热点11 环保-备考2022年中考英语作文热点素材+精彩范文.pdf

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1、热点热点 11 环保环保环保无疑是今年的火爆热点之一，它为我们的生活带来了很大的影响。今天，选择的 2020 年中考英语写作预测话题是：环保。【预测题目】（一）人人都提倡低碳生活，环保节能，请你写出为环保所做的五件事。要点提示：1自己骑自行车上学。2. 在家使用节能灯( energy saving lamp)。3. 减少淋浴时间。4. 将用过的课本留给下届学生。5自带购物袋。_【参考范文】One possible version:1. We can go to school by bike or on foot.2. We should use energy saving lamps.3. S

2、pend less time when we are taking a shower as possible as we can.4. Dont throw away the used textbooks and leave them to the students of lower grades.5. Bring our own bags when we are shopping.【解析】试题分析：该文题目给出了一些要点，要求你写出为环保所做的五件事。我们要做的就是把这些要点用正确的英语句子表达出来，实际上就是个汉译英练习。要注意符合英语表达习惯，合乎语言规范。写作亮点：这些句子表达准确，合

3、乎英语语言表达规范。（二）当今，低碳生活（low-carbon living）的理念已深入人心，植树造林、节能减排、环保出行等已成为人们的自觉行为。请你用英语写一篇 90 词以上的短文，谈谈你践行这种绿色环保生活理念的做法与心得。内容要求：1. 低碳生活的重要性是什么？2. 你为过低碳生活付出了怎样的努力？3. 你对全民践行低碳生活有何期待？_【参考范文】Low-carbon living, a green and healthy lifestyle, is becoming more and more popular. It can help change theglobal warming

4、 greatly.To live a low-carbon life, I walked or rode bikes to school every day. In my daily life I managed to saveelectricity and water.And I often kept in touch with friends by writing emails instead of using a printer. I oftenplanted trees with my family on weekends.I hope that more and more peopl

5、e will realize the importance of environmental protection and practice thelow-carbon lifestyle.【解析】试题分析：本文介绍的是低碳生活的重要性及我为低碳生活做的努力。首先要用正确的格式去写，会用一些短语，会仿照课文的句子写出正确的英语句子，注意用一般现在时和现在进行时及将来时，用第一人称来叙述。【亮点说明】短文用了不定式表示目的，如：To live a low-carbon life, I walked or rode bikes to school every day.等，最后还用 hope+tha

6、t 从句寄予了期待。（一）保护环境，人人有责。假如上周日为保护环境，你校师生开展了一些活动。请根据下面所提供的信息写一篇日记。出发时间、地点：早上八点，学校门口目的地 / 交通工具：市区附近的一个小镇 / 校车所带物品：在校自制的有关环保的海报和传单活动内容：上午：贴海报，发传单，宣传环保知识下午：捡垃圾、塑料袋，打扫街道，种花，植树要求：1. 时态正确，书写工整，可适当发挥；2. 生词：leaflets 传单，environmental protection 环保；3. 词数：70 词左右(文段首句已给出，不计入总词数。)_【参考范文】Sunday, March 6SunnyToday I

7、m very excited because I did a lot of things with my classmates and teachers to protect ourenvironment. We met the school gate at eightoclock in the morning, before we went to a small town in ourschool bus. We took the posters and leaflets made at school with us. There some students put up posters o

8、n thewalls and handed out leaflets to the people who passed us in the morning and others talked about the environmentprotection to the people. In the afternoon we collected litter and picked up plastic bags. Besides, we also cleaned upthe streets and planted trees and flowers.At six in the evening w

9、e came back home. I felt very tired but happy. I think if everyone can take part inprotecting the environment , the world will become more beautiful.【解析】试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。本文要写的材料比较具体，我们要做的就是运用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。我们要好好选用词汇和短语，可以适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文是日记，所以主要是一般过去时态。【亮点说明】这篇短文短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当，时态应

10、用准确。（二）假如你是某中学的学生会主席王东,为了配合环保教育主题活动,请根据下面所给提示,用英语写一封倡议书，内容包括：1. 环保措施和美化城市的措施（各 2 条）；2. 你的希望。注意：1. 注意文章的整体连贯；2. 文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；3.80 词左右。Dear friends,In order to make the environment more beautiful, we should _Thank you!Wang Dong【参考范文】Dear friends,In order to make the environment more beautiful, w

11、e should do what we can to protect it. First, we shouldplant more trees and flowers to make our city more beautiful.Also, always remember not to throw rubbish or pourwaste water everywhere.As we all know, water is becoming less and less. So its quite necessary to save water. Forexample, turn the tap

