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1、大学生英语作文赏析关于如何看待大学生上网的英语作文 Internet Surfing-因特网冲浪Nowadays, there is a growing popularity of Internet surfing on col lege campus. An increasing number of students, majoring either in science or engineering or in 1 iberal arts, spend many hours surfing the Internet with keen interest everyday.Internet

2、surfing has attracted col lege students 1 ike magnets because it is the world of Internet and the world of globa1ization. First, with the globa1 coverage of Internet, we can reach out and touch anyone at any place of the world. Via Internet, we can send and receive E-mai 1 s at any t ime much faster

3、, cheaper and more effective than conventiona1 means such as telephone, telex and fax. Next,via access to the home pages of 1ibraries, universities, journals and news agencies, and research organizations, we can easily acquire a 11 kinds of information, to know what is going on al 1 over the world.

4、Fina1ly, by clicking the mouse, we are capable of doing such important things as shopping, finding jobs, making friends, down-loading files and programs, doing business, publishing papers and freely airing our opinions on al 1 sorts of interesting issues. What is more, Internet offhrs many opportuni

5、ties. For example, we can work, educate ourselves and communicate with others at home via Internet.In the Information Age, it is diff icuh to imagine modern life without Internet. With the rapid development of Information Technology industry, successful dot-com companies mushroomed everywhere. Inter

6、net is revolutionizing our economy, our society and our life.关于大学生压力的英语作文Directions: For this part, you are al lowed 30 minutes to write a compos i t ion on the topic How Should Col lege Students Rei ieve Pressure? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the out 1ine （given

7、 in Chinese） below:1）当今的大学生要面临很多来自不同方面的压力2）大学生缓解压力的方式有3）你一般都是如何排解压力的？How Should Col lege Students Reiieve Pressure?关于大学生压力的英语作文-行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一个问题，提纲第2点要求说明如何解决该问题，提纲第3点要求阐述“我”的做法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出当今的大学生主要面临哪些压力；列举大学生缓解压力的方式;谈谈“我”是采取哪种方式排解压力的。关于大学生压力的英语作文-高分范文How Should C

8、ol lege Students Reiieve Pressure?Today s col lege students face many pressures, mainly from parents, expectation, study, economy, employment and all kinds of competition.1 Although pressure to some extent can provide motivation, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a

9、 student5 s confidence.2More seriously, it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors.3Considering the great damage of overdue pressure, college students should learn to how to relieve pressure.2First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves 4so as to 5make use of a

10、dvantages and avoid disadvantages.2 Second, we should 6set a clear a im of a struggle. The aim can give us motivation, and make us become act ive.2 Third,7 attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure.2Fina1ly, if you find pressure is nearly 8beyond your control, you d bet

11、ter turn to professional psychologica1 guidance.2 As to me, my pressure is mainly from future employment.4In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages, and produce a more practical job objection.2So my employment pressure was relieved greatly. Now I becom

12、e confident in my future, and I 9 do believe I can get an ideal job after my graduation.【亮点点评】1 although引导让步状语从句。2过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。“考虑到,鉴于”，介词.4表示目的。5 “扬长避短”。6 “设立一个明确的奋斗目标”。7动名词短语作主语，用不同于前两点的句式提出缓解压力的第三种方式。8“超出范围或能力”。9强调动词bel ieveo佳句临摹1 .佳句： Although pressure to some extent can provide motivatio

13、n, overdue pressure has a serious negative effect.临摹：尽管兼职工作能够带来很多好处，但我们不应该在它上面花费太多的时间。2 .佳句：Attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve临摹：学会如何与人沟通是步入社会的第一步也是最重要的一步。3 .佳句：In order to reduce it, I asked my parents help me analyse my advantages and disadvantages临摹：为了在激烈的竞争中获得优势，大学生们必

14、须全面发展自己的能力。KEY1. Although a part-time job does much good to us, we should not spend too much time on it.2. Learning how to deal with people is the first and the most important step to enter into the society.3. In order to get their priority in the fierce competition, college students have to develop

15、 their abi1ities 关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文 Directions: For this part, you are a 1 lowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Credit Cards on Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the out 1ine （given in Chinese） below:1）近年来越来越多的大学生开始使用信用卡2）分析产生该现象的原因3）针对大学生使用信用卡提出你

16、的建议Credit Cards on Campus关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象，提纲第2点要求分析产生该现象的原因，提纲第3点要求针对该现象给出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：描述大学生使用信用卡的现状;分析大学生信用卡用户增加的原因；针对大学生使用信用卡提出“我”的建议。关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-高分范文Credit Cards on CampusIn recent years, credit cards have 1gained more popularity among co

17、l lege students.2 Wi th banks5 more focus on college market,3 an increasing number of college students have applied for a credit card and begun to consume by it.4The fol lowing three factors can account for the popularity of credit cards in college.5Firstly, a credit card provides overdrawing servic

18、e,6which is 7a big attraction for those students who have no much money for their domination.5Secondly, a credit card can help release financial burdens on those poor students, and 8hence reduce the risk of their dropping school for lacking money.5 Besides, many banks make some pref erent ia1 polici

