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1、大作文：首段：第一部分：阐述寓意(隐性)第二部分：开篇套话+整体描述第三部分：细节描述第一部分：阐述寓意(隐性)What a thought-provoking picture it is !The picture never fails to fascinate me , for it gives me a great deal of +情绪名词.情绪名词：Delight / encouragement / vibrationRegret / disappointment / sorrow第二部分：开篇套话+整体描述第三部分：细节描述开篇套话：as is shown in the pictu

2、re ,介词短语+ be( stand / lie / exist)+ N., who/which+ V.+逻辑串词(meanwhile / obviously /叩parently), there be2004as is shown in the picture , on the course exists a youngster , who is sweating all over . Meanwhile , there is finishing line in front of him , which can be regarded as a start one .2001The pic

3、ture never fails to fascinate me , for it gives me a great deal of vibration, as is shown in the picture , in front of us lies a lamp , which stands in a dark place . Obviously , there is a sweet smile on its flame .2007The picture never fails to fascinate me , for it gives me a great deal of regret

4、. As is shown in the drawing , in front of us stands a man , who prepares to kick the ball. Apparently , there is another person and he is guarding the goal. Both of them imagine each other as too huge to defeat.2011The picture never fails to fascinate me , for it gives me a great deal of disappoint

5、ment. As is shown in the cartoon , on the boat sit two tourists who throw rubbish into the lake . Meanwhile , there exist endless litter on the surface of the lake .2010The picture never fails to fascinate me , for it gives me a great deal of delight . As is shown in the cartoon , in front of us exi

6、sts a hotpot which seems delicious . Obviously , there are many kinds of cultural food in it, just like Lao She , the Swan Lake and so on .Ps:组合:中间段：主旨句（显性）+论证+（总结句）主旨句（显性）联系现实：1“三个代表”+2综合论述1三个代表： represent / symbolize / be associated with （can be imagined as ）2003The flower represents the next gene

7、ration of our nation .The warm room symbolizes their parents .The storm is associated with the harsh reality .PS: andThe flower represents the next generation of our nation . Meanwhile , the warm room symbolizes their parents . And the storm is associated with the harsh reality .2004The youngster dr

8、awn in the picture represents a great many adolescents . Obviously , the course symbolizes the life we experience . And the finishing line can be imagined as the goal we have achieved .2005The old man drawn in the cartoon represents the aged parents . Apparently , the three sons and one daughter sym

9、bolize their offspring. And these goals are associated with the households of these children .2006The two men in the photos represent a great many adolescents . And Beckham , a football superstar symbolizes their idols .20072008The two men in the cartoon represent a great many adolescents . And thei

10、r broken legs can be imagined as their shortcomings / weaknesses / disadvantages .2综合论述2008范文1. The vivid picture, to my mind, is urging us to cultivate the awareness that +寓意+has always been the traditional virtue of our nation.20042. The youngster drawn in the picture represents a great many adole

11、scents . Obviously , the course symbolizes the life we experience . And the finishing line can be imagined as the goal we have achieved . The vivid picture, to my mind, is urging us to cultivate the awareness that persistence has always been the traditional virtue of our nation.2 The vivid picture,

12、to my mind, is urging us to cultivate the awareness that +；寓意+of great importance .2002The American girl represents the western culture .And the costume she wears can be imagined as the Chinese culture . The vivid picture, to my mind, is urging us to cultivate the awareness that the cultural blendin

13、g is of great importance .3 The vivid picture, to my mind, is seriously warning us that . exerts a bad/negative effect on.2003The vivid picture, to my mind, is seriously warning us that the blind love from parents exerts a negative effect on children .PS :This sort of attitude / behavior exerts a ba

14、d/negative effect on.2000主旨句（显性）+论证+（总结句）联系现实+主旨句+逻辑串词+批判句型+原因分析1+逻辑串词+原因分析2 there are still a few people who rashly attempt to cross the Pass on foot.一亮点：there be 替换了主用兵+Our vicar is always raising money for one cause or another, but he has never managed to get enough money to have the church clock

15、 repaired.亮点：语气强烈的批判句型/Even he still lives under the illusion that country life is somehow superior to town life.-亮点：把对方的观点定义成“幻觉”，强烈的讽刺。There be + N.+定语从句后面再加上一个 DS 发展句：，just like+sb.+ drawn in the picture .+Sb .+ be + always / frequently + ving , but / however sb.+ have never / rarely done .Sb. st