12、 off after washing. Last, but not the least, wed better ride a bike or walk when going outinstead of driving a car.In my opinion, if everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner!Thank you.Wang Dong【解析】试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，写一篇环保的倡议书。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，

13、三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：we should .，So its quite necessary to.，wed better.，if everyone tries his best to.等句式的应用。写作中注意运用连词使文章前后连贯，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，适当的补充一些保护环境的措施。【写作亮点】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了倡议书的目的是保护环境，接下来介绍保护环境的措施：种树、不要乱扔垃圾、 节约用水， 骑自行车或步行外出， 最后阐述自己的观点， 要尽力保护环境。 此处 remember

14、 notto do sth, as we all know, turn off, had better, try ones best to do sth 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。（三）假如你是张明,你是学校“环保俱乐部” (Saving the Environment Club) 的志愿者。上周六，你们俱乐部组织了志愿者活动。请给你的笔友 Ben 写一封电子邮件,向他介绍这次活动的情况,并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法，并注意书信格式。80 词左右.其内容包括：1、介绍自己是环保俱乐部的自愿者。2、活动内容有：张贴海报、分发广告、打扫街道、打扫公园等。3、当我们完成所有工作后都感觉很累，但

15、却觉得很快乐,很有成就感。4、我认为做一名志愿者非常不错。_【参考范文】Dear Ben,I am a volunteer in Saving the Environment Club of my school. Last Saturday, I did some volunteer work withother volunteers.Some of us put up posters. Some handed out advertisements. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean upthe city parks. When we

16、 finished all the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.I think its fantastic to be a volunteer.What do you think of volunteering? Please write back soon!Yours,Zhang Ming【解析】试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者给你的笔友 Ben 写一封电子邮件,向他介绍这次活动的情况,并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍

17、。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如 Some of us put up posters.Some handed out advertisements. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean up the city parks. When wefinished all the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same t

18、ime.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（四）“保护环境，人人有责”，你想成为绿色使者吗?请行动起来吧！其实，环保就在我们身边，例如，拒绝一次性纸杯，随手关掉电灯，使用布做的购物袋，尽量骑自行车出行请以“How to Be a Greener Person”为题，写一篇有关环保的短文，并适当发表你的看法。_【参考范文】How to be a Greener PersonIts our duty to protect the environment around us. The three Rsreduce, reuse and recycleare important. Ithi

19、nk wed better not buy bottles or boxes which people can only use once. We should turn off the lights when weare not using them. We can give old clothes to others to reuse them. When we go shopping, wed better take a clothbag rather than use plastic bags. We shouldnt throw things away if they can be

20、reused, repaired or recycled. Itsimportant for us to protect animals and plants. We are supposed to prevent the factory from pouring waste waterinto rivers, lakes and so on. If everyone is doing that, our world will become more and more beautiful.【解析】试题分析：环境保护的文体是中考常考的主题，对于本文的写作学生首先开门见山指出保护环境是非常重要的，

21、是我们的责任，可以利用 it 作为形式主语的句式来展开；然后，对环境保护应该如何做进行阐述如拒绝一次性纸杯，随手关掉电灯，使用布做的购物袋，尽量骑自行车出行，保护动植物，防止工厂的排污等，从这几方面进行展开论述。句式上可以使用 wed better，Its important for us to，We are supposed to等来阐述所写的内容。最后，一句话进行总结，说明如果这样做世界将会变得更美 more and more beautiful。考点：提纲类写作点评：本文难度不大，写作条理性要把握好，对于要做的几件事情，写的过程中通过变换句式和用词上来提高语言的美度。在一件事情写完后要用

22、上表关系的连接词，或平时积累的各类表递进、并列的连词来是文章富于活力。在平时的练习中要多去背诵范文，对表达好的句子，短语要进行积累，并默写，考试前再集中看一下，这样做到有备无患。1. Some of us put up posters.2. Some handed out advertisements.3. We also helped clean up the city parks.4. we finished all the work, we were very tired but felt very happy at the same time.5. In my opinion, if

23、everyone tries his best to protect the environment, our city will become nicer and cleaner!6. Only by doing these simple things can we protect our environment well。7. With the development of industrialization, more and more factories are built.8. To protect our environment, the government began to l

24、evy a tax on the companies and factories.9. Last but not least, we can share our ideas with people to let them join us.10. To help with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor.11. Besides,I always collect bottles and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.12. On

25、ly in this way can we live happily.13. If we dont save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.14. I hope everyone will care about the environment.15. I believe we can make our school more and more beautiful.（一）2018 年 1 月 1 日， 我国开始向企业征收环保税。 这一举措引发重庆人民的关注。 请就此新闻， 写一篇 评论。参考要点：1.政府征收环保税