19、es on credit cards, like sending a gift, lowering year cost.7Drawn by these policies, many col lege students apply for credit cards.5As far as I am concerned, it is not a bad thing for college students to own credit cards.5However, there is misuse of credit cards among college students. Many student

20、s use credit cards to buy luxurious things they don, t need rea 1 ly, and even some of them owe a big credit cards debt.5Therefore, schools and banks have responsibi1i ty to let col lege students learn how to use credit cards properly.9 Only in this way can college students enjoy rea1ly the advantag

21、es of credit cards.关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文【亮点点评】1“越来越流行”。“随着”，介词。“越来越多的,，4用于引出原因。5过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。6 which引导非限制性定语从句。7表示“吸引”的两种不同的方式，用词富于变化。8“由此，因此”。9 “only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。关于大学生使用信用卡的英语作文-佳句临摹1 .佳句： With banks more f ocus on col lege market, an increasing number of col lege students have appl ied for a

22、 credit card.临摹：随着市场经济的快速发展，金钱在社会中扮演着越来越重要的角色。2 .佳句： A credit card can help those poor students pay their tuition and fees, and hence reduce the risk of their dropping school.临摹：一些同学希望通过社会实践提高自己的能力，并由此来增加就业机会。3 .佳句：Drawed by these policies, many col lege students apply for credit cards.临摹：在就业压力的迫使下，

23、一些大学生开始自主创业。KEY1. With the rapid development of market economy, money plays a more and more important role in the society.2. Some students hope to enhance their practical abi 1 ities by attending social practice, and hence increase their chances of employment.3. Forced by employment pressure, some c

24、ol lege graduates begin to set up their own businesses.(关于勤俭节约的英语作文Directions: For this part, you are al lowed 30 minutes to write a composit ion on the topic Is ThriftStill a Good Virtue? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the out 1ine （given in Chinese） be 1ow:1）随着人们

25、生活水平的提高，一些人认为勤俭节约的生活方式已经过时了2）但是很多人反对这种说法3）你的看法是，为什么？Is Thrift Still a Good Virtue?关于勤俭节约的英语作文-行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一种观点，提纲第2点提出另外一种相反的观点，提纲第3点要求谈谈“我”的观点，由此可判断本文应为对比选择型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：提出第1种观点：节俭和朴素的生活方式已经过时了，并说明理由；提出第2种观点：勤俭节约仍然是一种美德，并说明理由；表明“我”对节俭的看法，并说明理由。关于勤俭节约的英语作文-高分范文Is Thrift Still a Goo

26、d Virtue?With the improvement of the living standards, many people are 1 no longer interested in the s imple life style 2 and some of them even feel ashamed to be thrifty. What they pursue is the latest fashion. In their eyes, thrift is already out of style.3 However, still other people insist that

27、thrift i s a good virtue. They say that the unprecedented power of production doesn t mean that we are entitled to a life of extravagance, because our natura 1 resources are 1imited 2and some of them even are 4on the decline.5Moreover, they hold that waste may lead to degradation of social atmospher

28、e and environmental pollution as well.6As to me, I pref er the latter opinion. I be 1 ieve 7“Waste not, want not. w The truth of this saying is 8not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency.5 In fact, economic growth depends enormously on saving.5Besides, there are still millions of Chinese 9 li

29、ving under poverty line. We can never afford reckless waste.5Therefore,10 it is no doubt that thrift is still a good virtue that we should not give up.关于勤俭节约的英语作文【亮点点评】“不再”。2表示递进。3引出另外一种观点。4 “在下降”。过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。6用于引出自己的观点或选择。7引用谚语“俭以防匮”。8not. but连接并列结构，意为“不是而是”。9现在分词短语作后置定语。10 “毫无疑问”。关于勤俭节约的英语

30、作文-佳句临摹1. 佳句：Our natural resources are 1 imited and some of them even are on the decline.临摹：车祸使人们的财产遭受极大的损失，甚至还夺走了无数人的生命。2. 佳句：The truth of this saying is not to give up comfort but to enhance efficiency.临摹：我们永远都不应该低估自己的能力，而应该相信一句谚语:“有志者，事竟成KEY3. Traffic accidents have caused great damages to people

31、5 s properties and even taken away thousands of people5 s 1ives.4. We should never underestimate our abilities but should believe in the proverb: wWhere there is a wi 11, there is a way. w 关于节食减肥的英语作文Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic On Diet in

32、g. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the out 1ine （given in Chinese） below:1）现在有越来越多人的选择节食减肥，有的人是为了健康，但是更多的人是为了有一个苗条的身材2）分析节食减肥可能带来的影响3）你的建议 On Dieting关于节食减肥的英语作文-行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点指出一种现象并要求说明原因，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象可能带来的影响，提纲第3点要求针对该现象提出“我”的建议，由此可判断本文应为现象解释型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包

33、含如下内容：描述越来越多的人节食的现象并分析主要原因；阐述节食不当可能带来的影响；针对节食给出“我”的建议。关于节食减肥的英语作文-高分范文On DietingNowadays more and more people are beginning to go on a diet. Some people are concerned with their hea1th, and they go on a diet in order to lose unwanted weight. But still others,1especially the young women, are paying t

