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1、书面表达抢分的关键抢分的关键备考策略备考策略新课标卷的书面表达部分占分为新课标卷的书面表达部分占分为2525分，侧重实用性强的应用类文分，侧重实用性强的应用类文体（从近年的命题形式来说主要体（从近年的命题形式来说主要是书信体文章）。新课标卷的书是书信体文章）。新课标卷的书面表达更侧重与适合文体的语言，面表达更侧重与适合文体的语言，对隐含情感态度的表达及文化意对隐含情感态度的表达及文化意识。而且，考题的设置从大纲出识。而且，考题的设置从大纲出发，更加注重场景设置，而且话发，更加注重场景设置，而且话题联系生活、贴近实际。题联系生活、贴近实际。建议建议:掌握掌握各种各种文体的写文体的写作作要求要求掌

2、掌握握各各种种文文体体的的写写作作要要求求，书书信信、日日记记、经经历历、活活动动、介介绍绍等等；记记事事、记人、叙述活动等。记人、叙述活动等。建议信建议信申请信申请信邀请信邀请信投诉信投诉信求助信求助信倡议信倡议信通知通知日记日记正反观点正反观点观点议论观点议论自我目标：自我目标：1.保四档：16 20分2.争五档：21 25 分3.消灭一二档，拒绝三档 不同层次的学生要有不同的要求，尽力拿高分。答题技巧（五步骤）答题技巧（五步骤）1 1）审试题（图文并茂）审试题（图文并茂）2 2）圈要点（批注词语）圈要点（批注词语）3 3）定基调）定基调（明确人称、时态和体裁）（明确人称、时态和体裁）4

3、4）写初稿）写初稿（注意句型、顺序、过渡语和段落）（注意句型、顺序、过渡语和段落）5 5）抄全文（卷面整洁、标点规范）抄全文（卷面整洁、标点规范）英语书信类作文英语书信类作文但凡应试书信，逃不出三种段落但凡应试书信，逃不出三种段落开头段：四大内容开头段：四大内容1 1、问候；、问候；2 2、自我介绍；、自我介绍；3 3、写信背景；为什么会写这封信、写信背景；为什么会写这封信4 4、写信目的；写这封信想达到什么目的、写信目的；写这封信想达到什么目的中间段：具体问题中间段：具体问题+具体分析；具体分析；结尾段：客套话；结尾段：客套话；（一）开头段：灵活地去写四种（一）开头段：灵活地去写四种内容：内

4、容：1、问候；、问候；How are you doing?How is everything going?How is life treating you?2、自我介绍；、自我介绍；I am LiHua,an 18-year-old boy currently studying in XXX Middle School.I am LiHua,who.【李华同志的个人简历李华同志的个人简历】Hard working;diligent;help my parents to do housework;take part in CCTV national English speech competit

5、ion;won the second prize in CCTV national English speech competition;vice monitor;vice chairman of the Students Union;worked as a volunteer for the Olympic Games;worked as a volunteer for the 21st century;have many foreign friends and often chat with them happily;3、写信背景（写信的缘由）、写信背景（写信的缘由）I heard tha

6、t.My teacher told me.I am informed that.I learned that.我得知我得知.I read in your newspaper/micro-blog/website that.You said in your last letter that.4、写信目的；、写信目的；Now,I am writing to do sth.Now,I am writing this letter to do sth.Now,I am writing these few lines to do sth.（二）中间段：具体问题（主题句）（二）中间段：具体问题（主题句）+

7、具体分析具体分析（拓展句）（拓展句）【六种最常见书信的六种最常见书信的“中间段中间段”最佳写法最佳写法】自荐信：写自己的优势自荐信：写自己的优势写法一：写法一：There are four main reasons why I am fit for the position/job.To begin with,.Moreover,.Whats more,.Finally,.写法二：写法二：I have three main advantages.First and foremost,.Additonally,.Last but not least,.写法三：写法三：I have the con

8、fidence that I can handle the job.Firstly,.Secondly,.Thirdly,.感谢信：写对方为你所做的事感谢信：写对方为你所做的事Every time I（看照片、看录像、看那段时间（看照片、看录像、看那段时间的日记、回忆那段经历）的日记、回忆那段经历）,I just cant help thinking of you/what you have done for me.It was so kind of you to（对方做的第一件（对方做的第一件事）事）.Besides,you（对方做的第二件事）（对方做的第二件事）,which really

