教育专题：英语写作.ppt

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1、 Discussion:What makes a good writing?Content:Structure:Language:内容要完整好的开头结尾结构合理，行文流畅词语的准确运用和句式的富于变化everything that is related to your view should be included*good beginning and ending*well organized and smoothly developed*No Chinglish 避免中文式英语*No grammatical mistakes 没有语法错误*With exactly used words a

2、nd relatively changed sentence patterns1、审题，找要点写作步骤：2、定体裁、时态和人称3、拟提纲，划分段落，找准连接词4、选用高级词汇和句型5、润色全文，检查错误6、誊写_ 随着高考临近，同学们面对很多压力，你校英语角决定举行一次英语主题演讲会，请你根据以下提示，写一篇英文演讲稿，参加演讲，鼓励同学们Keep calm andcarry on。1、来自父母的压力2、来自学习的压力3、来自自己的压力4、减压的建议注意：1、词数100左右。2、文字中不得提及人名、地名和校名。3、稿件的开头结尾已为你写好。培养低碳生活方式，对社会意义重大，也是公民应尽的责任。

3、请以Low-Carbon Lifestyle,Our Best Choice 为题，写一篇英语发言稿，呼吁大家培养低碳生活方式，内容要点和要求如下：内容要点：1、政府做了大量的工作；2、问题仍然严峻 3、针对以上问题，你的具体建议。要求：1、词数100-120 2、内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯 3、书写清楚、工整。1、审题，找要点2、定体裁、时态和人称3、拟提纲，划分段落，找准连接词4、选用高级词汇和句型5、润色全文，检查错误6、誊写写作步骤：2006年10月6日星期五晴 今天是周末，又是中国传统节日中秋节，而上周日又是国庆节，这两个节日如此近，使大家有一个8天的假期，人们都非常高兴。下午，叔

4、叔、姑姑都带着孩子来看奶奶，买了月饼(moon cake)、水果和其他礼物，爸爸、妈妈做了很多好吃的菜。晚饭后，大家望着空中的一轮明月，谈论着几年来家乡发生的巨大变化和祖国美好的未来。注意：1、日记须包括上述全部内容，可适当增加细节，使全文连贯。2、词数100左右。Friday Oct.6,2006 Sunny _ 峨眉山是一处游览胜地，每日有大量游客。几年前不注意环境保护，但现在大有改观，请你根据下列表格内容提示，写一篇英文发言稿，呼吁人们在游玩的同时也要注意保护环境。词数100左右。几年前少数游客的行为现在游客的行为乱扔废纸、塑料袋、罐头盒带走垃圾杀害动物、捕捉飞鸟不再打猎砍伐树木、采摘花

5、草爱护植物在林中生火烧饭自带午餐，以防森林火灾发言稿通常在结尾用 Thank you for your listening.1、审题，找要点2、定时态和人称3、拟提纲，划分段落，找准连接词4、选用高级词汇和句型5、润色全文，检查错误6、誊写写作步骤：三段式四段式 开头正面（一方面）反面（另一方面）自己的观点（结尾）开头中间结尾使 用 恰 当 的 连 接 词 U s e p r o p e r l i n k i n g w o r d s Now in the country areas,there are many children out of s c h o o l.T h e r e

6、a s o n s c a n b e l i s t e d a s f o l l o w s._,most families are too poor to send their children to school._,they have no choice but to stay at homeand make money._,some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school.Therefore,they dont let them go to school._,some children

7、are not interested in their studies._,some wouldnt like to go to school._,all the children including girls should be educated._,the parents should have their childrenreceive the 9-year compulsory education,whether a boy or a girl._,the whole society should put great emphasis on childrens education b

8、ecause theyll play an important part in the f u t u r e o f o u r c o u n t r y o n e d a y.Now in the country areas,there are many children out of school.The reasons can be listed as follows._,most families are too poor to send their children to school._,they have no choice but to stay at home and

9、make money.Firstly To begin/start with First of all First and foremost In the first placeAs a consequence/result Therefore Thus First So _,some parents think there is no need for their daughters to go to school.Therefore,they dont let them go to school._,some children are not interested in their stu