34、oo much attention to their outward appearance. They 2 become the leading numbers who go on a diet.5. However, dieting might 4bring great negative effects on people.3 For one thing, quite a lot of people don t real ly need dieting to keep hea1th, and they diet just because they want to keep s 1 im. F

35、or them, dieting 5not only is useless but also might damage their hea1 th.3For another, some people lack enough knowledge on how to diet scientifically.3As a result, they are likely to suffer from malnutrition.6Considering the serious damage of unhea 1 thy dieting, we should be cautious in dieting.3

36、In my opinion, dieting,7for whatever reasons, needs professiona1 guidance.8Only with right guidance can dieting work 9as we expect.关于节食减肥的英语作文-【亮点点评】“尤其”,表示强调。“成为主力军”。3过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。4用于引出对危害或负面影响的阐述。5“not only. but alsow用于连接并列成分。“考虑到,鉴于”,介词。7不管因为什么原因,whatever意为无论什么8 “only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。9 “像

37、我们期望的那样”。关于节食减肥的英语作文-佳句临摹1 .佳句：For them, dieting not only is useless but also might damage their health.临摹：基因技术不仅使动植物受益而且还有助于提高人类的生活质量。2 .佳句：In my opinion, diet ing, for whatever reasons, needs prof ess ional guidance.临摹：无论你的目标是什么，你都必须通过诚实的劳动来实现它。3 .佳句：Only with right guidance can dieting work as we

38、expect.临摹：只有修满足够的学分，学生才能够获准毕业。KEY1. Genetic technology helps not only the plant and anima 1s but a 1 so human beings to 1ive a higher quality2. Whatever your aim is, you must worked honestly to attain it.3. Only when adequate credits have been achieved can students gain the qualification for graduat

39、ion.关于交通事故的英语作文Directions: For this part, you are al lowed 30 minutes to wr i te a compos i t ion on the topic Road Accidents. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline （given in Chinese） below:1）交通事故会给人们的生命和财产带来很大的损失2）分析交通事故发生的主要原因3）如何降低交通事故发生率 Road Accidents关于交通

40、事故的英语作文-行文思路本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析造成该问题的原因，提纲第3点要求说明解决该问题的方法，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出道路事故的严重性及主要危害；分析导致道路事故的主要原因；说明应该如何降低道路事故的发生率。关于交通事故的英语作文-高分范文Road AccidentsRoad accidents,1 as one of the important social problems, have aIways been paid great concern. In most of the big cit

41、ies, every day, there happen quite a few road accidents. In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses 2 and some of them even lose their 1 ives.3The fol lowing reasons contribute to road accidents.4Above all, traffic i s becoming heavier and heavier, especially in big cities. More an

42、d more vehicles on road 5increase the chances of accidents.4In addition, many drivers lack safety awareness and even don5 t comply with the traffic regulations. For example, some drivers run the red 1ight or drive after being drunk.4 Besides, the 6weak supervision and management of traffic control s

43、ectors is a noticeable reason.7Considering the seriousness of the traffic problem,8it is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.4Firstly, the government should invest more money to improve public transportation and provide more transportation ways f or people to choose.4Secondl

44、y, stricter laws and regulations should be made to punish those who break traffic regulations.4Fina1ly, drivers should enhance safety awareness and develop good driving manners.9Only in this way could road accidents be avoided successfully.关于交通事故的英语作文【亮点点评】1插入语，as意为作为。2表递进。3用于引出原因。过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧

45、密。5“增加了的机会或可能性”。6监管不力，weak的使用准确地道。7“考虑到，鉴于”，介词。用于引出解决办法，表示解决问题的紧迫性，常译为“早该是的时候了”。9“only+状语”位于句首，引起句子部分倒装。关于交通事故的英语作文-佳句临摹1 .佳句：In these accidents, many people suffer great property losses and some of them even lose their 1ives.临摹：一些人失败后可能会变得灰心丧气，甚至会放弃成功的希望。2 .佳句：More and more vehicles on road increas

46、e the chances of accidents.临摹：许多学生认为考取更多的证书可以增加他们找工作的机会。3 .佳句：11 is high time for us to take more effective measures to solve it.临摹：因此，我们早该关注一下人口过剩问题了。KEY1. Some people, af ter a fai lure, may become discouraged and even give up their hope for success.2. Many students believe that more certificates

47、may increase the chances of their being employed.3. Therefore, it is high time we paid special attention to the problem of overpopulation.(关于大学生就业难的英语作文 Directions: For this part, you are a 1 lowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic College Students, Job Hunting. You should write at least 150 words according to the out 1ine given below in Chinese:1)近年来出现大学生就业难的现象2)产生这一现象的原因3)如何解决这一问题关于大学生就业难的英语作文【思路点拨】本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点要求指出目前大学生就业难的现象，提纲第2点要求分析这种现象产生的原因，提纲第3点则要求阐述应该如何解决这一问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型作文。根据所给提纲，本文应包含以下内容:提出大学生就业难的现象,指出现象的表现；说明现象产生的原因，如大学生追求目标过高等；从几个方面提出解决方法。关于大