26、有哪些原因；2.环保税开征后重庆将会发生哪些变化；3.从个人角度说明应为环保做哪些贡献。要求：1.要点齐全，语言流畅；2.80 120 词，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；3.文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称。On January 1st, the government began to levy a tax on (征税) the companies and factories which causepollution. People in Chongqing pay close attention to it._【参考范文】On January 1st, the government

27、began to levy a tax on (征税) the companies and factories which causepollution. People in Chongqing pay close attention to it.With the development of industrialization, more and more factories are built. While the factories especiallyiron and steel factories are bad for environment. To protect our env

28、ironment, the government began to levy a tax onthe companies and factories.After that, there will be less and less pollution and the city will become more and more beautiful.For us students, we can do something to the environment. First of all, as we all know, some places are lack offresh water, so

29、wed better save water. Whats more, we can plant trees as much as possible. Last but not least, wecan share our ideas with people to let them join us. Only by doing these simple things can we protect ourenvironment well.【解析】1.题干解读。 本文属于话题作文， 主要讲述我国向企业征收环保税的原因以及这件事情以后重庆的变化。并谈一下我们个人可以为环保做什么贡献。注意时态的使用，且

30、切记不要遗漏要点，并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型，使文章更加生动。2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。3.高分亮点：单词短语：With the development of industrialization, 比较级 and 比较级, especially, be bad for, to do 表示目的,begin to, first of all, as we all know, be lack of, whats more, as

31、 much as possible, last but not least, share sth withsb 等。高分句型：Only by doing these simple things can we protect our environment well 中“only+状语”放句首，用半倒装。【点睛】首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如 With the development of industrialization, 比较级 and 比较级, especially, be bad for, to do 表示目的,

32、begin to, first of all, as we all know, be lack of, whats more, as much as possible, last but not least, share sthwith sb 等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如 first of all，whats more，last but not least 等；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是

33、否正确，词数是否符合要求等。（二）学校的英语报就“争做校园环保小卫士”话题征文，请你投稿。谈谈生活中你的具体做法、环境保护的重大意义以及你的环保倡议。要求：1. 词数 80100 词；2. 短文中不得提及真实的人名和校名等信息；3. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。提示词语： collect bottlesturn offdutymake a real differenceGood environment is important for everyone._【参考范文】Good environment is important for everyone. To help with it,

34、I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor.Besides, I always collect bottles and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.As students, I think its our duty to protect the environment of our school.And even the simplest activities canmake a real difference to the environm

35、ent. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible.And its also agood idea to take part in recycling programs.I hope everyone will care about the environment. I believe we can make our school more and more beautiful.【解析】试题分析：作文要围绕要点展开写作：具体做法，感受，建议。要符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，

36、具有逻辑性.注意提示语 collect bottles turn offduty make a real difference 的运用。注意作文的升华，提出环保的意义。【亮点说明】To help with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor. Besides,I always collect bottles and I never forgetto turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.1.具体做法最好写上三点，三点之间要有过渡。过渡不要频繁使用 first，second

37、，third。这篇文章处理的很好，to help with it, Besides, and。2. 注意从句的运用，比如时间状语从句，定语从句等。（三）今年几个世界大国首脑都参加了八国峰会，这次的主题是世界经济、能源问题和气候变化。经济发展离不开环境话题，能源使用必然污染环境，而气候变化就是经济发展和环境问题矛盾的产物。请写一篇保护水的文章。_【参考范文】Its our duty to save waterAs we know , water is very important to man, we cant live without water. The amount of water wh

38、ich issuitable to drink is less and less. But some people dont care about it .They waste a lot of water in their daily life.Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers , too. Many rivers and lakes areseriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution.

39、 Only in this way can we live happily. If we dontsave water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.（四）人与环境是和谐相处的，我们生存在地球上，人是自然之子，而不能仅把人看作自然的征服者，大家都知道，人类只有一个地球，地球上的山山水水、动物。植物是人类的细胞，如果我们把它损坏了，破坏了大自然的组织，等于消灭人类。因此，环境要与社会公德联系起来，与实践行为作为人格教育的一项重要内容来抓。每个人都要履行保护环境的责任和义务，请写一篇不少于 80 字的环保文章。_【参考范文】Ha

40、rmony with the environment is that we live in on Earth, who is a natural son, and not only to naturalpersons as the conqueror, as we all know, there is only one earth and the mountains on Earth, the animals. Planthuman cells, if it damaged, destroyed nature organizations, to the eradication of mankind. Therefore, theenvironment must be linked with social ethics, character education and practice acts as an important element of it.Everyone must fulfil its responsibilities and obligations to protect the environment.