10、dies._,some wouldnt like to go to school.Besides In addition Additionally Furthermore Moreover Whats more Last but not leastTo make matters worse，Second Finally Whats even worse _,all the children includinggirls should be educated._,the parents should have their children receive the 9-year compulsor

11、y education,whether a boy ora girl._,the whole society should put great emphasis on childrens education because theyll play an important part in the future of our country one day.As far as Im concerned,In my point of view,As for my own idea about,I believeFor one thing，for another In my opinionOn th

12、e one handOn the other hand1、审题，找要点2、定时态和人称3、拟提纲，划分段落，找准连接词4、选用高级词汇和句型5、润色全文，检查错误6、誊写写作步骤：2010年上海“世博会”正在如期召开，主题是“城市让生活更美好”，假设你是李华，请你向学校英语报投稿，谈谈你心中的理想城市，其优势应包括以下几点：1、交通工具方便，快捷、舒适 2、自然环境优美 （如河流清澈，树木林立，空气新鲜）3、人文环境（如人际关系）注意：1、词数100左右 2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯选用高级词汇和句型：With Shanghai World Expo being held as expec

13、ted,the theme“Better City,Better Life”has been widely known all over the world.I think the ideal city should have these advantages.In my opinion,a wonderful city should be one that distinguishes in the following aspects.1、2010年上海“世博会”正在如期召开，主题是“城市让 生活更美好”Shanghai World Expo is being held as expected

14、.The theme is“Better City,Better Life”.2、我心目中的理想城市应包括以下优势：First,the transportation is convenient、fast and comfortable.To begin with,an appealing city should provide convenient、fast and comfortable transportation,which means people can easily choose whatever ways they like to travel anywhere.3、首先，交通工

15、具方便、快捷、舒适4、而且自然环境优美（如河流清澈，树木林立，空气新鲜）In the city,there are some clean rivers.Many tall and beautiful trees stand by the sides of the roads and the air is fresh too.Besides,it should offer people a pleasant environment with plenty of green trees,clean rivers as well as fresh air.Finally,people in the

16、city should love and help each other.Chinese should be friendly to foreigners.Last but not least,in a charming city,citizens can enjoy a friendly and harmonious community and are always ready to help and care about each other.5、最后，人文环境（如人际关系）With Shanghai Expo being held as expected,the theme“Better

17、 City,Better Life”has been widely known all over the world.In my opinion,a wonderful city should be one that distinguishes in the following aspects.To begin with,an appealing city should provide convenient,fast and comfortable transportation,which means people can easily choose whatever ways to trav

18、el anywhere.Besides,it should offer people a pleasant environment with plenty of green trees,clean streets as well as fresh air.Last but not least,in a charming city,citizens can enjoy a friendly and harmonious community and are always ready to help and care about each other.Here Im writing to share

19、 the idea of my dream city.In a word,an attractive city is one highly developed in different areas to make sure people can live better.Dear editor,Best wishesYours,Li Hua1、审题，找要点2、定时态和人称3、拟提纲，划分段落，找准连接词4、选用高级词汇和句型5、润色全文，检查错误6、誊写写作步骤：改错：1、Traffic in Shanghai is crowded.2、Some parents think go to scho

20、ol is not useful.3、Every children including girls should have the chance to accept education.4、As for my ideal city,the transportation should be better than other cities.5、Let me introduce this city for you.6、There are many families are poor.7、In the city,the traffic is good,the air is fresh too.8、S

21、ome parents in village think that girls are not important as boys.9、The air is fresh to be breathed.heavygoingchildreceivethat of towhichandtheas_breathe Homework:假设你是李华。目前北京大学等高校决定，部分自主招生将推行“中学校长推荐制”，在社会上引起了很大的反响。请你根据以下支持者和反对者的观点，就其利弊为报社写一篇英语短文，并提出自己的观点。支持者的观点1、分数不再是上大学的唯一标准，有特 长的优秀学生也能上大学；2、有利于中学教育反对者的观点 1、实际操作中不好掌握标准；2、诚信和公正受到挑战。注意：词数100左右，可根据内容要点提示适当增加细节，使行文连贯；不要逐字翻译