9、surprised me.Actually,I shall always remember（对方做的第三件事）（对方做的第三件事）,considering that,（第三件事情的意义）（第三件事情的意义）.Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories,and I will cherish them forever.示例示例2:不能如期赴约而道歉不能如期赴约而道歉:因为要参加英语比赛因为要参加英语比赛Dear Tom,How is everything going?I am writing to beg your pardon for

10、 my not being able to join you for the trip to Beijing next weekend which we planned before.I have been looking forward to the trip for a long time and have done a lot of preparation.However,I am informed that the CCTV national English competition is going to be held on that day.You know that Ive be

11、en waiting for the chance for months and thus by no means can I miss it.As a result,I cannot make it for the trip.Im sure if you were me,you would make the same choice.I do hope you can accept my apologies and understand my situation.Please allow me to say sorry again.Sincerely yours,LiHua（三）结尾段：想写好

12、第三段，就要背过各种客（三）结尾段：想写好第三段，就要背过各种客套话！套话！【六种书信六种书信“结尾段结尾段”最佳写法最佳写法】自荐信：自荐信：Hopefully the chance would be offered to me.If chosen/elected,I would dedicate all my energy and wisdom to the company/activity/club/class.Thank you for reading my letter/listening to my speech in such a hot summer.Looking forwa

13、rd to your reply at your earliest convenience./I wont let you down.（我不会让你们失望）（我不会让你们失望）注：在这个段落模板中，我们融合了自荐信结尾注：在这个段落模板中，我们融合了自荐信结尾段和竞选演讲结尾段两个段落，两种结尾段都需段和竞选演讲结尾段两个段落，两种结尾段都需要四个句子。要四个句子。感谢信：感谢信：I,on behalf of my whole family/class/school,would like to thank you again(for what you have done)(for me/us).

14、May you be blessed(in everything you do).我代表我的全家再次向你所做的一我代表我的全家再次向你所做的一切向你表达感谢。祝你万事如意！切向你表达感谢。祝你万事如意！20092009年山东卷年山东卷假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已假设你是李华，曾在美国学习半年，现已回国。你想联系你的美国老师回国。你想联系你的美国老师Mr.Smith,但但没有其联络方式。请根据以下要点给你的没有其联络方式。请根据以下要点给你的美国同学美国同学Tom写一封信：写一封信：1.感谢感谢Tom对你英语学习的帮助；对你英语学习的帮助；2.询问询问Mr.Smith的近况并索要其联系方

15、式；的近况并索要其联系方式；3.邀请在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。邀请在春节期间来中国感受中国文化。Dear Tom,How are you doing?How time flies!It has been half a year since I came back to China.I miss you so much!Every time I catch sight of our photos taken in America,I just cant help thinking of what you have done for me.It was so kind of you to he

16、lp me practice my spoken English patiently.Besides,you taught me a lot of advanced grammar,which really surprised me.Actually,I shall always remember you shared with me many outstanding English novels,considering that I am extremely interested.Nothing will be able to erase our wonderful memories,and

17、 I will cherish them forever.By the way,could you please tell me Mr.Smiths telephone number and his email address?I would like to turn to him for some help.Whats more,I remember you are crazy about traditional Chinese culture.The spring festival is around the corner.Why not come to enjoy it?I promis

18、e you wont regret.Looking forward to your reply.Best wishes!Yours truly,Li Hua Dear Tom,How are you doing?How time flies!I have been back to China for half a year.I miss you so much!Every time I catch sight of our photos taken in America,I cant help thinking of what you have done for me.It was so ki

19、nd of you to help me with my spoken English.Besides,you made me master a lot of advanced English grammar,which really surprised me.Whats more,I shall always remember you encouraged me to correct my pronunciation by enjoying American TV programs.By the way,Could you please tell me how can I get in to

20、uch with Mr.Smith?I have some learning problems to ask him.Besides,I know you are interested in the historical Chinese civilization.Why not come to China to enjoy the Spring festival?I promise you wont regret!Looking forward to your reply!Yours truly,Lihua记住记住1010个写作要点个写作要点1.1.仔细审题弄清写作要求与注意事项。仔细审题弄清