16、ill live under the illusion that.2000The fishes represent the ocean resources . And the boats symbolize human beings . The vivid picture, to my mind, is seriously warning us that overfish exerts a negative effect on our living environment. Sad to say , although the world is developing , there are a

17、great many people who pay no attention to our natural resources. They live under the illusion that the resources on the earth is endless and countless . And they are always focusing on their own interest, but they have never thought of our future .2006The two men in the photos represent a great many

18、 adolescents . And Beckham , a football superstar symbolizes their idols . The vivid picture, to my mind, is seriously warning us that this sort of behavior exerts a bad effect on ones life . Sad to say , although our society is developing , there are a few people who lose themselves Just like the t

19、wo men in the photo . They are always imitating stars , but they have never considered the reason why these famous people succeed .2004The youngster drawn in the picture represents a great many adolescents . Obviously , the course symbolizes the life we experience . And the finishing line can be ima

20、gined as the goal we have achieved . The vivid picture, to my mind, is urging us to cultivate the awareness that persistence has always been the traditional virtue of our nation. Sad to say , although the society is developing , there are many people who cant realize its importance . They are always

21、 satisfying the goals they have already achieved , but they have never tried best for another one . Such is human nature , that most of people are shortsighted . The significance of . is often ignored .2008The two men in the cartoon represent a great many adolescents . And their broken legs can be i

22、magined as their shortcomings . The vivid picture, to my mind, is urging us to cultivate the awareness that cooperation has always been the traditional virtue of our nation. Sad to say , although the society is developing , there are a great many people who are always self-centered . They live under

23、 the illusion that anything is possible even if they depend on themselves .Such is human nature , that most of people are shortsighted . The significance of teamwork is often ignored . It is well-known that we exist in a world with various difficulties . We can do nothing but face them . More import

24、antly , attitude is the key point to take the first step . Assuming cooperation to solve the problem , you will find it is not as huge as you imagine .PS :Such is human nature , that most of people are shortsighted . The significance of . is often ignored .20042008高分范文1 . severs as the best weapon w

25、hen we face difficulties and challenges in life.2007高分范文Firstly , it is well-known that we exist in a dynamic world with various difficulties . We can do nothing but face them . Secondly , attitude is the key point to take the first step . Assuming bravery and confidence to solve the problem , you w

26、ill find the question is not as huge” as you imagine .2 it is well-known that we exist in a world with various difficulties . We can do nothing but face them . More importantly , attitude is the key point to take the first step . Assuming. to solve the problem , you will find it is not as huge as yo

27、u imagine .2008it is well-known that we exist in a world with various difficulties . We can do nothing but face them . More importantly , attitude is the key point to take the first step . Assuming cooperation to solve the problem , you will find it is not as huge as you imagine .it is well-known th

28、at we exist in a world with various dreams . There is no one but longs to fulfill their goals . More importantly , attitude is the key point to take the first step . Assuming. to realize dreams , you will find it is not as difficult as you imagine .32008高分范文Failure is the only destination waiting fo

29、r us if weThere is no one but longs to succeed , however , failure is the only destination waiting for us if wePS：IThe successful hosting of Beijing Olympic Games should be attributed to(spirit).Cooperation / confidence / devotion / striving spirit 2The English language possesses a vivid saying , wh

30、ich is called “A tree cannot flourish without its root T As for me ,寓意+is nothing but our root. Without it, nothing could ever be brought to a conclusion .末段：主旨句+建议+总结主旨句坏事一In my opinion / To my best understanding , measures should be taken if such disappointing situation is to be avoided.好事”In my o

31、pinion / To my best understanding , we can never emphasize the importance of . too much (, for it is not only necessary, but also irreplaceable.)主旨句+建议+总结In my university, campaigns have been launched to educate people to pay more attention to(insteadof .)2000In my university, campaigns have been la

32、unched to educate people to pay more attention to our planet and resources.20052004主旨句+建议+总结总结Only in this way can the problem be effectively solved .Only in this way can we live happily and affluently.Only in this way, can we lead a harmonious and happy life.Only in this way can we possess a better

33、 and bright future .I cherish the hope thatI cherish the hope that the situation described in the picture will disappear from our life .PS:The pictures never fail to fascinate me , for they give me a great deal of +情绪名词.对立：These two pictures display a sharp contrast:并列：As is shown in the pictures ,逻

