教育专题：2015年公开课短文改错课件.ppt

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1、短文改错短文改错梅江区嘉应中学梅江区嘉应中学 刘映明刘映明2015年年10月月28日日Just find out the mistakesTask oneMr.Zhang is sixty years old and had retired.He taught our biology when we were in the Grade One.He taught very well.He tried his best to make his classes lively.He usually made preparations for the lessons and was strict in

2、 us.Each time we made mistakes in our homework,he would ask us to correct it.I was poor in biology.He often helps me with my study patient.With his help I made great progresses.He was very kind to his students.As an experienced teacher,he respected or loved by all the students.Have a checkMr.Zhang i

3、s sixty years old and had retired.He taught our biology when we were in the Grade One.He taught very well.He tried his best to make his classes lively.He usually madeushasgood preparations for the lessons and was strict in us.Each time we made mistakes in our homework,he would ask us to correct it.I

4、 was poor in biology.He often helps mewithhelpedthemwith my study patient.With his help I made great progresses.He was very kind to his students.As an experienced teacher,he respected or loved by all the students.progresswasandpatientlyMake a summary in groups1.had has3.去掉去掉the 2.our us4.in with时态时态

5、指代不一致指代不一致冠词冠词搭配搭配5.it them 代词代词Task two 9.增加增加was6.helps helped8.progresses progress10.or and时态时态名词单复数名词单复数被动被动连词错用连词错用7.patient patiently形容词副词错用形容词副词错用短文改错要注意短文改错要注意:动词动词形形、名词、名词数数，注意，注意形形和和副副；主谓、主谓、非谓动非谓动，习惯用语习惯用语要记住；要记住；句子成分多分析，句子成分多分析，逻辑错误逻辑错误需关注；需关注；冠介缺余冠介缺余常常现，常常现，连词连词误用逻辑辨；误用逻辑辨；数数有基序，有基序，代代

6、有格，有格，从句从句细辨引导词细辨引导词。添加或删除的词通常是虚词。添加或删除的词通常是虚词。少了一个词，要求添加的词有：少了一个词，要求添加的词有：冠冠词词：in in countryside countryside in in the the countryside(2015countryside(2015课标课标I)I)As As result result AsAs a a result(2014result(2014课课标标I)I)介介 词词：listening listening music music listening listening to to music(2014mus

7、ic(2014课标课标II)II)连连词词：He He hadhad,he he waswas He He hadhad,andand he was(2013 he was(2013课标课标I)I)不不定定式式符符号号：came came see see me me came came to to see me(2007see me(2007课标课标)物物主主代代词词：Tom Tom saw saw parents parents Tom saw Tom saw hishis parents(2015 parents(2015课标课标II)多多了了一一个个词词，要要求求删删除除的的词词有有：介

8、介词词、冠冠词词、连连词词、助助动动词词、不不定定式式符符号号toto。冠冠词词：InIn a a fact fact In In fact(2013fact(2013课标课标I)I)all all kinds kinds of of the the flowers flowers all all kinds of flowers(2014kinds of flowers(2014课标课标II)II)介介词词：he he lent lent to to me me lots lots of of clothes clothes he he lent lent me me lots lots o

9、f of clothes(2011clothes(2011课标课标)连词连词 Although AlthoughbutAlthoughbutAlthough 不不定定式式符符号号：had had better better to to stop had better stop(2009stop had better stop(2009课标课标)助动词：助动词：has has brought brought brought(2010brought(2010课标课标)Lots Lots of of studies studies have have been been shown shown Lo

10、ts Lots of of studies studies have have shown(2015shown(2015课课标标I)I)副副词词：soso very very much much that that so so much that(2015much that(2015课标课标II)II)Task three单句改错单句改错每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。个单词的增加、删除或修改。1、For example,we can do reading for one and a half hour and.hours2、Tha

11、nk you very much for showing them around your city and providing us with the wonderful meals.us3、Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year,but we have never had any diseaseyet或者去掉或者去掉but4、Last year,she decided study abroad.to5、I look forward to see her again in the ne

12、ar future.seeing6、We sat by the fire,have our barbecue.7、Felt hungry,we built a fire by the lake havingFeeling 提示：根据非谓语动词与其逻辑主语的关系提示：根据非谓语动词与其逻辑主语的关系来确定用来确定用-ing形式还是用形式还是用-ed形式形式因因we与与have是主动关系是主动关系因因we与与feel是主动关系是主动关系8、We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!9、I found the test difficulty,but

13、 I tried hard to do it.作作作定语、表语、补语作定语、表语、补语,用形容词用形容词wonderfuldifficult10、Interesting,it had a connection with the British porcelain industry.作状语，修饰动词、形容词、全句，用副词作状语，修饰动词、形容词、全句，用副词interestingly假假定定英英语语课课上上老老师师要要求求同同桌桌之之间间交交换换修修改改作作文文,请请你你修修改改你你同同桌桌写写的的以以下下作作文文。文文中中共共有有10处处语语言言错错误误,每每句句中中最最多多有有两两处处。每每

14、处处错错误误仅仅涉涉及及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增增加加:在在缺缺词词处处加加一一个个漏漏字字符符号号（）,并并在在其其下面写出该加的词。下面写出该加的词。删除删除:把多余的词用斜线（把多余的词用斜线（）画掉。）画掉。修修改改:在在错错的的词词下下画画一一横横线线,并并在在该该词词下下面面写写出出修改后的词。修改后的词。Task three When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I mi

15、ss my home in countryside.There the air is clean or the mountains are green.Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.1.2015课标卷课标卷I The airs we breathe in is

16、getting dirtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.When I was a child,I hoped to live in the city.I think I would be happy there.Now I am living in a city,but I miss my home in countryside.There the ai

17、r is clean or the mountains are green.andthe thought 1.2015课标卷课标卷I Unfortunately,on the development of industrialization,the environment has been polluted.Lots of studies have been shown that global warming has already become a very seriously problem.serious with The airs we breathe in is getting di

18、rtier and dirtier.Much rare animals are dying out.We must found ways to protect your environment.If we fail to do so,well live to regret it.our/the find Manyair短文改错常见错误短文改错常见错误:动词动词形形、名词、名词数数，注意，注意形形和和副副；非谓语动词非谓语动词细辨别细辨别,习惯用语习惯用语要记住；要记住；句子成分句子成分多分析，多分析，逻辑错误逻辑错误需关注；需关注；冠介冠介缺余常常现，缺余常常现，连词连词误用逻辑辨；误用逻辑辨；数数有基序，有基序，代代有格，有格，从句从句细辨引导词细辨引导词。