。限，

21、错误很多，只有个别语句可读。Summary&Homework 1.The topic:friendship 2.The lesson tasks:1).Review Unit1 and Unit2 2).Tell what you think is the most important about friendship and share your experience.3).Write a passage about your opinion about friendship and your experience.3.The Grammar:object clause（宾语从句）（宾语从句）4.The homework:finish and polish the article by using the key words and object clauses.