34、辑串词：对立：While conversely,并列：2003The pictures never fail to fascinate me , for they give me a great deal of regret . These two cartoons display a sharp contrast: in the warm room is a pot of fresh flower , which blooms beautifully under the protection . While conversely , the same plant withers quickl

35、y , when it is put in the storm .英语二首段：As is shown in the bar chart / line chart / pie chart / table ,小幅稳步增长-have a steady and slight increasehave witnessed a slow increase大幅上升/增加-have a great surgerise rapidly / sharply保持不变/稳定remain constant / stable大幅下降/减少-decline / fall / drop + rapidly / sharply

36、达至!J最高点一peak at / reach the peak at / reach the highest point at达到最低点一reach the bottom at中间段：This chart reflects different developing/change modes of +事物1 and 事物2.There are/exist at least two fundamental causes accounting for these changes. Firstly +原因1.Secondly+原因2.末段：As discussed above, it is not

37、surprising to see this change. In my opinion / To my best understanding , this trend that +总体描述图画的变化趋势+will continue for a while in the future.As is shown in the bar chart , the market share taken by domestic car brands has a great surge from just above 25% in 2008 to nearly 35% in 2009. While conve

38、rsely , that of Japanese cars drops rapidly from 35% to 25% in those two years . Meanwhile , the market owned by American brands remains stable during this period .This chart reflects different developing modes of these three brands.There are at least two fundamental causes accounting for these chan

39、ges. Firstly , with the rapid increase in technology , Chinese cars have an unmatched advantage in aspect of price . Undeniably , people who choose them are more likely to save more expense , compared with those who dont.Secondly , Japanese cars used to receive great praise for their high quality .

40、However , it occurs some technology drawbacks . And it exerts a negative effect on its market share .As discussed above, it is not surprising to see this change. In my opinion , this trend that the market of Chinese cars is increasing will continue for a while in the future.小作文一应用文-书信格式语域Two months

41、ago you got a job as an editor for the magazine Designs & Fashions. But now you find that the work is not what you expected. You decide to quit. Write a letter to your boss, Mr. Wang, telling him your decision, stating your reason (s), and making an apology.Write your letter with no less than 100 wo

42、rds. Write it neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2.Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter; use “Li Ming“ instead.You do not need to write the address.(10 points)Dear Mr. Wang,PS : Dear +人名，1私人一2公务-Dear Sir or Madam ,首段：自我介绍+写信目的自我介绍一I am Li Ming , a staff member from this magazine .(1)学生：I am Li Min

43、g , a senior from the Department of Chinese Language of Zhengzhou University .(2)职员：I am Li Ming , a staff member from your company /the Nokia Company.PS :写信目的一I am writhing the letter in purpose ofI am writhing the letter to建议信：(Generally speaking, the services you offer is quite good, however) I h

44、ave some suggestions for you to adopt.I am writhing the letter in purpose of resigning my job. Please allow me express my deep sorry to you . I know this may bring about some troubles .Dear Sir or Madam ,I am a student in this university who regularly come to the library to spend my spare time. Gene

45、rally speaking, the services you offer here is quite good; however I have some suggestions for you to adopt. And I would like to extend my greatest appreciation if you are so kind as to take my suggestions into consideration.To begin with, would you please prolong the time for reading? In the day ti

46、me, most of the students are having class, so they cannot come to the library. What is more, some of the books on shelves are out of date. If you are so kind as to provide us some books such as the latest magazines, we will be greatly honored.I really wish to have a more comfortable library. Thank y

47、ou for your time and your consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Ming中间段:I decide to quit for reasons as follows . First of all , the joy as an editor is not suitable to me for the simple reason that my major is computers . Whats more ,末段：表达感情+期待回信(1) Thank you for your time and your consideration.一“建议信专用

48、(2) Thank you for your time and patience .-所有书信都能用!Again , I apologize for ./ I would express my sincere apologies to you .(1)1 am looking forward to your reply.(3) I look forward to a reply at your earliest convenience.“建议信专用Dear Mr. Wang,I am Li Ming , a staff member from this magazine . I am writhing the letter in purpose of resigning my job. Please allow me express my deep sorry to you . I know this may bring about some troubles .I decide