21、写作要求与注意事项。2.2.根据短文题材和体裁确定主时态等。根据短文题材和体裁确定主时态等。如：记叙文主要用过去时，说明文主如：记叙文主要用过去时，说明文主要用现在时，通知等应用文主要用将要用现在时，通知等应用文主要用将来时、祈使句等。来时、祈使句等。3.3.看全内容要点，主要内容缺一不可。看全内容要点，主要内容缺一不可。4.4.尽量写草稿，如时间紧只写提纲。尽量写草稿，如时间紧只写提纲。5.5.用自己熟悉的句型写，不生造用自己熟悉的句型写，不生造中国中国式英语。式英语。6.6.写好写好首句首句和和尾句。尾句。7.7.行文要连贯，注意使用关联词语行文要连贯，注意使用关联词语8.8.增加细节要有

22、度，避免增加细节要有度，避免喧宾夺主喧宾夺主9.9.适当使用复杂结构和适当使用复杂结构和高级高级词汇，词汇，但以准确表达为原则。但以准确表达为原则。10.10.书写要规范，卷面要书写要规范，卷面要整洁。整洁。历年来书面表达词数都要求在历年来书面表达词数都要求在8080120120个词范围之内，按一般长度的句个词范围之内，按一般长度的句子计算，也就是十句左右，子计算，也就是十句左右，没有盲没有盲目发挥的余地。目发挥的余地。再者过度发挥浪费再者过度发挥浪费了时间，影响了成绩。所以必须注了时间，影响了成绩。所以必须注意，写作中不可乱加花样，只能在意，写作中不可乱加花样，只能在紧扣主题紧扣主题,保证要

23、点全面保证要点全面的前提下的前提下适当发挥适当发挥，增加有限的相关细节。，增加有限的相关细节。要点全要点全高考英语书面表达题都是根据内高考英语书面表达题都是根据内容和表达给分的，因此容和表达给分的，因此要点要点是否是否齐全，直接影响考生能否得高分。齐全，直接影响考生能否得高分。考虑书面表达写作要点时，不该考虑书面表达写作要点时，不该写的尽量不写，因为写的尽量不写，因为言多必失言多必失，因此要因此要适当发挥适当发挥，而不要无限制，而不要无限制地发挥。地发挥。1.1.彻底理解题意，看准答题要求。彻底理解题意，看准答题要求。2.2.把内容要点列成提纲。把内容要点列成提纲。3.3.重新检查一遍，确信无

24、一遗漏。重新检查一遍，确信无一遗漏。4.4.动笔开始写。动笔开始写。一定要注意一定要注意：NMETNMET书面表达五忌书面表达五忌切忌仓促审题，盲目提笔。切忌仓促审题，盲目提笔。认认真审题是做好书面表达的关键环节，真审题是做好书面表达的关键环节，要掌握主旨大意，弄清要写的体裁，要掌握主旨大意，弄清要写的体裁，抓住每个要点。抓住每个要点。切忌生造汉语式英语。切忌生造汉语式英语。不用自不用自己不熟悉的句型或短语，尽量避免己不熟悉的句型或短语，尽量避免使用复合句，尽量使用自己有把握使用复合句，尽量使用自己有把握的在课本中学过的句型或短语。的在课本中学过的句型或短语。3.3.切忌节外生枝，随意发挥。切忌节外生枝，随意发挥。除除必要的承上启下的句子外，不要必要的承上启下的句子外，不要写与本题无关的内容。写与本题无关的内容。4.切忌冒险使用无把握词语和句切忌冒险使用无把握词语和句式式。要学会扬长避短，遇到不会。要学会扬长避短，遇到不会的句子，可用的句子，可用“迂回迂回”的方法去的方法去表达。表达。切忌涂涂改改，卷面不清。切忌涂涂改改，卷面不清。书写一定要工整，卷面一定要清书写一定要工整，卷面一定要清楚、整洁，否则会丢分。建议先楚、整洁，否则会丢分。建议先起草后抄写在试卷上。起草后抄写在试卷上。建议完成时间：建议完成时间：2525分钟分钟。